>>4709667Pink eyes, but they might work.
Good base... going fine...
And then we get to the hair.
See the mane? Look for a moment, at how the pattern is arranged. Notice the splash on the bottom. Nowhere else, just the bottom.
Now look at the tail. It's now on two sides, not specifically the bottom. In contrast to the coat, it's far darker in comparison.
Still no CM.
The tripcode makes it annoying to respond.>>4709842>No colorWell there goes half of the critique.
Eyes are usually bigger on pones, most everything seems decent otherwise.
Seriously, color is the main point to a lot of these. If we were a hospital, you'd be the patient who comes in barely alive, without insurance, asking to heal your broken and shattered limbs for free.>>4709873Not really, but it seems incredibly appropriate at the moment.