General rule of thumb is to post about 5 images to get a thread rolling.
as a critique, when you were having the blonde girl do things, make sure the hand doing them is at least close to what she's doing.
Second, there were 6 months worth of time for additional changes, and all you changed was skin tone. Wee bit of wasted potential.
overall, a pretty good animation. Most people don't really go that in detail, preferring to tell the story frame by frame or just generally using simpler animations.