>>7867187>>7866082>-I can tell I failed because she is nude, heh.
She looks like she wears clothing because you became extremely lazy with the nipples, overdetailed the collarbone and hid her boob fat/arm folds behind a tentacle because, guess what, you don't know how the anatomy works so you thought you could hide it behind a poorly drawn tentacle.>-Agreed, I have a habit of overdoing the whole neck/chest region, but I think I may have a fetish for exaggerated details in that region.
You don't have a fetish for "over-doing it". You, like the rest of the beginners on /ic/ thought, "oh the collarbone exists and so do those neck muscle thingies so I better draw lines for them so people know that I know anatomy" Which is wrong. Muscles/bones should be AT MOST cross hatched onto the form to give an indication of switching planes. Softly placed lines that compliment the form, not harsh straight lines that just tell the viewer "oh look what I know". It's unattractive and disgusting.>-Her lips weren't finished. I never cleaned up the lines I used to define where her lips would be located, so much like the lines on the nose, if I had any intention of finishing it I would have eventually removed them. You're not wrong, though.
Yeah fucking right. You wouldn't have posted this if you knew what you were getting into. You thought "wow look at this detail I'm putting it. Everyone will love it" When in reality you over detailed again and made your picture look even more like horse shit.
Your scribble method does NOT work because you haven't taken the time to understand the forms and anatomy. If you read the /ic/ sticky, you'll find a lot of books anons have uploaded about it.
PS; tracing is shit if you don't know what you're doing. Which you don't