(* Conclusion *)
When giving some advice on how to write porn ( >>30120290
), I really needed some examples to show what I meant.
I later decided to write this story to be used as an example of various techniques.
My aim was to keep it shorter and more efficient (1-2k words), but obviously that was not to be. (Perhaps if I changed the setting to something that required less explanation. Twilight and Anon goes swimming?)
A lot of descriptions that could help the reader visualize the scenery are missing just to keep it short. Details on wings, Twilight’s ears, and her hooves/horn/fur could help imagine the scene but it would also slow it down.
Details on how the saddle looks, the room, the bed, are all excluded - because the average reader doesn’t give a shit. (If they read it for the sexual content.)
With the reader’s focus on Twilight’s cunt, you better focus your story around that, and not if Anon has a shirt or not.
You may also notice how it doesn’t have Anon flip-flop between various emotions. It’s to make it easier for the reader to feel empathy.
Twilight who leads the charge towards "arousal" keeps her emotions single-minded uncomplicated.
(Her science-call added for some spice but it doesn’t include an emotional detour.)