Fillydelphian !!fFnHwjFV49q
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Brainhorn !!X+la9AgNv4F
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Reporting in. Still writing.
Gadget !Y54YDBzz9U
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Tripfags in Equestria
Anonymous
>that feel when no one cares about your stories OC generals did.
Zuul !vJHWNqhBaQ
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Internet's back! and I'm parking.
Anonymous
Forge !wf5JJ352J.
> A little over two hours later you are standing in the reception hallway signing papers. > Twilight was busy cleaning up and getting having breakfast. > You had gotten lucky and found that one of the unicorn nurses knew the same comprehension spell. > It had nearly knocked you on your ass again when she cast it. > She also warned you that it would likely only last a about three hours at most so you needed to make sure not to climb any stairs in the meantime. > As you put your mark on the forty sixth dotted line you can't help but think. > What possible reason would they have for this level of redundancy? > You shake the thought off and put the pen they gave you down. > The arrangements had been made, you had signed the papers and the doctors had cleared Twilight for release. > Now all you had to do was a little bit more waiting. > A few minutes later Twilight limps into the room, a rather intricate weave of bandages covering her shoulder and two small bags slung over her back. > "Ready to go?" > You nod in response. > "Good, the sooner we get back to the library the better." > With that you go forth and push open the door. > She thanks you and walks out into the street stepping into the morning light. > As you step out after her, you hear her inhale deeply. > A moment later a contented sigh follows. > She begins to walk forward slowly. > You quickly retrieve your maul from the bush and fall into step beside her.
Fillydelphian !!fFnHwjFV49q
>>2741619 Post more stories. Put them on pastebin.
back to writing Miro guy person !!KZHR4sMzkpo
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It is time to report in to possibly go to bed in an hour or two.
Forge !wf5JJ352J.
>>2741648 > After only a few seconds of walking she speaks up. > "I always hated the smell of disinfectant." > You tap where your nose would be on a human face. "I suppose it is fortunate that I have no sense of smell."
> You hear a faint 'hmm' as you walk on. > "I wouldn't really call it fortunate. I could certainly see it having it's own advantages, like never needing to worry about unpleasant smells, but at the same time you could never smell the more pleasant things like flowers or the smell of a bakery." > You retort. "I suppose so, but my lack of a sense of smell is born of another thing I do not share in common with fleshborn races. I do not breath, therefore I can not smell without special modification."
> "So you can do that kind of thing huh?" > You nod even though she isn't looking. "Self modification is very simple for any Warforged with enough practice and time. I know how to make a few simpler modifications from memory and even a few complex ones."
> You also had schematics for some incredibly complex ones kept tucked away in your portable hole. > You idly wonder if you could get your hands on the materials needed to make some of them... > "Like what?" "Mainly things used for aiding in exploration like climbing claws and foot spikes to help move over difficult or slippery terrain and ice."
> "Could you make those here?" > You think about that for a moment. "Yes I suppose so, though I do not think I would have much use for anything I could make."
Shaded View !!MyIYIQ+YZ7m
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Forge !wf5JJ352J.
>>2741668 > "Well, if you do make them and don't use them I'd like to take a look at them... If you don't mind, of course." > Again you nod. "That will not be a problem, though I would like to know why."
> "Oh simple. You can learn a lot about somep0ny, err... Someone I guess, by studying the things that they make." > Makes sense. > Admirable that the first thing on her mind after a near death experience is study. > Remarkable even. > That reminds you... "I never did tell you how my kind was created did I?"
> This time you actually look for a response. > Before you get one however, you notice that Twilight is trying to conceal a grimace and struggling whenever she puts pressure on her left foreleg. "Would you like to slow down?"
> She looks up at you and offers a clearly forced smile. > "I'm fine and no you didn't, but lets just get back to the library for now" > With some reluctance you agree and walk on in silence. > As you pass through town square a few ponies stop and wave to Twilight. > At first she makes an effort to stop and wave back, but every time she does she nearly falls over. > After a while she just smiles back at the other p0nies. ImperiusDictatio !rP5fXQaROY
Emperor's Child in Equestria ImperiusDictatio !rP5fXQaROY Sat 23 Jun 2012 03:12:23 No. 2741680 Report Quoted By:
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Alrighty then, new thread! I AM HERE!
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>>2741652 Well what do I do with them after that?
Post the Pastebin here or something?
I just want people to say "Hey Marvel Anon, your story was fucking shit." or acknowledge it in some way.
I hate spending time on something and then watching as it just fades away.
Anonymous
~ Broken Wings: Fan-Bullshit Anonymous Sat 23 Jun 2012 03:13:07 No. 2741699 Report >>2739278 >>2739349 >You are Rainbow Dash >Currently, you’re on a dirt road with heavy saddlebags secured to your back >And you are crying >You weren't sobbing anymore >You had gotten too tired to do so >Instead, silent teardrops maintained a steadily flow down your face >The road had taken you around ponyville >Longer route, but it was for the best >If anyone saw you in your current state... >You sit down and, despite your physical and emotional exhaustion, you begin to sob heavily again >By Celestia, what was wrong with you!? >You...y-you didn't need him >You were Rainbow Dash, best flyer in all of Equestria! >Unfortunately, boasting to yourself whilst crying on a deserted dirt road didn't do much to calm you down "Dammit Anon...why?"
>Your voice cracks on the ‘why’ >Whatever you did to distract your mind, it always came back to him >Anonymous >You remembered to the first time you looked into his eyes after the accident >How he said he promised to fix you up >Make you whole again >You couldn’t exactly pin the moment that you developed feelings for him >But you knew that, initially, you were disgusted with yourself >Anon wasn't a pony... he was a talking, hairless ape that walked on two legs >You blamed the drugs and painkillers at the beginning >...But you never forgot that promise >You shut your watery eyes, trying drowning out the rest of the world as you remember >When anything happened, you wanted him next to you >Anything. Anonymous
Fillydelphian !!fFnHwjFV49q
>>2741693 Yeah. Post a link here, get a name so people recognize you, and then write more.
Anonymous
>>2741699 >He quickly became the only person you trusted in your life >and soon after you had moved into his private clinic... >The only one you wanted in your life at all >As you healed and grew stronger with him, so had your affection >By then, you couldn't deny the tingling in your chest when you were near him >You loved him >You. >The most outspoken and tomboyish pegasus in all of ponyville... >was in love with human >You never felt this way about anyone >Anything, for that matter >Deep down... you knew you'd never feel it again either >Regardless of how tightly you squeezed your eyelids shut, the tears found a way out >A muted, hollow smile comes across your face as you think back to that fateful day >You had almost told him about your feelings >How he made you feel warm >How he made you feel safe >How he made you feel... >Loved. >What would have happened, you wonder, if you had told him >If, by some extraordinary feat, you could have gained control of your tongue to form those three words "I-I...love you"
>But now it was far too late >Far too late to change everything >You open your eyes >It was getting dark >4 maybe 5 hours had passed since you had stopped >You will yourself to move on >Every part of your body feels dead or broken >But you move, nonetheless >What carries you forward remains a mystery >Adrenaline? >Resentment? >Or some sad hope you'd be able to win him over again? Forge !wf5JJ352J.
>>2741679 > You eventually arrive at the library to find the curtains drawn and the door closed. > You open the door to find all the lights within off and all light gone. > You fear a trap, but before you voice your concern Twilight enters the building. > You follow her in and leave the door open, allowing a small trickle of light to come in. > In the darkness you can barely make out the vague shapes of something which is not furniture. > Suddenly the door slams shut and the lights turn on. > A shout rings through the building. > You don't even hear it but that doesn't matter to you though, because by this point your already back flipping into a defensive stance with your maul drawn. > When you are right minded again you see a rather large group of ponies in the library with a banner and colorful ribbons, confetti, and a table with assorted food and drink on it. > All of them, including Twilight are staring at you. > You drop the defensive stance but are still holding the maul at your side. "What is going on here?"
> You see a blur of pink move and suddenly appear in front of you. > "Isn't it obvious?" > Of course it's Pinkie Pie... Anonymous
>>2741718 It seems more like an easy way to get people to ignore me. Besides, the stories I'm writing aren't really on the same level as these other ones.
Forge !wf5JJ352J.
>>2741724 > "It's a surprise party for you and Twilight!" > Hey that weird flickering thing happened again! > "Now come on I have a load of ponies to introduce you to!" > She attempts to pull you by your free hand but fails to get you to budge. "Pinkie Pie..."
> She looks up at you and smiles. > "Yeeeees, Anon?" > Damn that's cute. "I thought we had come to an understanding."
> She just keeps smiling. > "We did, but the surprise part of the surprise party was for Twilight, and there aren't THAT many p0nies here for you to meet." > You stand there staring at her for a while, she just stares back smiling happily. > You are a little angry that she used semantics to get around what you agreed to, but it's a little late to do anything about that now. > With a metallic sigh you hold your hand out in front of you. "Lead the way."
topjack
reposting cause can't comprehend that a dying thread is a bad place to post first story.>day 556 in Equestria >they said you were mad >they said you were being unrealistic >they said you could never find work with such an antiquated skill >WELL >JOKES >ON >DEM >NIGGERS >cause you is now in a land of colorful and technologically underdeveloped ponies >and you know what that means? >NO >DIGITAL >CLOCKS >AT >FUCKING >ALL >not even those faggy battery powered analogue ones >nope.jpg.wmv.avi.png.lmnop >strait up wind up as far as the phallus can jizz >and it is glorious
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>>2741735 Stories are good. Bad when lost. Don't lose stories. Me not like stories when can't read them. Make story safe. Now.
Anonymous
>>2741719 >You continue to lumber forward, heading for home >But in reality, you’d didn’t know where to go >You just kept walking >Eventually it started to lightly rain >It wasn’t your first time walking alone in the rainfall >But you could shake off the coldness of each passing drop of freezing water >Eventually you became so numb that you couldn’t distinguish the drops from each other >It just felt like one single shower of misery was hitting you with everything it had >You drag yourself forward, ponyville in the near distance as you approach your caste in the clouds >Unknowing to you, the colors of your once vivid and bright mane now were muted, reflecting a stained haze [need suggestion: Don't know whether to have rainbow x Soarin or >rape]
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>>2741745 > She excitedly grabs your arms and begins dragging you through the crowd, introducing you to small groups of ponies then immediately dragging you off to others. > One after the other, after the other, you are introduced to some of the denizens of P0nyville. > Most react with a simple nod and friendly smile. > A few have reactions which stand out. > For instance a mind green unicorn named Lyra had asked to shake your hand. > You weren't sure why she wanted to, but you had obliged her. > It had earned you a subtle but none-the-less dirty glare from her friend, a tan colored earth pony named Bon-bon. > Another interesting reaction had come from a small trio of earth ponies. > Two of them had made themselves scarce as soon as you got close and the third had fainted. > You hadn't even gotten their names. > After what seemed like half of eternity you get through the introductions. > Pinkie Pie disappears to go and mingle leaving you standing around wondering what to do next. > Not much of a talker when you aren't answering questions and not entirely comfortable in a group of strangers you look for a familiar face in the crowd. > You don't see any familiar faces and while the ponies seem to come in a great variety of colors and mane styles, a lot of them still look exactly the same to you. Anonymous
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To the anon from earlier who was posting the prologue to your 'Humans are Mythological beings to ponies' story, are you off work and lurking now? I wanted to see you finish posting what you had. The premise caught my eye, and I don't think I saw you in the previous thread.
Fillydelphian !!fFnHwjFV49q
>>2741735 You'll never get better at writing if you give up on it.
We all have to start somewhere.
Forge !wf5JJ352J.
>>2741762 > You start looking for some other way of identifying them. > Eyes and nose shapes seem to offer an additional layer of variety to look for, but again some still look exactly the same. > Height doesn't help at all, in fact the ponies barely seem to be any different, height wise. > You look over nearby ponies looking for other identifying marks on there shoulders and back. > That much still shows you nothing. > As a last resort you stop ignoring their flanks. > It's impolite to stare at someone's rear after all, why would that be any different for the ponies? > You almost punch yourself when you realize that on their flanks, plain as day is what appears at first glance to be a tattoo. > You quickly check to confirm... > Yep, they all have them and all of them are different. > Gods dammit, the best way you have to identify them is by looking at their ass... > For that matter, how did you miss that to begin with? > Oh right, because you weren't looking at their ASS! > Well flanks technically, still part of their hindquarters. Forge !wf5JJ352J.
>>2741785 > After a while of attempting to memorize which ponies have which markings you finally find a familiar face. > In the form of Rarity. > She greets you with a cordial nod and a polite greeting. > "Hello Anonymous, enjoying this little soirée?" > A quick peak before you return the greetings reveal a pair of bags and a mark composed of three blue diamonds. "Greetings Rarity. I am certainly concerned that one of the guests fainted, apart from that it seems enjoyable enough."
> Bold faced lie, but there's no way she can call you on that. > Perfect poker face and all that. > "Enjoyable yes, yet you don't appear to be enjoying yourself. Is something the matter?" > You shake your head. "I am not much of a..."
> You scratch your head while an answer comes to you. > You chuckle when you settle on one. "Party animal, I suppose"
> She gives you a slight smirk. > "Really now, because a little bird told me YOU were quite the dancer." > You roll for will to avoid face-palming. > You don't make the save. Anonymous
When is Techy going to continue Miscast?
Anonymous
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Anonymous
>>2741760 >Don't know whether to have rainbow x Soarin or >rape ...is this even a question?
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>>2741805 "Does the whole town know about that?"
> She just nods and smiles. "Fantastic."
> Well at least your now known as the strange dancing creature instead of the evil looking dangerous thing. > You hope so anyway. > You turn back to survey the group of guests. > As you do some music starts to play and everyone starts cheering and dancing. > You don't recognize the source of the music, or even the music itself. > It sounds... strange. > Good, but strange. > You aren't about to burst into dance again, but you like the music. > Rarity is called away to mingle so you look around for another familiar face. > The first one you see is Applejack. > Yeah, that's probably not the first pony you would want to go have a chat with. > Looking around further you catch glimpses of Pinkie Pie bouncing around, seemingly teleporting short distances between groups of ponies. > You don't see where Rarity went. > Fluttershy is off by herself in a corner of the room. > Again, you don't think it's a good idea to approach her. > Rainbow Dash is... Spiking the punch, so you leave her alone. > That just leaves Twilight, who you haven't seen since being dragged away. > You look around intent on finding your missing friend, even asking a few ponies if they saw where she went or was. > Apparently she'd disappeared almost immediately after the party started. > One pony told you that they saw her head upstairs not long after the party started. Anonymous
>>2741784 Everyone always says the same thing, so I try and try again and the result is always the same.
I'm disappointed in myself for constantly putting myself through this shit, but everything up until the part where I hit submit is just so fun. Eventually that's going to fade away as I stop saying to myself "I wonder if someone's gonna like this one" and then I'll have lost even that.
It'd probably be best to give up now, but I'm gonna try again later no matter how hard i try to quit, so it doesn't really matter.
Forge !wf5JJ352J.
>>2741823 > When you look up the stairs, you see the door to her bedroom is half open and a light is on inside the room. > Out of both curiosity and concern you head up the stairs and enter the room. > Either no one noticed or no one cared. > You enter the room and see the bags Twilight was carrying were lying on the floor, open and empty. > Twilight herself is not in the room. > You look to the bathroom door and see it wide open. > You walk over and peak in. > Twilight is inside staring at herself in the mirror. > You walk in and announce your presence but she doesn't even blink. > She just continues to stare at herself in the mirror. > You approach slowly not wanting to scare her. > She either hears or see you approach and speaks up. > "Shouldn't you be with everyp0ny else?" > She sounds... Hurt... Angry... A little sad? > You don't answer, instead you just gaze at her a moment. > You can see that the bandage around her shoulder has been removed to reveal a vicious looking scar. > You hear a sign from Twilight who lowers her head a little. > "Please... Just go back to the party..." > You make no motion to leave. > She just looks up at your with sad eyes and whispers. > "...Please..." > You just give a shallow slow nod and leave. > You don't go back to the party though. > Instead you just wait in silence at the top of the stairs while everyp0ny dances and revels in the atmosphere. > You think it a little strange that they have all come here to meet you and have fun with their friend. > Yet neither you nor Twilight are participating in the festivities. Anonymous
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>>2741830 Make a pastebin, put the last thing you wrote on it, and post the link. I'll give you a critique and tell you what you should work on.
Forge !wf5JJ352J.
>>2741845 > Twilight... > She presents a problem. > The physical injury will be easy. > Apply bandages, keep from strenuous activity, have doctors re-apply regenerative spell until injury is no longer problematic. > There was a significant problem involved there as well. > While Twilight waits for the injury to heal she is supposed to be taking some form of medication to aid with the pain. > A medication which has the side effect of making magic nearly impossible to use. > Mix that with a crippled appendage and suddenly your job may actually require effort. > You also need a solution to her non-physical problems as well. > The loud music isn't helping at all. > Neither is your limited knowledge of psychology. > Or your limited knowledge of ponies either. > It is entirely possible that they deal with psychological issues in a way much different than humans or Warforged do. > Then again the only common issue for Warforged is crippling insanity. > All the humans you knew who dealt with post trauma did it with drugs and violence. > Not letting that happen, kind of counter-intuitive. > You needed real solutions and had no idea how to get them. > Or even the full extent of the problem. > You hated not knowing. > Ignorance never leads to good things. > You can't read to find an answer, asking might help give insight into exactly how big a problem you're dealing with, but not how to deal with it. > You set your maul on the landing and sit down with your legs hanging out over the edge. > What to do... What to do... > As you sit atop the stairs and contemplate the situation the party keeps going beneath you. > And shows no signs of slowing down... topjack
>>2741749 >"OUI, ANON YOUR NOT NODDING OVE DURING MY STORY AGAIN 'RE YA?" "what, no no of course not man."
>"oh, well as I was saying..." >you nodded off again >not that anyone could blame you >Clockwork could weave some fascinating and enthralling tales >he just opted not to >quite an odd one though >moved to Ponyville from Trottingham with his son Pipsqueak about year before you fell ass backwards into it >his wife had passed away and he felt a change of setting would do good >he was right >Pip had a much easier time making friends here >you'd even heard he had his hoof in the door of moonbutt's heart >not surprising really >his name should be Pimp-makes-the-hoes-squeak >though it helps he's the most adorable little mother fucker on the block 2/5
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>>2741830 some ppl are meant to be writers, so arent
then again this is greentexting stories, so just because you (consider yourself) bad that this doesn't mean youll be good at actually literature.
topjack
>>2741871 >shortly after arriving Clockwork was worried you were going to steal his customers >both of you being clock makers >but you convinced him that you two could benefit one another >since he already had all the tools and resources you needed >and you had publicity and advanced techniques that he quickly adapted to his hoof mouth combo he used >you became business partners >renaming his shop from the inspired "Clockwork clocks" too "Beyond time and place" >corny >yet fitting >he was also one of your best friends and a bro-in-training >though being a single father he couldn't go get slammed with you as often as pride-parade >but when he did, he drank the two of you into the dirt then asked "fa' mor" >fucking trotts 3/5
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>>2741864 I'm just gonna try again later. I think that'll make me decide if I want to keep going or not because then I'll know if I earned it or not, as opposed to having someone say they're going to read it before I post it.
Anonymous
>>2741860 >>2741818 >>2741817 ok so Soarin rape the heart broken rainbow or Rainbow rape the wonderbolt Soarin?
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>>2741881 >Clockwork I can't picture him as a pony.
MisterElGuapo !pMeRz7RJWA
>>2741918 Have you considered making your own story? It's not bad stuff at all.
Also, Rainbow raep Soarin'. Dude's a bit of a bitch. Gadget !Y54YDBzz9U
>>2741918 This has already started out depressing as shit, let's kick it up a notce. Soarin rape RD.
Anonymous
new to these threads, giving them another go. What are some storys I should start with (or are a must read) time is not an issue or anything so they can be as long as needed.
HeshieokFasla !etizf/97GU
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Filly, have you ever considered doing new thread at >480?
ViolinAnon !/IYET2GfQw
>>2741830 >everything up until the part where I hit submit is just so fun. Isn't this the part that really matters?
In my opinion you shouldn't be writing if you're not doing it for your own enjoyment.
Pick up a name, get a pastebin and write more!
There's always someone reading, always. Just because they didn't reply to your story doesn't mean they didn't like it.
Forge !wf5JJ352J.
>>2741866 All done for now.
Hopefully I should be able to post regular updates now that work has slowed down and school is done.
http://pastebin.com/u/PonyForge I guess I don't need to link that this close to the top of the thread but fuck it, in case someone doesn't feel like sorting.
Feedback's always appreciated.
Anonymous
>>2741941 >Have you considered making your own story? It's not bad stuff at all. I thought I was a Chinese bootleg?
Gadget !Y54YDBzz9U
PaleNarrator !.JT.7dRUrY
>>2741871 >Clockwork could weave some fascinating and enthralling tales >Clockwork could weave >Clockwork So who want's an Autumn Leaves epilogue?
MisterElGuapo !pMeRz7RJWA
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>>2741976 But see, if you make your OWN story, you would be a Chinese original product.
ViolinAnon !/IYET2GfQw
>>2741944 What kind of story do you like?
We have everything.
Action, comedy, romance, clop, feels, crossover, slice of slice and much more.
Hinder
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>>2741956 Yeah, pretty much what he said is true. I've read about 15+ people's pastebins, but have never bothered to comment on them.
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>>2741760 >implying rape is not the logical answer. Here let me give you ideas.
>RD being incredibly depressed because of regret walks without direction >diamond dogs out of nowhere. >RD does not resist, does not care anymore >carried down their hole >most of DD thinks of ransom >but all of it slowly starts to turn to >rape. Anonymous
>>2742002 Where can I get a slice of slice?
Anonymous
Is there any story involving AnonxTrixie clop?
Anonymous
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>>2741830 I generally don't give a fuck about giving feedback. But that's cause I'm a lazy bastard. Many are like me.
topjack
>>2741881 >" AH KNEW IT YOU'RE IGNORE'N ME!" "what!? no I'm not."
>"Well then what did ah just say?" "ummmmmmmmmmmmmm... something hard to understand?"
>"oh, well sorry to doubt ya' there lad." "All is forgiven friend"
>looking at the 40 clocks that cover the wall of the shop you realize you two need to get going "hey Clockwork we got that thing with princess at town hall"
>"this idn't just "a thing" there boy this is the royal clock cleaning. Tis only comes once every hundred years, and is the greatest honor a clockmaker can hope to gain." >when you had first heard about the royal clock cleaning shortly after joining up with Clockwork you assumed it meant the princesses where going to beat the shit out of you in an old timey boxing match complete with handle bar mustaches. 4/5
Gadget !Y54YDBzz9U
>>2741976 Guapo is just mad that your end is better than is. Anonymous
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>>2741974 Damn you and your short updates!
I DEMAND MOAR
ViolinAnon !/IYET2GfQw
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>>2742019 >>2742002 >slice of slice I should really re-read before posting.
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>>2741943 >>2741941 I need a tie breaker...
I don't what its going to be like writing a rape/clopfic when I, myself, am against clopping DoubleOctave !OctveS64ak
Shadows of Tartarus DoubleOctave !OctveS64ak Sat 23 Jun 2012 03:30:48 No. 2742049 Report Um...here we go then....
Anonymous
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>>2741987 thanks i'll get to work on reading all of those and eventually getting to the other ones on the main list.
topjack
>>2742033 >sounds kinda awesome if only for the surreal factor >but no its actually just cleaning a clock that was given to Celestia and Luna by the earth ponies after they defeated Discord to embody their loyalty >damn thing is over a millennium old >"Stop day dreamin' an get on that nice jacket the fine marshmallow lass made fo'r ya. We got royalty to 'mpress
>It's going to be an interesting day 5/5
DoubleOctave !OctveS64ak
Shadows of Tartarus DoubleOctave !OctveS64ak Sat 23 Jun 2012 03:31:44 No. 2742064 Report >>2742049 You’re not sure how he had heard you when you didn’t make any sort of noise on the way out, nor did you have a shadow cast where he would see it. But you make your way back through the plant life and stand next to the fire. The man stepped around and began to examine you. He was dressed much like a shaman, animal hide and fur with a skull for a helmet. Then he pulled a knife and pointed it at your throat. “Get out, I don’t need you.”
You throw your hands up in defense and try not to focus on his knife. “Hey wait a second here,” Getting around that knife would be hard; you needed a bit more time. But time was something this guy didn’t have. He took a step closer and kept the knife level with your throat.
“Oh, no, I know you.” You look at him questioningly. How did the guy know you when you got here only a few hours ago? “Yeah, you can go tell those other fucks I don’t need them either. I don’t need anybody but myself!” Again you have no idea what he was talking about but he steps forward again and shouts, “NOW GET!”
DoubleOctave !OctveS64ak
Shadows of Tartarus DoubleOctave !OctveS64ak Sat 23 Jun 2012 03:32:27 No. 2742077 Report >>2742064 You don’t move from your spot, you need more time to think up a plan. But he lunges forward when you don’t leave and plants the blade into your left shoulder. You shout in pain and grip his arm as he began to pull back. With as much energy not directed at feeling pain you send a right hook up into his jaw. His head rolled away from your punch and he winds up his own. You pin his right foot with your left and jam your now exposed elbow into his face. An audible crack came from his nose as he hollered in pain; both hands went to grab the spot you hit. With a swift move you unpin his foot and deliver a swift kick to his solar plexus. With no balance he falls backwards and you pull his knife from your shoulder. There is no pain that follows it, there are no thoughts being sent through; just movement. Fight or Flight, that’s what you were running on. You get on top and pin his arms down with your knees. He struggles around and tries to throw you off, until you put the knife in front of his eyes. “Discord says hi.”
“WAIT!” You barely stop the knife from pricking into the man’s forehead. “Wait wait wait, Discord? Dude, you’re making a mistake.”
Anonymous
>>2741760 Soarin' >rapes Rainbow.
Rainbow gets stockholm syndrome.
DoubleOctave !OctveS64ak
Shadows of Tartarus DoubleOctave !OctveS64ak Sat 23 Jun 2012 03:33:28 No. 2742092 Report >>2742077 His hands are open as if he was trying to stop the fight. A fight he started no less. “Hear me out, please.” You catch a glimpse of his left hand moving towards your knee. Without hesitation you drove the knife clean into his skull, warm blood trickled from the fresh wound. The body went limp as the eyes lost focus and all life in them. You look to the dead body then to the knife between its eyes. As you pull the weapon from its wound you can’t help but feel bad for what you did. It was for Rainbow Dash but was it worth it? What would she say if she saw you doing this? Besides chew you out for being such a weak idiot. You sigh and wipe the crimson blood on the man’s fur shirt, staining the hair in glistening red. On the door of the cottage a portal was waiting, inside looked like a large mining area. Rocks and pickaxes littered the floor and walls. You sigh and stick the knife under your belt before walking into the portal once more; the world seemed to turn pure black except for the one light at the end of a long tunnel. You can’t turn back and redo your mistakes, you can’t go back and tell Discord to fuck off, nor can you tell Dash what you were doing here for her. You move forward.
topjack
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>>2742062 so how badly did I dun fuck up?
http://pastebin.com/u/Topjack also later parts feature Celestia X anon if your into that.
Anonymous
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>>2742036 thanks. I'm still feeling all the
LOVE and support from everyone that night
>>2742083 and we have a winner
idk if ill finish tonight though,
HeshieokFasla !etizf/97GU
>>2742083 Rainbow Rapes Soarin
Soarin an heros
Rainbow causes the wonderbolts to disband
She an heros in guilt
Anon fucks AJ again.
DoubleOctave !OctveS64ak
Shadows of Tartarus DoubleOctave !OctveS64ak Sat 23 Jun 2012 03:34:32 No. 2742110 Report >>2742092 The rocks crunch under your feet as you step through the portal and into the new realm. The cave was dimly lit with small gas lanterns, the faint glow of metallic ore covered parts of the walls. You’re no expert on any of this kind of thing, but some of these look like expensive jewels. Not to mention the rail track with carts full of little diamonds, and this really BIG diamond. Damn, that thing was about as big as you. You decide to name it Tom and begin to trek through the hollowed corridors. Endlessly wandering through the same passage, more or less it was the same layout and the same texture. Each time you pass a cart of diamonds you have to convince yourself not to take anything. You were here for Rainbows soul and nothing else. Then in the distance was a faint clink sound, like metal against rock. The noise kept drawing close until you were faced with a four-way split. Listening for the sounds origin didn’t help either, so you were back to wandering the tunnels once again. “Hello, I’ve not seen you around these tunnels. What is your name?” A voice called from behind.
You turned to still see a dimly lit corridor, until a spider slid down its webbed string and stared you face to face. In a frightened reaction you slam both hands together on the spider, but when you pull away its still there, unharmed. “How did you…?”
The spider shifts around on its string and then acts like it was adjusting a top hat. “Terribly sorry for frightening you like that my boy, this new body is still hard to get used to. So cumbersome at times what with eight legs and all.” It shoots a web string to your shoulder and swings down to your hand. You raise it up to be eye-level with the little arachnid. “Now, is there any way I can help you my boy? I know many of these tunnels quite well, lived here much of my life after the accident.”
Anonymous
>>2742103 I like my stockholm syndrome idea better because it could fit with guapos ending.
DoubleOctave !OctveS64ak
Shadows of Tartarus DoubleOctave !OctveS64ak Sat 23 Jun 2012 03:35:11 No. 2742130 Report >>2742110 Ok, this guy had to be really old if he still talked like an old 30’s business man. Or was that an old 50’s business man? Time really flew in Equestria, but it was definitely not from your era.
You take another look down the four corridors. The constant click of metal to rock seemed to echo through all the tunnels.
“Can you lead me to that sound?” You make a gesture with your free hand at all the tunnels. “I can’t tell which one because it echoes through all of them.” You think it tilted its head but it was hard to tell because the thing was so small. It felt like an eternity was passing as this little spider just sat on the back of your hand and waited. The waiting was starting to get on your nerves, nothing was keeping you occupied while the thing sat there thinking. Finally you gave up and set the spider on the wall. “Sorry, but I don’t have time to wait so long. I really need to get going.” Not like it was much help anyways, you could have done a better job of wandering than it did just thinking. So abandoning the spider you set out through one of the tunnels to the still constant clanging noise. Much to your regret this tunnel led you the wrong way; the noise kept growing faint as you walked forward. So you turned back from that tunnel and walked down the next. This one too was much the same as the first; the noise just grew faint as you grew irritated. So the last tunnel was the right tunnel, towards the end large amounts of diamond had been accumulated along with many broken pickaxes. A human shadow was cast onto the wall before you. It kept swinging up and down into the rock. Each clang of metal didn’t bother the person at all, but at this close range it was bugging the hell out of you.
HeshieokFasla !etizf/97GU
>>2742124 And then AJ gets stockholm syndrome.
DoubleOctave !OctveS64ak
Shadows of Tartarus DoubleOctave !OctveS64ak Sat 23 Jun 2012 03:36:02 No. 2742146 Report >>2742130 You took a step forward to inch around the corner but catch a pickaxe handle with your foot. It clangs into the side of the wall with a loud clang. The shadow stopped moving and seems to look your way. You didn’t dare make a move or breathe, but even with your caution and non-breathing the person came around the corner. About your height with dirt and ash all over his body, a scruffy looking pair of overalls and some boots was all he wore. In his left hand was the pickaxe and in his right was a dagger. His eyes dart all over your person, looking through all flaws and strengths you possibly had. Then he sported the knife hanging from your belt.
“MINE! GIVE IT TO ME!” You barely have enough time to bring a hand up and jam it in his face to stop him from tackling you to the ground. Though his hands were still flailing and grabbing madly for the knife on your belt. “MINE! YOU HAVE IT SO IT HAS TO BE WORTH SOMETHING!” He keeps grabbing for the knife on your belt and ends up with other things in his hands; yet does not notice nor care. He wants your only weapon. You’re not sure if it’s to keep you weaponless and easier to kill or if he just wanted the knife because you had it.
DoubleOctave !OctveS64ak
Shadows of Tartarus DoubleOctave !OctveS64ak Sat 23 Jun 2012 03:36:32 No. 2742158 Report >>2742146 You try everything to keep the madman from taking your knife, but each push you use to get rid of him makes him want it more. His shouts still go on about the knife being worth something, that you didn’t deserve something that was worth anything. Frantically you scan the tunnel the two of you were in for something to use, something to give you an edge in this struggle. Lying next to your feet was the pickaxe from earlier, and above was the only support beam in the whole tunnel. You contemplate bringing this whole tunnel down on the guy’s head but then you might not be able to outrun the collapse yourself. That leaves the pickaxe and the knife he was grabbing madly for. Thoughts begin to formulate a plan around using the pickaxe when your belt became slack and the knife clattered to the floor. The guy had split your belt in half to get the knife off. His knife clattered to the floor as he dove for yours, grasping it so hard his knuckles turned white. “I GOT IT! I GOT IT!” You took a step back from the madman, intent on leaving him as is and come back when he was sleeping. But then you notice the pickaxe still on the ground.
Anonymous
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>>2742140 Stockholm syndrome for everyone.
DoubleOctave !OctveS64ak
Shadows of Tartarus DoubleOctave !OctveS64ak Sat 23 Jun 2012 03:37:17 No. 2742169 Report >>2742158 The wood is cheap and splintering when you grasp it in your hands. It was like holding a stick with a lead weight on the end making it awkward for a weapon. But it would do, you raise it overhead and look down to the next champion. He was still cradling your knife and growled when you got too close. With gravity on your side you bring the pickaxe down fast on his head. His whole head seemed to just take in the metal object the same way a rotten watermelon would collapse in on itself. Blood and brain matter oozed from his wound and flowed freely down his lifeless face. The knife he wanted so badly was still in his hands. You pry your knife from his cold grip and retrieve his own knife where he dropped it. A little rust, nothing a whet stone couldn’t fix. Then you peered around the corner the champion was digging into; a large diamond—roughly eight feet tall—was studded into the stone wall. As you ran a hand over the smooth stone you couldn’t help but admire the work put into digging it out, but it was work by a madman hell bent on taking everything for himself. Sounded familiar.
On the smooth surface a ripple seemed to appear, like a drop of water splashed into a pure blue lake. Another portal had opened, through the large diamond this time. But instead of looking into another world all you could see was pure darkness. You look around the tunnel for any other exit that might have appeared or be hidden behind a fake wall. Alas there is no other exit, just the portal of swirling darkness. With a deep breath you set one foot into the portal—raindrops hit the toe of that foot—then push the rest of your body through. On the other side the clouds were dark grey, casting a monotone color over the land and ultimately giving everything a gloomy feeling to it.
DoubleOctave !OctveS64ak
>>2742169 The room you occupied now was made from grey stone bricks, a large circular dais stood in the middle of the room elevated by a few stairs. Discord was standing by the stone dais with his back to you.
Against your better judgment you climb up the short flight of stairs and stand behind Discord as he waved his hands around. Lying on the dais was Rainbow; her body had been changed from the bloody gore pile to her original figure. You run a hand through her mane as to make sure this did not come from your imagination. It did not; Discord had really given Rainbow her original body back. The draconiquis turned from his work and clasped your closest shoulder. “Anon! So good to see you come back to your own world. Tell me, how goes the task? Champions giving you a hard time, hm?”
You shove Discords paw off and look down to your Rainbow again. Just four more people to kill and you could live happily with her again. You grunt when he asks about the ‘champions’. “That is a joke right? Those two were weird and off in the head also, why were they human?”
DoubleOctave !OctveS64ak
Shadows of Tartarus DoubleOctave !OctveS64ak Sat 23 Jun 2012 03:38:33 No. 2742197 Report >>2742181 Discord shook his head and turned away to collect his thoughts. You let the silence take over and cast another look to Rainbow; memorizing every detail you had forgotten about her. Though her eyes were closed you knew they were the same rose color they had always been, and while her body was soft and warm to the touch it harbored no form of life inside. “Humans really are stupid. Ever heard of something called the multi-verse?” Discord called from the base of stone stairs. You hesitate to leave Rainbow alone there but ultimately must continue on. “Tartarus links all dimensions together so it must also link together all universes. Get the idea yet?”
You get the idea, or at least most of the idea, but Discord doesn’t stick around to explain any more on the subject. He leaves in a puff of purple smoke and leaves behind another portal to Tartarus. Through this one you can make out the distinctions of a city, or the remnants of one. Buildings large and small scattered through the land, made of both metal and wood. You turn away from the beckoning world and walk back to the stone dais. Rainbow still lay unmoving, though that was to be expected. Every detail of her body—each scar, cut, or imperfection—you memorized it all. Then how it felt under your touch. It had been a long time since you were able to hold Dashies body; so long you had forgotten what that feeling was. Her mane fell together in its rainbow pattern and kept its usual velvet feel, much the same as her light blue coat. As expected her tail felt much the same as her mane only its rainbow flowed backwards, not from red to purple but from purple to red. But work was to be done before you could bask in the reward; slowly you retreat from Rainbow’s body and away from the dais, stepping into the Tartarus portal for the third time.
lurker parking
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>>2741944 Duke of derpy
dj anonn
Anonymous
I cannot focus
Anonymous
Never been in one of these threads before. Read through this one and tried my hand at making one.
http://pastebin.com/71cMAj3g Obviously I'm not a writer, so go easy on me.
Also, if you can guess where the idea for the story came from, then I'll let you in on a secret.
DoubleOctave !OctveS64ak
Shadows of Tartarus DoubleOctave !OctveS64ak Sat 23 Jun 2012 03:41:13 No. 2742264 Report >>2742197 >>2742181 >>2742169 >>2742158 >>2742146 >>2742130 >>2742110 >>2742092 >>2742077 >>2742064 >>2742049 That's everything for now, sorry if it seems a bit...forced or anything...those two weren't the funnest to write about. Also hope nobody...um...drowned in the text wall
http://pastebin.com/u/DoubleOctave Pastebin is updated now then, any comments so far? (if anyone cares)
Anonymous
>>2742257 Genre suggustion?
You could just use Pandora.
Equestrian Breaker
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Anybody looking for some Ageless: Part 3?
Hinder
Good god, there's a surprising amount of new writers popping up today, including me. Did I miss something?
Kevin !GhG1buizc.
Some art I threw together for one of my favorite stories.
>>2742257 It really depends on what you're into but I'll post a few things I enjoy listening to while I write. Sage for /mu/
http://youtu.be/1BNMAq0D9w4 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kS0rGykUBFM http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=v4tDKF_uwRI As you can see, my music preference was heavily influenced by my parents. Anyway, good luck!
Anonymous
Anonymous
Anonymous
>>2742336 wow holy fuck u drew that?
Kevin !GhG1buizc.
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>>2742354 Skrape.. Sky rape.. rape in the sky.. won't that work for you?
Equestrian Breaker
Thread's quiet, might as well post before someone big comes along.
Pastebin:
http://pastebin.com/u/EquestrianBreaker Start at Part 1:
http://pastebin.com/cYGdMQFp Ageless: Part 3 coming right up.
Anonymous
>>2742259 I hate to be THAT guy, but it would be nice to get even one comment.
Equestrian Breaker
>>2742444 Wet steps.
>That's all you could think. Wet steps and the gentlest scuffing of paper on marble. The expected "clip clop" of a canter was replaced with a gruesome "schlip schlorp" as ink spewed from the pressure of each step, bubbled, and congealed as a sticky mass when ripped from the ground again. >Not that you'd look down at the legs again. No, that would risk gazing at the late joining member. >The member. >We won't talk about the member. >This "thing" kept on inching itself closer, a smile worn on Celestia's stolen face. You'd flee, but you're still a little shocked over the paper bon- >YOU SAID WE WOULDN'T TALK ABOUT IT. >Well it's a little hard- >STILL TALKING ABOUT IT. >Now you're just taking things out of proportion. >You know what else is out of proportion? The member. >Well now you're talking about it. >You ARE me. >Anon? >And the last thing I need is ME reminding me of THAT. >Anon, the footsteps stopped. >What the hell does that have to do with any- Hot breath hits your face.
>???:"Mhmhmhm..!" >Oh. That's what that means. >"...Fuck" >???:"Oh I intend to." Anonymous
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ok im listening to all these music links and John T. Grape Pandora Station...what am i doing[/spoiler
Anonymous
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>>2742307 everyone(including me) wants to put their little twist in the world of Equestria.
I think thats the reason for it.
Still thinking if I should go and do the scooby doo style stuff that I am thinking with anon as the diamond dog scooby. Mysteries abound the Mystery Mare Machine.
Anonymous
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>>2742453 Think of the silence as a sea of veritable applause. With the clappers too lazy to clap.
Anonymous
>>2742453 You could expand more on explaining the setting. Really, you could use that as a rough draft, and i'm sure you could expand it alot more.
I can't tell where the story's from, sorry. Kevin !GhG1buizc.
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>>2742383 Not entirely, it a vector by a deviant art user that can be found here
http://up1ter.deviantart.com/art/Rarity-287111014?q=boost%3Apopular%20RARITY&qo=5 He drew it, I used it. I can't claim the majority of the work was done by me.
Equestrian Breaker
>>2742476 It intrudes more.
>"Look, this is all so sudden." >???:"Mmm, just the way I like it." >"Can't we talk a little?" >???:"Rape now. Talk later." >Oh god. >You gag and turn your head. The book pony takes the opportunity to steal a peck at your cheek. Playful little thing for a rapist. Your cheek is oddly wet, though. You reach a hand up to it. >Lipstick like ink splotching meets your fingers. How horrendously endearing. >???:"A little taste before the main course." >You really didn't like the menu. >The book mare continues lavishing you with ink-dressed kisses. The ink lopped with each press, an oddly warm sensation. You couldn't say you really mind - it was keeping greater demons at bay. Besides, it was a little...enjoyable. You hadn't had such affections for quite a while. >The mare begins nuzzling your face, and you lose yourself for a moment. The parchment was incredibly soft, like a dollar bill folded countless times over the years. Maybe this wasn't so bad. A little give, a little take. Using your wiles, you might even be able to turn it around. >After all, Paper covers Rock. >... >You feel a prodding in your nether regions. The prodding is not your own. You look down.
>NOPENOPENOPENOPENOPENOPENOPE Equestrian Breaker
>>2742520 >You place your hands on the mare's cheeks - oh GOD that's soft- eliciting a little shudder from her. Keep it calm Anon, simple. She's the one in power here. You brush her cheekbones, doing your best to keep her love drunk. >"Listen... I don't know if I'm ready for this." >Your thumbs rub in small circles, fingers softly scratching as the extend and extract. The mare gives a sigh, resting her head on one hand, her eyes closed in the ecstasy. >???:"They never are... but I can help you with that" >A lustful tinge flows across her words. It's going to take some serious swooning to get this mare to back down. You lean in, resting her jaw on your right shoulder as both of your hands slide up and down her long neck. Pulling back, your hands come to rest again on her face higher this time, thumbs laying below her eyes as the fingers stretch on the leather binding of her original book, tips reaching the start of her flowing mane. Gently, you pull the mare towards you, the room silent but for the flowing pages in her hair, her breath on your neck, and the subtle hymn of magic. You whisper to one ear. Gadget !Y54YDBzz9U
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>>2742259 Pretty short but I chuckled at a few points. The end wasn't entirely clear but I believe I understand when he said, "I think you just saved both of our lives."
Overall Grade: Fuck that this isn't Elementary School. Go write more.
Equestrian Breaker
>>2742538 >"Does it have to be like this? After we've only just met?" >For a moment, the flowing pages stop, the weight falling on your fingers. The mare backs away, but not far enough to leave your hands. She stares at you, something of both a misty and steely gaze in her eyes. >???:"It's been too long..." >She doesn't say it harshly, and there's no hatred in her voice from the wait. You look into her eyes, your dark brown irises reflecting in her gem encrusted gaze. Where you expect anger, you find none. You could only see a pained stare, revealing something much older than yourself. Something that couldn't be restrained, a harsh reality of being, of existing. You could almost feel sympathy. This mare was not going to back down. >You press slightly harder with your hands on her visage. What you said next came from mixed emotion. Part of you wanted to just buy as much time as possible, part of you felt sorry, and deep down, for a reason you could not understand, part of you felt guilty. >So incredibly guilty. >"I just wish we could have gotten better acquainted." A single gemstone cracks. The hum of magic stalls. The library goes silent.
You pause, staring only into the jet pupils of the creature before you.
Sound explodes, and the world turns blue.
Equestrian Breaker
>>2742550 Day -365365 in Equestria
>"Mhmhmhm..." "Princess!"
>"Oh don't be so prudish." >You were no such thing, but you'll keep your escapades to yourself. This mare was out of it again. Galaxia knows you had just barely saved the guard on duty from your own fate. If the Princess couldn't stop acting like this, there'd be s- "MMmmph!"
>"Mmmm"~ >You part lips abruptly and push her back. Hard. "Tirek's Beard, Celestia!"
>Celestia's reverie is broken by your utterance. >"You know we shouldn't speak of that brute." "I dam well got the effect I wanted. You need to /control/ yourself, Celestia. You're acting like a common horse!"
>"My!", Celestia gasps at your use of such tongue. A small grin grows across her lips. >" I didn't know you talked dirty..." "CELESTIA!"
>Your nostrils flair as you stomp your hooves in defiance, the sound echoing around the broad Canterlot guest room you had pulled her into. Bells jingle as your hat and robe settle. A trinket acquired when you bested Grogar, yet another beast you had to battle. >Wait, did you say hooves? Oh god, not this again. >...What? Equestrian Breaker
>>2742561 >You are Anonymous, and the rabbit hole keeps getting deeper. That, or you've actually been unconscious in a lab somewhere for over a week while someone pumped PCP through your system. No seriously. The planet is covered in pastel horses, you've been looking at magic books for days, you nearly get RAPED by one, and now, you're seeing Pony again. More particularly, you are pony. Mister Gray Hooves here has shown up again. You're never going to get used to not feeling your toes and fingers. That, and the massive field of vision is making you a little sick. As with most things in this damnable place, you decide to sit back for the ride. Anonymous
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>>2742257 >story takes place in the rain >writing about rape in the rain >not listening to rain while writing >2012 http://www.rainymood.com/ Kevin !GhG1buizc.
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Here's the poster I did a while back if anyone hasn't seen it.
Colgate man
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i miss brushing my teeth on cam
Anonymous
>>2742489 Well I just wrote shit down as it came to me. I'm probably never gonna write anything ever again since I'm pretty shit at it.
Also, it's loosely based off my favourite episode of The Twilight Zone. Mr. Denton on Doomsday. Equestrian Breaker
Apparently 4chan thinks me post is spam. Sorry for the delay, folks. Can't find what's causing it.
Anonymous
>>2742692 Sure you changed all your p*o*ny to p0ny?
Anonymous
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>>2742692 It's okay, being a nigger tends to trip the spam filter easily
HeshieokFasla !etizf/97GU
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>>2742710 Pony only filters when used with Any, Every, Some or other such situations.
Fresh prince also filters, so keep that in mind.
Vest_Muvvins
I've been reading these stories for a long time, and i finally got tired of standing around on the side lines, so i decided to start writing. may or may not have my 1st chapter up by tonight, my weekends are pretty fuckin busy
PaleNarrator !.JT.7dRUrY
So, what, I updated a few hours ago?... huh...
HeshieokFasla !etizf/97GU
>>2742779 You already posted Parkbench.
Anonymous
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>>2742779 Just gimme the box.
Gadget !Y54YDBzz9U
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>>2742756 Another new writer? Haha, that pastebin list may need to be culled again to make more room.
Welcome aboard and good luck!
>>2742779 Parkbench, homeslice.
PaleNarrator !.JT.7dRUrY
Mandroid !b0nLshMElM
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>>2742660 Screw that bro, you never know till you try.
Hell, I felt the same way you did when I started out.
Just write and post, someone will read it.
OverlordAnon
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>>2742779 The box! The box!
I don't have the fitting Simpsons screencap to go with this, sadly.
Anonymous
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>>2742779 Serious question, do you ever sleep?
captcha: tonight tyzzzing
Anonymous
3 months of lurking and reading stories, this will be my last night of reading your guys stuff. The quality has dropped immensely and the rage is getting retarded. Loved alot of the work done here though. Just wished the quality was as consistant as it was.
Anonymous
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>>2742807 Personally, I say continue Parkbench. You got me hooked, damn it. Maybe with box inbetween.
Hinder
Anonymous
>>2742836 This guy be mad trollin yo
sage for offtopic
Anonymous
>>2742807 Hey Pale, any progress on the Islamic terrorist pony story?
Anonymous
>>2742836 If you think there's a problem with a given story, you should post feedback and suggestions whenever that given author is in the thread. They can't really improve without the input of the readers.
Of course, if you have been, then maybe you're just tired of fanfics. Try coming back in a couple months and see how you feel.
Duke of Derpy !1/hDeathL.
Anonymous
>>2742779 the box
aka the A-Team and betty get teleported to Equestria where they must resolve their differences and work together in order to survive
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>>2742853 Also, top quality stuff can't be pushed out forever. You can't keep finding flawless gems without first gettin some bad ones.
Anonymous
>>2742853 >saging a thread that is going to bump anyways >all my wat Marvel Anon
>>2742836 Sorry, some of that was probably my fault.
I'll stop posting stuff from now on.
Anonymous
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>>2742887 I suspect you don't understand the concept of a 'polite sage'
google it newfriend
>>2742892 You stop posting, I start killing babies.
Hinder
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Also, I'm working on Chapter 2 for my story as I write this. I just can't stop myself. If I finish it I might post it later tonight, or tomorrow.
Brainhorn !!X+la9AgNv4F
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>>2742779 I vote for Barren Kindness, but I can see I'm going to lose that one.
Marvel Anon
>>2742907 But I've got no juice left.
Every story is basically the same shit, anyways. You won't be missing much.
Anonymous
>>2742869 Yeah, but a lot of the critical criticism has been met with outright hostility. What once had the feel of a group of writers working on a craft now feels like hubs of rabid fanboys who jump on any constructive critiques.
Anonymous
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>>2742875 In order to survive from what? Nastry trorr? The Illuminati (Aether and Wuten)? Marvel Anon
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>>2742925 >that feel when you'd love to jump on anyone who would critique your stuff The only thing anyone's ever said about my stories is that they mained Dormington in Marvel.
Anonymous
>>2742921 Oh god
Fuck you
Its not the same shit
Some have comedy, others have drama
its not like this place has been stagnate for a long time where everything is a rehash of the rehash
>>2742925 You're gonna have to name an example, because I've never seen anything like that, here.
Zuul !vJHWNqhBaQ
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>>2742779 Mystery box. Also, I love you.
Anonymous
>>2742966 do you really want me to bring up her name in this thread? It was going so nicely...
ImperiusDictatio !rP5fXQaROY
Emperor's Child in Equestria ImperiusDictatio !rP5fXQaROY Sat 23 Jun 2012 04:19:05 No. 2742993 Report Quoted By:
>>2742779 FOOLS! You never pick the box! You doom us all!
Parkbench please Aether !!mw/7+Tvxn6g
Anonymous
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>>2742989 Pointless /soc/ =/= criticism Anonymous
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>>2742779 Calling it now, the box is the Autumn Leaves epilogue that you suggested earlier in the thread.
Anonymous
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SHOW US THE BOX YOU DOUBLE NIGGER
Marvel Anon
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>>2742965 No, I'm saying all of MY stories are the same shit.
I'm a shitty writer.
Anonymous
>>2742966 I've criticized some of your stuff and every time you have some uppity comment.
Anonymous
>>2743015 I've also noticed pale just says "fuck you" or something like that.
Anonymous
>>2742966 >>2743015 yeah Brian, your kinda lash out at others...
Anonymous
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>>2742860 Wait, pale is working on this? I'd love to read this
Anonymous
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>>2742779 Parkbench.
Parkbench.
Someone needs to write a Happy love triangle/Threesome for once Instead of "Abloobloo i cheat on you"
PaleNarrator !.JT.7dRUrY
The Box of Mystery is REVEALED PaleNarrator !.JT.7dRUrY Sat 23 Jun 2012 04:23:17 No. 2743079 Report >>2742860 *opens box*
Anon is your everyday, normal dude that just so happens to live in Ponyville. Nothing out of the ordinary happens to him. His life goes by, day by day.
Until he starts getting letters on his doorstep everyday.
Letters from a secret admirer.
A secret admirer.
Who wants to FUCK his brains out and other naughty things As more and more letters arrive, Anon becomes paranoid and starts to suspect everyp0ny he comes in contact with.
Hilarity ensues.
This is your #3 choice.
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>>2743015 >>2743037 Gonna need an example, here. As long as it's constructive and not just something like "your story sucks dicks go kill yourself" I'll take it to heart.
Or if they just say "that was a bad chapter I didn't like it 1/10" without telling me WHAT they didn't like, it's hard to take it too seriously/
Anonymous
>>2743031 If he posts a GIF or an image macro in response to a comment then I'm pretty sure he's making a joke.
Nope, can't have any jokes in AiE...
Anonymous
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>>2743037 After reading an entire fucking series of brutal rape stories do you expect any thing else?
Anonymous
Anonymous
>>2743086 JOKES ARE SOCIALIZING
NO SOCIALIZING
STORY ONLY
YOU NO TYPE
YOU NO LIVE
SIEG HEIL
Anonymous
Is it bad that I don't see any point in writing something if no one's going to say anything about it?
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>>2743113 This seems to be what most anons think about AiE nowadays
Colgate man
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>day 555 in equestria >stop by the library to return a book > you and twilight chat about pony literature >pinkie shows up >insists on joining conversation even though she hasnt read a real book since school > twilight eventually bores pinkie enough when you start to talk about a science journal >you and twilight continue conversing unhindered by pinkie >3 minuets later you can here pinkie count down from three and a belch followed by a squeal and the sound of magical fire >you and twilights eyes go wide and you burst into the other room to see spike standing there looking skeptical >spike explains the idea pinkie had to send her to princess celestia >twilight quickly teleports the two of you to canterlot to see the worst possible thing >your in the royal bathroom >pinkie, celestia, and luna are all in the royal bathtub >it is clear sexy time was happening >for a few seconds everything is verry awkward >Luna finally pipes up >"so are you two going to join in or not" >epic royal bathtub orgy ensues spike is still at the library wondering what happened
lurker parking
Anonymous
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>>2743079 see
>>2742875 u r writing this now
They all wake up deep in the everfree forest
Betty has the power to talk to animals (ponies,cows,sheep,etc) while the A-Team has their guns and one liners
Mandroid !b0nLshMElM
Bros in Equestria 59. Mandroid !b0nLshMElM Sat 23 Jun 2012 04:28:14 No. 2743182 Report Here we go.>You sat on the train as it sped away from Ponyville. >The car was packed with refugees, the only reason you were sitting was because you were unable to stand. >Pain shot through your torso again. Lotus gripped your arm and helped you lean back. "Easy there...come on." she said. >You grunted through the agony of your nerves flaring up again for a few minutes. >Aloe and Caramel sat across in the seat across from you. "Mous, are you sure you should be traveling like this?" Aloe said. >This pain wasn't doing wonders for your sense of humor. >"Better than staying in town." >The door behind you opens and a familiar face trots out. "Mous!" she says. >Dinky bounds out from her mother legs and hops on your lap, you ignore the pain for your little friend. >"Hey there, poozer. What's up Derpy?" >Derpy throws her hooves around your neck and almost pulls you off your seat. "I wanted to thank you for getting Dinky out of those mines." >She looks down at your wound. "I heard what happened...I'm so sorry." >"Well...don't be, Derpy. I'd do it again in a heartbeat." >"Let's hope you don't have to." Lotus says. >As Derpy and her family walk away, you stop her coltfriend and pull him close. >"Any chance you could help this situation?" you whisper. >He shakes his head. "I didn't have time to grab anything before we had to leave." >He must have seen your face. "I'll help any other way I-" >"No." You interrupt. >You look down the car at Derpy and Dinky taking a seat. >"Just take care of them. We can handle the rest." >You hope.
Anonymous
>>2743113 okay I am fucking confused guys
I don't want to go to skype to talk
But you guys try to control what is said in a 4chan thread....
So every time I see "no soc", it feels like your trying to control something you can't control. I mean, I really like all of you, but have you all really deluded yourselves you can control anything that happens on a 4chan thread? If so, Id do a reality check...
Mandroid !b0nLshMElM
>>2743182 >The train pulls into Canterlot and the guards start sorting out the refugees. >Anon and the girls head to the castle, they were meeting the Princess for a meeting. >You said you'd catch up with them. >Right after you went to the hospital. >You dragged Doctor Horse along so he could give the Canterlot doctors the heads up on your condition. >The Canterlot hospital was more equipped then the Ponyville one and they brought out a blast from the past: Magical bandages. >The soothing bandages started to work as soon as they were wrapped around you. The doctors said they were soaked in an enchanted mix, and that it seeping into your skin was what was helping you. >You made a mental note to watch out for any magical poisons.' >You and Lotus made your way to the castle, you wanted to be present for this meeting. >"Feeling better?" Lotus asked with a smile. >You make a show of stretching, jogging in place, and even jumping up and down a bit. >"Mhmm. I tell ya, these bandages should be the standard in every hospital." >"Will they heal you faster?" >"They numb the pain a good bit, but I'll probably still have to take it easy." >You doubt these bandages could keep your guts from spilling out if you popped a stitch.
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>>2743115 It depends on *WHY* you write. Most people I've asked write because they WANT to write. Some, like you, Seem to only write to see what people think and when no one responds you go and bitch and whine about how bad life is and that you don't have anyone who reads your stuff. Get. The. Fuck. Over. Yourself. People just don't post shit, they fucking read. Most are too lazy to post criticism. I for one probably won't read your stuff if all you're gonna do is fucking whine like this.
!l75uuTS5Vg
DISCLAIMER: I am posting from a ipad, and I wrote it on a ipad aswell, so bear with me. Dunno how to properly cut em for 4chan, but ill try. Depending on if people see any chance of this story working out, will decide if I keep going on this or start over. And english is my second language, I am sure you will notice. :) hope you enjoy. >Youre woken by a strange growling, coming from above you. Your eyes slowly but surely open. At first glance, it seems that youre in a thick, almost cartoon-looking forest, but judging by the five branch-covered wolfes infront of you, that was the least of your problems. >The biggest of the wolfes, clearly the alpha, stares at you. Hatred in its eyes. Youre eyeing it for a second, then gives it a sly grin. >...Looks like this son of a bitch wants to fight. Nothing the great and powerful "El luchador papaya loco de muerte" can't handle! >Hm.. What's this? There isn't magicly being flewn in a wrestling-ring? Usually you got full control over your dreams.. Strange. >Oh well, guess i'll just have to summon my magical dragon, Bobo, to fight them off for me. >...Nothing.
PaleNarrator !.JT.7dRUrY
Mandroid !b0nLshMElM
>>2743196 >The guards were being pricks and wouldn't let Lotus into the meeting. >Anon must have heard your shouting, because he came out and told you to stop being dumb. >You were about to go off on him when Lotus assured you that she didn't mind and that you should just go in already. >You found Anon, the girls, Shining Armor, several officials, and both Princesses standing around a small model of Ponyville and the surrounding countryside. >"Sorry to keep you all waiting." >"We weren't waiting, Mous." Celestia said. Straight to business again.
>"We were examining the methods used by the Diamond Dogs to invade Ponyville in the way they did." she said. >"What have we got?" >Anon sighs. "Not much...the Dogs came out of a portal in the center of town." >"A portal that shouldn't have existed..." Twilight grumbled. >You jerk a finger towards Twilight. Anon catches on. "Diamond dogs apparently can't use magic." >"Hmmph. Tell that to the fireballs we dodged." >"But it shouldn't be possible! And even if it was, where did the Dogs get the kind of magic to make a portal so big!?" Twilight shouted. >"Twilight, you said the leylines in Ponyville went dead right before the Diamond Dogs came?" Celestia asked. >Anon and Twilight nodded. >"Hmm...perhaps the Diamond Dogs siphoned the magic from the leylines to power there portal..." she said. >"But Princess, that's impossible!" Twilight said. >"Evidence proves otherwise, Twilight." >Twilight silenced herself. >"That still does not explain how they summoned Cerberus..." Luna said. >"Maybe it was pack nature?" a voice echoed through the room.
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>>2743185 What's wrong with the skype chat? And if you must /soc/ just sage, then ignore all the fagget anons.
Shukaku20
Mandroid !b0nLshMElM
>>2743216 >Everyone in the room spun around to get a bead on the voice. "Oh come on, dere's no need for dat." >Everyone spun back around and saw a Diamond Dog standing on the map. >Or well, the image of a Diamond Dog. >"Took you mutts long enough ta all get 'ere. Ya kept me waitin'" he said. >"Who are you?" Celestia roared. >"Easy dame, names Dogfather." he said. >Celestia was taken aback by that. "THE Dogfather? How did you get out of Tartarus?" >That was where you had heard that name! During the cult crap! >The Dogfather laughs. "Heh. I'm tha new one. Took over after Discord took out da last one." >"You're welcome for that, by the way." >The Dogfather turns to you. "Huh?" >"I'm the guy who trapped Discord there. You're welcome for your promotion, Spot." >He growls at you. "I got ta where I am on my own, runt. Aint nobody helped me." >"How do you have your army? Celestia asked. >The Dogfather continues to stare daggers at you for your insult. "Busted 'em out when I got outta Tartarus. Took that fancy guard dog wit' me. You oughta know bout havin' one dog guard another." >"What do you want?" Celestia said. >Dogfather turned back to the group assembled. "I want what's due us dogs. You ponies keep da world in yur grip. Hell, ya even control tha sun and tha stars, n' I want some a dat." >Luna shifts to her royal voice, clearly annoyed. "THOU WERE BANISHED TO TARTARUS FOR THE CRIMES THOU COMMITED! WE SHALL NOT ALLOW THEE TO OBTAIN MORE POWER!" >The Dogfather is un-amused. "Ya aint got no choice, dame. We're commin' for ya n' we're gonna take what we want..." >The image of The Dogfather vanishes from the table. !l75uuTS5Vg
>>2743199 >Well thats just great. You are still being stared down by the branch-wolfes. They look rather pissed. I wonder why, its not like i've done anyth-. Just as you are about to finish that sentence, you hear a small whimper from underneat your foot. >Would you look at that! Its the cutest unnatural pup youre ever conjured in your dreams. >Youre pretty amazed to say it yourself, and decide to pick it up. >Wow! You could swear that it got sone weight to it. Brain, youve outdone yourself this time! >...Still, its only fair that we watch some pretty raunchy porn when I wake up as punishment for not being able to summon Bobo. >You lift the pup up to your face to take a closer look at your newest creation, as it starts smelling the air around you. Shit dosent get any more real than this! -------
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Mandroid !b0nLshMElM
>>2743259 >"Well, shit." >The room erupts as everyp0ny tries to figure out what to do. >You can't make out a word of it before Celestia silences the gathered ponies with a loud but calm "Stop." >Everyp0ny stops talking as Celestia speaks. "We are not going to panic. Panic is what will tear us apart." >She turns to a pony in a robe. "Grand Magister, your first instruction is to seal off Canterlot's leylines from any outside influence and ensure that the Diamond Dogs cannot teleport in." >The pony nods and trots off as Celestia turns to another. "General, how long would it take the dogs to get here by foot?" >The general looks over the map, Ponyville and Canterlot weren't too far away. "Not long. However, if we can contact Cloudsdale, we can have them hammer the area with weather to slow the dogs down. We can also barricade the paths on the mountain that lead to the city." >There were times when having your city not touch the ground were a good thing. "Do so immediately. Anything we can use to grant us time should be considered." Celestia said. >"Guard Captain. Prepare the royal guard for an invasion. And prepare the citizens of the city as well." She said to Shining Armor as he saluted. >Celestia turned to Anon. "Anon, Twilight, you two were invaluable during the Discord crisis. I would like you two to help the Grand Magister as well as devise a method of robbing the Diamond Dogs of their magic." >You approach Celestia as everyone else exits the room. >"Orders?" >Celestia merely gazes at you. "You intend to help?" She wasn't expecting you to volunteer. >"Any way I can." >Celestia throws a glance at her sister before turning back to you. "Help however you see fit, Mous." >With that, she walks out of the room. Mandroid !b0nLshMElM
>>2743278 >It was late at night now. Way late. >Luna's moon had already risen and was more than halfway across the sky. >You had taken a walk down to the area the refugees were set up, you had helped get everyp0ny squared away with a roof over their heads and food in their bellies before you made your way back here. >Those hotels might be pissed off at the royal edict telling them to provide shelter, but they could fuck off. Broblood stopped by to help your case when they resisted. >You crawl into bed, Lotus was already asleep. >You begin absentmindedly flicking her hair before you hear something. "You're worried." >You turn to the mare next to you as her eyes open. >"I am?" >Her eyes spoke of concern. "You only play with my hair in bed when you're worried. What's wrong sweetheart?" >You sigh and wrap your arms around her. >"Lotus, I think I'm gonna try helping the delaying action. I can't just help refugees while the dogs keep marching towards us." >Lotus shifts in your grasp. "Are you sure you're up to it?" >The bandages were helping, but you know you shouldn't be pushing yourself. >"I don't think it matters. If the dogs are coming, I can't let it slow me down." >Lotus sighs and buries her head in your chest. "I know trying to talk you out of it would be pointless...Just please, please, be careful. I don't want to see you back in the hospital again so soon..." >You pull Lotus up to your head and kiss her. >"I promise...no unnecessary risks." >What was necessary was still up in the air... !l75uuTS5Vg
>>2743261 >That son of a bitch bit you! He really bit you! What the hell is this shit, Brain? >You rub your nose in pain, as you start to think.. >There are five pissed "Logwolfes" infront of you. A pain-mode-cheat is apparently activated in this dream. Youve stepped on one of their off-spring. "..."
"Heeeeeeeeeeeeeeey.. So I think i'll just.. Walk over there or something." you rub the back of your neck, trying to act nonchalant. "..No hard feelings? I mean, the pup is fine and I will even ignore the fact that it bit me, doesnt that sound fair?"
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Anonymous
>>2743205 are you drawing these pale?
these are pretty good
Anonymous
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>>2742692 Still struggling with the filter?
Mandroid !b0nLshMElM
>>2743298 Pastebin updated.
http://pastebin.com/u/Mandroid Share your thoughts.
So we arrive safe in Canterlot and learn what The Dogfather has planned. Now we can focus on stopping him.
How will the guys stop The Dogfather? Stay tuned.
I'll try to bust out another update tonight, but it's up in the air. I kinda feel like ass.
Also, remember that voting is still open for my 10k paste hit extravaganza.
Current choices are:
1: Clop of any pairing with three or more lines together. Current entrees are MousXCelestia hatefucking and LyraXBon Bon hand experimentation.
-or-
2: A preview of my next story, a royal bodyguard story called Helios.
Brainhorn !!X+la9AgNv4F
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>>2743374 You know everyone is going to pick #1.
Like me, that's what I pick.
Congrats on 10k by the way
PaleNarrator !.JT.7dRUrY
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>>2743309 yup. I see something, I draw a response.
Also, THE REULTS!
Parkbench: 5
Barren K.: 3
Mystery Box: 7
hoo boy, here we go. Writing as I post, so bare with me please.
Equestrian Breaker
I can't find the problem, so I'm going to link a temporary paste and skip to the next one.
http://pastebin.com/VrqyL7hE >>2742565 >You near Celestia, but make sure to stay out of her personal space, lest physical contact set her off again. For all her power, princesshood, and age, she still shared so many common styled conflicts. Mortal conflicts. >In this case, it was a bit more of a biological issue, but romance must be simply terrible when you're an immortal. You'd hate having to live for centuries, trying to find a love long gone in new faces, or love at all. Just thinking about it sounded awful. Of course right now, you need to be thinking about her. >She was a wreck, no two ways about it. It was like this every time. Estrus. The equine female's cycle of heat. Celestia was more... active than most. Probably had something to do with her position. Take all the pressures of being a princess, politics, and raising the sun, then induce a little natural hormonal explosion, the end result wasn't pretty. Or very pretty, depending on how you looked at it. >But enough of that. What mattered was keeping it contained. Away from the public eye. Unfortunately the more you bottled it up, the more it wanted to burst. When that happened, someone had to take the blow. Guard against the unimaginable. Until recently, that had usually been you. >But you were tired of being a Guardsman. "Things need to change, Celestia."
Equestrian Breaker
>>2743409 >She doesn't shift, but you know she heard you. You continue in a slow trot around her, making sure not to get too close. Her emotions could swap at any second. "We've had to deal with this issue longer than I've been court wizard. It wasn't bad at first, but it's grown over the years."
>You stop mid canter and pause to accentuate your point. "Uncontrollably."
>You resume your walk, moving towards Celestia's head. "What started as flirtations has spread far beyond the state of your...natural condition. The isolation offered to you by the crown is feeding into your state. Your own conscious urges and desires have multiplied the effect beyond what it should be. Celestia, you've been more than forward. You've attempted to use your position as princess to push past the will of others. How many times have I stopped you from taking one of the Guard? Lesser nobility? Assured your sanctum as it wanes? And at the worst of times..."
>Some things are better left unsaid. >You near her head, leaning down to her ear. "Celestia..."
>Your breath reaches her, cutting out her sobs. Slowly, she raises her head to face you. You do your best to keep a somber face. One of care, but betraying no hint of possible romance. She looks up to you, head lowered like an apologetic child. A mortal lecturing a deity. "It's been too long."
Equestrian Breaker
>>2743421 >Moments pass. Celestia lays silent. You opt to sit on your hind hooves, counting out the breaths in your head as you wait. Very softly, she begins to speak. >"And what would you have me do?" >You follow suit, keeping your voice calm. "Control. Containment. We lose too much to the time wasted by these events. A princess must be prepared year round. Last year alone we risked harming relations with Gryphonia on three separate occasions because of meeting delays."
>"The Ambassador didn't seem to mind." "We fed him Hydra meat each visit. By the third, he tried feigning sickness just so he could stay for more."
>You both share a laugh, but it's short lived. "Lucky breaks aside, you must be ready for all duties. Being a princess is a full time job. We cannot risk debasement from such things. Worse still, warping political choice because of circumstances."
>"You make it sound so easy." "I'm well aware it isn't, Princess. Still, I have reason to believe your problem lies beyond mere biology. It's part of you, in your emotions."
>You are very cautious with your next words. "In your lust."
>She turns from you, brooding on it. You decide it best to pause for a moment before continuing. Anonymous
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>>2743409 trust me, just stop being a nigger and 4chan will let you though no problem
Anonymous
Equestrian Breaker
>>2743444 "This is not purely lecture. I have a plan."
>Celestia's ears perk. Slowly, the raises herself off the ground and turns to you. Well there goes your height advantage, nice while it lasted. At least Celestia's not broken composure. >"What kind of plan?" >Now or never. "You recall my work in the library."
>"Improving the protective enchantments on Hydra leather, yes." "As with all of my studies, I've been stretching the capability of the material. Gems embedded in proper manner can reinforce any enchantment with their natural attunement to magic. Gold inlay on the binding will act as a catalyst towards any alteration to enchantment design."
>"And what does this have to do with my condition?" >This is where things could get mucky. You weren't done with your work - there were still things to study and experiment with. "The book enchantments...they're not solely bound to be protection oriented."
>You see a flicker of understanding cross Celestia's eye. Her jaw clenches slightly. The flow of her mane has the faintest of breaks. >"Go on." "The books are designed for protection, holding. Having what is put inside them stay the way it is. Permanent for hundreds of years. The same magics could be used for entrapment."
>Celestia remains silent, you continue. "I know what you're thinking. I assure you, it's very possible. All it takes is the right understanding of all the parts. I've been doing research on all of it. Thoughts , beliefs, desires, dreams. I find myself fully capable of doing what I have planned."
>"And how do you know what you need to know of me?" "I think we both know that answer."
>"And where did you find a tutor for such abstract ideas as dreams?" >Now it was your turn to be silent. !l75uuTS5Vg
>>2743299 >Well Shit. >The "Pinewolfes" really need to learn to forgive and forget. If it wasn't for your quick reaction to being jumped by bitches all the time, this could have ended badly. ..If only it was your ex's face you kicked, then atleast you would have a chance at actually stopping something. Seems like you just pissed it off. >You ran through the forest at the speed of a kenyans, dodging branches and leaping over stones. Youve never felt more alive! This is great! Why havent you ever pissed of a pack of wolfes by hurting their younglings and run away, before?! "NOTHING CAN STOP ME NOOOOW~!"
>*Trip* "Oh shiiiiiiiiii-!"
>*smack!* >..Whoever said that adrenaline reduces pain, obviously havent ever tripped on a threestub and smashed their face in a nearby tree. Your surroundings are turning blurry and dark. However, before you passed out, you experienced a rather pleasant, warm feeling in your lower regions. -----
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Equestrian Breaker
>>2743458 >"Starswirl?" "She taught well. It is her charge."
>"I See." "It's unorthodox, I know, but we need this. You need this. This unkempt nature can't be hidden forever. What if it comes when I'm away at defense or on journey? What of when I'm gone? I won't last eternity, Celestia."
>"And you expect me to just submit myself to this? Can you even define the risk it holds?" "Experiments have shown full retention if the subject wishes to return his piece of mind. Retrieval ranges from one hour to eight days in ten tri-
>"You tested this on /yourself/, Starswirl?!" "...Yes."
>"The harm you could have done!" "I didn't."
>"It's completely unheard of!" "Not completely..."
>"Name one pony you've heard of doing such a thing." "Faust."
>You utter the name with conviction. Celestia's eyes widen, slack jawed in response. It takes a moment for her to regain composure. >"That is quite a stretch." "I stand by it, as did the pre-Equestrians. To a small extent, I hope to prove some of that faith."
>"You still haven't quelled any of my concerns" "And there's little I can say that can, Celestia. We have to try. There's little alternative."
>"Why must we try?" "Because we have to be better than HIM, Celestia. We have to lead our people with respect earned, and duties fulfilled. We have to be the better of society, not hide our uncontrolled urges. If you cannot contain this, Celestia. If you cannot bring order to Equestria, then what did we fight for? Why did we fight? What point is there in replacing one corruption with another? Equestria needs you to be the better ruler. This can help"
>Silence again. You wait it out, your will against hers. >"Alright." Equestrian Breaker
>>2743477 "I will prepare my quarters for the incantation."
>With that, you take your leave. The great oaken doors open at your horn's command, and you take care to close them gently. The less rattled an ill-informed Celestia was, the better. >It isn't every day that someone offers to rip away part of your very being. >Could it affect who she was? Would there be adverse reaction? Would it harm her body? Her mind? >Her soul? >These are questions you cannot answer, because you do not know. You told Celestia the truth, retention for a piece of mind proved possible and with no issue. What you didn't tell her is that you tested on memories. Information. Events. Petty things when compared to something as broad as emotion. Something far less defined, less solid and more towards a viscous nature. Primal. A core connection to a being's creation. >But that's exactly what you wanted. >Something much more intricate than what you had worked yourself. To know how far you've gotten. To know if you could handle it. Test the boundaries of your knowledge. The quality of your writ. You experimented on yourself first. You wanted to keep it private as possible. Keep it safe. But the next step proved to be more dangerous than you anticipated. If you were to attempt to delve deeper and harm yourself in the process... >But then the Heat came. As always, it came. >The opportunity just presented itself so nicely. She'd be willing, she needed little persuasion. >The story wrote itself. It was for the betterment of the kingdom. Her own sanity. Her control. All prettier things than the truth. It was for you.
It was for you, just like everything had always been for you.
"Faust preserve me..."
Anonymous
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Almost done with broken wings fan-bullshit for those wonderingpoor rainbow
Equestrian Breaker
>>2743501 >Faust. >You thought on it as you etched and carved atop a risen slab of rock in your personal quarters. The hall carried the sound of your work across green and black marble floors, each scratch of the stone's surface bouncing back over and over. No expense is spared for the quarters of a court wizard. Massive wall hangings depicting celestial bodies hung on each side of the main room. Gilded carafes and decanters sat on mahogany and walnut tables - both fitted with segmented leather tops. The main entrance housed a crystal chandelier laced with gems, but the study you currently resided in was solely lit from a fire shaded by a tortoise-patterned shell held in iron on the ceiling. >And Books. Gods, the books. Shelved every which way and every way where possible. You simply must organize them at some point. Nearly half of them were yours, after all. Personal research into the magical inclination of various items. Your research had brought in a new era of magic. An era of understanding. Though Unicorns had lived alongside Earth and Pegasus ponies for several generations, they still clung to sorcery like a secret. Magic tutelage, if any, was still on a private basis and only in heavily Unicorn populated cities. To hold onto not only such archaic need of secrecy for the Arts, but restrict access to its teaching was an atrocity to you. Over the course of your life, you strove to modernize and publicize magic principle. To document the reactions of magic on objects, but to also provide a medium through which the other races could know the Arts, if not use them. >A lifetime of tomes. A soul's devotion to knowledge. >And yet it was nothing when compared to Her. >Faust. Anonymous
Weird request, BUT...
Can someone listen to
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=woMbRTBWJQs and then write something immediately after, using the emotions they felt from the song?
I wanna see what happens.
Equestrian Breaker
>>2743522 >Lauren Faust. >Loren and Lorenthos as well, depending on which race you talk to, what gender they see as dominant, and what era you were taking the excerpt from. A peculiar name for a pony, but an honoured one. In the time of the pre-Equestrians, the Pegasi, Earth, and Unicorns leaders would take on crown, helm, or hat. The victors of sport and the conquerors of war for all three races wore the same garb, however. Laurels. For to win in contest was to hold the Her favor. When the world was young, and words were few, Hers still rang from countless lips. To describe the world was to mimic Her, and thus was named Lore. >The titles from the old tongue's script were many and varied, leaving much to question as to her identity. >Questions you needed answers for. Questions that brought you to a source you'd never expect. >Aan Sahqon Aak. Munax, Vokul, Ahrk Tahrodiis. Faal Brod Bormah, the Clan Father. Drog Unahzaal, Lord eternal, Revaknirul. >The dragon would forever remember you for what you did, but you gathered the information you had so desperately desired. Information that lead you to a grievous understanding. That what you sought could only be gained through the most extreme of means. That the sacrifices you had made paled in comparison to those that you were going to make. His final words still rung in your ears. >"What keeps you from my fate, Mey Kro?" "What keeps you from my fate, court wizard?"
>Your reverie is broken by the glowing luminance around you. You turn to see Celestia, stern faced, but one of wavering strength. She had entered when you were trapped in memory. >The last carving is placed in stone. "It is ready."
Equestrian Breaker
>>2743540 >You levitate the slab to the center room and place it down. Celestia looks towards it, then back to you, quizzically. "Runic bindings, precautionary measures. No need to risk having anything eke out that we don't want to. Wouldn't want your voice sneaking its way into my hat, eh?"
>You chuckle at your own joke, but Celestia would have no levity. "Step onto the dais, your majesty."
>She walks onto it, turning round to remark, but is met abruptly by your hat so her snout. "STARSWIRL, RUB YOUR PRINCESS' HOOVES."
>Your hat mimics her, bells jingling as you do your best to hold it in a scrunched up face. Her will is shattered as a smile and titter escape her lips. You rest your hat back on your head. "Good. It's best to have you happy for this."
>She blushes, but it quickly fades as her concern grows. >"Will it hurt, Starswirl?" >You pause. " Hurt...may not be the right word for it, your highness. All I can say is that you'll feel different. It's something you'll never experience other than here. A humbling sensation."
>She nods, and you begin your work. >The room swirls with energy as the bindings begin to emanate a dark blue. Glyphs rise from each of the four corners on the dais, a cage awaiting its prisoner. Celestia's eyes shut to escape the building light, and she gasps as she feels herself float just about the ground. "Keep calm, your highness, we are nearing the transfer stage."
>You see her stiffen to your voice, acknowledging the need to stay still. Carefully, you levitate the tome you had prepared over the center of the dais and Celestia. >You had described her condition to the best of your ability. It would have to do. Gadget !Y54YDBzz9U
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>>2743031 >>2743086 Yes, I've done more than one critique on Pale's work and he will occasionally respond with, "Deal w/ it." or "Fuck you I do what I want." but it's all for the sake of humor. Pale takes criticism with a stroke of humor and applies it to his future work. He's a cool guy and doesn't really get upset at anything.
fuck me, i think it was my fault he changed Chapter 18 >>2743079 Yes! When you told me about this idea last night, I loved it to death. I'm so stoked it's coming so soon.
1 or 3. Flip a coin or something
Equestrian Breaker
>>2743549 >The book was taking - finding what it was meant to possess. Calling out to its nature. >If this failed, it would be days before you could start again, possibly weeks. One for replenishing your magical reserves now dispensed in the tome, two for convincing Celestia to attempt it again. >The future could wait. Right now, you needed to focus on keeping the dais active. It was the tube of transversal from mind to prison. >Celestia let out another sharp breath, and that's when you saw it. A sliver of gray eking out of her horn. It moved timidly at first, rising with the slow pull of the book calling to it. It flowed above Celestia and through the spherical tubing the swirling glyphs provided, observing it's new surroundings. It was when the tip had reached the tome's open pages that it began to shake. It felt itself entering a new vessel. >You knew what would come next. It would feel out its new surroundings for a medium to express itself. Seek light, but only find darkness. What you hadn't expected was the tenacity that followed. The gray ooze began thrashing, spasming as it was fed into the tome, battering itself against the blockade the runes provided. Celestia struggled beneath it as the emotion fought harder and harder against extraction. >Emotion won out, her eyes opened, and all you knew was blinding light. Equestrian Breaker
>>2743572 >"I WILL NOT BE SO EASILY REMOVED, SORCERER." >The sound emanated from her lips, but it was not her own. It was tinged lower, darker. >"I HAVE AS MUCH RIGHT TO LIVE AS ANY. YOU WILL NOT HAVE ME." >The shielding weakened as your mind sought out a solution. >Light beamed in all directions, the rays heating the room with their fury. >"ARROGANT FOAL! YOU DARE HAVE ME BOUND? STRIPPED FROM THE SOUL OF ANOTHER?" >Your eyes darted madly to find anything in the in the vast sea of white. Anything that could help. There. High above. A sector more radiant than the rest. >"WHAT ALLOWS YOU TO JUDGE THE MAKINGS OF A GOD? WHO DEEMS YOU WORTHY?" "None..."
>You had to buy time to set your aim. You'd likely only have one shot at the center chain. >"THEN WHAT GIVES YOU THE RIGHT?" "I took it."
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>>2743465 "Ugh.. My head.." your vision is blurry. "..it feels like a train hit me". Fuck trees, fuck the rainforest, no more donations from me.
"Did.. Did I piss myself?"
>All you hear is a soft giggling. Even with a smashed face and a throbbing headache which easily matches the hangover you got that time at that nerd-convention, you can tell that this is a male. God, there just wasn't enough alcohol in the world to make Anime tolerable. Regardless, after hitting on a tranny that one time, you taught yourself how to tell the difference between a man and a woman while being smashed. >You rub your face gently. This kind of smashed hurts just a tad more, though. >"Did you sleep well, Anonymous dearie?" It says. "Hope your welcome-party wasnt too messy?" >You squint your eyes, trying to see who that are talking. All you see is a shadowy figure, which looks strangely like... "..Bobo?"
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5/5
Thats all my drunken ass could write that night. Uhm. So, yeah.
Feedback is appreciated. :3
Ill just leave for 15 minutes, so I dont worry my ass off, waiting for people to respond. Equestrian Breaker
>>2743589 >You let loose a single bolt of magic, snapping the chandelier's supporting line in twain. As it falls, the entity lets out a shriek, attempting to use Celestia's magic to stop it. >You take the opportunity to drop focus from reinforcing the bindings and begin manipulating the falling crystal. It bends, twist, and crushes to higher densities at your will. You form a canopy and spread it to a globe as you encase the emitting light in total internal refraction. As the blinding reverses and intensified in heat, the being is forced to cancel out. > Able to see, you levitate gems from the broken bits of chandelier and embed them into the globe, reshaping it to a cylinder to reinforce the transfer. The gray matter spewed upward from Celestia, whose voice began to fade from its incessant screaming. As the sound faded from her lips, it drifted upward, horrifically mimicked in the swirling pages of the filling tome. Equestrian Breaker
>>2743622 >As it writhed, ink flew across pages. Emotion was captured in text, encapsulating every page in its being. Vulgar, primitive thoughts given examination to extreme degrees. Depictions and descriptions of the most carnal nature. >Echoes died out and the room turned silent. Only you, the princess asleep from exhaustion, and the book remained. Against your better judgment, you brought it towards you, peering at it. The cover was innocent enough. You could hide it in plain sight. Any shelf of the archives would do. Opening to the first page, you were startled. >The tome evidently worked as a perfect prison, as you had hoped. With a partial captive rather than a memory, however, it had spread with a mind of its own. The filling of pages you understood, but you didn't expect an author. >Princess Molestia. You would have to edit that wording later. Something formal, to rouse less suspicion. A simple anagram would do. >For now, you were drained mentally, physically, and magically. It would be days before anything more could be done. You swayed in your step and came to rest next to a wall for support, the day's toll coming down on you. You thought of its last words. What gave you the right to cause such an act? You were no God. You thought of your response. Of what you planned to do. >Revaknir's words filled your mind. The room felt colder. >With what small magic you had left, you levitated the tome to a table and began to walk towards Celestia. Her majesty had a kingdom to run, and a new freedom to run it with. One final thought passed your mind. "Never again."
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>You are Anonymous. >You are back in the library. >Celestia's lust stood before you. >It was tinged dark blue. Zortith !UKvC.Sp2b.
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Parking, Writing, and being unbearably hot in Georgia. Will be in Florida tomorrow. not much else to do right now, so writing it is. Although I could probably kill some peeps in tf2 if I really wanted to not write, but meh.
PaleNarrator !.JT.7dRUrY
>>2743536 >>2743536 Sure, why not. Hearts of Man -Lost Chapter-
>http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=woMbRTBWJQs >You couldn't sleep. >Sleeping got harder and harder to do, after all. >The most you could do now was to just stare up into the void, pretending that the blackness before you was from your closed eyes. >You lay on the barren ground, the vacuum surrounding you leaving your skin icy to the touch. >This was... >...difficult... >It's been months now. >You think. >It's getting hard to count the days. >You weren't hungry. >You weren't tired. >You just... were. >Banishment. >It's worse than you can ever imagine. >You hand scrapes lazily at the lunar surface, and your fingers come across a rock. >It looked sharp enough. >Sitting up, you put the edge of the stone to your wrist. >You couldn't stand this. >You just wanted to sleep. >You wanted off this moon. >The stone slashes across your skin... >...but there's no blood. >Nothing. >Not a scrape. >... "Damn you..."
>She made you invulnerable. >You slash your arm over and over, but to no avail. "DAMN you."
>She'd done it. >She'd made sure you would experience isolation at it's fullest. >So for the next hour or so, you just scream. ~END~
PaleNarrator !.JT.7dRUrY
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>>2743721 Okee-dokee then, writing up the silly story that won the vote. Be back in a bit.
Anonymous
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>>2743721 >someone actually did it Bear my children.
Anonymous
TechyConversant !!P7jUy82ixIX
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Reporting in! Gonna write a little bit of Miscast. Time to get back from that horrid cliffhanger I left you on, eh? Oh well! If you haven't read my stuff before, feel free to take a peek here!
http://pastebin.com/u/TechyConversant >>2741812 To answer your question, next!
Anonymous
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Mystery box! Mystery box! It better be filled with scorpions.
Anonymous
>>2743721 Pale, tell me everything's going on your pastebin. So I can find it all in the morning.
PaleNarrator !.JT.7dRUrY
>>2743798 Yes. Not that one though. That was just a short thing for another Anonymous. But everything else? Yeah.
Equestrian Breaker
>>2743631 And that's where we end for the night. Pastebin updated.
http://pastebin.com/VyANTwMz http://pastebin.com/u/EquestrianBreaker Anon now knows the being who traps him, but how will he escape? What secrets does Starswirls' story hold, and what does he hope to create? Who is Revaknir, and how did Starswirl confront him? What voice emanates from the void in the Starswirl flashbacks of Part 1 and 2? Who is Starswirl taken by?
Answers to some of these questions and more in the next installment of Ageless.
Things on the horizon:
Surviving book monster rapists.
Gleaning more information from the Royal Sisters.
More peerings into a forgotten past as Anon nears the truth.
Anonymous
anyone else getting blanks on mistertibbs or is that just me : /
Anonymous
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>>2743932 I noticed tibbs baleeted his stuff a few days ago.
Anonymous
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>>2743836 Awesome. Thanks!
Anonymous
Anonymous
Is it better to be a useless piece of shit who doesn't try to do anything or is it better to be a useless piece of shit who always tries his best but always fails?
COShepard
who does the anon, lyra and a bench story aagain? I've forgotten
Brainhorn !!X+la9AgNv4F
lurker parking
Tyko, Lord of Cardboard Boxes !fr7JYN2X/k
Tyko, Lord of Cardboard Boxes !fr7JYN2X/k Sat 23 Jun 2012 05:06:37 No. 2744032 Report Quoted By:
>that thread picture >that feel when you plan to make her the next side character in your story
>>2744007 I'm a useless peice of shit who just lurks, reads, and gives a "good job" every once in a while. I've tried writing twice, Can't do it. Knowing I can't, I avoid it, to not feel so bad about myself.
Anonymous
>>2744012 BettySpaghetti
haha just kidding she doesn't write anything worth reading
>>2744077 this man gets it MellowAnon !aht2Kgb6d2
Late reporting again working on Tears of a Tuna but need more Scootabuse shit for inspiration. The fic about Anon in a bedriddin state and bein a dick to the Mane six is going to be a while for the next update, reason being my computer crashed while working on it and it erased everything I wrote so I gotta write everything over again and that feels bad>AnonxPinkiexFluttershy >Sex happened >Everyone raged at Rainbow >Rainbow's depressed >Now your caught up
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>>2744057 Yeah, I can respect that. I made the mistake of trying to do something I couldn't one too many times.
PaleNarrator !.JT.7dRUrY
Penpal -Chapter 1-
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YHej-cvjso4 >Sunny days! >Lots of smiles! >Friendly ponies! >Life was good. >You've been here in Ponyville for only a short time, about a month now, but already you were taking to the townsfolk fairly well. >"Morning Anon!" "Morning Cheerilee!"
>"Hey there Anonymous!" "Hey, Doctor Hooves, nice to see you!"
>"Hi Anon!" "Pinkie Pie, wazzaaaaaaap?!"
>Yup. >Living the dream. >You walk through town, a skip in your step and a song in your heart. >"Hi there, Anon! Are you coming to the library for our reading sessions next week?" "You know it Twi! Wouldn't miss it for anything!"
>You give her your finger guns. >She giggles. >Priceless. >Yep, everything was going your way. >You even had a house! >A nice little cottage, next to Fluttershy's place. >You skip up to your porch and open your door when you feel something under your foot. >Oh? What's this? >A letter? >Oh happy day! >Picking up your letter with a beaming grin on your face, you unravel it and begin reading. 1/X
Anonymous
MellowAnon !aht2Kgb6d2
>>2744107 >You awaken later with Fluttershy and Pinkie in your arms >It was dark out and the moonlite seeped in through the window >You get up and let the calming night air fill the room >You stared at the moon for what seemd like hours lost in your thoughts >Most of them thinking how great today was >The rest you don't even pay attention to >You turn to stare at the two you loved lying in your bed >Man, they're both so adorable in their own way >Each so different from eachother yet equally magnificent >Fluttershy is timid and calming, being around her is like a dream where I'm falling into a feeling of nothing but total bliss and happiness, where I know I could die but, it's like there's an invisible safety net that just lets me fall forever >While Pinkie is the fireball of a time bomb that goes off every second, the sparks shooting in each direction, all separate the others destiny except for that one, the one that's the brightest falling into one of it's sister sparks until it causes a wild fire that destroys nothing but saddness >Both so beatiful that the very thought of either of them getting hurt, even the slightest, would cause my entire world to shatter >Man, I'm a fragile guy no wonder on earth everyone around me tried to break me >Those who failed became the friends I had, those who succeeded were met by me breaking them >Truely I was a mental fighter since I wasn't very good physically >You take a deep breath and stare out the window some more >Memories of those you've left flood your mind but you push them back where they belong "No need to dwell on the past anymore," you choke back tears and close your eyes, "I'm here forever I've even made a life for myself and now there's too much to let go now"
MellowAnon !aht2Kgb6d2
>>2744290 >Fluttershy wakes up and sees you lost in your thoughts >She trots over to you and nuzzles your leg >Pinkie wakes up shortly after and jumps on your shoulders >she wraps her hooves around your neck and you fall backwards >Your not surprised or hurt, you just look into her eyes and smile >"So did you enjoy my little plan?" "Yeah," you stare at the ceiling, "It was great"
>Fluttershy sits next to you >"How did I do?, if you don't mind me asking" >You chuckle at stare at her "You did great, both of you"
>"I'm starving what's for dinner?" "Whatever we can find to be honest"
>You get up and walk downstairs >Pinkie Jumps down your stairs and lands perfectly >Fluttershy just settles for fluttering down >You open the fridge and are greeted by Celestia's cake and cupcakes for tomorrow >Need some real food not sweets >You find some lettace and other things to make a pretty boss salad >You set three bowls of your vegetarian creation on your kitchen table >The three of you sit down and eat the shit out them >You wonder what time it is but there's no clocks around so it's pretty much up to guess >Make a mental note to go buy a clock sometime PaleNarrator !.JT.7dRUrY
>>2744146 http://www.youtube.com/watch?NR=1&feature=endscreen&v=kqf2V-ZbRRI "Dearest Anonymous, how are you? I'm great! I'm just writing you to see how you are. Are you well? I sure hope so!"
>Oh golly gee, this letter was starting out SWELL! >Smiles all around! >You clear your throat and continue. "I would just like to let you know that I've been admiring you from afar! And let me tell you, I'm liking what I see!"
>You blush. >Aww. You had a secret admirer. How quaint. >Maybe they heard that you were such a good checkers player! >You were SO good at checkers. >Some might even call you the best. "I want you, Anon."
>Oh my, an invitation? >Joyous day! >You hope it's to another spa day with Rarity. You just ADORED the sauna. "I want you to bury your human fingers DEEP inside me."
>Oh well that's just swell! >... >Wait. >You peer a little closer to the letter. >Huh. >That's weird. >You could swear that whoever wrote this letter to you was asking for you to partake in vigorous lovemaking with them. >But that would be silly! >You don't have sex with ponies! >You're a person, stupid. >You shrug. >Maybe it was a typo. 2/X
MellowAnon !aht2Kgb6d2
>>2744328 >Pinkie finshes first >"Welp gotta go, The Cakes are probably worried about me see ya!" >She gives you a hug and trots to door >"Love ya Anon and Fluttershy" >She goes out the door, leaving you and Fluttershy alone >She sit across from you with a seemingly permanent grin >She casts a few glances your way but hides under her mane when you make eye contact >You finally decide to break the silence "Sooo Fluttershy how's Angel?"
>"...he's fine" >Things go quiet again with Fluttershy just grinning and blushing, averting your gaze >You clear your throat to get her attention "...How's the weather?"
>You put on wide grin to try and start a conversation >"It's looks alright" >Things go quiet for about 30 minutes, until Fluttershy breaks the silence this time >"I'm...really happy we did...that," she finally looks you in the eyes, "I'm glad you were...my first," she stares at the floor smiling, "...I love you Anon" >Your heart freaking melted when she said that >You never even had a serious relationship before >And now you just feel like everything in your universe was set in motion "...I love you too Fluttershy"
Tyko, Lord of Cardboard Boxes !fr7JYN2X/k
Tyko, Lord of Cardboard Boxes !fr7JYN2X/k Sat 23 Jun 2012 05:20:47 No. 2744382 Report Anon Hunter in Equestria>they sent a fool in to the pony world >they sent so many Anons in so many worlds >the U.S. Government has increased its debt further to send you in to bring them back, one by one >dead or alive >they equipped you with a standard issue M16 and a baretta >also, a classic bazooka, but they instruct you that you're not allowed to use it >but you have to carry it >whatever >you read the first of the Anons you need to withdraw from the fantasy world, as they rev the portal up >Scientist: "Be careful, he's a bit im-" >you shoot the scientist in the balls as you approach the portal >you walk in, and three seconds later, you walk out with a barely alive corpse of your first hunted Anon >you're covered in cuts and bruises, and your M16 is gone >Scientist #2: "What happened?!" >the time flow via Equestria is much different, quicker even
MellowAnon !aht2Kgb6d2
>>2744378 >She flies into your arms and you both hug for...aw who gives a shit you just love it too much to care "Hey uhm...wanna...stay over and...watch the sun rise?"
>"...I'm sorry Anon but I have to finish feeding my animals" >Now you feel like hammered dog shit "Oh sorry I forgot...maybe another time heh" you scratch the back of you head and walk Fluttershy to the door
>"Well I really liked today...with you and Pinkie" "Me too heh"
>You hug one more time and she flies home >You swear you can hear her singing about something but you shrug it off and go back to bed Anonymous
>>2741996 pretty sure I asked you to address the open questions that the finale left unanswered (such as why celestia want him to so badly fight when the changeling army wasn't even present and what really happened the one Heart and Hooves day as clockwork hinted he slept with AJ) in an Epilogue....
but you replied with your "No no no" gif and the unanswered questions continue to rustle my jimmnies to this day
pic sort of related
Gadget !Y54YDBzz9U
>>2744376 >Some might even call you the best. Anonymous
Gadget !Y54YDBzz9U
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>>2744444 The quints don't lie!
Tyko, Lord of Cardboard Boxes !fr7JYN2X/k
Tyko, Lord of Cardboard Boxes !fr7JYN2X/k Sat 23 Jun 2012 05:25:32 No. 2744460 Report Quoted By:
>>2744444 >those quints shit just went full swagger
MellowAnon !aht2Kgb6d2
>>2744426 >The next day was nothing special, except Princess Fat-bitch wants her cake made fresh in front of the guards now >At least you still have Pinkie to help you >You also manage to make out when their not looking so it wasn't all bad >Now to go buy that clock >You walk into market square >However your stopped by Scootaloo >"You! You broke Rainbow Dash!" >She charges you and starts pounding your knees >Her little marshmellow hooves tickle so you just pick up the little flailing filly "Can ya calm down and tell me what's wrong?"
>She eventually stops squirming and stares at you with extreme hate >"You broke Rainbow Dash" "Oookay? expain"
>She won't come out of her house and when I finally figure out how to reach her house all she screams about is you" "Wow want me to talk to her?"
>"You've done enough now let me go" "I'm gonna go learn a spell so I can go talk to Rainbow Dash"
>You carry the squirming filly to Twilight's library >When you casually greet Twilight with Scootaloo tucked under your arm flailing her front and back hooves she askes what's up "I need a spell that lets me walk on clouds"
>"Uhh sure," she takes the hint that we're just ignore Scoots, "here" >You levitate the book in front of you face and can't read it for the life of you >You then pass it to Twilight so she can teach you >She says it's a tough spell but you learn it in no time even if Scootaloo was trying to disrupt your concentration >You then borrow Twilight's hot air balloon and Spike gives you a ride to Rainbow's cloud home >You walk on the cloud feeling like fucking Jesus and knock on her door ambeingmolestia
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>>2744444 i was 2744443
GODDAMIT!
MellowAnon !aht2Kgb6d2
>>2744487 >"Go away!" "Rainbow it's me"
>"...I repeat GO AWAY!" "Not leaving you know"
>"Then freeze to death out there" "It's the middle of the summer and it's the afternoon"
>"Then get a heat stroke" "The temperature at this altitude is perfect, so ya gonna let me in or do I have to kick the door down"
>"Go Away" "Damn and I really liked this door"
>You rear up your leg but Rainbow opens the door before you kick it down >"Fine come in" >You enter and get a look at everything >First you notice Rainbow Dash looks terrible and she's been crying for a while >Second it feels incredibly homey here and look a turtle :) >You set Scoot down and she rushes to Dash's side >"Rainbow Dash what's wrong?" >"...Sorry ya had to see me like this kid," she pats her head, "but ya gotta go I have alot to talk about with Anon here" >"But Dash..." >"I know you worry about me but it's cool" >She heads for the door and gives you one more venomous look before fluttering down to the ground Anonymous
>>2744105 DONT YOU FUCKING DISRESPECT BETTY, SHES SO MUCH BETTER THEN PALE. ONLY A FUCKING JEWFAGGOT WOULD EVEN SAY SUCH A THING. EAT A DICK ASSHOLE
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>>2744444 wow.. first time getting quints
I'm going to post this Broken fanfic tonight, even if it kills me now that i have been blessed by moot Anonymous
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Reposting this idea in case Phlegm comes on and I'm not here. Goodnight all.
>>2744538 Is it worth noting that
I'm a greedy bastard? MellowAnon !aht2Kgb6d2
>>2744534 "Alright now what's up"
>You give her a nice guy look and she just buries her head in your chest >"I'm sorry Anon" she says between sobs "I know you are so what's with the whole depressed act"
>"It's just that, everytime I'm around you I get queesy and really warm," she clears her throat, "down there" "No need to go into detail"
>You chuckle to try and lighten the mood but she's still serious "Ahem...sorry continue"
>"So when AJ brought the idea of rutting you into the ground I just jumped at the opportunity" "Mind explaining why you went batshit crazy?"
>"Because the thought of you being with Fluttershy made me really mad, I mean really I'm twice the mare she is plus we hang out all the time it's just not fair" "Well Rainbow I think we should just stay friends you know sure your a really cool chick but I like other ponies"
>"...Your dating Fluttershy now aren't you?" "What no"
>"I knew it," she growls and nose dives on her bed, "That's just not fair" >Awkward silence >Through the sheer feeling like a dick feeling you climb in Rainbows bed and try to comfort her >"Why can't you like me?" >You look at her like she's retarded "Weeeell cause I like other ponies"
>"But what makes them better than me?" >Silence PaleNarrator !.JT.7dRUrY
>>2744376 "One your done, I want you to lap up all my slick juices."
>Okay, hello, what? >What? >You laugh nervously to yourself. >This... this was getting strange. >Maybe... maybe it was another typo? >A typo on a written letter. >Sure. >Cautiously, you continue. "I've wondered what a human tongue feels like, as it explores deep within my regions."
>Your face contorts into a rather shocked and disgusted expression. >You? >Providing oral pleasure to a horny and willing mare? >Yuck-o-rama! >You just weren't digging this pony's vibes at the moment. >The letter continues. "Maybe after our session, you and I could play checkers-"
>Oh happy day! "-on my plot."
>Oh fucking NO. "Until next time, Anon. Love,..."
>You desperately look for a name. >There isn't one. >Whoever wrote this letter was keeping their identity a secret. >You drop the letter and stomp on it a few times. >Sex with horses? >The thought disgusts you. >You clap your hands and walk into your house. >This must have been some sort of prank. >Yeah. >That's it. 3/X
MellowAnon !aht2Kgb6d2
>>2744612 "Look Dash your a great gal, but I just want us to be friends"
>"Why not atleast friends with benefits?" >You pretend to spit out some water as if her words just gave you a heart attack >"No dice huh?" >You catch your breath before speaking "...Sorry but no"
>"Ugh I can't believe it, you chose Fluttershy over me" "Hey in all fairness I chose her AND Pinkie"
>"...What?" >Aw shit no now I regret saying that >Rainbow stares at you trying to look into your mind and unveil your secrets >Luckly she's not a unicorn so she can't read you mind, she can however read you facial expressions >Probably because you look like you shat you pants in front of the entire world >She just sits there peering at you slowly whithering your sanity to bits trying to get you to crack >Until what seemed like hours was merely seconds she spoke >"Come again?" >You didn't want to keep your relationship a secret but you dont't want to parade it around like your pimping the Queen of England >You desperately look around the room for something to change the subject" "Oh uh...that's a nice turtle you got there," you walk over to him as he trys to grab a bag of chips off the counter with his mouth, "What is he a snappying turtle a...snapping turtle?"
>"You already said that" "I'm not a turtleologist so that's all I know"
>"Yeah...now back to what you said earlier" "About the turtle? yeah what's his name?"
>"Tank now," she tackles you to the cloud floor, "What did you say before the turtle" Anonymous
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>>2743842 Just read all 3 installments. You've got me interested.
ΣΩΔ
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Oh, I love these!>DisGunBeGud.gif
MellowAnon !aht2Kgb6d2
>>2744638 "I don't know something about Scootaloo, by the way is she your sister or something or what?"
>"No, I just care a great deal about her, but your changing the subject!" "No need to raise your voice, by the way what do you think of Rarity she'd kinda snobby isn't she?"
>"ANON!" >She's obiviously pissed so time to come clean "Fine I said I like Pinks and Fluttershy but our relationship isn't set in stone you know we just *ahem* had uhm...sex?"
>You sheild your face and expect a hoof to the face, but instead she starts laughing >"Wow Anon you sure are a player" >You respond to that with a playful jab to the shoulder "Hey! I really like both of them besides they just jumped me and I went along for the ride"
>"So your the bitch in the relationship?" she rolls on the floor laughing and you just roll your eyes "So your not mad?"
>"Meh I got over it, friends?" "Friends"
>you both brohoof and you leave Rainbow's house with Spike >"So is she still crazy and gonna try and rape your dick off?" "Nah Spike it's cool"
>"Cool, so now what?" "We've got a hot air balloon and magic"
>"Wanna go to Cloudsdale and raise some hell?" "Alright I'm not doing anything"
>With that you and Spike head to a cloud city filled with pegasi >This is gonna be fun, you thought as your cast cloud walker on Spike and enter the city Anonymous
>>2744546 your nothing but 3 day old vomit you cream cheese musky nig. Id make you take that back but I cant punch though the internet
Zortith !UKvC.Sp2b.
>>2744382 >going after impulse anon Oh shit, Tyko, what are you doing?
Tyko, Lord of Cardboard Boxes !fr7JYN2X/k
Tyko, Lord of Cardboard Boxes !fr7JYN2X/k Sat 23 Jun 2012 05:47:35 No. 2744823 Report Quoted By:
>>2744783 Trying to stir either Pale's jimmies, or someone who wanted to read it's jimmies by not continuing it
>>2744744 You really think you can fight me? Doubt you'd even get a punch on me at all, son. Me and my boy here killed over 600 terrorists between the both of us during our black ops missions in Iraq and Afghanistan. But you wouldn't know anything about that, would you? That's because you're a little bitch who does nothing but talk shit on the internet while waiting for his waifu to write more shitty fanfiction about spaghetti. I know a hacker in the CIA who could get me the IP to your (or more likely, your parents') house like that. Then guess what happens? I come right on down to that basement you're sitting in and I beat your fat ass to a pulp. Shit, I probably wouldn't even have to do that. I've got buddies in high places, brother. Buddies who wouldn't hesitate to help me out by sending a couple Predator missiles your way and then claiming it was just a horrible accident. Yeah, well the only horrible thing about that "accident" is going to be when you realize you posted on the wrong board and you fucked with the wrong Devil Dog. HOORAH
MellowAnon !aht2Kgb6d2
>>2744835 Woah woah you two there's no need for hate and empty threats what are we /v/?
PaleNarrator !.JT.7dRUrY
>>2744637 The Next Day
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=60rxzfl3NZc&feature=fvwrel >You rise from your bed, stretching as you greeted a new day. >Oh, how you feel SO refreshed! >You leap from your bed, and get ready for the day. >Shower? >Check. >Fresh batch of clothes? >Check-a-roony. >Buttered toast? >You now it! >Another letter at your doorste- >... >You stare at the letter at your feet. >Your eyes are unblinking. >No. >No that must just be the one from last night. >Except it's back in its envelope. >And had a pink bow on it. >... >You nervously lift the letter into your hands and open it. >You catch the scent of perfume wafting from the envelope. >...what was that smell? >It.. it WAS, perfume... right? >Right? >You read the letter to yourself. "Dear Anonymous, you got my letter! Yay! I hoped I sent it to the right address, and it looks like I was right! I hope you aren't having second thoughts about me. I realize I may have been... forthcumming in the last letter."
>She spelled it with the word "cum." >Oh god. 4/X
~END~
Anonymous
Anonymous
guys seriously...lay off Betty, what has she ever done to you?
Aether !!mw/7+Tvxn6g
PaleNarrator !.JT.7dRUrY
Not the end. I fucked up a lot today.
>>2744938 "So, for now, I would like to take our new found relationship slower."
>Relationship? >She wrote paragraphs about your tongue being all up inside her. >How is that a relationship. >You shake it off. "To start, how about I share a little about myself to you?"
>Oh well you can't see anything wrong with tha- "I like big throbbing MAN MEAT being jammed inside my eager and waiting MARE POON."
>The noise that emits from your mouth is one that could easily be described as a mix of "UUUUUGHGHGHWHAAA?" and "NNNNNIIIIIII!" >You don't know how to spell that sound. >But you made it, none the less. "Maybe you could even place it in my rear? I hear that's a big thing from where you come from.
>No. >SO much no. >You crumple the letter and toss it into the fireplace of your house. There's no fire, but it burns anyway.
>Hopefully, that would be the last letter you get from this creepy stalker. >You would be wrong. ~Real END~
Okay, done. Whaddya think? Interested?
Anonymous
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AiE: The /v/ portion of /mlp/
Anonymous
>>2744835 You know what? Me and the boys back in the cave out to the east spent hours making shitty bombs just to blow your fuckers apart, and you know what? It worked, we watched and hid in holes as we took out passing vehicles and shot the survivors as they burnt alive, screaming for their mothers as we cackled in our mighty god's name. We won't hesitate to destroy what you scum call is right in a heartbeat, and I bet three dozen of my homeboy sand niggers wouldn't even hesitate to get themselves some forty virgins just to blow your happy ass up with them. So unless you plan to pack your hippy ass back up and find me in Afghanistan, you got shit on me, son. We'll dirty bomb your ass back into the Persian Gulf War, where you convince your sorry self that "Mission Accomplished". ALLAH AKBAR
Vest_Muvvins
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I did get my 1st chapter done, but i will not post tonight. I actually don't know when i will post it either, monday at the latest.
Anonymous
MellowAnon !aht2Kgb6d2
still not done MellowAnon !aht2Kgb6d2 Sat 23 Jun 2012 05:59:36 No. 2745041 Report >>2744718 >You are Rainbow Dash >And your on a mission of forgiveness and truth >Since you know how Pinkie gets you speed to Fluttershy's cottage and greet her at the door "Hiya Flutters"
>"Oh uhm hi...Rainbow Dash, are you ok? I heard some things" "Naw I'm ok mind if I come in?"
>"O-Okay" >You enter and sit her couch, the same couch you saw Anon and her...NO I'm here to make amends and get answers I don't want to hurt anyp0ny ever again >"So what brings you here?" "Well *ahem* I was talking to Anon and he said you and Pinkie gave him the business last night"
>"O-oh my," she blushes a deep red which you saw coming, "what else did he say" "I'm just here to confirm what he said was true"
>"...Well i-it's sort of true," you give her a confused look, "o-ok alittle more true t-than that" "So you did or didn't?"
>"...We did" "Nice so what was it like?,"you scratch the back of your head, "if ya dont mind me asking"
>"...Well haven't you ever done...those things before?" "Yeah but not with a human"
>"Oh well to be honest it was...nice...well I kinda don't have a comparison so I can't really tell you the difference between rutting a human and a stallion" "Wait! your a virgin?"
>"...*ahem* previously but I gave that to Anon" "Woah that's kinda special don't ya think"
>"Well I would really really really like if Anon were to be my special somep0ny so I kinda wanted him to...*ahem* break me in" "But don't you share him with Pinkie?"
>"Yes and I'm greatful because not only do I get one to love but two" Anonymous
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>>2745032 >Pale acknowledges retard terrorist story >Refuses to acknowledge you Well now we know where his priorities lie
PaleNarrator !.JT.7dRUrY
MellowAnon !aht2Kgb6d2
>>2744967 You have my interest
>>2745041 "But don't ya kinda...you know what nevermind that's great for you and Pinkie and I won't question it any further"
>"Thanks to be honest I was getting alittle uncomfortable" "Sorry I was just curious," you fly to the door, "gotta go see ya around and good luck in your relationship"
>"Bye and thanks" >You fly out the door and head to Sugarcube Corner >You brace yourself for the worst and enter the store >You greet Mrs.C and ask is Pinkie around >She tells you she's in the other room >You go to the other room and find her playing with the twins "Hi Pinkie"
>Her smile dissappears and she gives you a confused, blank stare "Can we talk for a sec?"
>She nods and she motions you upstairs >You both stand in the upstairs hallway and she finally says something >"So?" "Alright so you and I both know what I did and why I did it and all I want to say is I'm really sorry and sure maybe you won't forgive maybe you will, but no matter what you say I'll always hold a torch for whatever is left of our friendship"
>"...You really hurt me Rainbow Dash" "I know..."
>"No you hurt me here," she put her hoof on her chest, "I thought when we together it meant something" "I'm sorry Pinkie, I really am, and even though we aren't in a relationship now, that doesn't mean I just forgot all about you"
>"..." "Pinkie no matter what it takes, no matter what happens, I'll always be your friend"
>"So you regret what did and realize it was wrong?" "Of course I do"
>"Okaaay" >She returns to her cheery self and even offers you some cupcakes >You pass and head out to find Scoots Anonymous
>>2744994 Real funny faggot ass bitch. You think this is a joke? You think giving me lip is a good idea? I'll fucking murder you.
Yeah making fun of me is so funny, so funny I forgot to laugh. If you wanna talk like that to me why don't you come here and say it to me face so I can answer your insults with a swift fist to the nose. Yeah you have a lot to say from hundreds of miles away but I bet if my fists were in reach of your face you would be like a tv on mute with no volume button. So do yourself a favor and keep your mouth shut unless you want to die. Next time you think about saying something like that to me I want you to remember one thing. I know the guy that created google maps and I can locate you in the time it took me to type this. Don't want anymore problems.... didn't think so faggot. You have any idea what gorilla warfare is? I do, I was in the US Marine Core and I perfected it. I'm fully capable of using it on you motherfuckers. Do you know the dander your in if I find you? I am 100$ serious. Bunch of god damn newfaggot loser here and I will not have it. At least I've had sex, had girlfriends, and gotten laid, and blowjobbed unlike you virgin piece of unpatriotic SHIT.
thanks for that version, btw Brainhorn !!X+la9AgNv4F
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>>2744967 >There's no fire, but it burns anyway. That part made me laugh.
And yeah, this could be interesting if it's done right.
MellowAnon !aht2Kgb6d2
>>2745102 >As usual you find her because she was looking for you >"Rainbow Dash! I was looking everywhere for you," she hugs your leg because she knows you think that's adorable, "so what happend?" "Ah me and Anon worked things out so it's all good"
>"You know if you were still mad at him I would have beat him up right" >You chuckle and pat her on the head "Sure you would kid I saw that 'thrashing' you gave him, out my window"
>"Well I know a thing or two about fighting you know" !l75uuTS5Vg
>>2743601 Oh well, maybe ill have better luck next time.
Anonymous
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>>2744967 Ah Those songs take me back.
Now do Parkbench Billy,
These threads need more lyra/anon/bon-bon.
Anonymous
>>2745134 I fucking served under the Imperial Command, stationed 216th Battalion Squad for the Death Star. Your panzy ass shit doesn't scare me a bit when I fought a Jedi with my bare hands- and fucking won. Your wussy ass guns are jack when I gauge your eyes out with my blaster, and I use your soddy remains to fuel the next passing ship. You name your planet, and you bet your pasty ass that I can put a good word with the Emperor that you'll be next in line to blow your fucking planet up. Fight you? I wouldn't fight you, I'd floor you with my helmet alone, clocking you down with my fist wouldn't be humorous enough to tell my squad leader. Don't try to frighten me with your shit when you're talking through a primitive communication method two hundred light years away. You got nothing on me, boy. See that picture? Totally fucking related, I ride that bitch like the fresh prince of fucking Aldaraan, and I'll park it on your country just so I can piss on your mama's corpse. Bitch.
Anonymous
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>>2744077 >>2744105 >>2744538 >>2744546 >>2744744 >>2744835 >>2744960 >>2744994 >>2745134 Every time you Drop Betty in the thread
You give birth to two Internet tough guys
Don't Drink and Betty guys
Anonymous
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>>2744967 It seems like it could be a interesting concept and it would be a good story seeing that Drury Lane is now (finished?). But post moar of that one with fluttershy.
R/T !!gw4/lKtnI20
>”Hey, wake up.” >Rainbow Dash jostled your arm, stirring you from your sleep. >”Depends on when you wanted to get up, its past noon.” >At non you bolted up out of the haystack and looked around for your clothes. >”Because it’s the weekend, duh. Apple Jack wanted to know if you wanted to go to Sugar Cube Corner with us for lunch.” >”So what are you going to do?” >Rainbow gave a crooked frown, and watched as you your belt through the knife sheath. >She walked with you outside, and watched as you brought up a few apples from the cellar. >”Well, have fun with that, I guess…” >Rainbow trotted over to the house, meeting Apple Jack outside the door. >The two p0nies talked a bit quietly together, occasionally looking over at you as you sat in the bed of your truck, whittling on a branch. >”Hey Anonymous!” >You looked up at the two p0nies who were approaching you. >”Come on, we’re not letting you mope around all day.” >”Ah aint got the bits to pay you fer tha work ya did so far, so yer comin with us. Lunch, dinner, and drinks are all on me.” >Dash and AJ looked at each other and grinned. >”C’mon sugarcube, let’s get you sumthin ta eat.”
Anonymous
continued from
http://pastebin.com/GQcb3hhr Since everyone liked it so much, I have the epilogue.
Whatever happened to Lyra?
>You are Lyra. >A human, now! Eeeeeee! >Omigosh, it is SOO cool. >Fingers! >Toesies! >And due to Anon's connections, you were able to manipulate his friends into believing that "you" had finally had enough of Equestria and wished to return home. >Princess Celestia herself appeared to try to dissuade "you" from leaving. >Ha, dumb bitch. >All of those ponies. Suckers, the lot of them. >Hopefully Anon's reward for his assistance would have him...or should you say her...feeling a lot better. Though, for the time of day, probably sore or in the shower. >Wonder if she found her new g-spot? >Who cares. >You~ have a man's toolset now! >You stand in front of the one way portal, determination burning in your eyes. R/T !!gw4/lKtnI20
>>2745359 >You and the two p0nies began walking to town along a dirt and stone path toward the small town you had raced through a few days ago. >Just how far was town anyway? You were getting pretty hungry. >Shall I play you the song of my people? >No stomach. >Your stomach growled plenty loud enough for the two mares beside you to hear, and they both erupted into laughter. “Uh, how far a walk is it to town anyway?”
>”We should be there in another 10 minutes. Just don’t eat us.” >The two mares laughed as you all continued along the path, and for some reason you couldn’t help but feel your face flush. >These seemed like nice enough people er… p0nies. >As you began passing through town, the streets seemed to clear out fairly quickly. >Shop doors were shut and windows were closed all around you. “I reckon I’m not really welcome round these parts after my entrance.”
>”They’re jus scared a ya Anon. Same thing happened with Zecora.” “Who’s Zecora?”
>”She’s a zebra p0ny that lives in the Everfree Forest, which is where you came from in that… thing.” “Ya mean my truck?”
>”Yer WHAT?” “My TRUCK!”
>”Oh, Ah thought ya said somethin else.” >What’s a truck anyway?”
“It’s the big loud blue thing that we were just talking about.”
>”Oh yeah…” >The three of you arrived at Sugar Cube Corner, and the two mares wasted no time ordering away. >Cupcakes, muffins, waffles, this place was going to give you diabetes. 2/x
Anonymous
>>2745254 Doubt it. AiE has changed. It's no longer about one shots, laughs, and rape. it's an endless circlejerk, perpetuated by namefags and tripfags - and its consumption of AiE, has become an unstoppable faggotry. AiE has changed.
R/T !!gw4/lKtnI20
>>2745379 >”And for your friends here?” >Mrs. Cake eyed you somewhat uneasily, but at least she bothered to put on a smile. “I reckon Ah’ll take some muffins ma’am. Uh, blueberry please.”
>”That will be 10 bits.” >”We have him covered Mrs. Cake.” >Dash threw out the extra 10 bits from her saddle bag, and the three of you sat outside in the warm sun while you ate. >Mostly because your size and stature made it kind of uncomfortable to move around in their small structures. >You were used to eating outside on days like this, and the smell in the air took you back to that picnic table your family always ate at when it was nice out. >Pa built it with his own two hands. >”Uh, Anon? You alright?” >A cyan hoof waved in front of your face, pulling you from your thoughts. “Sorry, guess my mind wandered off.”
>”Missin home already sugarcube?” “I aint never been more than 20 miles from my folks, and now I don’t rightly even know where I am.”
>”Ah’m sure you’ll find a way back some day.” “Maybe this is just one big dream, and I’m still sleeping in my truck in the middle of farmer john’s cornfield.”
>”You think we’re just part of your imagination?” >You looked down at Rainbow Dash, who looked somewhat hurt by that comment. “Aw c’mon Rainbow Dash, I didn’t mean it like that. Ya’ll been good to me. And ya’ll are kinda cute.”
>You reached over and rustled both their manes, and both mares cheeks flushed a little. “Ah just miss home you two. If ah could bring my folks I may be tempted ta stay here a while.”
>”What’s your place like?” “Well I reckon it’s a lot like this. Cept less colorful. And p0nies don’t talk.”
3/x
R/T !!gw4/lKtnI20
>>2745404 >”There’s p0nies there?” “Not exactly. They’re bigger, usually black, brown, or white. Not blue or orange like you two. And they don’t talk.”
>”Well, what other kinds a critters ya got back home?” “We got some cows and pigs on the farm, and some chickens fer eggs. Some farms have horses, but mine don’t.”
>”Ya live on a farm? What do ya grow?” “Tobaccer.”
>”What in tarnation is that?” “You put it in cigars, cigarettes, hell ya can just chew it.”
>The two mares looked confused still. “Ya’ll aint got any of that do ya?”
>Apple Jack shook her head. “Glad I don’t smoke…”
>”Hey come on! We’re gonna be late! We better get to the bar before Pinkie drinks up all the cider!” >Rainbow Dash shot off down the road in a blue blur. >”She lahks ta go fast, if ya know what ah mean.” “That’s dirty miss Apple Jack, ah didn’t need to know that.”
>”AH DINT MEAN IT LAHK THAT!” “Ah’m a playing AJ.”
>You reached down and patted her neck, knocking her hat askew. >”Hey! Don’t touch mah hat!” >You fixed it for her, and continued walking in the direction Dash had… >Don’t do it… >Dashed off in. >You mother fucker. 4/5
Anonymous
Anonymous
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>>2745381 AiE hasen't changed, otherwise writers would have left by now. Last I checked, we keep growing without anyone leaving.
Mandroid !b0nLshMElM
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>>2745381 AiE hasn't changed...s'just...more in it.
>>2745302 >Not 501st. PaleNarrator !.JT.7dRUrY
>>2745298 1) Celestia was just making sure Anon would be loyal to the country he lived in. Nothing else to it, there was a draft, he would have been conscripted in any case.
2) Nothing happened between Clockwork and Applejack. She's the element of harmony, after all, and told Anon the truth that night. Clockwork was just trying to get at him a little bit.
Anything else?
Brainhorn !!X+la9AgNv4F
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>>2745254 It's also pretty late at night.
I'll give it a read, though. Give me a minute and I'll tell you what I think.
Fillydelphian !!fFnHwjFV49q
>>2745254 Sorry, it's just not very much to go on.
Also I was playing writing Maybe write something more substantial.
Watch the grammar and spelling. I know you wrote it on an iPad, but still, keep it in mind
I'll be able to give you a more well-thought-out review when you write something longer.
Keep at it.
Brainhorn !!X+la9AgNv4F
>>2745469 >She's the element of harmony, after all Oh Pale you silly goose
R/T !!gw4/lKtnI20
>>2745438 >AJ trotted alongside you for a few moments in silence, a hint of blush still at her cheeks. >Rainbow Dash zipped around in the sky, landing back down beside you. >”Psh… slowpokes.” “You like going fast?”
>”I can do damn near anything in 10 seconds flat.” >Dash held her snout high, the becoming the very definition of arrogance. “Everything, eh?”
>”Everything.” >You and AJ exchanged looks, unable to contain your laughter very long.” “PFFFFFFFFT-”
>”PFFFFFFFFFT-“ “HAHAHAHAHAAHAH.”
>”HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA.” >Rainbow’s wings popped open and her face reddened. >”HEY! THAT’S NOT WHAT I MEANT!” “Oh calm down Dashie. It’s not like I plan on finding out anytime soon.”
>The three of you stepped into a small bar, which was already beginning to fill up with mares and stallions. >You found a few barstools that were still empty, and you sat with the two mares on each side. >Dash grabbed the bartender, ordering a first round of apple cider for you and her. >A frothy mug was placed in front of each of you, while AJ had what appeared to be a shot of whiskey. >You each clanged together your glasses. >”Ah think this is gonna be a great new friendship.” >”Agreed.” “I s’pose I can stay a while. Cheers.”
5/5
pic unrelated, but this is going to be a more light hearted fic.
long story short...
Leucine, this anon is gonna make you proud MellowAnon !aht2Kgb6d2
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>>2745175 Done with this update, entering lurk mode, feedback is appreciated
Anonymous
>>2745381 Then direct your attention hither. And buckle up.
>>2745367 >Placing a foot forward, you lurch through the portal, and it disappears behind you. >You have taken your first step into Earth! >Well, the planet was the same as the one with Equestria. >Far as you knew, the population changed, there was no magic and all the towns had funny human puns. >MANhattan. Heehee! "Heeheehee!"
>"Hey, watch where you're going, asshole!" >Huh? >Oh, another human. >You know how the greeting goes. >You give him a wide smile and flip anon's-YOUR middle finger at him. "Fuck you too, buddy!"
>Heehee! >You begin to walk down the sidewalks and you see a man leaning against a wall. "Hello sir, how are you this fine day?"
>"Oh, what? Nigga what the hell is you smokin? You got some money fo me?" "Uh sure, it's foreign, don't know how much it's worth..."
>You toss him a few bits. >His eyes widen and he smiles at you, placing one hand forward and another in his jacket. >You take his hand in a warm shake. >"Thanks, nigga!" "No problem, anything for another human be-"
>A knife lodges itself in your neck and you die. >The hobo takes your gold and suit and becomes a rich as fuck gangster. GAME OVER
PaleNarrator !.JT.7dRUrY
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>>2745490 fucking fuck fuck fuckity fuckerson.
Maybe that one Anon was right.
Maybe I SHOULD get some sleep.
Anonymous
>>2745469 THANK YOU for answering after 20 fucking minutes
dick Anonymous
>>2745469 1. Testing for Loyatly =/= Going to your house and asking if you would die for your country. Besides after the Nightmare moon, its says she stares at him from across the room.
Also she puts up in the draft while execepting of Big Mac. Why? Cloclwork proved that we weren't some super soldier because we could use a bow. Any p0ny can. Also sending us to the front lines with a prisoner-turned-soilder dog and a personal rival (clockwork) spells out doom
2. Friendship is Magic: The Last Roundup ...
PaleNarrator !.JT.7dRUrY
>>2745534 >I write as I post >You posted as I wrote >I am not the all seeing eye of whatchamadoodle and cannot be everywhere at once >Could have easily NOT answered you, but I try to answer anyone that contacts me. There is no need to be upset.
Anonymous
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>>2745534 hey don;t be starting shit with pale over questions I asked
Anonymous
>>2745367 >>2745527 LYRANON part one:
http://pastebin.com/GQcb3hhr LYRANON part two:
http://pastebin.com/b3UMfhN5 and there you have the epilogue. really, could anyone expect the naive mare to survive 12 seconds out there?
comments questions concerns and...what monstrosity does this anonymous pump out tomorrow? give me ideas and i might consider em.
Anonymous
>>2745534 I guess me and you are the only ones that want a epilogue but we won't get it if you call him a dick
>>2745469 see
>>2745585 PaleNarrator !.JT.7dRUrY
>>2745585 I could easily just say that some of us are over analyzing a fanfiction about multicolored ponies, but NAAAAAAAH that'd be just silly.
Anonymous
>>2745605 >not instantly responding to all posts asking you something stay unworthy
Anonymous
Anonymous
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>>2745657 >not over analyzing a fanfiction about multicolored ponies >>2745666 Satan says you should write an epilogue. i wouldn't piss him off
Aether !!mw/7+Tvxn6g
>>2745629 Tyrant-Lestia has Anon as her personal sex slave and/or personal punching bag when her day doesn't go as planned.
Every day after their rough 'love making' and/or beating she will remind him of his place as nothing more than a servant who's sole purpose is to be a fucktoy and/or punching bag.
Anonymous
>>2745657 Critical Critiquing a Story
Get the umad treatment Stay Gold
>>2745657 "Never a dull moment."
>AJ: "Nnnope." "Hey."
>AJ: "Yeah?" "Love you."
>AJ: "Never doubted ya." >Hopefully this would be the only time Equestria would be thrust into peril when you were around. >Unaware to you, Celestia eyes you from across the party, a steady look in her eyes. >You'd be wrong. >Dead wrong. captcha:
explain this shit Anonymous
I'm say this now, Pale~
Anonymous
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Well I got of Broken Wings: Rainbow sadness done... all 8 pages of it
Brainhorn !!X+la9AgNv4F
>>2745698 It's probably more that you were whining because he didn't answer you immediately than the criticism. And then when he DID answer, you still get anal pained.
Anonymous
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>>2745847 >implying another anon didn't pretend to be him yeah buddy okay pal just stop right there
we'll never know because we're anonymouse huh yeah right yo ulike that nigga bitch ass tripfaggot go back to sucking raritys teats huh yeah PaleNarrator !.JT.7dRUrY
>>2745698 Working on it. Give me a second man, geez.
>>2745585 When it all came down to it, I just wanted to write a war story. Looking back, maybe that was a terrible idea. I can't change that now.
>Cloclwork proved that we weren't some super soldier because we could use a bow. Any p0ny can Right. He wasn't the only other pony recruited. There were tons of ponies in Las Pegasus. I just focused on Anon's squad.
>Also sending us to the front lines with a prisoner-turned-soilder dog and a personal rival (clockwork) spells out doom I wrote the makeup of the squad o be engaging as characters, rather than for them to be the best squad out there. They were flawed, as we all are.
>>2745652 >I guess me and you are the only ones that want a epilogue but we won't get it if you call him a dick It doesn't bother me, though I wonder if people do think I'm a dick sometimes.
All in all, I want to keep writing and improve on myself. I made mistakes in Autumn Leaves. I made mistakes in Hearts of Man AND Drury Lane, and we all see them plain as day. So in the future, like the Lyra story I have, I hope to write it well enough that I don't leave my readers as confused as they are. And- fuck it I type too slow. Rest of my response here:
http://vocaroo.com/i/s0ENarYXqIx9 Aanon
I'm done with Chapter 10 of Aanon in Equestria. For all my readers out there, this is a big point in the story, and you may think I'm ruining it by this next chapter.
MellowAnon !aht2Kgb6d2
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>>2745695 That idea is freaking gold. I'm having a thousand and one ideas just by lookin at Tyrant-Lestia
PonyGone !Gi8l6ezzXk
http://pastebin.com/edit.php?i=GKDkckvw PonyGone !Gi8l6ezzXk Sat 23 Jun 2012 06:45:42 No. 2745976 Report My Lyres out of tune, I'm wondering why I..
Tyko the Emperor Flutterfag !fr7JYN2X/k
Tyko the Emperor Flutterfag !fr7JYN2X/k Sat 23 Jun 2012 06:45:53 No. 2745980 Report Quoted By:
>>2745939 >Pulls off the mask Worse, much worse, my friend.
Insomnia drives me to watch this.
Anonymous
>>2745890 Q1: Was there anything going on with Celesita and Anon, as concerning this post
>>2745735 it seems like something else was going on or what does this mean?
PonyGone !Gi8l6ezzXk
>>2745976 >Dear Octavia, I wrote but you still ain't callin >I left my MEPNET, my Skype, and my home phone at the bottom >I sent two letters back in autumn, you must not-a got 'em >There probably was a problem with Spike the dragon or somethin >Sometimes I scribble addresses too sloppy when I jot 'em >but anyways; buck it, what's been up? Girl hows is the cello? >My Marefriend's learning too, kinda sounds like a bellow >If I play the cello, guess what I'ma call her? >I'ma name her Lionel >I read about your Marefriend Vinyl too I'm sorry >I had a friend kill herself over some anon who didn't want her >I know you probably hear this everyday, but I'm your biggest fan >I even got the underground shit that you did when you began >I got a room full of your posters and your music, pony >I like the shit you did with Luna too, that shit was fat >Anyways, I hope you get this girl, hit me back, >MEPNET to chat, truly yours, playin the lyre >This is Lyra! Anonymous
>>2745695 ... Is being abused/used by women a fetish of yours Aether?
because some of your stories...
Aanon
>>2745895 Posting Chapter 10:
>You were running to Twilight's house, still about a mile away. >What happened to Fluttershy? How could she possibly fall in love with you so fast? There has to be another explanation. >You hit the city limits. The sun was going to be down any minute. >You knew Twilight was probably already worried. >Grumble grumble. >You were very hungry by now. >Why couldn't you have just eaten that fish? You had spent so much time and energy on it, and all for nothing. You probably made a bear somewhere really happy though. >Twilight's house was coming in view, and the sun was resting on the horizon. >You were going to make it. >You rush all the way to Twilight's house, and make it to the door. Just as the sun disappeared, you walked through the door. >There as Twilight, as usual. >Twi: There you are! I was getting worried again. >She runs over and hugs you, and plants a kiss on your lips. >You were out of breath, and her kissing you wasn't helping. Hold on *huff* a sec *huff* Twi.
>Your breathing and heart rate return to normal. You return the kiss. >Grumble. >Twi: It sounds like your hungry! Why don't we go cook those things you bought? >You were in the kitchen, hoping you knew what you were doing. >You get out 2 pots and fill them with water. You bring both to a boil, and put the beans and rice in each of them. >You have no clue how long it takes, so you check every ten minutes. PonyGone !Gi8l6ezzXk
>>2745996 >Dear Octavia, you still ain't called or wrote, I hope you have a chance >I ain't mad - I just think it's BUCKED UP you don't answer fans >If you didn't wanna talk to me outside your concert >you didn't have to, but you coulda signed an autograph for CMC crew >That's my little ponies girl, there only six years old >We waited in the blistering cold for you, >four hours and you just said, "No." >That's pretty shitty pony - you're like there Buckin idol >They want to a cutie mark like you, they wanted it more then I do >I ain't that mad though, I just don't like bein lied to >Remember when we met in Canterlot? - you said if I'd write you >you would write back - see I'm just like you in a way >I never knew my father neither; >he used to always cheat on my mom and beat her >I can relate to what you're playin in your songs >so when I have a shitty day, I drift away and put 'em on >cause I don't really got shit else so that shit helps when I'm depressed >I even got a Saddle with your name, it looks the best >Sometimes I even cut myself to see how much it bleeds >It's like adrenaline, the pain is such a sudden rush for me >See everything you play is real, and I respect you cause you play it >My marefriend's jealous cause I talk about you 24/7 >But she don't know you like I know you Octavia >She don't know what it was like for mares like us growin up >You gotta call me pony, I'll be the biggest fan you'll ever lose >Sincerely yours, Lyra -- P.S. >We should be together too. Aanon
>>2746019 >Soon, after both were cooked, the beans taking a lot longer, you drain both, and put the rice in a bowl. You take out a fork, and mash the beans. >Twi: What are you doing? I don't feel like eating them whole.
>Twi: But why are you mashing- Just trust me.
>Twi: Ok.. Do you have any seasonings?
>Twi: I think so.. >Twilight goes over to a cupboard, and starts pulling out spices. >They don't have labels, so you just randomly take some, and sprinkle it over the rice. >You add different ones to the beans, hoping to boost variety. >Twilight starts to make a salad, with many different vegetables. >Soon, both of you are done, and you stand back to look at your work. >No matter how bad and plain it looked, it was protein, and you'll take what you can get. >You put some of the salad, rice, and beans on a plate. Do you want to try it?
>Twi: I.. I think I'll wait.. >Twilight gets a much smaller portion of them, and gets a ton of salad. >You both sit down at the table to eat. >You decide to try the rice first. It was pretty spicy, and the flavor was actually pretty good. >You then try the beans. Once again, it was spicy, and edible. >You decide to just mix them together. It created a combination of the two spices, and you could feel your mouth watering. >You could definitely eat this again. >You eat your salad, saving the rest for last. PaleNarrator !.JT.7dRUrY
PonyGone !Gi8l6ezzXk
>>2746032 >Dear Misses-I'm-Too-Good-To-Call-Or-Write-My-Fans, >this'll be the last package I ever send your flank >It's been six months and still no word - I don't deserve it? >I know you got my last two letters; >I wrote the addresses on 'em perfect >So this is my cassette I'm sending you, I hope you hear it >I'm in the cart right now, I'm doing 90 on the train tracks >Hey Octavia, I drank a fifth of vodka, you dare me to ride? >You know the song by Foal Collins, "In the Air of the Night" >about that pony who coulda saved that other pony from drowning >but didn't, then Foal saw it all, then at a a show he found him? >That's kinda how this is, you coulda rescued me from drowning >Now it's too late - I'm on a 1000 downers now, I'm drowsy >and all I wanted was a lousy letter or a call >I hope you know I ripped ALL of your pictures off the wall >I love you Octavia, we coulda been together, think about it >You ruined it now, I hope you can't sleep and you dream about it >And when you dream I hope you can't sleep and you SCREAM about it >I hope your conscience EATS AT YOU and you can't BREATHE without me >See 'Tavia; >"AWWW... WAAAA!" >Shut up Bonbon! I'm tryin to talk! >Hey 'Tavia, that's my Marefriend screamin in the trunk >but I didn't slit her throat, I just tied her up, see I ain't like you >cause if she suffocates she'll suffer more, and then she'll die too >Well, gotta go, I'm almost gonna hit the train now. >Oh shit, I forgot, how'm I supposed to send this shit out? Anonymous
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>>2745792 lol Betty, you don't get jelly, get lost
Aanon
>>2746042 >You dig in to your dish. It was the best thing you have tasted in weeks. >You didn't tell Twilight that, since most things you have eaten have came from her. >Twi: Wow Aanon! This is pretty good! >Twilight had copied you by combining the two, and she quickly ate it. She goes back to get more, and she starts to devour your creation. >You both finished. You had both eaten all of the rice and beans, and were just talking. >Twi: So Aanon.. I just wanted to tell you that.. I'm finished. What?
>You look up, and Twilight has the saddest face on. >Twi: I now have enough power to take you home.. >You stand there, shocked. You could finally go home. >Twilight looked like she was ready to cry. >How could you leave Twilight though? You don't think that you could.. >But you miss your family and friends. Heck, even school a little. Twilight.. I don't know what to say..
>Twilight was crying now. You go over and hold her. >Twi: I-I could t-take you tomorrow i-if you liked.. >You didn't know what to do or say, so you just hold her. >You knew you couldn't leave Twilight. That wasn't an option anymore. >But what could you do? Twilight.. I'm not leaving you.
>Twilight looks at you. >Twi: Honest? You'll stay here? Yes Twi, I'll stay, if it means not losing you.
>Twilight smiles, and kisses you. >You return it, and just sit there, in embrace. !l75uuTS5Vg
>>2745480 Hm. I can see how it could be a problem with so little to go on. My inital druken idea was,
that the timberwolfes and alot of other creatures that are considered evil or mean, actually were celestia's doing. And anon, being a omnivore, would be accepted by the everfree forest creatures, them believing he is a new creation of celestia's, but eventually something happends and anon is questioned if he really does his "part". Questions his exsistence and ..stuff. But has someone done anything like it before?
PonyGone !Gi8l6ezzXk
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>>2746051 >Dear Lyra, I meant to write you sooner but I just been busy >You said your Marefriend's playing now, how far along is she? >Look, I'm really flattered you would call your Cello that >and here's an autograph for your CMC ponies, >I wrote it on the Starter cap >I'm sorry I didn't see you at the show, I musta missed you >Don't think I did that thing intentionally just to diss you >But what's this shit you said about you like to cut your hooves too? >I say that shit just clownin pony, >c'mon - how bucked up are you? >You got some issues Lyra, I think you need some counseling >to help your flank from bouncing off the walls when you get down some >And what's this stuff about us meant to be together? >That type of stuff'll make me not want us to meet each other >I really think you and your marefriend need each other >or maybe you just need to treat her better >I hope you get to read this letter, I just hope it reaches you in time >before you hurt yourself, I think that you'll be doin just fine >if you relax a little, I'm glad I inspire you but Lyra >why are you so mad? Try to understand, that I do want you plaing the lyre >I just don't want you to do some crazy shit >I saw this one thing on the news a couple weeks ago that made me sick >Some mare was drunk and drove her cart into a train >and had her marefriend was in a trunk, and she couldnt escape >and in the car they found a tape, but they didn't say who it was to >Come to think about, her name was.. it was you http://pastebin.com/GKDkckvw >plays to http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hiqERjtAkwE Aanon
>>2746062 Pivot point:
I just wish that there was a way to tell them goodbye..
>Twi: Well, there is one way.. There is? How?
>Twi: Well, I could go with you, and then in a week, when I have enough power stored again, I could take you back.. >Twilight lights up. >Twi: Yeah! That could work perfectly! >You think about it. That was actually a wonderful idea. You could say goodbye to your family. >Saying goodbye to your own family.. that was going to be tough. >Twi: And we could bring all of my friends along! I'm sure they would like to see the world you live in Aanon! >You think about it. How were you going to explain having six girls with varying hair colors and abilities to your parents? Should you even stay at their house? Or should you find a different way? I don't know about that Twilight.
>Twilight looks at you with her innocent eyes. She was good. >Then again, did it really matter? You would be gone within a week or so. Sure, why not? What could go wrong Twi?
>Twilight squeals in delight, and she hugs you even tighter. >Twi: I can't wait to tell everyone! >Twilight takes you by the hand, and leads you upstairs. >Twi: come on, let's go to sleep, and that way we could get up earlier and tell everyone! >Fluttershy goes into your thoughts. That was going to be awkward.. >You both go into the bedroom, and Twilight goes to the bathroom. >Twi: I have another surprise for you Aanon.. >Ohgod you can't wait. >You change into sleeping shorts Rarity had kindly provided you. >What would Rarity be like on Earth? Oh god.. Aether !!mw/7+Tvxn6g
>>2746011 That's a long and personal story, and its something that I'm not comfortable with answering to this thread.
Aanon
>>2746090 >Twilight had come out of the bathroom. >She was wearing the sexiest nightwear you have ever seen. >It was disturbing something downstairs. >Twi: Why don't we go to bed now.. Anonymous
>>2746047 >CLOCK: "So what if I am?" "For fuck's sake, Clockwork, you need to get over it. You were the one who blew it in the first place. If you should be mad at anyone, you should be mad at yourself."
>Clockwork grits his teeth at you. >CLOCK: "Shut up! I don't need you telling me how I lost her, alright? Frigid bitch wasn't even a good lay if you ask me." >... "What did you say?"
did something happen between clockwork and AJ or is he just egging on Anon
Aanon
>>2746115 >You had both barely gotten any sleep yesterday. >You were in bed on your back, Twilights head on your chest, her breathing in synch to yours. >You were going home today. Maybe not forever, but you were going to see your family today. >Wait.. What were you going to tell them? How do you explain all of that time you were gone? >And what were you going to do about all of Twilight's friends? You couldn't just say you came from a magical land of herbivorous p0nies that looked exactly like humans.. >You'll think of something. >You shake Twilight awake. Twilight. Twi, get up please.
>Twi: Hmm hmm? H-hey Aanon.. >You both go to the bathroom and take a shower. You both help dry each other off, and get dressed. >You couldn't wait to start the day. >Twi: Now, who's house should we go to first? Oh! how about Fluttershy's? That way I don't have to use much energy to teleport- No! Let's just.. get everyone, and we can all walk to her house. Then we could do the spell there.
>Twi: Hey yeah! That way I won't waste any more magic. Well, I guess since Rarity's is closest.. >You both go outside, Twilight in her amazing shorts. You once again get many whistles from the p0nyfolk. However, you do notice a few mares with the same style of shorts as Twilight. >You get to Rarity's house, and knock. Anonymous
>>2745890 where is my pony 9/11 terrorist story PaleNarrator !.JT.7dRUrY
>>2746119 please see
>>2745469 >2) Nothing happened between Clockwork and Applejack. Fillydelphian !!fFnHwjFV49q
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>>2746070 That's an interesting concept and I'd like to see where you take it, if you decide to take it and write more. I'll be looking for it in future threads.
Aanon
>>2746131 >Knock knock. >Twilight looks at you, daring you to try it. >You can't help it. >Knock. >Knock Knock. >Knock knock knock knock knock. >Knock knock knock kno- >Rarity swings open the door. >Rarity: What is all of the fuss about? >Twilight and you look at each other. >How do you explain it? Hey Rarity, I was just wondering if you wanted to go with us on a.. vacation.
>Rarity: Vacation? Oh, I've been dying for one! Ever since you introduced your style of clothing, I've been working nonstop! >Twi: So will you come with us!? >Rarity: Why of course! I think I can handle a few days out of the boutique. May I ask where we are going? >Twi: Well, I was going to take Aanon back to his home, for him to say goodbye to everyone.. >Rarity: Wait! So, your staying with us Aanon? Yep, I want to stay with all of you guys.
>Rarity: Oh that is simply wonderful! >Rarity gives both you and Twilight a group hug. >Rarity: And I would love to see your home Aanon! It might give me even more ideas in fashion! >You cringe, thinking of all of the bizaare styles out there. You hope she doesn't see those.. >Rarity: Oh, just let me get packed.. Wait! Actually, you don't need to.
PaleNarrator !.JT.7dRUrY
>>2746141 You will get no such thing from me. As funny as I am, I'm not the type to make fun of 9/11. Sorry, that's just me.
Anonymous
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>>2745695 As long as the beating isn't too severe.
Like Applerape Anonymous
>>2746142 Q2:I know you play video games, so do you have like a gaming channel on youtube?
Aanon
>>2746145 >Rarity: What? Why ever not? Twilight can't handle too much stuff to teleport us there.
>Twilight nods. >Twi: Yeah, but don't worry! Aanon must have plenty of clothes and such for us! >You knew that was wrong, but you still had plenty of money from your job, so you could get whatever they needed. It would just be paper in a week anyways. >Rarity: Ok then Aanon, I trust you have the proper styles for a lady. >Rarity joins you and Twilight. Who should we get next?
>Rarity: How about Pinkie? She lives right there. >Rarity points to the bakery. >She lives there too?! Of course she does. >You all go over to the bakery and enter inside. >Pinkie wasn't at the counter though. It was some woman. >You go up to the counter. Is Pinkie here? We need-
>Pinkie: Hi Aanon! how's it going? >You turn around, and Pinkie was right in your face. Hi Pinkie! We just needed to ask you something.
>You were half expecting that anyways. >Pinkie: ooh! What is it? I love surprises! >You explain it to her. >Pinkie: Why of course I want to go silly! I can throw my first ever party on a different planet! >Pinkie joins your group, and you set off again. Okay who's next?
>Twi: Why not- Anonymous
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>>2746141 Dude, Stop
He'll never ever do such a retarded request
Its not cool trying to force someone to write something they don't give a shit about
Aanon
>>2746167 >You spy Rainbow Dash flying around in the sky. You cup your hands together. HEY RAINBOW DASH!! GET OVER HERE!!
>You see Rainbow Dash nod, and she lands on the ground. >Rainbow: Hey Aanon! You guys having another picnic or something? >You explain your idea to her. >Rainbow: Whoa Aanon, I don't know.. Do you have something better to do?
>Rainbow: Of course I do! Like what?
>Rainbow: Sleeping for one.. You can easily show off to everyone.
>Rainbow: Really? How so? Nobody can fly there.
>Rainbow drops her jaw to the floor. >Rainbow: What?! But how does the weather even work? I have no clue really..
>Rainbow: I have to see this for myself. I'll go. >Rainbow joins your group, and you all head to the Apple Orchards. >Rarity: Oh, why did you have to get me first Aanon? I am getting really tired. You were just the closest.
>Pinkie: What are you talking about?! This is fun! >Pinkie had been skipping the entire way. >Rainbow: Ha! I'm not tired at all >Twi: That's because you're just floating. >Rainbow hadn't even walked a step. Aanon
>>2746183 >You all reached the barn house. You knock, and Big Macintosh answers the door. Can you get Applejack for us?
>Mac: Eeyup. >He disappears, and Applejack takes his place. >Applejack: Well howdy.. everyp0ny! What can ah get for ya? >Once again, You explain. >Applejack: Well shucks, why not? The Applebuck season is over anyways! I could use a vacation! >Just one p0ny left, and it will probably be the hardest. >You had picked the house closest to Fluttershy's too. >Twi: Ok, I guess all that's left is Fluttershy. >You all start to walk up a trail to her little cottage. >Applejack: So Aanon, do they have, um, apples were you come from? Of course we do. And we have just as many varietys as you do here.
>Of course she brings up apples. >Rainbow: Get this Applejack: They can't control the weather there! >Applejack: What! That's insane! It's just like the forest! Yeah, yeah, I know..
>You could see Fluttershy's house now. >What should you say first? Should you just ignore it for now, and talk about it later? >You were getting closer.. >Pinkie: Hey Aanon? Yes Pinkie?
>Pinkie: Do they have parties on Earth? >Of course they do! Just.. not as fun as your parties. >You don't think you ever had a party quite like Pinkie's. Anonymous
>>2746156 Or you could make it a dramatic heartfelt tragedy...doesn't have to be something to be made fun of..
Aanon
>>2746196 >Pinkie: All right! I can't wait! >You were at Fluttershy's door. >Shit. What should you say? >Knock knock knock. >The door opens. >Too late to think of anything. >Flutter: Oh.. hey Aanon.. I was just- >She sees everyp0ny behind you. >Flutter: What's happening? Um..
>You explain it to her. So.. do you want to go?
>Flutter: With you?.. And everyp0ny else? Who will take care of my animals though? >Rainbow: Don't worry Fluttershy! I've already asked somep0ny. You did?!
>Flutter: Who? >Rainbow: You know Lyra? >Flutter: Yeah.. >Rainbow: Let's just say she owed me a favor. She'll be over in an hour. >Flutter: Oh, well in that case, I guess I could go.. >She steps out, and for a second, she looks at you with her innocent eyes. >This would be a long week. Ok Twi, That's everyp0ny.
>Twi: Ok then. >She walks to the middle of the open area at the front of Fluttershy's cottage. PaleNarrator !.JT.7dRUrY
>>2746163 Unfortunately no, I do not. The closest thing people get to seeing me play games is when I livestream me narrating Japanese Hentai Flash Novels.
Drunk.
We have fun.
Aanon
>>2746214 >Twi: Ok everyp0ny, surround me. >You all do as she says and you all grab onto her. >Twilight instantly starts murmuring, and you see the ground shake. >All of you are wrapped in a purple aura, and Twilights eyes open, pure white. >You see static electricity build up, and you feel the burning sensation again. >You feel it build up, and be released. >In a flash of blinding light, all of you had disappeared out of Equestria. Gadget !Y54YDBzz9U
Trix of the Trade - Chapter 9(Preview) Gadget !Y54YDBzz9U Sat 23 Jun 2012 07:00:20 No. 2746227 Report Quoted By:
Hey guys, I'm writing like a motherfucker tonight and I think it warrants a preview!>You stand in front of a mirror in the main room. It was originally in Trixie’s room but she allowed you to borrow it. >Except she didn’t really say, ‘yes’. You just took it without her permission. >She didn’t seem to mind. She had about 7 more, anyway. >You were trying on different outfits. Clothes are a part of a first impression! >Also, you want to wear the cowboy outfit again. >It just doesn’t work here… >Hat off? Okay that does look a bit better. >But this just isn’t the right place for a cowboy outfit. Maybe just a sweater and blue pants? >No. Way too unprofessional. >You don’t HAVE anything professional. >Trixie emerges from her room. >”Seriously? You’re still not ready? Ugh, why must you be slow at everything?” >”Trixie’s cape is not smelly!” >”Trixie… Trixie doesn’t have to put up with this!” >Trixie huffs in annoyance. >”Yeah, that. Trixie likes that outfit.” >”No. Trixie is not one to denounce such excellent attire made for idiots.” >”Calm down. It is only banter. You shall be getting it a lot from Trixie." >Fucking Trixie.
OverlordAnon
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>>2746220 I miss everything fun.
PaleNarrator !.JT.7dRUrY
>>2746208 I believe the original request had to do with a submarine getting hijacked and crashing into Canterlot.
So yeah, no.
Anonymous
>>2746220 >Japanese Hentai Flash Novels. Anonymous
>>2746110 Fair enough.
Also your Anondad story is rather disappointing,
i'm sure someone has mentioned this already but THEY RAPED HIM WHILE LAUGHING AND MAKING JOKES! HELL, CELESTIA TOLD HIM HE MENT NOTHING! PEOPLE HE SAW AS FRIENDS!
Normal people usually don't forgive that kinda thing... Ever.
Gadget !Y54YDBzz9U
Trix of the Trade - Chapter 9(Preview) Gadget !Y54YDBzz9U Sat 23 Jun 2012 07:02:19 No. 2746262 Report WHOOPS FORGOT TO EDIT SOMETHING>You are Anonymous. >You stand in front of a mirror in the main room. It was originally in Trixie’s room but she allowed you to borrow it. >Except she didn’t really say, ‘yes’. You just took it without her permission. >She didn’t seem to mind. She had about 7 more, anyway. >You were trying on different outfits. Clothes are a part of a first impression! >Also, you want to wear the cowboy outfit again. >It just doesn’t work here… >Hat off? Okay that does look a bit better. >But this just isn’t the right place for a cowboy outfit. Maybe just a sweater and blue pants? >No. Way too unprofessional. >You don’t HAVE anything professional. >Trixie emerges from her room. >”Seriously? You’re still not ready? Ugh, why must you be slow at everything?” >”Trixie’s cape is not smelly!” >”Trixie… Trixie doesn’t have to put up with this!” >Trixie huffs in annoyance. >”Yeah, that. Trixie likes that outfit.” >”No. Trixie is not one to denounce such excellent attire made for idiots.” >”Calm down. It is only banter. You shall be getting it a lot from Trixie.” >Fucking Trixie.
Aanon
Gadget !Y54YDBzz9U
Trix of the Trade - Chapter 9(Preview) Gadget !Y54YDBzz9U Sat 23 Jun 2012 07:03:47 No. 2746289 Report >>2746262 >Trixie finally gets fed up with your delays so you make a compromise. You ditch the vest and hat while keeping the rest of the outfit. You look more like business man this way. >As soon as the two of you exit the wagon, you notice something wrong. >The air is thick and… green. “Trixie, you seein’ this?”
>”… It wasn’t like this the last time Trixie came to Hoofington.” “Should we go check it out?”
>”Yes, one moment.” >Trixie’s horn lights up with magic. You feel a very slight expansion in the back of your throat and a mild pop. >You grasp your throat in panic. “What happened?!”
>”Trixie created a magical field in the back of your throat to clean the air that you breathe in.” “… Wait, seriously? I’ve never heard of anything like that.”
>You take in a deep breath. You can still taste how bad the air is but it feels just fine going down the pipe. “So which way into town?”
>”All we need to do is follow this dirt path to a much larger one that opens up on the edge of town.” “Cool, lead the way.”
>Trixie steps forward. >Pine needles crunch under your feet and hooves as you tread through the Evergreen forest. You remember some places back on Earth with trees like this. Such places were so serene. >Not this place, though. This thick air is anything but peaceful. It’s only disgusting and hazardous. Anonymous
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>>2746241 >crashing a submarine >into a city on the face of a mountain whaaaaaaaaaaaaaat
PaleNarrator !.JT.7dRUrY
>>2746249 Hatoful Boyfriend tomorrow night.
I have whiskey.
My name is PaleNarrator on skype.
Find me. Fun will be had.
Anonymous
>>2746241 Now I know your lying, how the fuck would you FLY a submarine into Canterlot?
PonyGone !Gi8l6ezzXk
>>2746220 Why am I never invited?
PaleNarrator !.JT.7dRUrY
>>2746311 >>2746297 That was the request. I even brought up the whole "submarine into a mountain what?" thing.
He said you could just tie balloons to the sub.
Yeah.
Gadget !Y54YDBzz9U
Trix of the Trade - Chapter 9(Preview) Gadget !Y54YDBzz9U Sat 23 Jun 2012 07:06:29 No. 2746355 Report >>2746289 >The sounds of hustle and bustle reach your ears quickly enough. >”We’re almost there.” “Is it me or is this shit getting thicker?”
>”No… it’s not you. It’s starting to hurt Trixie’s eyes…” “Yeah, same here.”
>The two of you take your first step onto a cobblestone road. >”This… wasn’t here the last time Trixie performed in Hoofington.” “Maybe they spruced up the place?”
>Trixie kicks a loose stone. “That would make se-“ “LOOK OUT!”
>You yank Trixie out of harm’s way as a wagon pulled by two stallions speeds by. >You then leap backwards, Trixie still in your arms, to avoid another oncoming wagon. >The driver was kind enough to call you a blind faglord. Wonderful. >”W-What is this place?!” >You look to the direction from where the wagons came from. >Your eyes focus and the thick green fog seems to split momentarily for you. >Silhouettes of large smokestacks and factories become visible. Dismantled buildings come into view. “I think this is Hoofington…”
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End of preview. I'm gonna be doing a few things in this chapter a few of you may call bullshit on(>”Trixie created a magical field in the back of your throat to clean the air that you breathe in.” Yeah, worse than that. I'll have an explanation for it thought.) but
I hope you guys enjoy it regardless.
Anonymous
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>>2746342 ...thats genius
Why aren't you writing it let Anonymous
>>2746342 Pics or it did not happen
Because that is some of the most retarded shit I've read in days
Anonymous
>>2746325 Because Pale dosen't love you. Deal With It
Anonymous
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>>2746365 >Because that is some of the most retarded shit I've read in days oh boy, you are going to love it here
Fillydelphian !!fFnHwjFV49q
>>2746365 I can confirm. Someone really did request that.
PaleNarrator !.JT.7dRUrY
>>2746380 >>2746325 Making a new call room in the skype. Will invite all I can.
Anonymous
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>>2745695 thanks. will do, Aether. and hell, itll even be a clop.
Anonymous
>>2746390 I slept with your Mom
Dont worry, its legit, Ask my Best Friend Billy, he can confirm
Zortith !UKvC.Sp2b.
>>2745359 >>2745379 >>2745404 >>2745438 >>2745500 This is the second time since I started my own southern anon story that I've seen someone else doing similar. Did I start a trend or something? Not upset about it or nothing, just pointing it out. Hell, yours is even better written.
Anonymous
>>2746437 they're hella poular. isnt that what GhostKid is writing too? Young/country anon? I assume if he grows up that accent will be his only surviving gimmick.
in short, just write more of it, since its so popular. you'll get a heckuva lot of views.
but then again, i like monster hunter...
do what you want man.
Fillydelphian !!fFnHwjFV49q
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>>2746431 Believe it or don't.
I'm heading to bed.
Anonymous !oeBIzpunNY
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>>2746355 Actually, an air filtration spell sounds pretty useful. There's plenty of reasons to invent such a spell, too - for example, fire-fighting unicorns using it (or casting it on their fellow firefighters) to help guard against smoke inhalation.
Anonymous
>>2746400 mfw i deleted my skype account last summer
mfw i might just get a new one just for this
MellowAnon !aht2Kgb6d2
PaleNarrator !.JT.7dRUrY
>>2746515 >>2746509 Anyone intersted will get in. I make a call, then throw you a joinme link. Huzzah.
OverlordAnon
>>2746564 I'd like to get in. If I may.
Cormos !!5FfIyvKysyS
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>>2746564 i just woke up and hear theres a skype call?how do i join this
PaleNarrator !.JT.7dRUrY
>>2746595 >>2746564 >>2746515 Seeing all this interest, I will actually make a livestream channel. Done posting for the night. Will drop the livestream link tomorrow. Cheers.
Anonymous
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>>2746564 gotta get it on this
Anonymous
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>>2746830 where is the link to the chat room on skype
Cormos !!5FfIyvKysyS
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>>2746830 dangit >n> thats what i get for waleing up late
Zortith !UKvC.Sp2b.
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>>2746468 I'm writing both still as much as I can, actually. My ADD addled brain, however, despises lengthy periods of productivity, so it's slow going either way. I'd stab it, but, y'know, it's kinda what I use to be sentient and all.
Actually, now that I think about, my ADD is probably why I like Pinkie so much. She's sporadic and random like me in real life, but at a much higher rate of speed. It's hard to keep up with her sometimes. Weird...
Zuul !vJHWNqhBaQ
It's been way too long since my last update. That's probably the reason I'm no longer on Gadget's favorite list. Anyway, for anyone still interested, here is chapter seven of Zuul's "Anon in Equestria".
Zuul !vJHWNqhBaQ
Anon in Equestria - Chapter 7 Zuul !vJHWNqhBaQ Sat 23 Jun 2012 07:42:00 No. 2747005 Report >>2746988 Chapter 7
>... >"...Anon. Anonymous. WAKE UP!" >A hoof hits the side of your head, jolting you awake. >You are leaning against the wall of a cold, dark, empty room. >You feel like shit. "Applejack?"
>Your eyes haven't completely adjusted to the dim light. >"Yeah, it's me. Are ya all right?" >... >You try to focus on the orange pony in front of you. "Wha... What's happening?"
>"Anon. Do you remember? They took us." >... "...they..."
>It all starts coming back. >The fire. >The shooting. "Oh god. Applejack, you got hit. are you hurt?"
>She turns to show you the long burn along her side, partially obscuring her apple cutie mark. "Does it hurt?"
>"A little... Yours is worse." >The blast of magic had left a large wound on your back. >"You're lucky to be alive." >Who the fuck? >There's another prisoner in the room. >You can't see him well, but you can tell that he's an old, brown earth pony. >The closest thing in Equestria to the ponies you have on Earth. >"Name's Granite. Did they get the rest of your friends, too?" "How do you know about them?"
>"I know a lot. One hears things when one's been here as long as I have. Also, they have thin walls." >Sure enough, you hear the sound of arguing from another room somewhere. "What are they fighting about?"
>"They've been fighting for a long time. Something about Crimson not knowing what he's doing. Sounds serious, doesn't it?" >The voices are getting louder. >They're coming here. >Granite retreats to his corner. 1/x
Zuul !vJHWNqhBaQ
Anon in Equestria - Chapter 7 Zuul !vJHWNqhBaQ Sat 23 Jun 2012 07:44:48 No. 2747041 Report >>2747005 >Crimson enters the room with two other unicorns. >One of them looks pissed, probably the one who was doing most of the shouting. >The other one is a friendly looking blue unicorn with glasses. >Crimson comes a bit closer. >"I'm glad you're finally here, Anon." "I know why I'm here: I'm important. But what do you want with Applejack?"
>"I'M ASKING THE QUESTIONS! I only have one... actually, anonymous. I'm hoping you could repeat what you said to me before you tried to kill me. What was it you said?" >You hesitate and he hits you in the face. >"WHAT DID YOU SAY?! TELL ME!! TELL ME!!!" >Crimson hits you again and again. "STOP!"
>You spit blood on the floor and look him straight in the eyes. >Crimson has clearly fucking lost it. 2/x
Zortith !UKvC.Sp2b.
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>>2746988 Who are you?
I kid, you're pretty awesome Zuul Zuul !vJHWNqhBaQ
Anon in Equestria - Chapter 7 Zuul !vJHWNqhBaQ Sat 23 Jun 2012 07:45:27 No. 2747053 Report >>2747041 >He's unstable and violent; but you have no choice. "I said: 'The voice told me to kill you.' It spoke to me in a dream. It told me you were going to get in his way and he wanted you dead."
>"LIAR!!!! LIIAAR!" spit flies from his mouth. >He turns and hits Applejack, punching her onto the floor. >You leap forward and swing at Crimson in your rage, but his horn glows. >You are thrown backwards and pinned to the wall. >Apparently, Crimson got his magic back. "YOU'RE FUCKING DEAD, CRIMSON!! YOU HEAR ME??!"
>"You want to know why I went through the trouble of bringing Applejack here instead of killing her on the spot?! Because I wanted revenge for what she did to me." >He smiles, showing his missing teeth. >"But if you care about her this much, I guess I got more than I bargained for." >Crimson and the other unicorns leave through the door, locking it behind them. >You drop to the floor. "Applejack!"
>You can see a bruise forming under her fur. >"Yer overreactin', Anon. It's not that bad." "Applejack, did you hear him? He wants to torture you! You... You have to get out of here!"
>You pull on the door, but it doesn't budge. "Help me!"
>"It's useless." says Granite, "I've tried everything to open that door." 3/x
PonyGone !Gi8l6ezzXk
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>>2747005 I've been waiting for this...
Zuul !vJHWNqhBaQ
Anon in Equestria - chapter 7 Zuul !vJHWNqhBaQ Sat 23 Jun 2012 07:47:50 No. 2747091 Report >>2747053 >It's been many hours since Crimson left. >You're curled up in a corner with Applejack. >Granite is sleeping in the adjacent corner. "Applejack? Are you awake?"
>Her light snoring answers your question. >Cute. >The almost peaceful silence is broken by the creaking of the door. >It opens slowly, revealing the silhouette of a unicorn. >Thank fucking god it's not Crimson. >It's the kind-faced bespectacled pony. >... There's an awkward pause. >You are still the only prisoner awake. >"... Uhh. If you wanted to escape... You should do it now..." he nods and walks away, leaving the door open. >Is this a trick? >Doesn't matter, you have nothing to lose. "Applejack, get up. Now."
>"Huh? What is it?" she senses the urgency in your voice. "The door is open. We're escaping"
>Applejack's fully awake now. "Let's go!"
>"What about Granite?" "Do you trust him?"
>She considers it for a moment. >"I do." "Good enough for me."
4/x
Zuul !vJHWNqhBaQ
Anon in Equestria chapter 7 Zuul !vJHWNqhBaQ Sat 23 Jun 2012 07:49:07 No. 2747109 Report >>2747091 >The three of you hurry into the hallway. "Which way do we go, Granite?"
>"I-I was always blindfolded. This way I think." >You go right, but end up with a fork in the road. >"I can only guess..." Granite says, "Sorry, I just don't know. Maybe we should split up and meet back here in five minutes?" "Yeah, okay. Applejack and I will try the left passage."
>He nods and hurries away. >The passage you took leads around a corner and to a single door. >Applejack's eyes dart around nervously. >"I don't think this is it, Anon. Let's go back." "Not yet."
>You approach the door and try the handle. >It's unlocked. "Could this be the exit?"
>You push the door open and peer inside. 5/x
Zuul !vJHWNqhBaQ
>>2747109 >Holyfuckingshit. >... >What are the chances? >Princess Celestia and Princess Luna are lying on the floor. >Right here in front of you are the princesses, whose absence is the cause of all these problems. >They can solve everything! >You've done it! >You've saved Equestria! >Or not. >Something is clearly wrong. >The princesses aren't chained up. >The door wasn't locked. >And, they're not moving. >Even their manes, usually flowing with magic, are still. >You cautiously kneel down between them. "Princesses?"
>You lay a hand on each of them- >and black out. >Sun. >For the first time in almost a week you see sun and blue sky. >A gentle breeze rolls through the short grass that covers the flat landscape. >Celestia stands before you, her wings stretched out on both sides. >"Hello, Anonymous." "Hi... Where are we?"
>"This is Equestria. Well, not exactly. The Equestria you've been living in is the real physical one. This is more of a ... memory of what it was." >"So... this isn't real? This is all in your head?" >LUNA:"It is not in my sister's head, Anonymous." >You turn around and see Princess Luna. >It is suddenly night, but not cold and uncomfortable like the Equestrian night you had experienced since you came here. >This night was quiet, dark and peaceful. >You turn back to Celestia, and the daytime returns. >CELESTIA:"Luna and I share a powerful connection with each other and with this world." >LUNA:"That's part of the reason the entity you've been talking to had us captured and sedated, rather than simply removing us from our world like he did to you." 6/x
Zuul !vJHWNqhBaQ
Anon in Equestria - Chapter 7 Zuul !vJHWNqhBaQ Sat 23 Jun 2012 07:55:40 No. 2747200 Report >>2747143 "Woah, slow down. You know about that voice?"
>LUNA:"Yes. We had an interesting talk with him." "And it's true that he wanted to get rid of you?"
>CELESTIA:"He has a ... task ... he told us about. Something Luna and I could not let him do." >LUNA:"Unfortunately, not all of our subjects are completely faithful to us. He convinced that Unicorn Supremacy organization to get us out of the way so we wouldn't interfere." >CELESTIA:"Despite their misguided actions, you must remember they didn't kill us, sister. That would have been the easier thing to do." >LUNA:"Perhaps." "So, what? They just keep you unconscious with some kind of magic."
>LUNA:"A drug, actually. And we're not unconscious, Anon. We're conscious, only, we're here." "What was the task you wanted to prevent?"
>CELESTIA:"... I think you'll find out soon enough. There's something I wish to tell you before you go back to your friend Applejack." "Yes?"
>CELESTIA:"I believe there is still hope for this world, but you are not it. You need to go home at the first chance you get. And when you do, never return to Equestria." ...
>LUNA:"It's time for you to wake up now, Anon. Remember, don't make the mistake I did." 7/x
Zuul !vJHWNqhBaQ
Anon in Equestria - Chapter 7 Zuul !vJHWNqhBaQ Sat 23 Jun 2012 07:57:11 No. 2747225 Report >>2747200 >You're back. >Applejack is looking down on you. >"Anon, are ya all right?" "I'm fine Applejack."
>"Are the princesses... dead?" "No... I talked to them. But we're wasting too much time. We need to get out of here, and there is no way we're carrying two full-sized horses with us. We can come back for them."
>"Okay, let's go." >Granite is already waiting for you where you split up. >"I found it! The exit is this way!" he whispers excitedly. "How far?"
>"It's right down here." >You follow him through the silent passages. >After a few minutes, you round a corner and come to a huge open room, like a hangar. >The far wall has a massive hole that opens into the sky. >A single miniature zeppelin is in the center of the room. >Applejack is about to run to it, but you put an arm out to stop her. "Wait."
>A group of four unicorns is off to the side, discussing something. >You look back at the zeppelin. "...Wait..."
>Crimson climbs down from the airship and walks to the group, who promptly stop talking and face him. "Now!"
>You, Applejack, and Granite hurry quietly to the far side of the zeppelin, where you'll be out of their line of sight. 8/x
Zuul !vJHWNqhBaQ
Anon in Equestria - Chapter 7 Zuul !vJHWNqhBaQ Sat 23 Jun 2012 07:59:24 No. 2747263 Report >>2747225 >None of them saw you. >There is a staircase up to a raised platform, from which you can board the ship. >The stairs creak with every step you take, threatening to give away your presence. >Fortunately, the unicorns are too busy shouting at each other to hear anything. >When you reach the deck, Granite runs around adjusting the fins on the side of the ship and preparing it for flight. "You know what you're doing?"
>"Of course I do. Keep your voice down." 9/x
Zuul !vJHWNqhBaQ
Anon in Equestria - Chapter 7 Zuul !vJHWNqhBaQ Sat 23 Jun 2012 08:00:28 No. 2747275 Report >>2747263 >As expected, the unicorns notice when the zeppelin starts to move quickly out into the open sky. >They shout in confusion and run after it. >As the ship passes through the opening, you see that the base they were holding you in was built into the side of a huge mountain; probably the same mountain that houses the city of Canterlot. >A cool wind blows through your hair. >You look down into the moonlit valley and see the lights of Ponyville in the distance. >Applejack smiles at you. >"We did it." >A series of bright flashes reveals the obvious flaw in your plan: unicorns can teleport. >Crimson's three henchmen are prepared to open fire, but they stop when they see you. >Crimson isn't happy that you escaped. >"KILL HIM!!!! SHOOT!!" >He's twitching and red-eyed. >The others look at one another in confusion. >"I thought he was important." >"DID I STUTTER!! KIIILL HIIM!!!!" He spits. >None of them shoot. >Crimson's rage reaches its peak. >His eyes glow red and his horn crackles with energy. >The deck explodes under your feet, launching you to the back of the ship. >Another explosion destroys a few of the cords that stretch up to the balloon. >The hull tilts forward and to the right; anything not tied down starts sliding over the edge into the valley below. >You hear the sound of three unicorns teleporting away to safety. >Three. >You get to your feet and see Applejack nearby. "Applejack! Hold on to something!"
>Another cord snaps and the ship tilts to a more extreme angle. >Your feet slip out from under you and you grab a rope to keep from sliding off the edge. >You see Applejack is still hanging on. >Crimson looks you in the eye and smiles. >Then he grabs Applejack and they both vanish. 10/10
Zuul !vJHWNqhBaQ
>>2747275 Updated patebin:
http://pastebin.com/u/Zuul Tell me what you thought.
Next chapter will be the last one, and it will be finished soon. I promise.
MellowAnon !aht2Kgb6d2
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>>2747310 >Then he grabs Applejack and they both vanish Oh boy I'm jizzing my pants waiting for the next chapter
Anonymous
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>>2747310 i think this story is fuckin wack.
...iiin a good way.
it is annoying having little to no idea what the fuck is going on, but it's just the right kind of suspense thriller mystery action story that keeps me coming back to it. write more, and make some obvious mistakes so i can point them out in front of you.
Blender- !YZfhywTDso
RalliART [Prologue] pastebin.com/u/Blender- Blender- !YZfhywTDso Sat 23 Jun 2012 08:09:27 No. 2747395 Report Will post chapter 1 next thread.>You are Anonymous >You are nineteen years old >Your home—well, I guess you could call it that—is New Zealand. You called it home for thirteen years, but you no longer have much of a connection to it anymore, just a word to put next to birthplace. >You travel too much to have a place to call home. Endless hotel rooms, nameless faces... The only constant that you have had since you were thirteen is your mother and your dog Maya. >When you first started following your father to all his rally events, your mother had been... reluctant, to say the least. In fact, she only agreed to you following him around because she was able to come as well. >Four years… four whole years of following your father around. He taught you everything you know. You'd even started competing (despite your mother’s objections) in junior races at sixteen. You were good, very good; taught by one of the best in the world, in fact. Things were going perfectly. Your life had never been better. >Then it happened. >You remember the moment vividly, who you were talking to, what you were talking about, where you were sitting, what you had eaten for lunch an hour earlier. You also remember the gasps... Gasps that turned into screams. >In the blink of an eye your father was snuffed out of the world. >They never recovered his body. They said the fire had totally vaporized the insides of the car.
Blender- !YZfhywTDso
RalliART [Prologue] pastebin.com/u/Blender- Blender- !YZfhywTDso Sat 23 Jun 2012 08:10:45 No. 2747418 Report >>2747395 >You hadn't handled it well. A huge chunk of your life, ripped away with no warning. >But you remembered something your father had said to you. >"Son... you asked me why I race. I live and breathe rally, it flows through my veins, it exists in my heart and my soul, and I can see it does in yours too. I live by it and I'll die by it." >There was only one thing you wanted to do, to honour your dad and his legacy. >But after this incident, your mother… she had other ideas. >She tried to stop you, tried to keep you from following in your father’s footsteps. She didn't want to lose you. "The only thing left in her life that made it worth living" as she put it. >You admit that last line really pulled at your heart strings. But this… this is what you wanted to do, in your heart and your soul you knew, just like your father said, and try as she might, you think that she knew this too. >Your father had left everything he had to the both of you. >His team was more than happy to stay and follow you. >They were all your dad’s friends, and they had always commented on how much you were like your father. >Some of the sponsors didn't even mind sticking around. >You had followed the junior rally championship around the globe. Sweden, Greece, Brazil, Canada, Japan, Cyprus. >You damn near won it too. 2 points... 2 more fucking points and you would have won… but you can’t help that the race officials are blind fucks. >Then came your 18th birthday; and with it an invitation. Ford wanted you to drive for them in the WRC, World Rally Championship. This was the big leagues. No more junior racing. This was the real deal. 2/X
Blender- !YZfhywTDso
RalliART [Prologue] pastebin.com/u/Blender- Blender- !YZfhywTDso Sat 23 Jun 2012 08:11:35 No. 2747430 Report >>2747418 >The season went well, 10th place overall. No one expected the newbie to do well, “…Just riding on the reputation of your father” they had said. >You know you probably shouldn’t… but… you really enjoyed the look on some of the naysayer's faces when you whooped their asses in the standings. Teach them for running their mouths. -------
>Current Day. >The second season was well underway and, if anything, you were doing better than the first year. >You are currently doing an overnight haul of your main race car between stages. You know you have a truck that transports all the cars from stage to stage but this was something you and your father always did. It was somewhat of a tradition you two had. >‘It clears your mind, it helps you get in touch with the machine behind you. That link is critical on race day. It can be the difference between finishing a stage and crashing on the first corner.’ >Your father’s words of wisdom… Just some of many that he had passed on to you. >In fact, you’re pretty sure everything your father had said to you belonged in a quote book. >Letting out a soft sigh, you look over to the passenger seat and see a white ball of fidgeting fur, Maya, your only company on these trips now. >Her dark blue eyes meet your own. >She could always tell when something was bothering you. 3/X
Blender- !YZfhywTDso
RalliART [Prologue] pastebin.com/u/Blender- Blender- !YZfhywTDso Sat 23 Jun 2012 08:12:46 No. 2747452 Report >>2747430 “Hey girl, you finally awake?”
>M: “*yawn*” “Yeah, I’m tired too. But we can’t just stop here. Where would we sleep?”
>She shuffles about in the seat and lays her head on your lap, closing her eyes again. >You stroke Maya’s head before bringing your attention back to the road. >You feel your eyelids getting heavy with every passing moment. >As if on cue the GPS on your dash chimes in. “ETA: 3 hours to your destination.” >Ok fuck this shit, you’d rather arrive tomorrow then wake up in a hospital because you fell asleep at the wheel. >You pull off into a clearing in the woods, lay your seat down flat, and relax as sleep overtakes you, forcing your eyes shut. 4/4
Feedback is welcome and appreciated.
Anonymous
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>>2747452 i dont understand most of it, so you will have to wait until you post chapter one to get any real reaction.
something about a raceranon with photographic memory?
R/T !!gw4/lKtnI20
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>>2746437 sorry for the late reply. i've had this going for about a week i think, but i lacked the motivation to finish up the introduction, mostly because i had more motivation for Helo Thunder.
Slice of life stories are tough for me as well, so im glad you enjoy it. keep writing your own, even if you think mines more well written.
if you want to... Ghostkid
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>>2741987 who do i have to kill to get on this list anyway?
or what must i write to become a favorite of yours? i write EVERYTHING and should theoretically be on everybody's radar by now. come on.
TOTAL PASTES: 103 | PASTEBIN HITS: 4,605 | TOTAL PASTES HITS: 11,488 | JOINED: 91 DAYS AGO
http://pastebin.com/u/GhostKid Seriously gagit. pls. what must i do?
Aanon
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Jigsaw in Equestia,
Equestrian Breaker
Pale, Pale, Pale...
Anonymous
>>2747596 >I've received some terrible, terrible news about one of my favorite projects, and I simply can't let that go. >If a pendulum can be swung one way, it can be swung another. !M/muffin/A
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Got a little... strange last night and wrote this.
There's a while to go on it, not sure where I'm going with it though in the slightest.
Or if I'll go ANYWHERE with it.
Still, posting pastebin before grabbing some breakfast.
http://pastebin.com/u/Muffin-Lover Yadda yadda feedback.
Ghostkid
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>>2742264 I care, Flutter-Octave!
I am forever interested in this tartarian story.
looks like he's killing the anti elements, first dishonesty and second greed. am i on the right track? Serrated !!qoy1LP0tlIj
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>>2747452 YES! Been looking forward to this.
Equestrian Breaker
>>2747629 I shiggy your shiggy diggy
lurker parking
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>>2747452 Post chapter one now.
Anonymous
Trix of the Trade - Chapter 9(Preview) Anonymous Sat 23 Jun 2012 08:46:25 No. 2747862 Report >>2747843 I seriously hope you guys don't not bend over.
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>>2747862 >ditch the trip for pointless post >forget to remove subject WELP
Anonymous
Brainhorn !!X+la9AgNv4F
OK. Writers block. I'm still working on PutP, but I've hot a block. So I cope/pasted my "idea" file into a pastebin, and you can tell me if any of them sound good or not. If not, I'll need to get better ideas, I guess.
http://pastebin.com/JC4ELD3x Anonymous
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Anyone seen or heard from Thelonious recently?
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>>2747935 Punching that Purple Bitch Twilight- The entire premise is Anon punching Twilight, while everyone else defends him and tells Twilight she's overreacting.
lurker parking
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>>2747935 I'll say all the ideas that I like.
the one with derpy.
Punching that Purple Bitch Twilight
and anon trying to kill trixie and twilight trying to stop him.
Rune !4y4upteP02
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So...yeah.
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>>2748025 Indeed, and may I be put on the main list pretty please?
Directed at whoever controls it. PaleNarrator !.JT.7dRUrY
>>2747596 Is it bad that I'm incredibly confused by this rather ominous post? Because I am really worried.
And tired oh god it's 5AM what?
Zuul !vJHWNqhBaQ
>>2748078 I love you, Pale.
Blender- !YZfhywTDso
>>2748031 >>2748031 >>2748031 ....but mandroiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiid
Anonymous
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>>2748146 That isn't the new thread.
That isn't the new thread at all.
PaleNarrator !.JT.7dRUrY
Anonymous
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>>2748129 I don't know how I sleep at night when I only upload a paltry single update a night.
I'm probably going to hang myself with a pony belt or something now.
I blame Notch for making a game where the floor I'm mining suddenly gives way to a 300 foot drop.
Aether !!mw/7+Tvxn6g
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>>2746260 oh trust me i know. He's not forgiving any of them and it took him months to actually see any of them aside from that one scene where they gathered around his home. He really doesn't have a choice, he's got no way to return home, and if he leaves equestria where is he gonna go? I've not mentioned that he's been anywhere else but in Equestria.
Don't know how many times i mentioned that he's only interacting with the pones is because of the fact that he's a father: hence the name of the story being Anondad.
