>>7640115>Ending is a little wavy but overall I liked it alot.
Yesssss. Call me out more. I absolutely, 100% phoned in the finish.
I really wanted to make sure that the affectionate tone of the thing stayed consistent (which meant there was no way it was gonna just end with one person killing the other's identity like that was a totally normal thing, it'd kinda imply Chris was a psychopath who fucked people up for not-even-really misgendering her), and wanted to establish the new body as at least acceptable, but once that was 7 pages long itself, I just went "nope, you two fucks are going to bed now, we're done." And so they did. And it was abrupt. And even the leadup to that was abrupt. But it was so long already, I was just NOT going to add more words that most people wouldn't even read seeing as there were like three DESIGNATED CLIMAX POINTS already.
That being said, there is one more part that picks up in a way that needed them to get to that point anyway, and I'm gonna try to challenge myself one more time with it, so hopefully it doesn't leave a bad taste in the mouth once everything's said and done? It's gonna be different, anyway.
(I tried to make fun of my use of words like boymeat at the end, too, incidentally - with stuff like "not feeling compelled to call me diminutive male names" and Dani(elle) lampooning Chris's whole "tell me how it feels" schtick. Meant to slightly imply that the whole thing was kind of guiding them into playing out like a porno with no self-awareness, seeing as it kind of was just Chris's own favorite fetish porn being brought to life. There was no fanfare at the end once that ended, it was just a normal-ish orgasm.)
Someone deleted my post for some reason (not sure why? the pic was one of Teen Titan's Jinx and she didn't look particularly young or anything) so reposting