Okay first, don't open with "UHM, HEY GUISE ITZ MY FIRST TIEM WRITFAGIN XDD"
Don't continue with "s-should i c-continue?"
Don't even ask opinions DURING the story.
Just. Fucking. WRITE IT.
If you enjoy writing it, than write it. Don't go off of others interest, if you have interest. Then that is good enough.
I am honestly fucking tired of seeing "MY FIRST TIME WRITFAGIAN XDDDD" every fucking where, no one gives a shit. If people ask, you tell them. Otherwise, keep shut and write.