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Submission is Mandatory #118

Anonymous Sun 30 Jul 2023 17:40:46 No.40176293 View View Reply Original Report

Previous Thread (#117) >>40044879

https://desuarchive.org/mlp/thread/40044879/

Humiliation as a service.

>What is this thread about?
This thread is dedicated to stories that have clear dominate and submissive roles; both with and without consent.

>What exactly is welcome in this thread?
A wide variety of stories are welcomed here; from non-consent and sexual slavery, to abusive manipulation and psychological domination, to maids and extortion, and even healthy consensual relationships with BDSM role-play elements.

Other variations are welcome as well, so long as they are complementary to the domination/submission focus of the thread.

Up to date archives:
Thread story list: https://ponepaste.org/7575
Thread list: https://ponepaste.org/7446
Unsorted oneshots/prompts/unfinished greens: https://ponepaste.org/7672

Outdated archives:
https://poneb.in/f8f09HB4
https://poneb.in/778zgnJ5
https://mulpwiki.batpony.party/index.php/SiM

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Historical Note:

This thread was originally founded to support the “Submission is Mandatory” story by MrNameless. While the story has gone on hiatus, it’s content is referred to by a number of stories in this thread.

Submission is Mandatory by MrNameless (Recommended)
Nightmare Moon summons Anon to defeat the EoH. In return, she grants him ownership of the Mane 6.
https://poneb.in/ycY3zrvA

(Non-Canon SiM Expanded Universe Stories)
Octavia POV (Recommended) https://poneb.in/Y2AahdQp
Other Stories - https://poneb.in/3AFdqxvs

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Active stories:

Last updated in the previous thread (#116):
>Untitled by ManicQuil
Ponies covered in latex.
No ponepaste.
Starts here: >>39969525
End of the last update >>40033317

Last updated in #115.3:
>The Carat and Stick by RapeApe !bwwXn5Gx.o
Cadance forces Rarity onto medifag Anon.
https://ponepaste.org/733 https://ponepaste.org/4327
End of the last update >>39904641
>A different side of Fluttershy
Start here >>39798228
https://ponepaste.org/8786
>Bunch of AI generated oneshots
Start here >>39886847
>Untitled
Kirin slavery
Start here >>39958711

Last updated in #114:
>Untitled oneshot from another thread
Ambushed princess
Start here >>39769899

Last updated in #113:
>Untitled oneshot
Start here >>39605383

Last updated in #111:
>Polychroloyalty
M6 maid training.
https://ponepaste.org/8276
Start here >>39312037

Last updated in #107:
>Untitled green from a different thread
Raridom.
>>39035993

Last updated in #106:
>Untitled
Prince Anonymous starts building his harem of mares.
End of the last update >>38873128
>Untitled one-shot
Dash is getting punished.
>>38895292
>Untitled one-shot
Description of wearing latex in the sun.
>>38829826

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 30 Jul 2023 17:58:30 No.40176367 Report

Quoted By: >>40179633

>>40176293
>Last updated in the previous thread (#116):
>Untitled by ManicQuil
>Ponies covered in latex.

Forgot to update about that OP.

Last updated in the previous thread (#117):
>Untitled by ManicQuil
Ponies covered in latex.
https://ponepaste.org/7692
Starts here: >>39969525
End of last update: >>40118943

Also there is a new active, or at least I hope its still active, story by Keeper
Last updated in the previous thread(#117):
>Title may be "A Reluctant Pride" by Keeper
Anon fucking his way into becoming leader of the gryphons
No ponepaste
Starts here: >>40100154
Last update here: >>40117985

And heres the rest of the inactive stories of the OP

Last updated in #105:
>Untitled one-shot
Total latex induced sensory deprivation.
Start here: >>38698379
>Untitled one-shot
Guard pony surprise team building exercise.
Start here: >>38758466

Last updated in #104:
>Untitled unedited one-shot
>>38479391

Last updated in #103:
>Megalomania by ⸸ !PENTAponY.
Psychologist Anon experiments with pony companions.
https://ponepaste.org/4098
End of the last update >>38347491

Last updated in #101:
>Untitled Applejack and Coco one-shot
Anon makes Applejack answer some questions.
>>38080108

Last updated in #99:
>Untitled Sunset story
Wizard Anon uses Sunset as a magic battery/source.
Part 1: >>37322337
Part 2: >>37410250
Part 3: >>37831879

Last updated in #96:
>Untitled Gilda story
>>37344663

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Anonymous Sun 30 Jul 2023 18:21:36 No.40176452 Report

Quoted By: >>40176538

But anyway, its nice to see the general back after that needed break.
The discussion was really dying down in the past one. And so was in the other fetish threads I think. The spanking general took a break as well and still hasnt returned.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 30 Jul 2023 18:47:36 No.40176529 Report

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Oh and to give something with the Rarity theme, heres a story I read with her and Twilight being introduced to a fetish club.
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/134992/the-club

Its unfinished and theres not much action in it, but it tries to sell itself with the interaction between those two.

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Anonymous Sun 30 Jul 2023 18:50:28 No.40176538 Report

Quoted By: >>40176709

welcome back, enjoyers of BDSM!
>>40176452
the question is, do we have new material?
or may i suggest not actualy public humiliation, but the threat of it?
or short setup for it would be a pony enslaved to another, where public exposure wouldnt be to the benefit of the subs social standing, so it would try anything to keep things hidden, or talk its way out of it.
hiding new nipplepiercings under some clothes would be an easy way, but what if the owner said to wear something harder to hide? what if the only options given, were humiliating costumes like pic related?
dunno if you have ideas where to go with this

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 30 Jul 2023 19:41:04 No.40176709 Report

Quoted By: >>40177095 >>40183622 >>40183687 >>40281290

>>40176538
Ok theres this concept that popped up in my head.
You know how theres this headcanon idea that there are a lot more mares than there are stallions in Equestria, and how that leads to herd marriages ?

What if mares werent willing to share a stallion with one another, and any unlucky ones who couldnt find a stallion had to subject themselves into being lowly caretakers of the mares that do have a partner ?
And I dont mean just a kinky role where she just watches the action and "cleans" after her mistress and the stallion, but something more of an enforced social role where she has an obligation of doing anything she can to increase her mistress's chances of snagging and keeping a stallion.

How this role could be assigned to a mare I have no clue yet. Could be voluntary, assigned at birth to a second daughter who now has to be her older sister's helper, forced during adulthood to some unlucky mare by another due to some reason, etc.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 30 Jul 2023 21:43:24 No.40177095 Report

Quoted By: >>40177356

>>40176709
so concubines in a way then, just with a SiM spin to it?
I like the idea although the real fun would start once you get to some interesting power dynamics.
Mrs cake having pinkie or one of her sisters as her ?haremslave? wouldn't be too hard on pinkie to keep it hidden or live with. but what I or politician like mayor mare were made to "work for" for twilight once she became an alicorn?
or how about any pony with a crush on a stallion and all she would be allowed to do would be joining through the position of the haremslave

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 30 Jul 2023 23:25:02 No.40177356 Report

Quoted By: >>40177912 >>40183622 >>40183687 >>40281290

>>40177095
>so concubines in a way then, just with a SiM spin to it?
I guess ? But concubine implies thats shes the servant of the stallion. In this case she would be the mare's servant.

>fun would start once you get to some interesting power dynamics.
Definitely. But its more fun when the reasoning behind it is developed a bit more.
I mean picture this being a "solution" that mostly came from the mare population, who created it over the years to lower competition among themselves in this dating pool that has a huge mare to stallion ratio.
A sort of unfair system that they all socially see as the only viable one, but would still hate being the concubine themselves and only do it because it was forced on them or they did out of lack of alternatives ( besides being lesbians )

And theres more. Depending on how gossip goes, that mistress could badmouth that mare to all the other mistresses, socially barring her from entering any other harems. Adultery would obviously be a huge red flag in this.
Or if she's a close friend of the mistress, she might even have a stallion already set up for her.

Basically stallions become such a sort of rare thing that all the hetero mares fight among themselves in this organized but unfair system.

> keep it hidden or live with
Exactly. It could be a shameful position for a mare to be in.

>mayor mare were made to "work for" for twilight once she became an alicorn
I would see mayor mare as being one of the lucky ones that managed to snag a partner with her position

>any pony with a crush on a stallion and all she would be allowed to do would be joining through the position of the haremslave
That kind of situation could happen a lot.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 30 Jul 2023 23:34:36 No.40177367 Report

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Anything new from the green writers ?

RapeApe

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RapeApe Mon 31 Jul 2023 01:01:38 No.40177547 Report

Quoted By: >>40177554

Good thing I checked the catalog, I was just about to make a new thread!

Previously on Pony Rape Z, Rarity was so horny she couldn't think straight and started rationalizing her lot in life, trying to convince herself it was her idea all along.
Now for the actual green.

>You walked straight past Rarity when you got home.
>You didn’t hesitate for even a second on his journey to bed.
>Rarity couldn’t help but wince at the sight of you collapsing on the bedding, fully clothed.
>“Oh dear. That’s going to wrinkle terribly.”
>She approached cautiously, perhaps even fearfully
>”I trust it was another hard day?”
>You only grunt.
>”I do hope there aren’t many more of those on the horizon.”
>You don’t have the energy to reply.
>Rarity starts talking about something, but you sorta tune her out.
>There’s way too much going on, and you’re nearing your limit.
>Or at least you WERE nearing your limit.
>Today was too much.
>Your questionable choices with Twilight have put you at risk, you just discovered you’re an illegal alien, shapeshifting mind control bugs likely want you dead, Applejack isn’t fooled about your history with Rarity, you’re going to struggle to afford to restock the clinic, you’re totally overwhelmed at work, your toe is rotting off, and your friend is going to die of a stroke!
>And then, to really make sure that everything’s totally fucked-
>”Master? Are you okay?”
“No.”
>You’re not sure why you said it.
>It’s true, of course, but why tell the truth?
>You’ve lied to Rarity plenty of times before.
>Usually in an indirect manner, or by omission, or even with misleading truths.
>Why choose now to be so transparent?
>And so blunt?
>It was really no mystery.
>Letting a patient die was just not something you could do.
>Days like today had gotten you in trouble before.
>”What’s the matter? Is it the money?”
>You can’t help but give off a humorless laugh.
>”Is it your hoof?”
>Hoof.
>”Is it trouble at work?
“I’ve got a lot of problems, Rarity.”
>”Then you need a lot of solutions! Let me help you!”
“And how exactly would you be able to help me?”
>”I can’t. Not if you don’t tell me what’s wrong.”
>You don’t cry.
>Maybe it’s because you’re too tired. Or maybe it’s because you haven’t been pushed far enough yet.
>Maybe it’s not in your nature…
>Or maybe it’s because you’re too angry.
>No, not angry.
>FURIOUS.
>How could they be so STUPID?
“I had a patient today. A retarded one. You can write that on their tombstone in a couple of days.”
>”Oh dear. This sounds…”
“Catastrophic? Strangulated ventral hernia.”
>”A what?”
“Soft tissue pushes through the abdominal wall and gets stuck. Causes a lot of complications, in this case it’s strangling their intestines. Already gangrenous from what I could tell.”
>You don’t bother getting up.
>But somehow you know what Rarity’s face looks like.

RapeApe

RapeApe Mon 31 Jul 2023 01:02:39 No.40177554 Report

Quoted By: >>40177558

>>40177547
“Normally it’s not that big of a deal. You just put the intestines back in place, and place a mesh over the hernia so it doesn’t recur. But they left it too long. I have to cut it out.”
>”But you CAN cure them. Right?”
“No.”
>An oppressive silence fills the building.
>Rarity finally breaks it with laughter.
>”Oh, oh my goodness. You had me fooled for a moment. Of course you can cure it!”
“No. A few days ago when they initially had their appointment, it would have been easy. Doing it right now is risky. But, of course, we’re not doing it at all.”
>If only you hadn’t closed the clinic.
>Maybe they would have been less stupid back then.
>Maybe you’d have at least had time to talk to them.
>Maybe…
>”And WHY aren’t you there RIGHT NOW curing them?”
“Because they refused.”
>”But- pardon?”
“You’re right. It’s insane! But… it’s their right. I can’t stop them.”
>You’re painfully aware of what happens if you do.
>”Well, go back and talk some sense into them!”
“I tried!”
>”Try HARDER!”
>She stomps the ground in anger, and you can hear more than a bit of fire in her voice.
“THEY WOULDN’T LISTEN! They- they… they don’t trust me enough to let me try.”
>”Well then, do something! Overpower them! Call the militia to- you- you have to…”
“I can’t.”
>”But-”
“Shut up and listen. I cannot force anypony to accept treatment. They have chosen to die, so they’re going to die.”
>”You forced treatment on me.”
…
>Fuck.
>She’s right.
>If you can commit malpractice for selfish reasons, but not to help someone…
>What have you become?
>A monster?
>No, that’s not it.
>A coward.
>This is cowardice.
>It’s because you’re afraid of losing it all.
>You can hear her crying.
>And you don’t blame her.
>This is wrong.
>It’s a violation of so many rules and laws.
>You’re doing the wrong thing.
>But that’s what makes you who you are.
“I need your help finding them.”
>”You’re *sniff* you’re going to help them?”
“I’m going to try. They’re in a lot of danger. But we need to track them down soon. They’ll still be in the city, if I remember the train schedule right. We need to find a way to convince them to accept my help”
>She doesn’t understand how this works.
>She won’t fully grasp just how wrong this is.
>This would definitely get you thrown in prison if you were back on Earth.
>Are you really going through with this?
>”What’s this poor soul’s name?”
>Of course you’re going through with it.
>There’s no reason she can’t live a full and healthy life.
>Shining Armor and Cadence will understand.
“Able Copper.”
>”You got that wrong, didn’t you.”
“Probably. Two toned red mane, green body, non-crystal Earth mare. I have to prepare. I need you to find her. Look for somepony with debilitating stomach pain. Once we’ve found her… I don’t know. We’ll have to think of something.”

RapeApe

RapeApe Mon 31 Jul 2023 01:03:45 No.40177558 Report

Quoted By: >>40177563

>>40177554
“From who?”
>”It’s whom, master!”
>She runs out the door.
>You let out a long, shuddering breath.
>You’d just violated so many ethical guidelines and laws.
>But it’s not the first time.
>Hopefully it won’t be the last, either.
“The die is cast. Best make the most of it.”
>You head back to the clinic to prepare the theater.

Later…

>Rarity was gasping desperately for breath.
>She was ill accustomed to pushing herself like this.
>No amount of desperation would make up for the limits she was burdened with, but she was determined to make the absolute most of whatever energy she still had!
>She made her way to the barracks, just like she had last week.
>But instead of trepidation, she found herself overcome by a sense of urgency.
>The instant she entered the building, Rarity found herself surrounded by soldiers.
>She barely paid them any heed.
“Cadence! I need to speak with her immediately!”
>”Ooh! Are you the entertainment tonight? Somepony certainly looks eager. I guess you like it even more than we do!”
>Their guffaws fell upon deaf ears.
“Please! I must speak with the princess! It’s a matter of life or death!”
>”You’re really dying for dick? Well, we can help you!”
>Rarity tried to walk past them.
>She was immediately threatened by a wall of rifles and spears.
>”That’s plenty close enough.”
>Rarity was dumbstruck.
>She wanted to explain the situation.
>She wanted to beg them to lower their weapons.
>She wanted to run, to hide, to scream!
>She did nothing.
>”Princess! Get back! We have an intruder!”
>”It’s okay. I was expecting her. Stand down.”
>Rarity was still struggling to process the situation.
>Her mind was racing, working as fast as it ever had before!
>But no amount of speed can help when-
>They were letting her go?
>What was happening?
>CADENCE!
>Her normal revulsion was totally forgotten, replaced with elation at seeing the slut queen.
“I need your help! It’s bad, it’s bad!”
>Cadence’s expression was split somewhere between smug and sultry.
>”Don’t worry. If you’re that desperate for dick-”
“Somepony is going to die!”
>”Oh. OH! Tell me what’s happening!”
“Somepony refused treatment. Need to find them soon!”
>”Refused treatment? From the doctor? What’s wrong with them?”
“I don’t know! He told me, but I didn’t understand! We’re looking for an Earth mare of Equestrian descent with a two toned red mane and a green coat! He doesn’t know his colors very well, so be mindful that it might be anything from maroon to coral, and her coat might be as far off as chartreuse!”
>”And their name?”
“You know how he is with names!”
>”Alright. Let me get this straight. Somepony who’s description we aren’t sure of with no name has a condition we don’t know is sick… and we’re supposed to find them?”
“Exactly!”
>”Are you sure you’re not just trying to get out of community service?”

RapeApe

RapeApe Mon 31 Jul 2023 01:04:45 No.40177563 Report

Quoted By: >>40177568

>>40177558
”If you’re not going to help then her blood is on your hooves!”
>Rarity turned to leave, determined to search the city on her own.
>Get gait was slow and awkward, betraying her exhausted state.
>”I didn’t say I wouldn’t help. Sergeant. I want you to sweep the city. Start by sending somepony to the clinic, there should be a record of her being there. You can at least get a name.”
>”Of course, your majesty. Is there anything else we should know to narrow down the search?’
“Oh dear. He said so much but I was in quite the tizzy… He mentioned the trains, and how she might leave the city.”
>”Great. That means she’s probably not a resident, plus we know where to start. Anything else?”
“I… I cannot recall.”
>”We’ll find her. If you think of anything else, let us know.”
“Thank you. Mas- the doctor said it was urgent.”
>The military ponies started moving about in a decidedly disorganized manner.
>But that one, the Sergeant seemed to be attempting to instill order.
>He stood at a nearby desk barking orders, and pointing at a scroll of some sort.
>Possibly a map?
“I’d best get looking.”
>”No.”
>Cadence stepped in Rarity’s way.
>”We need you here in case you think of anything else. Any little detail could help. Besides, you’re exhausted. You won’t be getting very far.”
>She was right.
>Rarity could barely move.
>”Is there anywhere I can talk to her in private?”
>”Er… We can make room. There’s classified information in the meeting room, if you give us a while to clear it out-”
>”No, don’t worry about it. We’ll be across the street at the coffee shop.”
“Oh, I do hope it’s better than the one Master goes to.”
>Cadence has a massive smirk on her face.
>Rarity couldn’t figure out why though!
>She had just been talking about coffee after all.
>Perhaps she wasn’t a fan of that one either?
>Cadence led the way, and Rarity awkwardly stumbled after her.
>She was appalled to discover what she was approaching.
>It was so… austere!
>A baby blue windowless establishment with vulgarities painted upon it by vandals!
>The interior was no better.
>An overly worn doormat gave way to cracked tile.
>The harsh lighting did a terrible job of complimenting the overcrowded counterspace.
>At least it seemed clean…
>”Princess!”
>The barista exclaimed.
>A bulky crystal stallion with a hard face.
>”At ease, Lancepesade. We need somewhere private to talk, somewhere without sensitive information.”
>“It’s not really furnished right for you, but I can offer my storage room. There are a few crates you can sit on if you need seats.”
>”Thank you.”
>”Can I get you two anything? On the house.”
>”We would appreciate something, but I insist on paying. Small with sugar.”
“Caramel hazelnut macchiato. Half caffeinated, half decaf.”

RapeApe

RapeApe Mon 31 Jul 2023 01:05:51 No.40177568 Report

Quoted By: >>40177571

>>40177563
“Ma’am, you’re about 10 paces out of a military installation in the toughest part of the most martial pony nation on the planet. This ain’t Manehattan.”
“I had noticed.”
>”Right. Two with sugar coming up.”
“Ugh.”
>”Thank you, Lance.”
>The storage room was well organized, if a bit crowded.
>Everything was neatly arranged on the shelves, with a healthy amount of space between the floor and the first shelf.
>Rarity was pleased to see that it was clean.
>Not just clean, but pristine.
“I suppose he does a good job of cleanliness. At least inside. What did you say his name was again? Lancepesade?”
>”That’s not his name. It was his rank when he retired last year. He’s just Lance.”
“Oh. What was his rank?”
>”Lancepesade. An archaic word for broken lance. It signifies a highly experienced soldier.”
“Why did he retire?”
>”He’d had a really long career. Never sought office from what I can remember. He had every right to retire before the Empire returned, except…”
“Sombra.”
>”He kept soldiering for a few years after I moved into the palace, and only quit because he broke his leg and couldn’t do the job anymore. The poor guy couldn’t pass the physical standards after it healed, and got an honorable discharge.”
“So you mean to tell me…”
>”Broken lance Lance broke?”
>They said it in perfect sync.
>”It was really hard on the guy when he realized he couldn’t serve anymore.”
“I take it he enjoyed being a soldier.”
>”No. Nopony likes being a soldier. It’s a miserable and dangerous job. He was proud of the Empire and wanted it to thrive. We have a very militant history because this land was heavily disputed before it got locked out of time.”
“Yes, I had noticed there are a lot of military types around here. It’s not at all like Equestria.”
>”Equestria has a bigger military presence than you think.”
>Cadence sat on the floor.
>Rarity selected a wooden crate to sit upon.
“There are other crates you know.”
>”I feel more comfortable being lower down.”
“You have a throne.”
>”I know... Tell me what happened. It might help the search.”
“Yes, of course. Master came home and walked straight past me. He didn’t even look at me. He just collapsed on his bed, fully clothed, without a care about what that would do to the fabric. After some… prodding, he revealed that one of his patients was terminal. Apparently it was possible to cure them, but he wasn’t going to do it.”
>”That doesn’t sound like him.”
>There was a knock on the door.
>”Enter.”
>Lance marched in, carrying a tray in his teeth.
>He did an admirable job of keeping it level, but a bit of coffee still sloshed out of the cups carried on it.
>Cadence levitated one cup off the tray, then after a few seconds carried the second one out to Rarity.

RapeApe

RapeApe Mon 31 Jul 2023 01:07:13 No.40177571 Report

Quoted By: >>40177577

>>40177568
“Thank you.”
>He showed himself out without replying.
“Augh. This is terribly bitter.”
>”Yep. Bitter, sweet, and not much else. It could use a little something… but I don’t think his regular clientele would be comfortable.”
“I’m hesitant to ask.”
>”Hazelnut. You really called it with your order.”
“Oh. Knowing you, I thought you were going to say semen.”
>”What? I wouldn’t waste perfectly good cum by putting it in coffee. You have to savor it.”
“Eugh.”
>”This place is really barebones. You can get sugar, but that’s about it.”
“It’s not particularly enjoyable.”
>”It’s not meant to be enjoyed. It’s meant to be drunk in a hurry so you can wake up after way too little sleep and go out for more training. Or to patrol, whatever you’re doing that day.”
>The business as a whole suddenly made perfect sense.
>But without any upselling or add-ons, it would be difficult to afford such an establishment.
>It was rough because of narrow profit margins, no doubt.
>”We’re getting distracted. Why wasn’t he going to cure them? You said they’d refused?”
“Yes.”
>”Did he say why?”
>Rarity had to think about that for a while.
>She didn’t think he had.
>She went over the conversation over and over again in her head-
“He said they didn’t trust him.”
>”That’s a fairly common problem, unfortunately. Most ponies around here do, but there are quite a few holdouts. He’s got a bit of a reputation for disemboweling his patients.”
“I suppose that reputation is technically accurate. But why would they seek his aid if they didn’t trust him?”
>”Pardon?”
“It’s just that, THEY sought HIM out, right? And if he already had such a reputation, surely the notion that he might have to do something like that wouldn’t have been too jarring. What changed?”
>”That’s a very good question! There IS something that might have done it… Do you remember what name he gave you?”
“Able Copper.”
>”Able. Perhaps… Apple?”
>Apple.
>”Applejack has been going around telling everypony who’ll listen that he can’t be trusted. Maybe this pony is an Apple.”
“Why would she do that?”
>”Apparently, she thinks he did something bad to you. Has he?”
>Rarity had to steel her resolve.
>She had made her choice, over and over again.
>She couldn’t keep backing down, she couldn’t keep shying away.
>If she didn’t want this, it meant she wasn’t in control.
>That she was a victim.
>That wasn’t the Rarity way.
“Nothing comes to mind. Though… I am hesitant to do this, but when there’s a bit of time I wish to discuss some relevant matters with you.”
>”When this is over, I’d be happy to. If you’ll excuse me, I’m going to tell them it’s probably an Apple. Maybe they can get started before we actually get the name.”

RapeApe

RapeApe Mon 31 Jul 2023 01:08:23 No.40177577 Report

Quoted By: >>40177583

>>40177571
Later…

>You’d nearly worn through the floor of the clinic from pacing for so long.
>For what must have been the hundredth time, you thought about going out and looking for her yourself.
>But if you went out, and Rarity brought her here, how would you know?
>Maybe if you checked in every half hour or something-
>The door opened.
>And Shining Armor walked in.
>”We need to talk.”
>That didn’t sound good.
>”I’ve been told you chose to let a patient die.”
“I guess I know who Rarity went to for help. You’ve been told a half truth.”
>”Explain yourself. And don’t bring up that confidentiality thing, you’ve already broken it. I COMMAND you as prince to tell me what’s happening!”
>Ooh, he was pissed.
“It’s pretty simple. She refused treatment. I tried to talk her out of it. I made sure to explain that there was no chance she would survive without surgical intervention. She called me a liar, a murderer, and a rapist, then left.”
>”And she was right about all three.”
“I have NEVER-”
>”You were going to LET HER DIE! As far as I’m concerned, you tried to kill her.”
“You have no idea what you’re talking about.”
>He snarls at you for a moment, but collects himself.
>”You know what? You’re right. I should give you a chance. Last time there was a misunderstanding, I split your lip for no reason. You’re an alien, I have to get used to the fact that you think differently than I do. Please. Tell me HOW what you did is even remotely acceptable. I DESPERATELY want it to be okay because I consider you to be my friend, but I just can’t see it.”
“She didn’t want me to help her.”
>”And YOU of all ponies took no for an answer?”
“It’s the law.”
>”Not here it isn’t.”
“Maybe not, but some laws are made with good reason. Patients are the ones who ultimately decide what happens to them. I can advise them, and I can be the one who actually administers the treatment. But they’re the ones who choose their fate.”
>”Even if they choose wrong?”
“It’s not really their choice if they aren’t allowed to make a mistake.”
>”And WHY exactly are we allowing mistakes here? It’s not like they’re going to learn from them.”
>You think you understand the problem.
>He hasn't seen medical horrors.
>A hospital can be a very grim place.

RapeApe

RapeApe Mon 31 Jul 2023 01:09:31 No.40177583 Report

Quoted By: >>40177586

>>40177577
“Medicine is not perfect. It’s risky, painful, and depending on where you live, expensive. There are treatments that are beyond agonizing. Pain the likes of which you cannot understand. Horrors and humiliation that living bodies were never meant to tolerate. Some treatments involve poisoning a patient to the brink of death and then holding them there for months in the hopes that they outlast whatever is making them sick. Because we can keep you alive longer than is natural, we can keep you suffering longer than is natural. If your odds of survival are bad, the treatment is unpleasant, and the cost is high… maybe you don’t think it’s worth it.”
>The anger is slowly fading from his face.
>Replaced with sadness.
>Then a flash of realization.
>A smirk for some reason?
>Then he collects himself.
“There are some hard limits to how much pain you can feel. Your brain won’t be able to process signals past a certain threshold. A good hospital can keep you near that limit for… years. Even if there’s no hope of recovery. Patients have the right to decide when it’s not worth it anymore. My job is to give them all the necessary information, and let them make their own informed decision.”
>”Informed decisions?”
“Yeah.”
>”Well, at least I know what the problem is. You’re not a murderer, and you’re not incompetent. You’re a good man who happens to be retarded.”
“Excuse me?”
>”Imagine spending all that time in school, and still being too stupid to think. You’re not on Earth anymore.”
“I know the laws are a bit different here-”
>”Do you REALLY think Apple Cobbler was able to make an informed decision?”
“I told her what was happening.”
>”Let me guess. You said you were going to eviscerate her because invisible bugs were going to transmute her blood into poison otherwise.”
>Not in so many words.
>”They don’t know enough to make an informed decision. They don’t know because this isn’t Earth, and you’re not treating humans. They haven’t gone through the same schools, they don’t have the same cultural background, and they aren’t used to seeing all this alien machinery. Most of what you say doesn’t make any sense at all to me, I just know it works! All these rules and practices need to be reassessed.”
…
>Shame wasn’t exactly what you were expecting to feel today.
>”Get it through your head. Next time this happens, you are to notify me immediately. You are to give me all relevant information, regardless of your rules about secrecy. You are to proceed exactly as I tell you to. That’s an order.”
“If I start sharing secrets, ponies will be hesitant to tell me the truth.”
>”That’s an order, civilian.”
>At least he didn’t sound angry anymore.
“You’re right, by the way. I do have to rethink all these things. It’s not going to be easy, but I’ll try.”
>”Thank you. I hope you’re almost ready, because we found her.”

RapeApe

RapeApe Mon 31 Jul 2023 01:10:35 No.40177586 Report

Quoted By: >>40177599 >>40202578 >>40238734

>>40177583
“You did? Great! How long do I have?”
>”Not sure. They haven't talked her into coming yet, I'm going to try.”
>So, plenty of time.
>You set to work sanitizing yourself, keeping an eye on the door.
>How hard this is will be entirely dependent on how septic they are.
>With incredible luck, it’ll take ten minutes.
>More realistically-
>There’s really not much point in worrying about it.
>When they finally arrive, you’re pretty surprised to see her.
>She’s forced in at spearpoint, marching in manacles.
>You think you can see light bruises around her face too.
>They had not persuaded her to come here.
>Not with words at least.
>”Please! Please, I’m begging you, I don’t want to die!”
“You’re not going to.”
>”PLEASE don’t eat me!”
“Nobody’s eating you. You’re going to live a long and healthy life. You’ll feel way better.”
>There’s no way you’ll be able to sedate her normally.
>Not if she’s this scared.
>You’ll inject some midazolam instead.
>She starts crying and thrashing against her bonds as you approach.
>The screams of terror threaten to rupture your eardrums as you produce the needle.
>The soldiers pile on her to hold her still as you sink it into her neck.
>Her thrashing starts to weaken shortly after you withdraw the needle.
>An uncomfortably long period passes before her crying stops.
>And shortly after, she falls limp.
>You’re pretty shaken by the ordeal.
>This poor pony just went through terror that you understand all too well.
>When Chrysalis made you deepthroat her rifle, well, it was just lucky you didn’t have to pee at the time.
“You’re going to be okay. Don’t worry.”
>The soldiers who brought her in look a bit shaken too.
“Did the prince send you?”
>”He did. We’re to stay here until relieved.”
“Well, you’re relieved. Thank you.”
>”You don’t have the authority to do that, doctor.”
>Oh.
>Now you feel silly.
>They help you move her onto the operating table, so perhaps it was for the best that they stayed.
>After sanitizing yet again, you set to work.
>She’s not properly sedated, and the addition of midazolam contraindicates the inhalants you usually use.
>You’ll hook her up to an IV.
>Etomidate and Lidocaine should be good for induction, but not maintenance.
>You either need to commit to finishing up fast before they wear off, or use something else.
>Without being sure how bad it is…
>You can’t risk it.
>They’re probably the right choice, but if there are complications it could be a disaster.
>Ketamine has more side effects, but you can keep her sedated for a lot longer without causing irreparable harm.
>It’s time.
>Finding the affected site is trivial.
>The telltale bulge on her abdomen is as good as a painted target.
>You apply the disinfectant and begin.
>You start with a small puncture, in the hope that this can be resolved with endoscopy.
>But when pus starts seeping out you know it’s not happening.

RapeApe

RapeApe Mon 31 Jul 2023 01:17:08 No.40177599 Report

Quoted By: >>40177607

>>40177586
>You widen the incision to about two centimeters, and use a saline wash to remove some of the waste.
>It was as you’d expected, namely pretty bad.
>Mercifully.
>It could have been worse.
>Direct removal would spread the infection and cause severe bleeding.
>So you start by clamping her intestines.
>You stick an empty syringe in the portioned off segment and apply suction to remove anything inside.
>You’re pleased to see them start to shrivel up.
>With the internal fluids removed, they are reduced to a relatively small lump of flesh.
>You can safely remove that without needing to expand the wound further.
>You discard the extracted tissue, then gently pull at the remaining clamps to bring the healthy intestine through the hernia in the abdominal wall.
>A brief inspection tells you that you’ll have to make a correction and remove a bit more tissue from each side.
>Repeating the process is a bit harder, since you’re now dealing with loose ends that are eager to flop around.
>If you had a surgical assistant-
>You’re not on Earth.
>This isn’t a proper hospital.
>You’ll make do.
>The imprecision of your setup makes you damage slightly more tissue than would have been strictly necessary, but you get it done.
>You slide a bioavailable tube into one end of the intestine and meticulously stitch it in place.
>It has to be water-tight, so you’re forced to take your time.
>You have to stop several times to manage your own sweat.
>But once it’s in place, you’re in the home stretch.
>Pulling the other end over the same tube, you start the process over again.
>The tube and stitching will dissolve over a few months.
>By then, the intestines will have healed together.
>You remove the clamps and carefully slip her intestines back into her body.
>Almost done.
>Except…
>She’s going to re-herniate more likely than not.
>You’d prepared for that, of course.

RapeApe

RapeApe Mon 31 Jul 2023 01:19:23 No.40177607 Report

Quoted By: >>40177912 >>40178016 >>40184879 >>40221769

>>40177599
>A polyvinylidene fluoride mesh had already been selected.
>It won’t degrade naturally, which is exactly the point.
>Cell migration is known to be good on this material, so there’s a very good chance that the hernia will resolve naturally on this matrix.
>But in case it fails, there will be a backup.
>The stitching will inevitably dissolve, but local fibrosis will have secured it in place long before then.
>The poor girl has had a very bad day.
>It’s time to close her up.
>A small part of you can’t help but wonder if you’ll ever truly get used to working in these conditions.
>You would have thought that as long as you’ve been here, you’d have adapted.
>But some part of you still expects there to be a support network.
>You can feel in the back of your mind that you’re still expecting backup to arrive if your patient crashes.
>Even though you know help isn’t coming…
>You discard the thoughts and focus on properly closing the incision.
>But even with that concern forced from your mind, doubt is clawing at you.
>She would live.
>But you had done something unforgivable.

Okay, the next part is actually almost done. Give me... two days or so. I normally don't write ahead since I want feedback and direction, but the thread was dead and I was actually prodooooocing for once so I just kept going.

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 31 Jul 2023 03:17:51 No.40177912 Report

Quoted By: >>40178372 >>40180154

>>40177607
that was a nice bit of story we got here again, well done. although I have to say I feel a bit conflicted on the forced procedure to the poor pony.
cadence's guards and soldiers also seem to be way under fucked the way they welcomed our marshmallowpony. perhaps she should be send back again someday to repay the debt to them. how about a portal spell with her mouth, pussy and ass made available to them in what would be flashlights?

>>40177356
ok, do you have any pony in mind then, or should we stick with mayor mare for now? I only thought of her as a sub for the princesses because
>the princesses wouldn't really have to go only for lower ponies. they are influential enough to get ponies of way higher standing without a herd to join them as concubines
>mayor mare would be way more inclined to attempt to keep that fact about her life hidden from the public if she wants to stay in that position of power. I would particularly see Luna as the kind of may, attempting to play with the mayor's situation just like she knew it from 1000 years ago, unless we are still in the "Luna is a latexnun" universe that is

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 31 Jul 2023 03:57:34 No.40178016 Report

Quoted By: >>40178155 >>40178312 >>40180154

>>40177607
> feedback and direction
Well anon will probably be too spent after this to want to do anything sexual to Rarity for a bit, but Rarity could take the opportunity to take Anon on a date to help clear his head, and to help him open up to her more.
Or have Rarity start talking with Cadence and ask advices on how she could show more dedication to her role as Anon's slave. More slave accessories to wear? Special sex training ?
Or it could be both of those happening, because it really looks like you want to go in this direction.

Not sure what Coco could do at this stage though because her employer will be a bit busy.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Mon 31 Jul 2023 05:02:57 No.40178155 Report

Quoted By: >>40178312 >>40180154

>>40178016
Wait, maybe Rarity could convince Coco of her half aroused idea if she brought the princess over.
Or at least make her more willing to try it.

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 31 Jul 2023 06:19:27 No.40178312 Report

Quoted By: >>40178372 >>40180154

>>40178016
>>40178155
why not have rarity be a bit on her own for a while while anon recharges his battery. and if she feels generous enough, she could indeed try to improve some of her slaveskills

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 31 Jul 2023 06:53:26 No.40178372 Report

Quoted By: >>40179627 >>40180154

>>40177912
>do you have any pony in mind then:

Sweetie Belle having this role forced onto her as a second daughter, whose parents believe she will have a better future taking care of the needs of her older sister, who has better chances of snagging a wealthy stallion.

Octavia being coerced into this role because the mare she's serving under is threatening to show everyone evidences of the grey mare trying to seduce her husband, which would kill any social standing Octavia has and make everyone not want to associate with her.
Could be someone who would play with the cellist's pride, and let her try to hide her new status from others.

>latexnun
Maybe this could be a reason for nuns to exist ? A very last alternative for mares who got completely ostracized from the dating scene ?
God this whole no herds thing is almost sounding like something one of the alicorn sisters would do as an amusing prank.

>>40178312
>rarity be a bit on her own
She does have Coco and that sex toy seller to talk to, or Cadence. Or maybe even Twilight if she recuperates that soon from her surgery.
Improve her future sex shop, try to convince Coco a little better, ask Cadence for help on her slave devotion.

At Mon 31 Jul 2023 09:44:52 No.40178594 Report

Quoted By: >>40179627 >>40180154

Well I'm glad to see this thread back and with an update of the Carat and the stick too.

Like always a good chapter focused on the Doctor and his moral dilemma.

Applejack is badmouthing the doctor. Now that could be a future Trouble for Cadence and her plans.

If you want suggestion of what to do next; why not have Rarity and Cadence finally talk about her kidnapping and why she was choose for the doctor.

Or show how Rarity and Coco deal with their business and little a little this is changing the view of Coco on the matter.

ManicQuil

ManicQuil Mon 31 Jul 2023 13:21:40 No.40178920 Report

Quoted By:

Hey it's back

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 31 Jul 2023 17:38:13 No.40179627 Report

Quoted By: >>40180894 >>40180979

>>40178372
>Sweetie Belle
possible, predictable but still prime material if we think of rarity again as more of a bossy bitch of a horse. although this time, instead of just abusing her little sister, she could be slightly more supportive of her little sister while still making sure she serves HER needs, and not sweeties own.

>God this whole no herds thing is almost sounding like something one of the alicorn sisters would do as an amusing prank.
something along the lines of scam run by the sisters themselfes, tricking desperate mares into eternal slave- and virginhood?

>>40178594
>Or show how Rarity and Coco deal with their business and little a little this is changing the view of Coco on the matter.
this has my support!

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 31 Jul 2023 17:40:31 No.40179633 Report

Quoted By: >>40180214

>>40176367
>No ponepaste
I searched for Keeper in the archive and it was there https://ponepaste.org/9057

RapeApe

RapeApe Mon 31 Jul 2023 20:31:50 No.40180154 Report

Quoted By: >>40180213 >>40182574

>>40177912
You're meant to feel conflicted about Apple Cobbler. Anon certainly does!
As for the militia, Rarity is supposed to suck them off every week as part of her legally mandated punishment for wrecking the hospital. It's been a really long time since I wrote that, much to my chagrin, but in fiction she was scheduled to do that again today. It got interrupted by the marehunt.
>>40178016
I expect you're right about Anon. This incident will weigh heavily on him for a while, so it's up to Rarity to pick up the slack. Thankfully, she's ready.
>>40178594
I had actually already written a scene about Cadence and Rarity talking it over, but I didn't have her specifically explain why she kidnapped Rarity. In retrospect, it's weird that that wouldn't come up. I'll try to add that in before posting, thanks!
As for the business, I expect it to be inherently lewd. There should be plenty of opportunities to work on Coco if she's stuck in that environment all the time.
>>40178312
Unless people object, Anon is probably going to take a hands off approach to mare breaking for a while and Rarity will be taking the lead. It's largely because I find the idea of mares training each other for their master's benefit to be extremely hot, but also partially because the plot I've built around him doesn't leave sufficient free time anymore. He was already overworked when he was taming Rarity, now there's a geopolitical situation developing around him.
>>40178155
Cadence will definitely be used as a tool for mare breaking. She's useful, of course, but it also ties into the plot nicely. Besides, it's something she'd want to do.
>>40178372
Twilight's recovery will be a long and drawn out process. She's going to need years to regain her strength. However, she should be healthy enough for minor lewdness within a week or so in fiction.

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 31 Jul 2023 20:44:52 No.40180213 Report

Quoted By: >>40184916

>>40180154
>Rarity will be taking the lead. It's largely because I find the idea of mares training each other for their master's benefit to be extremely hot
I wouldnt object to that. Would she also have first person thoughts in part of the story like anon does ?

Keeper

Keeper Mon 31 Jul 2023 20:45:03 No.40180214 Report

Quoted By: >>40180300

>>40179633

Thanks for the heads up, I had no idea I was on ponepaste.

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 31 Jul 2023 21:18:54 No.40180300 Report

Quoted By:

>>40180214
>I had no idea I was on ponepaste
youre not alone lol. i dont think anyone really reads from the archive. just here as they get posted, so its easy to forget it even exists.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 01 Aug 2023 00:27:09 No.40180894 Report

Quoted By: >>40181280

>>40179627
>rarity again as more of a bossy bitch of a horse.
Like maybe in the start of this fic, where she starts ordering Sweetie to make breakfast for her ?
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/418588/breaking-the-belle
She does get more more abusive later on, but I always thought the start had a great introduction to a firm, demanding but not abusive Rarity.

>she could be slightly more supportive of her little sister while still making sure she serves HER needs, and not sweeties own.
There was an idea of an orgasm blocking spell I saw win a cuckquean Cadence fic. Basically she couldnt have her orgasm before the other mare had hers, no matter how much she tried.

Actually that one could fit in great for a general story of a slave that has to support the couple that owns her.

>tricking desperate mares into eternal slave- and virginhood?
How do you think lesbians should fit into this scenario ?
I thought of mares joining the nun virginhood as a last alternative, but this option is still standing in the way. Unless it came with its own huge drawbacks as well besides the mare not being into mares.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 01 Aug 2023 01:10:39 No.40180979 Report

Quoted By: >>40181280 >>40216993

>>40179627
Doesnt have to be just Sweetie Belle.
Like I said this could be something common for second daughters, so Applebloom could also be forced into the same role.

Both of them being ordered around and shared between the bigger sisters.
https://derpibooru.org/images/1305310

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 01 Aug 2023 03:11:00 No.40181280 Report

Quoted By: >>40181684 >>40182366 >>40216993

>>40180894
>younger siblings are usually the ones serving their older ones
>lack of cutiemarks confirm this position
that would make alot of sense for these too late bloomers. I'ld imagine rarity and Applejack talking about them as if their were broken property that needs to be repaired while they eat them out as in >>40180979 to further drive the message into their minds.

since you mentioned cuckqueen cadence, what if the role of concubine could be assigned later as well? what if cadence were divorced, but allowed to stay in the harem as concubine?

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 01 Aug 2023 06:40:19 No.40181681 Report

Quoted By:

>>4>0181280
>that would make alot of sense for these too late bloomers
Going for the lack of maturity approach ? That does make more sense for this role to be shameful, especially for a grown mare who had to be coopted into this role to actually get a stallion, or at least have any interactions with one .

>what if the role of concubine could be assigned later as well?
For the ex wife/marefriend ? I could see that happening, but with a very controlling and possibly humiliating role imposed on her by the new wife. She would probably see her being under her watch and controlled as a safer bet than being free and trying another future shot at her husband.

>what if cadence were divorced, but allowed to stay in the harem as concubine?
All of this concubine, relationship talk is really something related to her are, so perhaps she should have something to do with these practices spreading all over Equestria.

Maybe this is the alternative Equestria where a cuckqueen Cadence saw this twisted concept of relationships as the ideal one to spread around ? And it kinda worked with the overpopulation of mares ?

Still wouldnt explain why no-herds is a thing, though.
Maybe in her twisted and horny mind, she sees the positions of wife and concubine offering different types of love, and believes those two types should coexist inistead of merging into one, hence the only 1 wife and plenty of concubines rule.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 01 Aug 2023 06:42:05 No.40181684 Report

Quoted By:

>>40181280
>that would make alot of sense for these too late bloomers
Going for the lack of maturity approach ? That does make more sense for this role to be shameful, especially for a grown mare who had to be coopted into this role to actually get a stallion, or at least have any interactions with one .

>what if the role of concubine could be assigned later as well?
For the ex wife/marefriend ? I could see that happening, but with a very controlling and possibly humiliating role imposed on her by the new wife. She would probably see her being under her watch and controlled as a safer bet than being free and trying another future shot at her husband.

>what if cadence were divorced, but allowed to stay in the harem as concubine?
All of this concubine, relationship talk is really something related to her are, so perhaps she should have something to do with these practices spreading all over Equestria.

Maybe this is the alternative Equestria where a cuckqueen Cadence saw this twisted concept of relationships as the ideal one to spread around ? And it kinda worked with the overpopulation of mares ?

Still wouldnt explain why no-herds is a thing, though.
Maybe in her twisted and horny mind, she sees the positions of wife and concubine offering different types of love, and believes those two types should coexist inistead of merging into one, hence the only 1 wife and plenty of concubines rule.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 01 Aug 2023 14:36:20 No.40182366 Report

Quoted By: >>40182477 >>40182825

>>40181280
I mean Cadence is an alicorn so I don’t know how that would work.
But also as a male you could take advantage of your power in the sexual hierarchy, to slowly train a mare to be more and more submissive.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 01 Aug 2023 15:41:32 No.40182477 Report

Quoted By: >>40182550

>>40182366
but turning her into a sub to another, supposedly lower class mare is what makes it even hotter. the the changing powerdynamic that would suit a story like this. imagine
>candy agrees to open her relationship with shinign to a herdsyle (heh) one after flurry is born
>shining wastes no time attracting new possible mates, and settles on the first, a former schoolmate of cadence
>little did shining know that said schoolmate also used to be a bully which wastes no time in achieving control over the herd, und leadership over the princess
>attempts in fighting the new mares advances are stomped when she manages to link shining up to another friend of hers who then team up on the princess
somethingsomething, she is made to watch her friends get pouned by shining and made to clean them and their bedroom, but not allowed to sleep on the same bed with them anymore.
the other mares also turn flurry into a real bitch of a princess to her mother over the coming years

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 01 Aug 2023 16:30:51 No.40182550 Report

Quoted By:

>>40182477
>I do like bitch fluffy though she needs to be tamed, by Anon.

>one day she wakes up to a painful shock with her mother standing over. She tells flurry to find a master, to own her for the next week, but if it is not someone who Cadence approves of or she doesn’t find one or gets tamed, then she will be a slave for at least a year.
>enter Anon the alicorn catcher.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 01 Aug 2023 16:46:57 No.40182574 Report

Quoted By: >>40184916

>>40180154
Rarity, needs to help her master break bitches.
I really liked Cadences smile when rarity called Anon master and how she didn’t recognize why Cadence was smiling.
Also when is Flurry heart going to be introduced if you don’t mind me asking.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 01 Aug 2023 18:56:40 No.40182825 Report

Quoted By: >>40183622 >>40183687

>>40182366
>male you could take advantage of your power in the sexual hierarchy
I dont know how powerful males should be in this type of scenario.

The thing Im trying to go for here is not the generic harem scenario with the husband owning the concubines together with his wife, but the wife being the sole owner and controller of them.

Its what would give her power in the relationship since shes the one that can offer him a new mare every night. And even if she wasnt with any stallion, just having a good amount of attractive mares under her ownership would already give her a huge leverage in the dating scene.

In a bigger picture it would be the stallions picking which harem owner hes most interested in. And in the very rare cases pick a single mare who didnt give to the peer pressure of becoming a concubine to have a better chance at the dating scene.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 02 Aug 2023 00:48:49 No.40183622 Report

Quoted By:

>>40176709
>>40177356
>>40182825

Well, any opinions or suggestions on this half baked reverse harem idea ?

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 02 Aug 2023 01:13:13 No.40183687 Report

Quoted By: >>40184273

>>40176709
>>40177356
>>40182825

Well, any opinions or suggestions on this half baked reverse harem idea of mine ?

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 02 Aug 2023 05:30:17 No.40184273 Report

Quoted By: >>40184437 >>40184443

>>40183687
obviously I like it, but I would still want to set up a bit of a darker, harder theme to it. cuckqueen and being at the bottom of a small harem is one thing, but I feel like it needs more.
what about the world around it? how is this concubine thing seen as? is it a new or old thing? is there some sort of codex or rulebook they have the to obey to?
how about training institutions, Dresscodes or "mark of the beast"?

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 02 Aug 2023 06:52:26 No.40184437 Report

Quoted By: >>40187544

>>40184273
>still want to set up a bit of a darker, harder theme to it.
Me too.

>how is this concubine thing seen as?
As a develop social norm among mares. So much that pratices like having your second daughter serve the first became a normal thing to improve the chances of the older daughter in finding a stallion.
Doesnt mean its not seen as a shamefull degrading position though, specially for mares who had the means of getting a stallion of their own before losing it and having to subject themselves into this "compromise"

>is it a new or old thing?
The idea is that the overpopulation of mares was the main driving force behind it, so it would be at the very least a generation old practice. And maybe it also had a push from the alicorn princesses

>is there some sort of codex or rulebook they have the to obey to?
There would be some basic things that every mare would understand not to break in this social arrangement, like for example:
-Not trying to steal somepony's husband, that one would put a mare on the blacklist if she ever failed and got discovered.
-Having to suck up the mistress of the harem to be in her good graces
-No dating or sexual interactions outside the harem without the mistress's permission, since after all they are exclusively under her and she wouldnt want to lose what she has to offer to a stallion.
Any more rules could be specific to how the mistress of each harem wants to control and keep her girls in check. That idea of lower and upper positions in the harem like you mentioned could be in here.

But this part would work best if we thought up the motives hetero mares want to go through with this.
I can see for example:
- Wanting to be with a stallion of her dreams
- Wanting children
- Wanting to settle with a decent stallion but they are all taken by these harem owners
- Wanting to deal with heat issues
- Parents wanting to have grandchildren but they only have daughters.

>what about the world around it?
Im not sure how much this could affect the world around besides changing how courting procedures work between ponies.
Marriage institutions would definitely have to be strong for this to work.
There would definitely be a lot of influence play, with mistresses making connections with
other harem owners, and mares trying to make friends with the good ones so they get into a harem with a better deal.
Negotiated transfers of concubines between harems could be a thing.
A stallion could have negotiations with his future wife to have her recommend his single sister to a good harem.

One side note, I really want suggestions on how lesbians would have it in this universe. Would they just have none of this rat race between themselves since they dont have this scarcity issue ? Or should some of that selfish culture from their hetero counter parts spread into the way they do relationships ?

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Anonymous Wed 02 Aug 2023 06:55:15 No.40184443 Report

Quoted By: >>40187544

>>40184273
>how about training institutions
I thought of those harem transfers working as some sort of training program. But it would be more of an informal arrangement between mistresses that trust each other, after all this is a selfish system at heart so only friends help each other in this.

>Dresscodes or "mark of the beast"
Dresscodes to not ruin the assets most of the time, but things can change depending on the owner, and how much she wants to punish some poor mare under her harem. The owners would definitely want something visible to make it clear who they belong to, after all she wants to advertise what she has to offer.

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RapeApe Wed 02 Aug 2023 12:13:19 No.40184879 Report

Quoted By: >>40184880 >>40243005

>>40177607
>The patient looked to be in relatively good condition.
>There was an infection as expected, but the nydus was gone with minimal complications.
>Breathing and pulse are steady.
>Blood analysis suggests the kidneys and liver haven’t been significantly damaged by the ordeal.
>Potassium is a bit low, but that’s probably unrelated.
>You’re sitting by her bed and writing in her file when you hear something.
>Crying.
>That’s not a good sign.
“You’re okay.”
>”Please don’t eat me.”
“I do not intend to.”
>”You can’t fool me. You’re keeping me alive so I stay fresh.”
>Wow.
>That was a new one.
>”Please… I’ll give you anything you want.”
“You will? Great. I want you to get better. Can you do that for me?”
>She chokes back a sob.
>She’s beyond terrified.
>And you can’t blame her.
>Maybe it would be best if somepony else talked to her.
“I’ll give you some space to collect your thoughts. But rest assured, you’re going to be fine.”
>It feels wrong to leave her like this.
>Proper bedside manner would have you try to comfort the patient.
>But how could you?
>It’s YOU that she’s scared of.
>And you really can’t blame her.
>You see Shining Armor standing nearby as soon as you step out.
“She’s awake.”
>”Great. What are her odds?”
“Better than Twilight’s were, that’s for sure. Still not great. It’s really badly infected… if only we’d caught it a day or two sooner-”
>”Her odds, Anon.”
“Right. Sorry. Major localized infection, no significant organ damage… I’m guessing here so don’t take it too seriously, but somewhere in the region of a tenth of a percent?”
>”By the STARS!”
“I know. It’s not good.”
>”One in a thousand to survive…”
>What?
“Oh, you’ve got it backwards.”
>He looks confused, but only for a moment.
>”I thought you said they weren’t great. One in a thousand is pretty good.”
“Would you be comfortable taking that chance?”
>”Hm. I see your point.”
“Could you maybe go talk to her? She’s freaking out, and I don’t think she wants to see me.”
>”That would be a very bad idea.”
“Why”
>”Who do you think subdued her when she ran?”
“Oooooh. But wait, if you knew she was resistant why were you so upset with me? Like, what was I supposed to do?”
>”I’ll arrange for somepony else to have a word with her.”
>You can’t help but notice he didn’t answer the second question.
>You take that to mean he doesn’t have an answer.
>”What a clusterfuck this all was. I’m going to have to explain to Celestia why I detained one of her citizens, and ordered you to eviscerate her.”
“Wow. Compared to you and the patient, I have it real easy. Look, Shining, I’m sorry.”
>”Don’t be. How much training did you say you had again?”

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RapeApe Wed 02 Aug 2023 12:14:31 No.40184880 Report

Quoted By: >>40184882

>>40184879
“Four years undergrad, four years med school, six in residency. Then of course there were seminars and summits, but I’m not really sure how much time I spent on those.”
>”Over fourteen years of training specifically for this job. You did exactly what you were trained to do. What was drilled into your head for over a decade. I can’t blame you for that.”
“You don’t? You sounded angry last time I saw you.”
>”Can you blame me for being upset? I was dragged into a city wide mare hunt, and when we found her I had to beat her up while she was begging for her life! I probably caused an international incident over this.”
“Didn’t the beating happen after we talked?”
>”Not helping.”
“Sorry. Was it worth it?”
>”If it works, yes.”
>There was no hesitation in his voice at all.
>Did he fail to realize how much trouble this could cause in the future?
>No, that wasn’t it.
>He was pretty sharp.
>Was it worth asking?
>He might be keeping it secret for a reason.
>”It’s no secret that I’m trying to expand the Empire’s medical services, and this is how I do it.”
>Oh.
>Apparently he wasn’t keeping it secret.
>”The senate is dragging its hooves about approving funding, I need something to give them a kick start.”
“Hold on a second. You have a senate?”
>”Yeah?”
“So you don’t have total control?”
>”Didn’t you have to pass a test before leaving Earth?”
“Yes! It was about Equestria though. And I was never really planning on coming up here.”
>”The Empire is politically different from Equestria. These ponies have had to deal with succession, and bad rulers. Officially they’re an advisory council until Cadence and I abdicate, then they’ll appoint a new ruler. I would expect them to pick Flurry, but they’re not obligated to.”
“OFFICIALLY an advisory council.”
>”Ignoring them would be a bad idea. Ponies would think me a tyrant.”
“Lemme guess. The last guy who did it was Sombrero, and if you do the same thing they’ll decide you’re like him, then somepony influential would leverage the public outcry into forcing you out and putting themselves in?”
>”No, actually. But good guess. Sombra actually had full support of his senate.”
“He- oh.”
>HIS senate.
>”I wish I could say the same about myself! Unfortunately, even the prince needs the approval of the rich and powerful. None of them could lay a hoof on me on their own. But if I start making enemies, my life will get very difficult.”
>Cadence had talked about how she couldn’t do what she wanted because of the opinions of others.
>Maybe this is what she was talking about?
>”Thanks to this mess, I can argue that this clinic is not serving as we need it to.”
“I’m willing to change if you-”
>”Shut up, don’t let them hear that! I order you to do what we want, putting you directly under the crown’s control. Then I say we need to maintain that control if we want you to keep saving lives.”

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RapeApe Wed 02 Aug 2023 12:15:32 No.40184882 Report

Quoted By: >>40184886

>>40184880
“Seems like a weak argument.”
>”Is it?”
“You don’t need to absorb my practice into the machinery of the state to make me follow your rules. Won’t they see that?”
>”I’m counting on it. Don’t worry, it’s part of the plan. There’s a lot that can go wrong, and this isn’t exactly the opportunity I was hoping for. I’m not sure how Celestia will react. She’ll probably be upset, but if I can convince her we saved Apple Cobbler’s life she’ll probably go easy on me. Luna though… she’s scary.”
“And you’re sure this is worth it? I mean, what you did was a pretty big deal. It probably won’t be that popular with the public.”
>”I saved a life, and gave myself a lot of leverage.”
>There was still something he wasn’t telling you.
>If he was afraid of being called a tyrant, he’d care more about his public image.
>Subduing an innocent visitor wasn’t particularly conducive to that.
>You gesture for him to continue, before remembering that hand gestures probably didn’t mean much.
“What’s your endgame?”
>”Isn’t it obvious?”
“It really isn’t.”
>He sighs, casting a pensive look at you.
>Something about that question was troubling him.
>Not in a moral way, rather he was finding it difficult to elucidate his goals.
>Perhaps his desires were nebulous, and he himself wasn’t certain what he was aiming for.
>Or perhaps he wasn’t sure how best to explain the situation to an outsider.
>Maybe he was carefully constructing his answer so as not to spoil any of his machinations.
>You had no way of being certain.
>”Have you ever wondered why I’m the prince of the Empire?”
“It’s because you married the princess.”
>”Correct. And have you ever wondered why Cadence is the princess of the Crystal ponies?”
“No.”
>”Well, others have.”
>Great.
>Even more stress for the guy.
>And for you…
>”I’d better get moving. I’ll send Cadence to speak with Apple Cobbler. See you later.”
>He turns to leave, but you put your hand on his back to stop him.
“Do you think we did the right thing? Morally, I mean.”
>He steps away quickly.
>And though you’re not exactly certain, you’re pretty sure you heard him mutter.
>”I hope so.”

Even later than that…

>Rarity was DESPERATE to leave.
>Lance had yet to say anything, and Rarity got the impression that he wasn’t going to.
>But she knew that he didn’t want her there.
>Having a stranger in the back of your shop would doubtlessly be a burden upon one’s mind.
>Yet she had not been released.
>And apparently, she was only welcome in the base if she was going to suck on things.
>Cadence had returned again and discussed the matter from every angle.
>Eventually, a courier came to tell her the pony in question had been found.
>Apple Cobbler.
>Shining Armor himself had been sent to speak with her.

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RapeApe Wed 02 Aug 2023 12:16:36 No.40184886 Report

Quoted By: >>40184891

>>40184882
>Shining Armor himself had been sent to speak with her.
>With the prince vouching for Master, surely she would see reason.
>Now all that was left to do was wait and see.
>But mostly wait.
>There were a thousand and one things she would rather be doing than sit alone in a storage room wherein she was not welcome!
>She could be preparing the store, practicing anal, designing clothing, spending time with her friends, practicing oral, seeing the city-
>She was so bored she was looking forward to community service!
>After multiple hours, Cadence at last returned with a big grin on her face.
>”Looks like she’s okay.”
“Excellent. When is the procedure being done?”
>”It’s already done. We’re going to have some… problems. In the future. But she’s alive, and awake.”
“How did the Prince convince her to accept aid?”
>”That’s just the thing… he kinda… didn’t.”
“Oh. She changed her mind of her own volition then?”
>”She fought for her life every step of the way, and is terrified that he’s going to eat her.”
>Oh dear.
“So wait, how did they get her to the clinic?”
>”Violence.”
“My STARS! I seem to have missed quite a bit!”
>”And it turns out that there’s a whole heap of laws on Earth saying the Doctor wasn’t allowed to pressure her into doing anything.”
“Really? But why?”
>”I don’t know yet, I haven’t had a chance to look into why. But taking a quick glance at the what, I’m not even sure asking you to talk to her was legal, never mind what we did. The doctor really bent the rules hard to help her. She has no idea how lucky she is.”
“I do hope this doesn’t happen often. It’s really quite hard on the doctor.”
>”You should really be calling him Master. You know, like you did earlier today.”
>Rarity felt like she’d been plunged into ice water.
>Cadence just stood there, gloating for a while.
>It took Rarity longer than she cared to admit to regain her composure.
“Perhaps you misheard me. But… Apple Cobbler, you said? It sounds like she’ll be alright.”
>”Yep. I hope she eventually calms down. Poor Shiney is really uncomfortable with what we did today, and he’ll be worrying about it until she’s gone. And probably for a while after that too.”
“You don’t seem too shaken.”
>”A bunch of stallions forcing a mare to do something for her own good? Seems pretty healthy to me.”
“You really are a firm believer, aren’t you? What if it were you?”
>”I wouldn’t have left.”
“Even if you thought he was going to kill you?”
>She sits down on the floor again.
>”Well, that’s different. There is such a thing as a bad stallion. What she did makes sense, but I don’t mind that she was forced to take her medicine.”

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RapeApe Wed 02 Aug 2023 12:17:57 No.40184891 Report

Quoted By: >>40184894

>>40184886
>She looked Rarity straight in the eye.
>”Sometimes, to help somepony, you have to hurt them first. If they don’t know what’s best for them, they might fight you. They might hate you. And it might take months for them to come around and finally figure out that they’re better off than they were before.”
“You’re asking for forgiveness.”
>Rarity was NOT a victim.
>Rarity was strong, bold, and in control!
>She chose her own destiny!
>She CHOSE this life.
>And if she kept telling herself that, she might eventually believe it!
“I’m afraid you’ll have to wrong me before I’m able to forgive you.”
>Cadence nearly knocked her over with her hug.
>”Thank you! Oh, it was killing me knowing that you hated me. I really like you, Rarity. And for a while, I was worried it wasn’t going to work out. It was taking forever for you to come around, and I knew the doctor was a risky choice. I thought you’d hate me forever, and I’d missed my only chance to make you happy.”
“Ah, yes. Of course. The doctor was the risky choice, not the abduction.”
>”Well, he’s not conventionally handsome. You know, being an alien and all. But you had such unreasonable standards, I couldn’t find anypony else!”
“My standards are EXACTING, not unreasonable.”
>”Rarity? I’m telling you this as a friend. They’re unreasonable.”
“And why should I settle for less?”
>”Because there is not a SINGLE stallion on the PLANET who has everything you want. Trust me.”
“Well. Maybe they should try harder.”
>”Or? Maybe we should support them more.”
“Bah. It’s irrelevant to the matter at hoof. I thought you’d done this because you were a whore. Do you mean to suggest this was some kind of insane matchmaking?”
>”Can’t it be both?”
“I do envy your… confidence when pursuing your perversions. Though I must say your methods leave something to be desired.”
>”What do you mean?”
“There’s a great deal of room for improvement.”
>”Such as?”
“Well, perhaps instead of abducting me you could have introduced us.”
>Cadence laughed.
>There was not a trace of insincerity in her laughter, nor any malice.
>It was simply the mirth that came from encountering the absurd.
“I’m quite serious, and you have a problem if you believe the contrary!”
>”No, Rarity. You’re the one who has a problem!”
“I beg your pardon?”
>”You STILL don’t understand what makes you happy, do you?”
“There are many simple joys in life that I find quite appealing.”
>”That’s not what I’m talking about, and you know it. I’d bet you’re still trying to convince yourself that your master is your ticket to high society or something.”
“No, I’m afraid he isn't. For all his virtues he’s nowhere near refined enough. I’ll have to make it by my own means.”

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RapeApe Wed 02 Aug 2023 12:19:02 No.40184894 Report

Quoted By: >>40184897

>>40184891
>”You’ll never be satisfied with climbing the social ladder. Trust me, I’m at the top and it’s miserable. You’ll be MUCH happier when you finally accept that mares belong at the bottom. And while it might not have been the best solution, what I did made sure you got there.”
“I BEG your PARDON! Do you mean to imply that the cruder sex is in some way my better?”
>”Better is the wrong word. A leader needs followers as much as followers need a leader.”
“Yes, well, perhaps if you were a tad less depraved you’d understand that’s not natural. Go touch yourself for a few hundred hours until your head clears, and then think it over.”
>Her sigh was very telling.
>It was clear that she’d had this discussion before.
>”What is the essence of a romance story?”
“I suppose there’s passion, drama, intrigue-”
>”You’re overcomplicating it. The core of it is that an extremely high quality male shacks up with a female of lower social standing. A prince falls in love with a peasant who dressed up nice and searches his kingdom for them because they accidentally left a horseshoe. Abused orphan gets employment with a rich man and shacks up with him when he becomes widowed. The daughter of landed gentry is going to wind up destitute because they won’t inherit anything from their father, but they manage to seduce somepony much richer than him. Rebellious rich bitch tries to avoid being stuck with a stallion, and marries somepony slated to be executed. Turns out he’s related to nobility, and using his wits and physique he proves himself better than her and lives somehow. I really didn’t like that one. Rich businesspony rapes his employee until she likes it.”
“You’re conveniently ignoring the exceptions. Lowborn laborer is forced away from his flame, but manages to reconnect years later after writing her hundreds of letters.”
>”AND becoming a plantation owner. That one actually proves my point! They had to split up because she outranked him. Wouldn’t it have been better if it worked the first try?”
“Two youths from feuding families elope and due to a misunderstanding kill themselves out of heartbreak.”
>”Feuding ARISTOCRATIC families. She didn’t run for a serf. Besides, that’s a tragedy, not a romance.”
“You’re seeing what you want to see. Upper class mare who is in danger of becoming poor is scheduled to marry a wealthy stallion, but gets seduced by a destitute artist on a sinking boat and risks her life while abandoning any chance at wealth and social status.”
>”Oh yeah. That one doesn’t really fit.”
“It’s just FICTION anyway. That’s not how true romance works!”

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RapeApe Wed 02 Aug 2023 12:20:24 No.40184897 Report

Quoted By: >>40184900

>>40184894
>”Oh, of course not! I know a LOT about love, it’s sorta my thing. But we like those stories because they speak to a facet of our psyche. We think we want those things for one reason or another, but we overcome them when we find true love. But wouldn’t it be nice if we didn’t have to overcome those desires? If instead they were fulfilled?”
“I think you have a fetish and are trying to justify it.”
>Cadence scowled at her.
>Somehow that look didn’t seem like it belonged on her face.
>”You’re a tough case, but you’ll come around. We should probably leave though. I think Lance’s shop closes soon. Don’t forget, you have community service tomorrow.”
>Rarity was not a victim.
>She was in control.
>Rarity was not a victim!
>SHE WAS IN CONTROL!
“Tomorrow doesn’t work I’m afraid.”
>”You’re not getting out of it that easily.”
“I was scheduled for today. You’ll either stick to your own schedule, or I just shan’t be able to make the time for you.”
>”You’ve had a really stressful day though.”
“I have. Perhaps sucking on a few penises would be a good way to unwind.”
>Cadence smiled so wide it looked like her jaw was going to fall off.
“It will be the same arrangement as last time, yes?”
>”It will. Here, let’s get going.”
>Rarity’s heart was racing and her legs trembling as they left the coffee shop.
>Cadence stopped to talk to Lance for perhaps a bit longer than was absolutely necessary, leaving her to stew in a bizarre mixture of dread, fear, and excitement.
>She was lead through the labyrinthine base, and seemingly followed a totally different path from last time.
>And yet, somehow they wound up in the same barren concrete room.
>Just a few chains, some gas lamps, and a hole in the wall.
>But she didn’t approach the hole.
>Not yet.
>Do it, Rarity.
>Your master isn’t in charge of this relationship.
>You are!
>He’s taking charge because you’re making him, like a strong mare would!
“I need to push my- um… my master.”
>She nearly whispered the last word.
>”You’re at a glory hole. I don’t think you need to be ashamed about being in a relationship.”
“Yes, I suppose you’re right. Though I’m still not entirely comfortable with it.”
>”Why? Are you ashamed of him?”
“Oh, heavens no!”
>”Then say it loud and proud! Otherwise he might start to think you don’t appreciate him!”
>It was strange.
>Rarity was planning things that were beyond obscene.
>Yet somehow, this was still the sticking point.
>She knew it made no sense, but could not help it.
>”What do you mean push him? Like, tip him over, or… what’s going on here?”
“He’s not strict enough. I’ve broken several rules lately, and he keeps ignoring it.”

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RapeApe Wed 02 Aug 2023 12:21:29 No.40184900 Report

Quoted By: >>40184903 >>40185743 >>40187330

>>40184897
>”Ooh, is he going soft on us? As long as he doesn’t GET soft, am I right?”
>Rarity allowed herself to smile at the joke.
“I do not cut corners, and I do not take half measures. Everything I do, I do with quality, passion, and care. If I’m to…”
>She took a deep breath, and couldn’t help but shudder a bit.
“If I am going to be his slave, I am going to be an exemplar. Everypony shall know that I could have had any stallion I wanted, and that I chose him.”
>She can’t have others thinking she settled for less, after all.
>It would be disastrous for her social standing!
>”That’s great! What can I do to help?”
“Well, I don’t know what I want to get him to do to me.”
>”Hm. I suppose that depends. Where are you in your relationship?”
“Well…”
>Every part of Rarity’s body was beautiful.
>THERE WERE NO SHAMEFUL PARTS.
>SHE WAS GLAMOROUS, and to Tartarus anypony who said otherwise!
“We are introducing my back door to the equation.”
>”Really? That’s REALLY tame. You’re only that far along?”
“Yes, well, it has been a difficult journey to get this far.”
>”Right. And you’re hoping for a suggestion on what to do next. Well, our options are a bit limited because there are so many prudes around. How about mares?”
“Are you coming onto me?”
>”I might be.”
“I’m not-”
>Of course she was ready!
>Rarity had nothing to be ashamed of!
>And if she was going to bring Coco into the fold, she had to be ready to pleasure her as well!
>”C’mon. He let us go at it once before, right? That means it’s okay!”
“Very well, but you'll have to earn it first.”
>Cadence let out a shrill squeal of delight.
“We’re doing it my way, though. And there is one more thing. I’ve found somepony who I wish to introduce to this lifestyle, but I don’t really know how. I’m hoping you have some resources or assets I can use.”
>”I’ll definitely try! But it’s not exactly a science, I have to do a lot of guessing. Who is it?”
“Coco Pommel.”
>”I don’t think I know her, so I can’t really offer any suggestions. If you need anything, tell me! I’m working on somepony else, but I should be able to help!”
“Oh? Upon whom are you working?”
>”It’s a secret. But I have to admit, it’s not going well. I’ve been trying for years, and I haven’t gotten anywhere.”
“Perhaps when I am done with my task I can assist you.”
>Well…
>No sense putting off the inevitable.
>If she was going to be raped and abused-
>She gave her head a shake.
>She was here for a treat!
>Every filly dreamed of growing up to have a charming and rugged stallion all to her own.
>And Rarity got to sample the most masculine parts of them!
>Dozens of them!
“How do I make this thing work?”
>”Just knock and wait.”
>She gently tapped on the wall, hoping that nothing would happen.
>Cadence banged violently on the wall.
>Still, nothing happened.
>For an entire thirty seconds.

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RapeApe Wed 02 Aug 2023 12:22:39 No.40184903 Report

Quoted By: >>40184906 >>40185743

>>40184900
>A long, mottled shaft stuck its way through the hole.
>It was as intimidating in length as it was in girth.
>And as revolting as Applejack’s compost heap.
>She didn’t want to do this.
>This was a nightmare.
>She had to get out of it somehow!
>”Last time? They told me you were really bad at this.”
“WHAT?”
>”Yeah. They said they would have rather done it themselves. And you only managed to get seven of them off, by the way. That’s like, nothing.”
>Rarity knew exactly what was happening.
>Cadence was manipulating her.
>Pushing for one more aspect of Rarity’s personality to want this.
>Attacking her pride and demanding a response.
>Giving her that last little shove she needed to become a depraved slut.
>And it was working.
>To her surprise, she was thankful.
>Rarity kneeled down, and planted her lips on the tip.
>She kissed it, parting her lips ever so slightly to access it with her tongue.
>Rarity explored every facet of the tip with her tongue.
>She tested the firmness, the texture, the flavor, the contours, she pushed into the urethra ever so slightly to make certain she knew every facet of the cock.
>She removed her lips for only a moment, before moving to the base.
>She made sure to wet her tongue, and then gave it a long, sensuous lick from the base to the tip, making sure to take her time and enjoy the sensation.
>To her surprise, it ejaculated right when she was about to finish, spraying her face with a thick layer of cum.
>She told herself that was a good thing.
>It was supposed to be good for your skin, after all.
“And you said I wasn’t good. I’m the best cocksucker in the Empire.”
>”He was a quick shot.”
“Want to help me? There are plenty of dicks to go around, and I’m sure they’d love a second mare. Even if she isn’t quite as talented as I.”
>”Shiny won’t let me.”
“Such a shame.”
>Rarity hit the wall with confidence, and waited patiently for her next treat to arrive.
>She started the same way, familiarizing herself with the tip.
>Peppering it with sloppy, wet kisses.
>As soon as she got an opportunity, she was going to pamper her master’s dick too.
>She was going to give it the attention it deserved.
>She was going to savor every moment, tease every last bit of her favorite cock, memorize every last detail of it.
>She was going to permanently burn it into her brain.
>Rarity widened her mouth, and took more of the shaft in.
>She held it in her mouth for a moment, groaning in delight.
>Drooling all over the guest.
>It wasn’t master’s.
>There were all sorts of ways that it wasn’t quite as good.
>It smelled wrong, missing that unique aroma she had come to associate with pleasure.
>It lacked that strange rounded head that set it apart from the rest, and the texture against her tongue was wrong.
>It was simply inferior to her master’s.
>And it was still delicious.
>She swallowed it, taking it deep within her throat.

RapeApe

RapeApe Wed 02 Aug 2023 12:23:40 No.40184906 Report

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>>40184903
>It tried to push it out, but Rarity knew better.
>It belonged inside her.
>They all did.
>It didn’t matter how they chose to get there, she needed to let them in.
>She suckled lovingly on the cock for as long as her lungs would tolerate, before reluctantly sliding it out, pulling all the way until the flare caught on her lips.
>She teased it with her lips and tongue for a while as she caught her breath, excitedly anticipating what she knew was nigh.
>The twitching she felt in her mouth and grunting she heard from behind the wall told her everything she needed to know.
>He was feeling good.
>That meant that Rarity was doing a good job.
>She couldn’t help but swell with pride, knowing that she was a good mare.
…
>A good mare?
>Did this really make her good?
>Of course not!
>This was the bare minimum!
>She could do so much more, and she was determined to make her master happy.
>She swallowed it again, delighting in the sensation of her reward being sprayed down her throat.
>Her treacherous lungs began to cough, trying to reject the precious cum she had worked so hard for, but she held fast, making sure her charge extracted as much pleasure as possible from her body.
>She couldn’t help but feel a bit disappointed when it slipped out.
>”Thank you. That was great. Do you have a coltfriend?”
“I’m afraid I’m spoken for, dear.”
>”He’s very lucky.”
>The words set her heart aflutter.
“Whoever you wind up with, do make sure to have her come by some day. I would gladly help her learn to properly appreciate a cock.”
>Cadence approached her.
>”Now that’s a fun idea. Would you be willing to offer seminars?”
“I don’t think society is quite ready to keep up with me. There’s being avant garde, and there’s being ahead of your time.”
>”Maybe someday.”
“Why are you still here anyway? I thought you weren’t allowed to participate.”
>”I have to whip you when we’re done.”
“Ah. I was rather hoping you’d forgotten.”
>This was a punishment.
>She didn’t want this.
>She was a prisoner-
>NO!
>Nopony was more free than Rarity!
>SHE!
>WAS!
>NOT!
>A!
>VICTIM!
>She was going to seize this moment and make it hers!
>She eagerly knocked on the wall to request her next reward.
>Circumstance had seen fit to spoil her, as she was gifted another penis to pleasure.
>She spent a moment nuzzling it, anticipating the moment that she could finally take it in.
>It was like wine.
>Yes, of course!
>She told herself again and again that this was like a wine tasting.
>A high society activity, wherein she was permitted to sample various delights
>You had to test the aroma and sample the bouquet before you drank it!
>This was a rather… ordinary vintage.

RapeApe

RapeApe Wed 02 Aug 2023 12:24:41 No.40184907 Report

Quoted By: >>40184911

>>40184906
>She much preferred imports from Earth.
>But unlike at a wine tasting, it was improper to spit out one’s drink!
>Rarity took it deep into her throat quite suddenly and vigorously, drinking greedily.
>She couldn’t help but gag and gasp as she repeatedly bobbed her head back and forth, fucking her own throat eagerly.
>Her throat burned, her lungs screamed, but she kept going.
>She pushed herself to proceed, sucking and licking until far past what she had thought her limit was, until he was finally rewarded.
>It began to twitch in the telltale signs of ecstasy, and Rarity quickly moved it into her mouth.
>A torrent of cum filled her mouth.
>She sloshed it around on her tongue, tasting it, feeling the texture, testing the aroma and sampling the bouquet.
>But it couldn’t last forever.
>And it would be improper for her to spit out her drink.
>It wasn’t enough.
>She STILL wasn’t in control!
>That was not the Rarity way!
>She had no choice, so long as that pink wretch remained her jailor.
>She had to change that paradigm to truly be in charge of her destiny.
>Because she could NOT allow herself to be a victim!
“You know, Cadence, if you’re going to be here you might as well make yourself useful.”
>”What do you need?”
“I haven’t had a chance to practice today, and you’re going to make up for it.”
>She knocked on the wall again, ready for her next reward.
>”Practice what?”
“Anal. You’re going to fuck my ass.”
>Her next cock was ready.
>It was lesser too, nothing could compare to her master’s after all.
>But even a bad penis is a magnificent treat.
>She could hear Cadence moving as she took it into her mouth.
>”I must be dreaming.”
>She stopped sucking just long enough to reply.
“I suppose I am a dream come true.”
>She began to fuck her throat again, while raising her ass as high in the air as she could.
>”There’s a plug in here. You’re going to want a different one though. This is really for beginners. Oh! We should go shopping some time!”
>She felt the plug being roughly removed, leaving a gape in its wake.
>Before long her master plan had come to fruition.
>She felt something hard, slippery, and cold push against her ass.
>She did as she had learned to allow it easy passage.
>And felt it push in.
>It was bigger than what she had been using.
>Both thicker and longer.
>But it did not hurt.
>Instead, sharp jolts of pleasure shot all throughout her body.
>And with that her master plan had come into fruition.
>The PRINCESS of the Crystal Empire had been reduced to being Rarity’s sex toy.
>At last, she was in control once more.
>Taking it from both ends was a new experience, and a rather delightful one at that!
>But it was proving to be difficult to focus properly.

RapeApe

RapeApe Wed 02 Aug 2023 12:25:59 No.40184911 Report

Quoted By: >>40184916 >>40184966 >>40185743 >>40190364 >>40201822 >>40221773

>>40184907
>Her moans of ecstasy were interrupting her breathing, and threatening to choke her.
>Which meant she needed even more practice!
>She was going to make sure she practiced every single day without exception!
>Her master deserved nothing but the absolute highest quality, and Rarity would deliver no less!
>Yet more semen filled her mouth.
>And she sampled it properly.
>Savoring it, knowing it, assessing it.
>Master’s cum tasted better, in her eyes.
>It was just a shame there wasn’t more of it!
>If only her master produced enough that she might bathe in it…
>But perhaps its scarcity was part of the value.
>A fine vintage from an exotic land, in limited supply.
>A delight only afforded to a select few.
>Cadence was right, putting it in coffee would be a terrible waste.
>Cadence’s thrusting grew rougher and harder as she tasted the seed.
>The pleasure was undeniable.
>The incredible lewdness of this place had her on edge, and Cadence somehow knew exactly where to go and what to do.
>But it was just barely too little.
“Please… just… just a little further.”
>”You like that, don’t you.”
“STARS yes!”
>”I’ve had a lot of experience pleasuring mares.”
>Cadence banged on the wall, summoning another dick.
>Rarity began to suck on it without even thinking, thoughts so thoroughly clouded by her overwhelming lust.
>”And I’m going to make sure you don’t get to cum.”
>Panic flooded Rarity’s heart.
>Her fear was so profound, she nearly stopped sucking.
>”You’re going to be on edge. Desperate for release. And when you leave, you’re going to keep yourself near your limit.”
“Mmf!”
>”You’re going to go home, put on your sluttiest outfit, and beg your master to fuck your ass.”
“Mmmm!”
>”You’re going to do this every day, until finally you reach it. The next milestone in your transformation into a depraved sex object.”
>Yes.
>YES!
>She wanted it!
>She wanted it so badly!
>Time lost meaning as Rarity lost herself in fantasy.
>She craved lewdness!
>She NEEDED it, and she was going to get it no matter what it cost!
>And nopony would stop her from submitting fully to her master!
>Not even her master!
>One dick blurred into the next, Cadence’s ministrations continually kept her right on the edge, and Rarity could think about nothing but sex.
>She blacked out before they were done.
>Rarity slept in a blissful haze of lust.
>She had totally forgotten that when she woke up, she was due more lashes.

RapeApe

RapeApe Wed 02 Aug 2023 12:27:21 No.40184916 Report

Quoted By: >>40184966 >>40185743 >>40186712 >>40187345 >>40207140

>>40184911

For those of you who are wondering what stories they were talking about, it was Cinderella, Jane Eyre, Pride and Prejudice, Shanna, 50 Shades of Grey, The Notebook, Romeo and Juliet, and The Titanic in that order. I really don’t know if it was worth including that bit of their discussion, but it seems like something they’d both be knowledgeable about. Besides, I’ve already done the research and sunk cost demands that I make use of it.

>>40180213
I expect her scenes will be third person omniscient narration like in this post. There's no particular reason for that, it just feels more natural to me. If it doesn't work out we can change it easily enough.
>>40182574
I have story related plans for Flurry, but we need to resolve some of the hanging threads before we introduce more plot elements. It'll probably be a while before her arc comes into play.
However, we can have her make appearances sooner than that, just not as a primary character. I'm apprehensive about her though. I don't want to push people away with foalcon, but it makes a lot of sense that Cadence would be grooming her and might even be pretty far along. I'm going to have to get a lot of input and tread carefully.
I'm willing to go pretty extreme if people want me to. In fact, I've already written things that I don’t like, so we aren’t limited to what gets me off. Anal is gross to me. It's just unsanitary. Lewding Flurry is an option if people want it, though I don't currently have any plans for that so it would take some discussion and planning.
Don't hesitate to ask for something for fear of me not wanting to write it. The worst I can do is say no.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 02 Aug 2023 12:59:04 No.40184966 Report

Quoted By: >>40187943

>>40184916
Okay thanks.
>>40184911
Also I was just thinking it was two days so why have you not uploaded like 10 or so min before this was posted.

All and all I hope you have a great day.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 02 Aug 2023 18:33:37 No.40185743 Report

Quoted By: >>40187943

>>40184900
>“Very well, but you'll have to earn it first.”
>Cadence let out a shrill squeal of delight.
based lesbonympho candyass
>”It’s a secret. But I have to admit, it’s not going well. I’ve been trying for years, and I haven’t gotten anywhere.”
I'm betting one of the other princesses
>>Every filly dreamed of growing up to have a charming and rugged stallion all to her own.
>>And Rarity got to sample the most masculine parts of them!
>>Dozens of them!
and I have to say, I like rara really having her head twisted to enjoy and embrace her inner slut. and being guided by a master, it almost seems not as dirty as it would normally be, probably why it's appealing to her now in the first place

>>40184903
>As soon as she got an opportunity, she was going to pamper her master’s dick too.
good girl!
>>40184906
>A good mare?
>>Did this really make her good?
>>Of course not!
>>This was the bare minimum!
>>She could do so much more, and she was determined to make her master happy
not sure where this came from but I like this new rarity alot! it's like she is getting drunk on lust... perhaps this soon needs to controlled as well?
>>40184911
>>”And I’m going to make sure you don’t get to cum.”
>>Panic flooded Rarity’s heart.
>>Her fear was so profound, she nearly stopped sucking.
>>”You’re going to be on edge. Desperate for release. And when you leave, you’re going to keep yourself near your limit.”
>“Mmf!”
this really is a ride I wasn't expecting... and I am loving it!

>>40184916
this was some toptier clop this time. and you really nailed rara and candy here giving them the perfect roles

At Wed 02 Aug 2023 18:58:10 No.40185795 Report

Quoted By: >>40187943

Man, what updated.

A lot of background between Shiny and the Doctor, the situation is going to escalate to an international scandal if they don't play their cards well.

And it finally happened, it fits with how Rarity has some fixation with the high society and her unreachable standards.

But now, her training has reach to the best outcome... too well.

I fear that the Doctor and Cadenze has unleash a beast.

Damn like alway a great update.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 02 Aug 2023 23:20:34 No.40186712 Report

Quoted By: >>40187943

>>40184916
Im curious about how Rarity plans to introduce Coco into this.
I mean she already made a point to anon that Coco would be directly under her, and with this new determination of hers of being the one in charge of her decisions, it makes me think of how she plans to treat her future underling.

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Anonymous Thu 03 Aug 2023 02:06:04 No.40187330 Report

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>>40184900
>>”It’s a secret. But I have to admit, it’s not going well. I’ve been trying for years, and I haven’t gotten anywhere.”

My guess is flurry heart.
Though it might also be Twilight sparkle.

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 03 Aug 2023 02:08:23 No.40187345 Report

Quoted By: >>40187544 >>40187943

>>40184916
Regarding Coco, do you have ideas on what her motives could be to go along with this ?
I know shes working for and depending on Rarity, but it feels like she could also have some hidden motive as well.
Hidden crush on Rarity ?
Had to serve her old boss Suri in this kind of manner, and grew a taste for being ordered around by mares despite wanting to forget that abusive past ?

Just thinking that she could have something to her besides being a shy mare that learned to love kinky stuff under Rarity's training.

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 03 Aug 2023 03:17:24 No.40187544 Report

Quoted By: >>40187748 >>40187943 >>40188946

>>40187345
well, rarity is starting really like having a good, bossy master so having a second mare who likes the same would be nothing new. in their last encounter, coco also seemed to be more confident than she used to be in the series. so why not make her crave wanting control? in this case, make her want to control parts of rarity under supervision of their shared master?

>>40184437
hmm, I would suggest not making it too established. perhaps in some parts of Equestria, maybe even canterlot itself where older forms of servitude have survived to this day, but not globally. that would be why when ponies find out another mare is just a concubine to her herd, she is usually socially avoided or shunned.
I also don't think overpopulation needs to be used as an argument here. yes there are more mares than stallions and this is merely another way of dealing with it. said mare also just have been part of the regular harem, but sometimes mares slip through the net and end up alone... this could be for them, enforced through the public, allowed by law, and seen as separate from regular slavery.
as to all the rules, I really think chastity should be the main focus here. they are meant to receive no sexual fulfilment, just like when they were still free, but now support a herd that would essentially cover her own lack of offspring by supporting the making of others.
>>40184443
what if concubine schools were seen as "upper class" compared to slave schools? expensive school uniforms, strict teachers and snobby additives all around... as long as compared to normals slaves

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 03 Aug 2023 04:44:27 No.40187748 Report

Quoted By:

>>40187544

>that would be why when ponies find out another mare is just a concubine to her herd, she is usually socially avoided or shunned.
Shunned just because of their status, or because of competition from other harems ? Now that I think about it, you could have towns that are fully under the influence of one harem owner.

>sometimes mares slip through the net and end up alone
But I didnt say that wasnt a possibility. Some mares do end up lonely, either because they thought they could grab a stallion on their own and failed, or because they have no qualilties that any harem owner would want in their circle, or they got blacklisted for something which made all the harem owners and concubines avoid interacting with them.
The reason most of them would join harems is because of the fierce monopoly harem owners have on males, making it a herculean effort to try finding and catching the eye of any available stallion, unless they have something to give them an edge in the race like money, power, etc.

>I also don't think overpopulation needs to be used as an argument here
But that is the major reason why mares are pushed into joining these harems like I said above. If there were stallions for everyone then they wouldnt bother becoming slaves of another mare and receive only scraps of stallion interaction.

>chastity should be the main focus here
Definitely, in partial or extreme cases depending on the concubine's standing with her mistress.
>they are meant to receive no sexual fulfilment, just like when they were still free, but now support a herd that would essentially cover her own lack of offspring by supporting the making of others.
The mistress of the harem is missing some big carrot if she doesnt offer that once a while. Especially during heat periods.

>what if concubine schools were seen as "upper class" compared to slave schools?
I wasnt thinking of inserting normal slaves in this.
The reverse harem idea would be an accepted social custom that the straight mares created among themselves. But outside of that I didint have anything in mind for servitude in this world.
Would you have something in mind for that ? Maybe something for the lesbians ?
Try thinking of how this population issue could affect everyone and eventually create reasons for other types of slavery.

RapeApe

RapeApe Thu 03 Aug 2023 06:36:01 No.40187943 Report

Quoted By: >>40188075 >>40188614 >>40189441 >>40189652 >>40190999

>>40184966
Yeah, I was a bit late. Hopefully it was close enough!
>>40185743
Glad you enjoyed it.
Rarity definitely behaves differently when horny. Hay, everyone does. That difference should erode over time though as she gets more used to her new life.
>>40185795
Thank you. I was really pleased when I thought of the "wine tasting" thing. Though she obviously has to change, I want to keep the essence of Rarity's character. No matter what happens she's going to try and make it classy.
I hadn't really planned on this, but it conveniently has her goals converge with Cadence's. If she can make this stuff fancy, it'll be easier to sell to other influential figures. Easier of course isn't the same as easy.
>>40186712
I've put some thought into this, but honestly not enough. Suggestions are appreciated. I figure Rarity will escalate her attempts over time though. She'll become emboldened by whatever successes she has, and more confident that she actually wants to follow through with it. We cannot go directly to sex, for better or worse.
>>40187345
I've got a vague outline for how she'll go, but it needs a lot of work. I do like invoking Suri. Coco is her own pony, but she seems like the kind who would be heavily influenced by others. She'll have been changed by that experience.
If anyone has suggestions or ideas please do share.
>>40187544
Suggestions like this. How do people feel about Coco being dominant?
Submission is of course mandatory, so she will be beneath Anon. But she can behave differently around mares.

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 03 Aug 2023 07:48:25 No.40188075 Report

Quoted By: >>40188946

>>40187943
>How do people feel about Coco being dominant?
For me Im not seeing many reasons for her to want to take charge of Rarity.
Maybe Cadence or Anon could make her believe that Rarity needs somepony to reign her in when master isnt around ? With the way she has seen Rarity acting the past few days, and with how they are on their last attempt at estabilishing a shop, Coco could think that she needs to take the reigns and be more assertive on Rarity to correct her behavior and keep her lust addled mind in check.
But then again, she needs to be convinced of this sex shop idea in the first place.

Its a weak suggestion, but honestly I think theres more potential in exploring a hidden kink or experience she had in the past with Suri .

At Thu 03 Aug 2023 09:30:56 No.40188260 Report

Quoted By: >>40189652

It could work.

Coco as an misstres, in order to keep Rarity collected and stop or punish her for disobeying their master.

Her past with Suri, can be a catalyst to the desire of being on control.

But of course first is how to sell it to her or bring up such emotions.

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 03 Aug 2023 13:14:51 No.40188614 Report

Quoted By: >>40188946

>>40187943
I think Coco should still be a sub.

I also had an idea where flurry heart has a massive crush on anon, but hides it. So perhaps Cadence uses the crush to really start pushing flurry towards her place.

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 03 Aug 2023 15:44:20 No.40188946 Report

Quoted By: >>40188956

>>40188614
>Coco should still be a sub
I think so as well. I just wanted to give some plausible reason to why she would take the reigns
>>40188075

But like this anon said
>>40187544
she does seem to have a lot more confidence than usual, so if she were to sub for Rarity and anon, it would definitely be because she ended up choosing to do so, for whatever reason we could come up with.

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 03 Aug 2023 15:51:04 No.40188956 Report

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>>40188946
>choosing to do so
Wait not choosing, but being sort of pushed or convinced into it. She would still be the influenceable type.

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 03 Aug 2023 18:45:46 No.40189441 Report

Quoted By: >>40189452

>>40187943
a possible way to make coco a bit of a switch.
>coco always adored rarity, having given her much needed trust and confidence in the past. so now here is her former idol, seemingly having lost all self-respect and being driven by last and outside influences instead of going down her own path... how dare she disappoint coco like this? after confronting anon about it, she slowly understands why rarity broke and was turned into this... anon makes a proposal however to join the pair and vent her anger in a more constructive way and perhaps salvage what is left of rarity s dignity

or something like that. essentially a broken heart and revenge arc

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 03 Aug 2023 18:51:28 No.40189452 Report

Quoted By: >>40189635

>>40189441
Why does anger have to be the motivator here ?
Are you trying to come up with a reason for her to be a mean kind of dom ?

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 03 Aug 2023 19:47:30 No.40189635 Report

Quoted By: >>40189652

>>40189452
it doesn't have to be anger, it could also be disappointment or even sadness over the loss of what she used to see in rarity.
and just because I'm arguing for a dom-ish coco, doesn't mean I can't accept a sunny one either. I just don't think rarity is quiet ready to train another slave for her master yet. having an equal would work but coco needs some sort of motivation or persuasion to do so... and this rarityspiel I made up was a way to do so

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 03 Aug 2023 19:53:32 No.40189652 Report

Quoted By: >>40190656 >>40192585

>>40187943
>>40188260
How about instead of making an all controlling dom, anon puts Coco in charge of watching over Rarity's chastity when he isnt around ?
It would fit with her wishes of keeping Rarity collected and behaved like a normal mare so she can focus on their shop.
For example make her a key holder who wouldnt budge to Rarity's whininig and begging to open the belt, and even theaten to tell master to extend the chastity period.
Or go with a fun magical route and block Rarity's orgasm with a release keyword from Coco.
Or make it so Rarity's orgasms are magically linked to Coco's, so she can only feel a release when Coco gets one from anon ( and not from Rarity, no matter how many she makes Coco orgasm ).

Coco would definitely have the motive to want to do this.
And it could be boostered by something that happened in the past with Suri, like I dont know, she could have been a boss that often slept with her clients and forcefully dragged Coco along in some cases to help push a sale.

>>40189635
What do you think ? This one wouldnt be dissapointment in her, but an apprehension of Rarity becoming something that Coco doesnt want to experience again.

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 03 Aug 2023 22:41:59 No.40190099 Report

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Are there any new updates on the other active stories ? Im not dismissing this one, just curious about how the other ones are doing.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 04 Aug 2023 00:55:13 No.40190364 Report

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>>40184911
>she was due more lashes

Uuuuunffff yes

Rarity needs her punishment

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 04 Aug 2023 03:03:45 No.40190656 Report

Quoted By: >>40190927 >>40190999

>>40189652
oh I like this one alot! it gives coco something to do that isn't just being another slave as well as a new level of humiliation for rarity once she starts begging coco to please unlock her belt/turn off her vibrators/deflate her toys or what have you.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 04 Aug 2023 05:24:46 No.40190927 Report

Quoted By: >>40190999

>>40190656
Do you think this could work in some weird dynamic where Coco agrees to try this idea Rarity is suggesting and be her sub, on the condition that she gives control of her chastity to Coco ?

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 04 Aug 2023 06:36:19 No.40190999 Report

Quoted By: >>40191472 >>40192419 >>40192585

>>40190656
>>40190927
Wait, now this is making more sense

>Rarity calls over Coco to help on her last shop
>Coco is basically dependent on Rarity now , and really wants this new shop to work
>But then her employer starts getting these weird ideas for it, seemed completely unfocused recently, and even suggested wearing sex toys for clothing.

I mean anyone in her situation would grow worried. And she cant afford to leave everything at this point.

So it would really make sense that when she learns of this ridiculous "slave" idea that Rarity spouted , that would be the last straw , and Coco would stop letting this sex obsession thing slide without demanding some assurances and ground rules, lest her boss ruins their business because of her hornied up decisions.

>>40187943
What do you think RapeApe ?
When you take all of this context into account, Rarity will really have to be delicate in convincing Coco to try this new direction.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 04 Aug 2023 07:09:35 No.40191065 Report

Quoted By: >>40195230

Just one out of context question I wanted to ask here before going to bed.

What ponies do you see as good matches for Octavia in a submissive/dominant relationship, taking into account their personalities and the types of fetishes you think each pony have that would match well with eachother ?
Basically Im asking this because I keep seeing her getting paired with Vinyl a lot, but it feels like people do that mostly out of association between the characters rather than because they match well together in a bdsm context.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 04 Aug 2023 11:50:33 No.40191472 Report

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>>40190999
I like it because we can humiliate Rarity more. For some reason that really gets me going.

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Anonymous Fri 04 Aug 2023 18:51:07 No.40192419 Report

Quoted By: >>40192585

>>40190999
I can imagine the following words to be said after weeks of seemingly straight up sabotage coming from coco:
"I've just about had it with you miss rarity! the kinky clothes I can support to be sold in the store, the sales are speaking for it themselves. even the toysection seems to be appealing to our customers but masturbating behind the counter!? I'm sorry I have to do this but you leave me no choice."
>after which coco pulls out a chastity belt from her saddlebags, seemingly kept ready for the day rarity crossed the line

although I wonder if coco should be just the key holder, or even bring up the idea of chastity all by herself and surprise anon with it in a way, with rarity one day coming home with it out of the blue

RapeApe

RapeApe Fri 04 Aug 2023 19:55:55 No.40192585 Report

Quoted By: >>40192832

>>40189652
This is a pretty interesting idea. I think she'd have to be at least somewhat broken before we could get her to in on it, because she'd be too flustered otherwise. But... what if we gave her this power without her knowing it?
We could give Coco the controls to Rarity's implant, but not say what they are. She innocently plays with them for a while, and when we finally reveal she's been edging Rarity for weeks she's mortified. But maybe a bit aroused too.
Anyone like that?
>>40190999
Coco will definitely be uncomfortable working with such a lewd partner. I think she'll go along with it at first because she's overly agreeable, but everyone has a limit. Having her interfere with Rarity's sexuality could be fun, especially since it would be an angle to pressure her into taking a more active role in it.
>>40192419
A chastity belt may be redundant. This was discussed a long time ago, but we're actually taking a medical approach to chastity.
HOWEVER, Rarity has more than one hole. What if Coco was responsible for restraining an anal slut?

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Anonymous Fri 04 Aug 2023 21:58:32 No.40192832 Report

Quoted By: >>40193318

>>40192585
>Anyone like that?
I do. A meek mare who suddenly learned that she could have this little bit of power over a mare she probably admires a lot. Its a nice way to break her out of her shell.

>taking a medical approach to chastity
Like what ? An implant that remotely numbs the nerves ?

>spoiler
I wonder how she would do that if no chastity belts are involved, but I like the idea.

RapeApe

RapeApe Sat 05 Aug 2023 01:14:38 No.40193318 Report

Quoted By: >>40193908 >>40194106

>>40192832
I was thinking we'd numb her like we did her horn. This could be done downstream of her implant, so it would still work but touching herself wouldn't.
And she could have a chastity device installed in her ass. A belt is possible, but maybe a pear of anguish?

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 05 Aug 2023 05:37:37 No.40193908 Report

Quoted By: >>40228788

>>40193318
>numb her like we did her horn
Had to look it up. You meant this part ?

>You poke a small needle into her forehead and inject the drug.
>She winces.
>“A neurolytic block is a procedure in which a nerve fiber is intentionally damaged but not destroyed. Usually used to treat pain, it is a reversible procedure that causes paralysis in the targeted area.”
>”You're going to take away my magic.”
>She didn't sound angry or scared.
>She sounded defeated.
>“Only until I know I can trust you. I'm going to be implanting a programmable device that will periodically administer microdoses of the agent I'm using.”
>They'd been designed for mid term pain management and were still relatively new.
>Which means they're relatively expensive.
>But you also can't keep her unless you fix this, and somehow you get the feeling Cadence would be pissed if you couldn't reliably reverse it.
>You'll find a way to make the money back, you always do.
>“By using this method we can achieve the desired results in a more controlled manner, minimizing the amount of damage done and thus the recovery time.
>Reversal should take around a day if I do it perfectly, but it might take a few weeks.”

Would he have to reverse it by removing the implant, or could it be turned on and off remotely like that clit implant he tested on her ?

Hey, I dont know how complex you could make those things, but what would you think of syncing Rarity's clit implant to some sensor implant in Coco ? Making it so it edges Rarity whenever Coco is orgasming ?

>A belt is possible, but maybe a pear of anguish?
I would vote for the pear. Its a more discreet option that Rarity can still hide until her eventual slave reveal.
Also it comes with a base that could show her master's mark or something related to Coco,

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 05 Aug 2023 07:22:38 No.40194106 Report

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>>40193318
if we bring coco into this to take some sort of control, I would love it for her to be more out of a misunderstanding. perhaps coco ends up thinking all this butt stuff rarity has been forced into doing is turning her mind into mush and if "anal purity" isn't achievable, perhaps taking control of what rarity gets stuffed with is the way? even more ironic would be the fact that unlike a regular chastity belt, this one would be specifically made to cover her ponut and keep whatever plug or toy she chose for rarity inside. that way, her pussy would still be accessible for regular use.

perhaps I am specifically looking for conflict to be created inside raritys and cocos minds respectively. conflict about stimulation, reward, control and in a way, ownership/leadership

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Anonymous Sat 05 Aug 2023 10:57:58 No.40194401 Report

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i kind of wish there was a filly taking charge of how the adults were allowed to "play", keeping the keys to herself after being denied dessert

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 05 Aug 2023 18:03:44 No.40195103 Report

Quoted By:

Rarity needs SPANKS

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 05 Aug 2023 18:47:29 No.40195230 Report

Quoted By: >>40198263

>>40191065
everything needs conflict and change to be really interesting and this is no different.
i would pair her with either another noble that partially respects what she wants or sees her as no more than a lowly "sub pony", or the matched with some kind of lowlife/farmer/bluecollar pony that doesnt respect octavias ambitions and dreams in the slightest.
so while the first match could end up in either a complimenting or competing relationship, the second could really only end up in conflict.
that said, even if octavia were to be acquired by lets say the applefamiliy to help out on their farm as a mule to pull their carts through the mud, i could still imagine granny smith respecting octavias wish to not get dirty by ironically sealing her into a rubbersuit

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Anonymous Sun 06 Aug 2023 00:40:39 No.40195230,1 Report Delete

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Test.
Sup BDSM enjoyers ?

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Anonymous Sun 06 Aug 2023 03:50:34 No.40195618 Report

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Anonymous Sun 06 Aug 2023 05:17:35 No.40195852 Report

Quoted By: >>40196047

opinions on cursed clothes/toys are the driving force for a mare/slave instead of a master?
I've been doing alot of reading recently and found a story, with some cursed clothes always keeping a sub on edge, finding new ways to make living its life harder while making her look as flashy as possible.
this could easily be ponyfied but the question remains whether or not it would be suitable for the little bdsm world have

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Anonymous Sun 06 Aug 2023 06:50:37 No.40196047 Report

Quoted By: >>40196059 >>40196363

>>40195852
I like them, but using only them to drive a slave can get really repetitive. It works best when complemented with a nice domineering master, or when theres no master, using a nice conflicting setup setup that the character has to go through.
Actually now that I think about, writing about a master that can drive a slave on his own sounds harder to do compared to writing with only the toy doing the work. You have to write two behaviours and personalities that complement eachother right ?

>found a story
Which one ? Theres one I found of a chaste maid feeling her clit being brushed any time she used the feather duster.

>for the little bdsm world have
You mean the one from Quill's story ?

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 06 Aug 2023 07:01:20 No.40196059 Report

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>>40196047
well, I'm trying to get more into this whole self bondage thing, and a mare putting on some cursed latex socks she found in an old crate in her attic sounds like a good start.

the story I read was this: https://www.deviantart.com/kathrin-inaka/art/Always-a-bit-over-the-top-Chapter-1-702708796
although all his stories fit the "bondage through restrictive clothes" theme really well which in turn could be ponified

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Anonymous Sun 06 Aug 2023 11:02:13 No.40196363 Report

Quoted By: >>40197014 >>40198192

>>40196047
>You mean the one from Quill's story ?
well, any green or world we like to construct here
but if we were to stick to quills story, what if such a mare were only to appear as a cameo, and leter have her own little sidestory?
imagine coco and rarity doing fashionstuff in their shared boutique, and a mare clad heavily in latex walked in, asking for for some clothes and ending up buying some...
that would be all of her appearence for now but later we may find out it was her cursed gear that made her walk in and buy some toys or what have you.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 06 Aug 2023 16:12:13 No.40197014 Report

Quoted By: >>40197182

>>40196363
Maybe it could be something from a place outside equestria?
A Kirin device, or dragon, griffon, etc. Something that has to come outside of Equestria since ponies themselves have the gem controlled latex as their thing.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 06 Aug 2023 17:06:05 No.40197182 Report

Quoted By: >>40197635

>>40197014
i actually already had an explanation.
what if it were a leftover from when discord went a bit crazy with their world? like some clothes going full "bizarroworld" and picking their wearer and not the other way around? and now that the magic for them is mostly gone, they only have control over a few things when they go full parasite on a pony.

the kirinthing i have an idea for as well, either the scales being that thing, or the horn, although i am more teamhorn than scales

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 06 Aug 2023 19:45:12 No.40197635 Report

Quoted By: >>40198711

>>40197182
So magic is completely gone and now magical creatures like unicorns, kirin, etc have to rely on symbiotic clothes to be able to use some of it ?
It could come with something the user has to give to the parasite to have access to magic.

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Anonymous Sun 06 Aug 2023 23:25:24 No.40198192 Report

Quoted By: >>40198711

>>40196363
Why is Sweeble so hot?

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Anonymous Sun 06 Aug 2023 23:53:42 No.40198263 Report

Quoted By: >>40198711

>>40195230
>pair her with either another noble that partially respects what she wants or sees her as no more than a lowly "sub pony"
I was thinking of something like that, but in a way that somehow brings Rarity into it.
For example Rarity trying to enter some elite fetish society, and the noble member who is helping introduce her lends his/her servant to live under the fashionista and help acclimatize her to the etiquette and new fetish lifestyle this new society will provide.

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Anonymous Mon 07 Aug 2023 02:53:07 No.40198711 Report

Quoted By: >>40199256 >>40199441

>>40197635
not a global fetish thing, just a few, unlucky ponies. otherwise it becomes a boring normal.
>>40198192
because she is a slutty walking cum dumpster that needs to be controlled by a firm hand/hoof.
>>40198263
rarity as a pony just has so many "applications".
but I like that fetishclub idea that requires one to have a slave to be allowed to enter. how would you set this up though? canonically, they don't have too many interactions.

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 07 Aug 2023 07:05:07 No.40199256 Report

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>>40198711
> fetishclub idea that requires one to have a slave to be allowed to enter
I didnt mean it as a requirement to enter, but something that members of it have as part of their etiquette and lifestyle.

>how would you set this up though?
I only got the barebones idea.

Rarity would be the inexperienced mare who's joining the society mostly to have contacts with the upper class, but also with some curiosity of her own about the lifestyle inside it.
And Octavia would be the lent mare who was enslaved by a member of the society for some undefined reason long ago.

Theres the position of each mare, but I got nothing on the conoflictinig past Octavia could have that led her to being enslaved, or the interaction those two could have besides Octavia doing her slave duties to someone like Rarity who never had any experience being a mistress.

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 07 Aug 2023 09:23:47 No.40199441 Report

Quoted By: >>40199491

>>40198711
>how would you set this up though?
i'm thinking through the use of collars. ie the slave has the initials of her master on it, but starts off with a dark colour like maroon. as time prorgresses, her collar gets swapped out for a lighter colour like orange, before finally ending at yellow to show full membership and acceptance within the fetishclub.

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 07 Aug 2023 10:10:47 No.40199491 Report

Quoted By: >>40200653 >>40273900

>>40199441
Coded collars are both fun and effective, though Fall of Equestria didn't do a good job with them.
You can hold information in colour, pattern, clasp, trim, and finish.
Say the collar itself marks a slave. The colour could indicate how trustworthy or obedient they're considered to be with several ranks ranging from actively hostile to completely devoted, with most falling in between the two. It can have a steel band around it to indicate a permanent position, and gold trim as a reward for those who voluntarily became slaves.
The clasp will obviously serve as an anchor for a leash, but the shape and colour will also carry information. A square clasp means that her master doesn't want her touched, a round clasp means no penetrative sex or maybe oral only, and a heart shaped clasp means free use. The colour of the clasp could be coded to indicate hierarchy in the slave pecking order if such a thing exists. An ID tag could either be built into it or attached to it, showing the slave's owner's name, but not the slave's name. Their name wouldn't be considered important information.

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Anonymous Mon 07 Aug 2023 15:39:31 No.40200155 Report

Quoted By: >>40200796 >>40201144

new nun just dropped
lets hope they threw away the keys

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 07 Aug 2023 18:35:19 No.40200653 Report

Quoted By: >>40200752

>>40199491
Didnt the clocktower society thing do coded collars too ?

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 07 Aug 2023 18:36:42 No.40200659 Report

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I FOUND A COURTNEY. I THINK SHE'S RUNNING AWAY WITH THE PIPER OR SOMETHING.

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 07 Aug 2023 19:03:55 No.40200752 Report

Quoted By: >>40200796

>>40200653
They did, but I'd love to see another take on that universe

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 07 Aug 2023 19:17:09 No.40200796 Report

Quoted By: >>40201276

>>40200752
Did anyone ever try making an actual non consent take on that universe ?
That consent bell things always turned me off when it was used. Its like the writers are holding themselves back when they do shit like this.

>>40200155
Now that I think about it they never had any chaste nuns in it. They had something of a cult, but it was nowhere near this fetishized.

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 07 Aug 2023 21:19:31 No.40201144 Report

Quoted By: >>40202247

>>40200155
I wonder if dacaoo would consider making a griffon example.
Or maybe an example with a reformed changeling like Ocellus.

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 07 Aug 2023 22:06:56 No.40201276 Report

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>>40200796
Not that I'm aware of but honestly the bell system didn't really bother me that much. Non-con or Con, I enjoy all of it.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 08 Aug 2023 00:59:14 No.40201822 Report

Quoted By: >>40228790

>>40184911
More please.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 08 Aug 2023 01:01:08 No.40201826 Report

Quoted By: >>40202247 >>40228790

Is Anon Cadence’s best friend not counting shining.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 08 Aug 2023 03:16:15 No.40202247 Report

Quoted By: >>40202830 >>40228790

>>40201826
twilight? the two other princesses? maybe some old friends from school? I mean, anon is supposed to be a new arrival, isn't he?

>>40201144
I would love to see a gay ass bug in one of those suits, learning that this new life of chastity is much harder than the old one under his former queen

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 08 Aug 2023 05:23:55 No.40202578 Report

Quoted By: >>40202835 >>40228790

>>40177586
Dude, midazolam isn't a medicine. That's lethal injection.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 08 Aug 2023 06:53:01 No.40202767 Report

Quoted By: >>40202830 >>40203919

So... What about an EQG story dealing with Adagio getting a big surprise when she tries to enslave one of the principals?

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Anonymous Tue 08 Aug 2023 07:37:47 No.40202830 Report

Quoted By: >>40203386 >>40203433 >>40228790

>>40202247
I guess he meant more as a close confidant of Cadence, at least regarding sex stuff.
Although that does make me wonder why she wouldnt have some other perverted friend to talk about her tastes. Maybe the sex store owner who Rarity met a while ago ?

>>40202767
Do you have anything more in mind for that setup ?
I personally dont know anything about EQG, so I'm pretty much in the dark about what would match the characters.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 08 Aug 2023 07:39:38 No.40202835 Report

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>>40202578
Google it
midazolam According to Google is a sedative.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 08 Aug 2023 13:16:34 No.40203386 Report

Quoted By: >>40204250 >>40228790

>>40202830
let's go further. what if said sexshop owner got her in whatever way related talent from cadence? something like one of candy's lovespells gone wrong?

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 08 Aug 2023 13:41:30 No.40203433 Report

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>>40202830
In that universe, Celestia is a principal while Luna is her Vice Principal and Cadence resides over a private school as their vice principle (or Dean). Adagio Dazzle is one of three siren sisters. That's what I can give without spoilers for now

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 08 Aug 2023 17:16:10 No.40203919 Report

Quoted By: >>40204622

>>40202767
why not have the thing backfire so hard, her sisters get enslaved with her?

https://ponerpics.org/images/6761130

bonuspoints for ponyplay

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Anonymous Tue 08 Aug 2023 20:01:10 No.40204250 Report

Quoted By: >>40205388 >>40228790

>>40203386
>what if said sexshop owner got her in whatever way related talent from cadence
I dont remember now, but how did Rarity find tha shop ? Did Cadance give the tip to anon about it ?

>something like one of candy's lovespells gone wrong?
She didnt behave like a screw up of a spell though, as I remember she just had less qualms regarding talking about a fetish lifestyle, at least in her sex shop.

Or are you aiming more for her special talent being changed because of it, and Cadance for some reason being regretful of doing that ?

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Anonymous Tue 08 Aug 2023 22:51:12 No.40204622 Report

Quoted By: >>40205388

>>40203919
I dunno, I'm still working on the idea

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Anonymous Tue 08 Aug 2023 23:42:50 No.40204776 Report

Quoted By: >>40205586 >>40210529 >>40281290

>Scootaloo had a fight with Dash.
>Lightning Dust fills her role model spot, promising to "treat her like a mare" instead of a child.
>Over time she turns Scootaloo into her pet while rubbing that fact to Dash.

How come there are barely any clopfics with this setup on that Lighting Dust washouts episode ?
Only Togashi had this thought apparently
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/446923/i-want-to-join-the-washouts

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 09 Aug 2023 03:16:23 No.40205388 Report

Quoted By: >>40206058 >>40206689 >>40228790

>>40204250
ponies can find their special talent in all kinds of ways. I don't see why a teenage cadence who is still a bit unsure on her own new talent, can't make a mistake that changes the life of a mare Ina way she didn't intend, although still to her benefit?
perhaps she mistook "find true love" with "find true lust" in her mind? I could at least see it happen when cadence had her first heatperiod as a princess.

>>40204622
alternatively, since it's the sirens, go for some mermaid play on them.
bind their arms in a mono glove, trap their legs in a fake mermaid tail, perhaps put their whole body in a dry suit with breathing equipment before and throw them into a pool. they can't get out without control over their arms or legs, their human skin is protected in the suit and they can drown with the breathingaids

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 09 Aug 2023 04:52:38 No.40205586 Report

Quoted By: >>40212378

>>40204776
Okay this pet thing gave me a nice edit idea to ask that anon in case he shows up, but I could use some suggestions and opinions.

Heres the scenario I thought up.

Scootalo resting inside a locked bird cage after a recent race, looking at her owner with an adoring approval seeking face, all that while wearing a rubberized version of the washouts uniform with wingbinders, along with a collar tagged with Lightning's cutie mark.

Her suit could have a matching hood like the one from the wonderbolts but in the washout's design, or any variation that doesnt hide her seek approval eyes and smile.
Or maybe it could even go crazy with a bird theme, like a falconry hood that uses her hair as the tuft, or something that leaves part of her mane sticking out in a chicken style mohawk, like for example here in Gabby's case
https://twibooru.org/1637912

I got some images that might work but I want to read some suggestions, and if the edit anon around, see what he thinks of the request.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 09 Aug 2023 08:56:33 No.40206058 Report

Quoted By: >>40206149 >>40228790

>>40205388
>I could at least see it happen when cadence had her first heatperiod as a princess.
Yeah I could see happening as well. It would explain why she didnt try that sort of stuff on Rarity.
But its still really odd that she wouldnt have anyone else to open up about perv stuff all this time until Anon arrived.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 09 Aug 2023 09:55:28 No.40206149 Report

Quoted By: >>40228790

>>40206058
who says she didn't? let's assume the sexshopmare has this twisted version and of a lovespells cast upon her, who or what else could have had this done to them as well, owing their new jobs and livelihoods to her?
a pony finding it's new place as a slave or mistress would make sense, assuming the love for a pony were replaced with the love for a feeling. in this case, controlling somepony else or submission to one.
same with fetish fashion, gear or appliance designers and sellers like the almost pure sexshopmare. a pony selling highly secure chastity gear knowing some of the soon to be wearers will won't exactly be volunteers will need a much stronger will for that I'ld assume

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 09 Aug 2023 15:02:49 No.40206689 Report

Quoted By: >>40206788

>>40205388
Lol, forcing mermaids to be mermaids

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 09 Aug 2023 16:10:04 No.40206788 Report

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>>40206689
you payed for mermaids, you deserve mermaids, wether they like it or not!

seriously thought, i just like ironic punishments, former ponies forced to be ponies, and fishgirls to be put back into water... but both of them lacking what made those other lives so easy for them

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Anonymous Wed 09 Aug 2023 19:13:37 No.40207140 Report

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>>40184916
I should really stop procrastinating and read this update.

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Anonymous Wed 09 Aug 2023 23:47:39 No.40207859 Report

Quoted By: >>40208284

Why do ballgags on beaks match so well ?

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Anonymous Thu 10 Aug 2023 03:20:37 No.40208284 Report

Quoted By: >>40210492

MLP - chastity is mandatory

>>40207859
probably because of the look of the fit around the beak. that said, pony muzzles look as if they were meant for gags as well

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Anonymous Thu 10 Aug 2023 07:13:11 No.40208731 Report

Quoted By: >>40208739

Lets try giving the clopfic book club a shot again.

How many of you have read Who Rules ?
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/14396/who-rules

For those who dont know, its a sex focused story, centered on a dom/sub relationship between Celestia and Luna, which grew into a series of its own with other couples as well as some bigger story plots thrown in but with the main couple and their relationship still being relevant in it.

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 10 Aug 2023 07:24:56 No.40208739 Report

Quoted By: >>40209282

>>40208731
Oh I forgot to mention this detail, but its with Luna as the dom.
But she does it with a Nightmare-like characterization instead of a bratty one so it still works nicely.

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 10 Aug 2023 12:48:33 No.40209282 Report

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>>40208739
Cool

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Anonymous Thu 10 Aug 2023 20:45:08 No.40210492 Report

Quoted By: >>40210529 >>40211587

>>40208284
Feels like we focus too much on chastity itself , and not on the act of depriving them of a "dignified way" for them to get off.

I mean just because a pony doesnt have a physical thing blocking it from doing it with another, doesnt mean their desperation will make them completely forget their own pride and just jump on any cock they see in public. Unless the slave is completely broken, which takes out a lot of the fun.

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 10 Aug 2023 20:52:15 No.40210529 Report

Quoted By: >>40212248

>>40210492
Also on an unrelated note, does no one think this is a hot setup, especially with how impressionable Scootaloo is ?
>>40204776 ?

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Anonymous Fri 11 Aug 2023 03:13:12 No.40211580 Report

Quoted By: >>40211833 >>40241892

>Apple Bloom felt nervous as she made her way her way through Rarity's 'Adult Closet.', it was only luck she found the door cracked open after leaving Sweetie Belle's empty room. Apple Bloom was curious if maybe she could 'borrow' one of these for a Nightmare Night Costume.>

>While Rarity would have happily made Apple Bloom something more original and age-appropriate, Rarity already had outfits she needed to finish for Nightmare Night the next day. So Apple Bloom had shifted through the clothing alone, upset at her 'friends' for already having matching costumes with their coltfriends when this was meant to be a CMC Nightmare Night.>

>"Whatever. Ah don't need them to have fun." She huffed. Looking through the heavy outfits. She felt like the duo was leaving her behind getting with Pipsqueak and Button Mash, the country pony started feeling like she did back when she didn't have a cutie mark but one of these would change that easily!>

>Apple Bloom freezes at an outfit, butterflies rumbling in her stomach as she examined the familiar suit. She remembered how for a whole week, her sister and her friends ran around in clothes similar to the one before her to teach Rainbow Dash a lesson. Though she doubted theirs had the phallic toys freely flopping around.>

>Something about the perverse nature of the Mare-Do-Well getup had an allure to it, a pull that made Apple Bloom stuff the suit in her saddle bag. Apple Bloom made her way downstairs to Rarity working hard on another commission.>

>"Apple Bloom, Darling," The white mare called. Apple Bloom turned, expecting Rarity to have caught her red-handed. "Can you please remind your sister we're meeting up at the town square tomorrow instead of the castle?" She let out a sigh of relief as Rarity's focus remained solely on the Ponnequin before her.>

>"Y-Y'ah got it Rarity." Apple Bloom quickly said, opening the door to the Boutique. "See ya' later." The red-maned pony rushed through the streets and away from the Fashionista, worried that she'd be caught any second for her theft.>

>Or worse... One of her family members catching her with the suit.>

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Anonymous Fri 11 Aug 2023 03:15:24 No.40211587 Report

Quoted By: >>40211819

>>40210492
controlling ponies access to stimulation and orgasms doesn't leave that much room for speculation imo.
you either don't let anything get into contact with the genitals, be it through a magic barrier or a physical one, or you make touching them feel not rewarding either through numbing the feeling, or giving them something superior beforehand.

the self-control thing you mention is neat, but not reliable imo. but what if there was a way to detect outside stimulation, even allow it but said system would always report any illegal accessattempt to the owner? this could also be changed to "stimulation allowed, orgasms illegal" or if a slave kept breaking the rules, upgrade to better devices doing the controlling for them.

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Anonymous Fri 11 Aug 2023 05:00:53 No.40211819 Report

Quoted By: >>40213163

>>40211587
>controlling ponies access to stimulation and orgasms doesn't leave that much room for speculation imo
You think so ? Cause in my head it leaves room for a lot possibilites depending on the context they are used.

And depending on what fetish the master forces on his slave as well as the context where its happening, it could lead to tons of different setups with cruel, humiliating, caring, controlling, or any other types of purposes.

Like for example:
>Keeping a mare nun edged to test how long it takes until she breaks her vow and begs for a release, knowing she would be punished afterwards
>Keeping a lesbian mare edged before finally allowing her to orgasm but with only with stallions.
>Keeping a mare edged and only giving her a release when she behaves like a good slave
Those three examples used stimulation and orgasm as control tools, but each clearly had a different purpose in their use.

>the self-control thing you mention is neat, but not reliable imo
If you dont control masturbation somehow then yeah it doesnt work.
But the unreliability outside of it is the fun part Im talking about. Its where a master can toy with with the slave's shameful thoughts and make even the slave eventually blame itself for giving in and choosing to degrade itself in whatever humiliating way its master provided for him.

Of course this works best with proud ponies who would still try to have some dignity left in their new positions.

>way to detect outside stimulation, even allow it but said system would always report any illegal accessattempt to the owner?
Making the violation visible somehow would be even better. Basically flagging the lack of self control to anyone looking at the slave.

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Anonymous Fri 11 Aug 2023 05:06:28 No.40211833 Report

Quoted By: >>40212542

>>40211580
Ooh are using this suit ?
https://twibooru.org/681325
Does the one in your green have an embedded gag ?

Anyhow, I like this start !

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Anonymous Fri 11 Aug 2023 09:06:41 No.40212225 Report

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Any latex edit requests? Might do some, if anything interesting comes up.

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Anonymous Fri 11 Aug 2023 09:20:16 No.40212248 Report

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>>40210529
I do.

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Anonymous Fri 11 Aug 2023 10:12:17 No.40212330 Report

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>>40212225
Got two ideas that you might like.

First one:
Gallus from pic related all rubbered up, wearing a ballgag for that big open mouth, and wearing a falconry hood or a regular one, perching on a bird post (maybe with one of his paws chained to it) while looking up at his master with his uncovered eyes.

For the gag there are these two references I found, in case you find them interesting.
https://twibooru.org/1637912
https://derpibooru.org/images/3042127

As for the falconry hood, I only know of that great one you made in a previous Gallus edit
https://twibooru.org/2875894
But the regular one Gabby is wearing in that previous pic might look great too since it leaves out some of his blue feathers to counterbalance the black from the rubber.

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Anonymous Fri 11 Aug 2023 10:33:27 No.40212378 Report

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>>40212225
And the second one would be that Scootaloo idea I posted earlier
>>40205586
It could have this Lightning Dust pic looking at her caged pet while flying
https://twibooru.org/2875894
Or standing
https://twibooru.org/2018107
although I think flying to see her pet bird in a hanging cage would fit the bird theme better.

And Scootaloo would be sitting inside the cage wearing that fetishized stuff I mentioned in the other post, looking at her idol with a happy adoring look.
https://twibooru.org/2456872

Or as another suggestion, it could be an inside view of the cage, with Scootaloo looking forward at an implicit Lightning Dust.
https://twibooru.org/1576792

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Anonymous Fri 11 Aug 2023 11:35:42 No.40212542 Report

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>>40211833
Yes and yea

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Anonymous Fri 11 Aug 2023 12:53:05 No.40212722 Report

Quoted By: >>40213163 >>40213189

>>40212225
I got two.

The first is a sequel to this one >https://derpibooru.org/images/3170257
This time showing Trixie isn't alone as a rubber slave, finding Twilight Sparkle struggling in a Celestia-themed version of the suit (I just saw this https://derpibooru.org/images/3178895 and knew I needed to request it.)

The second has Twilight Sparkle and Celestia turning into rubber versions of each other (based off https://derpibooru.org/images/3170292)
And while Twilight seems excited https://derpibooru.org/images/3025111
Celestia can't help but be a bit annoyed by how long it's taking. https://derpibooru.org/images/2074392

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Anonymous Fri 11 Aug 2023 15:57:28 No.40213163 Report

Quoted By: >>40213957

>>40212722
oooh seconding these!

>>40211819
anon, i am a sick fuck and i like hard control/power through strong restraints... as such, im a coombrain when it comes to chastity/edge&denial play
but i agree, your alternatives actually have a lot of potential, especially the "forced heterosexual interaction" or "public shaming after orgasm" through some kind of visual or scent marker

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Anonymous Fri 11 Aug 2023 16:08:45 No.40213189 Report

Quoted By: >>40213536

>>40212722

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Anonymous Fri 11 Aug 2023 18:43:54 No.40213536 Report

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>>40213189
Oh shit, thanks Anon

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Anonymous Fri 11 Aug 2023 21:24:08 No.40213957 Report

Quoted By: >>40215190 >>40215193

>>40213163
>i am a sick fuck and i like hard control/power through strong restraints... as such, im a coombrain when it comes to chastity/edge&denial play

I like that too, but making a pony a prisoner of his own shame does spice it a lot. And even so, most of the reason we enjoy that is because of the reactions the pony will have to that treatment.
And speaking of sick ideas, what would you think of mixing stimulation/orgasm control with forced plushophilia ?

I keep imagining Rarity doing that to Sweetie because shes at that age where the urges start showing up, but is still too young to be dating colts.

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Anonymous Fri 11 Aug 2023 21:51:53 No.40214040 Report

Quoted By: >>40214700 >>40215190 >>40215193

>>40212225
Spoiled Rich trying out some kinky lewd clothing at the boutique while her daughter who was dragged along looks at her with that face.
Or maybe shes looking with dread at the clothing set that her mother intends to buy for her.

Spoiled vectors that might work
https://derpibooru.org/images/1300791
https://derpibooru.org/images/1003577
https://derpibooru.org/images/1002298

The link for pic related, which has links for each individual object used in it
https://derpibooru.org/images/2633186

A mannequin vector to hold Diamond's clothes
https://derpibooru.org/images/1007376

Only thing I dont have is a good background pic for the boutique.

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Anonymous Sat 12 Aug 2023 02:48:11 No.40214700 Report

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>>40214040
Wait, what if the mother wanted to forced slave clothes on her ?
This would sound more fun if the clothes had a dom/sub contrast between them.
In Diamond's case the mannequin wearing it could have some gear meant to control her rebellioius daughter, like a collar, gag, leash, etc.

Maybe it could be a scenario with only that Siliver and Diamond pic, with both of them staring at what Diamond's mother forced her to wear, and over that cushion it would have an open box with a little note saying "Wear it for dinner", along with a collar tagged with Spoiled's cutie mark.
She could even her mother's cutie mark stamped on her new "clothes", right where Diamond's cutie mark would be.

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Anonymous Sat 12 Aug 2023 06:55:39 No.40215190 Report

Quoted By:

>>40213957
>And speaking of sick ideas, what would you think of mixing stimulation/orgasm control with ] ?
https://ponerpics.org/images/6753348
pic related but pone?
anything "hidden in plain sight" works for me. be it a pony first put into a sensory deprivation suit and then stuffed into some rich fillies plush to be tossed around,
or someones slave starting off with the same suit, but just put into the matress of the owners bed, only ever feeling the change of pressure when someone is on top, or perhaps hearing muffled moans coming from above
>>40214040
that sounds like a good way for spoiled to keep her daughter in check... but the dey might come where she goes to try one some fancy dress for a big event, only to find out her daughter made some alterations...

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Anonymous Sat 12 Aug 2023 06:57:20 No.40215193 Report

Quoted By: >>40215258

>>40213957
>And speaking of sick ideas, what would you think of mixing stimulation/orgasm control with SPOILER ?
https://ponerpics.org/images/6753348
pic related but pone?
anything "hidden in plain sight" works for me. be it a pony first put into a sensory deprivation suit and then stuffed into some rich fillies plush to be tossed around,
or someones slave starting off with the same suit, but just put into the matress of the owners bed, only ever feeling the change of pressure when someone is on top, or perhaps hearing muffled moans coming from above
>>40214040
that sounds like a good way for spoiled to keep her daughter in check... but the dey might come where she goes to try one some fancy dress for a big event, only to find out her daughter made some alterations...

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Anonymous Sat 12 Aug 2023 07:48:07 No.40215258 Report

Quoted By: >>40215968

>>40215193
>pic related but pone?
No, I was going more with an actual plushie that would be magically binded with the chaste pony somehow, so that the pony can only feel feel anything when its interacting with the plushie's "bits".
It would be something of an infantilizing kink. Making the young mare not be able to feel anything from her actual dates no matter how much she tries, to in the end only being able to actually get off from that despised childish toy shes pretty much forced to live with and take with her on long trips.

And in Rarity's case, she could be creative with the magic binding to make the sensitivity levels work depending on how well Sweetie treats her plushie like a friend instead of a toy . Things like leaving it in the corner of the room instead of stuffing in the closet when its not being used, not being mean to it, taking it to places, sleeping with it on the bed sometimes, etc.
Basically forcing her to have an imaginary coltfriend.

Also, just to not have a big dick standing out on the plushie, it could magically hide or appear with some magic word.

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Anonymous Sat 12 Aug 2023 14:49:55 No.40215968 Report

Quoted By: >>40216993

>>40215258
could work if her goal really just is to keep her little sister from making advances on any colt or stallion and just make her seem immature for as long as possible. combine that with frilly lolita dresses and you have a winning formula.
but how do you get her to the point she becomes horny enough to actually do what rarity wants? or any of the fillies in this pic

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Anonymous Sat 12 Aug 2023 17:44:45 No.40216532 Report

Quoted By: >>40217627

Bump

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Anonymous Sat 12 Aug 2023 18:40:58 No.40216748 Report

Quoted By:

>>40212225
Rarity putting Fluttershy inside a balloon suit with her mouth.

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Anonymous Sat 12 Aug 2023 19:52:13 No.40216993 Report

Quoted By:

>>40215968
Those are some reasons I came up for that, but I think it would have a better use in that chaste concubine idea for second daughters
>>40180979
>>40181280
As some joke solution for the fillies to have a sexual interaction of their own while the bigger sisters are busy banging actual stallions.

>how do you get her to the point she becomes horny enough to actually do what rarity wants? or any of the fillies in this pic

Have a way of making the fillies feel stimulation whenever their bigger sisters feel pleasure ?
Either with magic or some technology, it would be a really hot scenario to have an edged Sweetie Belle having to go to her lifeless plushie in her room for a relief while Rarity is busy having her brains fucked out by an actual stallion.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 12 Aug 2023 21:53:06 No.40217335 Report

Quoted By: >>40218163

Any update from Quill's story ?

Im really curious about what kinks and customs he thought up for the other nations, and their stance on Equestria and its ponies centuries after the tyrant sisters's fall.

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Anonymous Sat 12 Aug 2023 23:33:38 No.40217627 Report

Quoted By: >>40243532

>>40216532

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Anonymous Sun 13 Aug 2023 03:33:30 No.40218134 Report

Quoted By: >>40219203

>>40212225
Rarity having to pull the Diamond Dogs's heavy cart in a full enclosure suit because she kept whining about getting her hooves and coat dirty.

Basically inspired by this Applejack edit https://twibooru.org/2962665

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Anonymous Sun 13 Aug 2023 03:48:48 No.40218163 Report

Quoted By: >>40238431

>>40217335
Not yet, I'm sorry.

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Anonymous Sun 13 Aug 2023 06:54:22 No.40218500 Report

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>>40212225
Give Somnambula here some harder, and kinkier, restraints to wear during her sphinx challenge.

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Anonymous Sun 13 Aug 2023 06:58:54 No.40218512 Report

Quoted By:

>>40212225
Give Somnambula here some tougher, and kinkier, restraints to deal with during her sphinx challenge.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 13 Aug 2023 11:58:49 No.40218906 Report

Quoted By: >>40219059

https://ponerpics.org/images/1477657
opinions on selfcest?

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Anonymous Sun 13 Aug 2023 13:17:30 No.40219059 Report

Quoted By: >>40221279

>>40218906
One it

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Anonymous Sun 13 Aug 2023 14:30:39 No.40219203 Report

Quoted By: >>40219382 >>40219758 >>40220152 >>40221154

>>40218134

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Anonymous Sun 13 Aug 2023 16:03:14 No.40219382 Report

Quoted By: >>40220134

>>40219203
finally no more rariwhining!

but seeing that pic makes me wonder what this thread thinks about "smoking" as part of BDSM. or just scent, odor, or "whatever you want to call it"-play with ponies wearing masks or just having their airways controlled.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 13 Aug 2023 17:57:03 No.40219758 Report

Quoted By:

>>40219203
Thanks , it looks great !

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Anonymous Sun 13 Aug 2023 20:02:34 No.40220134 Report

Quoted By: >>40221216

>>40219382
I find both concepts hot. Scentplay for either bringing unwanted reactions on the pony or just forcing it breath some unwanted smell, and breathplay for the struggle of it.
But I like any discomfort tool in general used on slaves.

Also what did you picture in your head with that image ?

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 13 Aug 2023 20:11:11 No.40220152 Report

Quoted By:

>>40219203
Nice touch with the golden collar and horn ring !

Hey would it be possible to add Celestia's cutie mark or the Solar Empire's symbol on those two ?
It would make it look like Rarity was sentenced into doing forced labor by the Solar Empire.

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Anonymous Sun 13 Aug 2023 22:20:49 No.40220508 Report

Quoted By: >>40222712 >>40223366 >>40224577

bump

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Anonymous Sun 13 Aug 2023 23:34:26 No.40220747 Report

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>>40212225
Hey editor anon, someone asked about your Nun Luna work on the desuarchive ghost chat.
https://desuarchive.org/mlp/thread/40041273/#40106459_1
That is, in case you feel like dropping a reply there.

Also out of curiosity, would you be willing to try a vacbed edit if a good suggestion came up ?
I thought of one with Rarity being sealed in one that has painting frame around it, hung over on the wall of an art showing.
You could think of it as an ironic punishment given to Rarity after she tried ignoring her friends in Sweet and Elite, where now she definitely has the eyes of the elite on her.

There are plenty of vectors of her standing up, like pic related and these below
https://derpibooru.org/images/1706209
https://derpibooru.org/images/1745837
https://derpibooru.org/images/1500944
https://derpibooru.org/images/1762217

And there are some background galleries that might work as a showing place.
https://derpibooru.org/images/2011856
https://derpibooru.org/images/1426415

And if someone could find the bottom right picture in a better quality, then that one too.
https://derpibooru.org/images/2859345

And a G5 background from Tell your Tale
https://derpibooru.org/images/2859104

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Anonymous Mon 14 Aug 2023 02:40:36 No.40221154 Report

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>>40219203
Serves her right.

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Anonymous Mon 14 Aug 2023 03:13:27 No.40221216 Report

Quoted By: >>40221316

>>40220134
>Also what did you picture in your head with that image ?
having grown up with a much less regulated Internet, I have come across a variety of weird BDSM themed sites back then. if I were to ponify the one I mean, it would be rarity being made to smoke through her gasmask. this would be breath play on a whole different level. add a rebreather bag and rarity would struggle to stay conciencous for even a minute.

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Anonymous Mon 14 Aug 2023 03:55:57 No.40221279 Report

Quoted By: >>40221333

>>40219059
is that a yay or a nay

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Anonymous Mon 14 Aug 2023 04:18:04 No.40221316 Report

Quoted By: >>40221863 >>40222769

>>40221216
>a variety of weird BDSM themed sites back then
I could use some names. Maybe there are reuploads on pornhub and other places.

>it would be rarity being made to smoke through her gasmask
I think I've seen something like that, but never saw the appeal at that time.
Although I did see plenty of forced treadmill exercises that used breathplay with rebreather bags, along with shockpads, pointed heels, etc.
But now I can see definitely see the appeal in this as an added discomfort piled top of a tight constricting suit her uncaring mistress forced onto her.

Hey speaking of rebreather bags, have you ever seen videos where two masked people try breathing through one bag until one of them quits and opens their valve ?

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Anonymous Mon 14 Aug 2023 04:27:30 No.40221333 Report

Quoted By: >>40221863

>>40221279
I meant to put I love it but I was also half asleep when I typed it. My bad

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Anonymous Mon 14 Aug 2023 08:33:39 No.40221769 Report

Quoted By: >>40221773

܂>>40177607
>That’s going to wrinkle terribly.
Bad Rarity, her first thoughts/sentence is not about the well being of her master, but the future looks of clothing..
>now to be so transparent
Not like he opened up that much with that simple "no".
>I had a patient today.
Did it die already?
>Rarity finally breaks it with laughter
Did Anon ever joked with anything?
>it’s their right. I can’t stop them
Make this into an example? Notify Cadance/Shining Armor about the case and how it will end. Then put it into law that a doc can override the patient's decision if its life threatening. And also create a healthcare tax.
>I tried!
Let's say Anon is not the best at these things.
>No, that’s not it.
It depends who you ask...
>find a way to convince them to accept my help
He can walk up to them and inject them with some strong sedatives, drag them back to the clinic and do whatever needs to be done. If anyone asks they are patients who just collapsed in the middle of the street.
>You’d just violated so many ethical guidelines and laws.
Not yet.
Also why do I have a feeling that there is more behind this patient? I assume Anon told her that she is going to die within days, yet she choose to not get it fixed. Maybe its a trap to get Anon near the train station? Its easier to knock him out then drag him onto the train than doing it from the clinic.
>gasping desperately for breath
But her mouth is not stuffed with cocks!
>Are you the entertainment tonight
I hope she is Anon's entertainment tonight. Also what's up with these guards? Immediately thinking that a pretty mare can't be anything else if she appears to meet with Cadance.
>I was expecting her
Why is she lying?
>If you’re that desperate for dick
Well, she is (considering she pleasured herself in the new shop) but that's not why she is here.
>I cannot recall
She has really bad memory.
>Rarity couldn’t figure out why
She just called Anon Master instinctively in front of Cadance.
>Caramel hazelnut macchiato. Half caffeinated, half decaf.
That's some fancy coffee.
>Ugh.
Wait until she realizes its drip brew coffee.
>carried the second one out to Rarity
Oh yes, she does not have magic.
>It could use a little something
Cum?
>I thought you were going to say semen
Heh.
>why would they seek his aid if they didn’t trust him?
Exactly my thoughts.
>discuss some relevant matters with you
Is it about Coco?
>Maybe they can get started before...
Rarity forgot to tell Cadance that they are looking for a pony with stomach pains.
>must have been the hundredth time
His foot is healing well.
>We need to talk.
He barges in like this every single time.
>Explain yourself
Now he listens without immediately trying to knock him out or something? That's new.
>she was right about all three
Heh.
>It’s not like they’re going to learn from them
Maybe not that single pony, but all the others will.

Cont.

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Anonymous Mon 14 Aug 2023 08:35:48 No.40221773 Report

Quoted By: >>40221775

>>40221769
>You’re a good man who happens to be retarded.
Yea, I'm pretty sure that Anon's way of telling the patient about the possibilities lead to this situation. Explaining the operation probably sounded like being on a griffon butcher's table.
>Apple Cobbler
Oh so they know her name. Does that mean they found her?
>Most of what you say doesn’t make any sense at all to me
But the "you will live a week at most without treatment" is pretty clear to me. If Anon said that.
>She’s forced in at spearpoint, marching in manacles.
Oh wow. Also this shows how much they believe in Anon.
>PLEASE don’t eat me!
Now where did this come from?
>Her thrashing starts to weaken
This scene is just like when I had to put down one of my pet... getting her cornered, injecting sedatives, fighting, getting weaker, falling asleep forever.
>They help you move her onto the operating table
Why are they allowed in the operating theater?
>It was as you’d expected
Moments earlier he hoped for a much easier surgery.
>If you had a surgical assistant-
I was just thinking about the same. Where is Sassaflash? At least she can fetch things.
>But you had done something unforgivable.
What, preventing someone from killing themselves?

܂>>40184911
>You’re keeping me alive so I stay fresh
That's some next level shit.
>She’s beyond terrified.
Get AJ to talk to her.
>if somepony else talked to her
Yes.
>you’ve got it backwards
I did too.
>I have it real easy
I think Anon did not commit any crime here. But Shining did. Even if it was necessary to save a pony. Question is is Anon's word enough to prompt such actions?
>I had to beat her up while she was begging for her life!
Why don't the guard have anything to catch a pony without hurting her? Especially when they have unicorns. Nopony knows a spell to make one asleep or something? And why did Shining had to beat her instead of restreaning her with magic?
>and this is how I do it
Well, beating up ponies will sure boost the need for Anon's services.
>but they’re not obligated to
Technically possibly not. But if they pick anyone else, I bet their lives will get harder.
>Maybe this is what she was talking about?
I'm pretty sure more ponies would look at her disapprovingly than just the cuncil.
>putting you directly under the crown’s control
At least money will not be an issue. Hopefully.
>She’ll probably be upset
Yes, but she will be unable to blame anyone.
>Luna though… she’s scary.
Let Cadance handle her. I'm sure Luna will want to make the conversation as short as possible.
>I saved a life, and gave myself a lot of leverage.
This is where he is wrong. He thinks the others think he saved a life. The others don't believe in Anon, let alone in his diagnosis. So first he will need to convince the others that Apple Cobbler was in danger of dying.
>Well, others have.
Time to hold those reins tighter.

Cont.

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Anonymous Mon 14 Aug 2023 08:36:49 No.40221775 Report

Quoted By: >>40221776

>>40221773
>she was only welcome in the base if she was going to suck on things
This base seems like Cadance's private "army".
>she was looking forward to community service
Heh.
>I seem to have missed quite a bit!
The guards and Apple Cobbler did, not Rarity.
>like you did earlier today
Heh.
>Seems pretty healthy to me.
I imagined Cadance getting excited over this.
>it was killing me knowing that you hated me
Cadance is getting ahead of the situation a bit.
>You STILL don’t understand what makes you happy
This is not a surprise.
>it’s sorta my thing
But only second after getting railed.
>That’s not how true romance works!
Both of them has some twisted image of how it should work.
>it’s sorta my thing
I thought sex is her thing.
>and are trying to justify it
Rarity is doing the same...
>good way to unwind
She received lashes too last time didn't she? Also, I just realized maybe the guards know who she is, and this is why they called her today's entertainment?
>and he keeps ignoring it
Maybe this is because she is breaking more and more and Anon is just fed up trying to control every minute of her life? Rarity sure gives Anon a lot of job.
>GET soft
Heh.
>I do not take half measures
Yes she does. Where is her collar?
>what I want to get him to do to me
Who is the master again? Wouldn't this be Anon's job?
>Are you coming onto me?
Or she is trying to get to Anon...
>Of course she was ready!
I bet there will be last minute doubts when they get to the action. Anon has to force Rarity a lot to try out new things.
>We’re doing it my way
As I said, who is the master...
>I’ve been trying for years
I have two guesses, Twilight and Shining.
>She gave her head a shake
As I said a few sentences earlier, last minute doubts. Every time. Then she gets over it.
>revolting as Applejack’s compost heap
Heh.
>That’s like, nothing.
Compared to her maybe.
>to want this
But she is doing the same to herself for the last few minutes.
>I’m the best - He was a quick shot
Cadance's approach backfired.
>Shiny won’t let me
But I bet she is doing it in disguise.
>swell with pride
And soon her stomach will swell with cum.
>Do you have a coltfriend?
Would be funny if one of the stallions recognize her when they are in the clinic.
>I was rather hoping you’d forgotten
I did not!
>A high society activity
Well, its not far off. Cadance is here. And she wants to participate.
>fucking her own throat eagerly
If she were just this eager to pleasure Anon..
>What do you need?
As I said, she wants to participate.
>This is really for beginners.
She is one.
>practiced every single day without exception
She is going to ask Cadance to let her into here then.
>make sure you don’t get to cum
Someone knows what Rarity's master currently wants.
>You’re going to do this every day
That aligns with her plan.

Cont.

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Anonymous Mon 14 Aug 2023 08:37:51 No.40221776 Report

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>>40221775
>kept her right on the edge
There will be payback from Rarity.

This was long. You should have split this into 4 or 6 smaller updates posted weekly, rather than this two.

Thanks for the update!

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 14 Aug 2023 09:43:37 No.40221863 Report

Quoted By: >>40222866 >>40223603

>>40221316
what's the appeal?
hard to put into words. I hate smell of smoking but like the idea of breathplay. being forced to breathe and smell something not only through an airway that limits ones airflow, but also something that that smells and makes you possibly caught is kind of hot.
as a story, I could imagine rarity being caught smoking by her mistress and then going the ironic punishment path.

>>40221333
both pony, human, or mixed? if mixed, which should be Dom?

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Anonymous Mon 14 Aug 2023 16:20:45 No.40222712 Report

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Anonymous Mon 14 Aug 2023 16:42:50 No.40222769 Report

Quoted By: >>40223603

>>40221316
>I could use some names. Maybe there are reuploads on pornhub and other places.
im talking early 2000s anon...im old

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Anonymous Mon 14 Aug 2023 17:16:41 No.40222866 Report

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>>40221863
Pony, human, or mixed, the idea is just hot

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Anonymous Mon 14 Aug 2023 19:27:44 No.40223366 Report

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Anonymous Mon 14 Aug 2023 20:48:06 No.40223603 Report

Quoted By: >>40223893 >>40224618

>>40221863
>rarity being caught smoking by her mistress and then going the ironic punishment path
I do like the idea of an overcorrective mistress for Rarity.
Maybe not doing for her sake, but because she wants to enforce the perfect look on her slave, regardless of Rarity's complaints over her treatment.

>>40222769
I've seen older stuff get archived.

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Anonymous Mon 14 Aug 2023 22:48:40 No.40223893 Report

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>>40223603
The complaints just result in more punishment

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Anonymous Tue 15 Aug 2023 02:55:42 No.40224577 Report

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>>40220508

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Anonymous Tue 15 Aug 2023 03:13:02 No.40224618 Report

Quoted By: >>40225125

>>40223603
oooh, remember our "old mistress hates younger mares" thing we had going? this could be applied here as well. a rarity stuck in strict shape wear, and clothes that usually only older mares would wear also fits to the smoking stereotype imo...
makes me wonder what else can be done to young rarity to appear old? those plastic headscarf? overdone makeup, but not the slutty kind?
>>40223893
of course! rara is for harsh whippings after all

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Anonymous Tue 15 Aug 2023 04:46:40 No.40224795 Report

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>>40212225
Would you be willing to do one more Rarity edit ?

Do you think you could give her a shiny bodysuit to complement her ponyplay gear in this pic?

RapeApe

RapeApe Tue 15 Aug 2023 08:07:46 No.40225056 Report

Quoted By: >>40225623 >>40226964

I have more stuff written, but I don't have access to my home computer. It'll be up soonish. Probably tomorrow.
Sorry for mobile posting.

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Anonymous Tue 15 Aug 2023 08:26:13 No.40225084 Report

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>>40212225
Could you do a sequel to this one? https://twibooru.org/2954429
But with Rainbow Dash and Lightning Dust, and more consensual and cutesy, like they're both into it. Something like https://twibooru.org/18220 and RD holding up LD's head while being coated in her latex body or whatever.

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Anonymous Tue 15 Aug 2023 08:49:59 No.40225125 Report

Quoted By: >>40226211

>>40224618
I remember it, and I really liked that trope for her. Actually I really like the "grown woman being toyed and ordered around by an older woman" trope in general.
Theres something really hot about seeing their adult independence and pride being discarded and ending up having less freedom of choice than a teenager.

>this could be applied here as well
Now Im picturing some twisted "Devil Wears Prada" scenario where Rarity has to please some older influential fashion mare to not get blocked out of the industry.

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Anonymous Tue 15 Aug 2023 13:55:03 No.40225623 Report

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>>40225056
It's fine man

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Anonymous Tue 15 Aug 2023 17:15:48 No.40226211 Report

Quoted By: >>40227389 >>40227790

>>40225125
this makes me wonder, what other smell/odorplay could be used here apart from smoking? overuse of perfume? just sweat, collected from the latexsuits that seem to be all the rage with the designers?

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Anonymous Tue 15 Aug 2023 20:45:16 No.40226964 Report

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>>40225056
Bumping for more.

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Anonymous Tue 15 Aug 2023 22:57:47 No.40227389 Report

Quoted By: >>40227896

>>40226211
I mean adding on to those if a designer has multiple slaves they could they could use scent play with their hooded models having dirty socks/tights/or underwear

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Anonymous Wed 16 Aug 2023 01:47:11 No.40227790 Report

Quoted By: >>40227896

>>40226211
I wasnt thinking of going that far with the smell thing.
Mostly had in mind a bitter, smoking older mare who would relish seeing how far the younger mare can take her demands and abuse.

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Anonymous Wed 16 Aug 2023 02:33:29 No.40227896 Report

Quoted By: >>40228180 >>40228687

>>40227389
>used stallion underwear while rarity is in heat
>just some pieces of latex, along with some highly addicting gas
>outright filthy things like garbage or her owners urine

>>40227790
I had a scene in mind in which raras mistress, a retired model/designer, keeps telling rarity which hoops she has to jump through to be successful, but each time she sees rarity climb over one of those obstacles, she simply adds new ones, or alters others to make it harder.

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Anonymous Wed 16 Aug 2023 04:51:25 No.40228180 Report

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Those also work

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Anonymous Wed 16 Aug 2023 09:30:33 No.40228687 Report

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>>40227896
I only realized it now, but breathplay and bad odors can be a great match.
Giving the pony very few chances to breath, and when it can it has to be in that awful smell. And if it tries holding in for a while, it will eventually give in and have to breath a lungful of the smell later.

The breathing tube could even be something that only reaches the nostrils, so they cant cheat by breating with ther mouths.

RapeApe

RapeApe Wed 16 Aug 2023 10:34:34 No.40228788 Report

Quoted By: >>40228790

>>40193908
That is the kind of implant I was talking about, yes. It's based on real technology, and I intend to maintain that for autistic reasons. The implant will expire after 30 days, at which point it must be replaced. This lifespan is dictated by how much of the drug is available. They cannot be safely removed, however, it's designed to be destroyed and excreted by the body over time, so in about a year there will be no trace of it left. It's safe to install a second one, but only if the first is deactivated or depleted. They can be deactivated at a range of a few meters, and are controlled by RFID.
For clarity, these products are currently possible if you’re willing to throw caution to the wind. They're not used since the risk of nerve destruction is currently too high, but it's an active research venue since it could cure acute pain without risk of addiction. A permanent block of that kind is trivial, a reversible one extremely dicey.

As for what's possible, the setting is meant to be nonspecific near future. Anything that's being experimented with but is not publicly available is acceptable. I'm willing to broadly accept that techniques are more refined, and risks are generally lower. I'm not willing to accept a completely novel approach or concept since those would still be in development. This limitation is much more lax than you might expect, as there are some rather wild things in testing right now. Optic nerve implants are already available to the rich, which can cure blindness. The shortage of usable hearts looks like it's been solved by simply living without a heart. Other organs can be printed, though they don’t tend to function well enough to serve as a transplant yet. Chimps can control computers telepathically thanks to chips built into their brains, though that one admittedly has some rather scary side effects.
We absolutely CAN have an implant receive data from somepony’s nerves, and then broadcast it. And we can of course have that signal interpreted however we see fit, and used as instructions for anything that's wireless enabled. Including implants. There will be technical requirements such as both of them having to be within range of a transceiver, and configuring it would require anon to observe one of Coco's climaxes with some instruments, but it's possible. I suppose we could handwave that all away if it gets too clumsy for the fantasy, but I think part of what makes this green work is that I try to keep it grounded in medical fact. Removing those limits would certainly make things easier on me, but they'd also remove a few too many of the challenges that actually make the story happen. If, for example, Anon had drugs that instantly broke anyone to his will, it would be boring. But if such a thing could exist and he didn't use them, it wouldn't make sense.
I rather like that idea, by the way. We'll have to get surgical access to Coco though.

RapeApe

RapeApe Wed 16 Aug 2023 10:35:35 No.40228790 Report

Quoted By: >>40228793 >>40238734

>>40228788
>>40201822
You got it, boss!
>>40202578
Midazolam is used in a medical setting as a presurgical sedative. It IS also used by various states in the USA to kill prisoners. Though the midazolam itself isn't the agent that causes death, it's used to make them less able to resist. Ostensibly, it is also used for pain management as the lethal agents will cause extreme pain, however since it is not suitable for pain management or sedation in surgical conditions I am skeptical that it would help very much when you're being killed. People who have survived lethal injections certainly don't seem to think it is.
I digress.

Midazolam's use in executions is actually why I picked it. It would have made more sense to go straight for the ketamine, but I wanted to make the situation as gruesome as possible while maintaining that the doc was trying to do the right thing. Apple Cobbler thought she was being killed, and though she wouldn't appreciate the significance of midazolam it was a convenient way to make her situation more similar to murder.
>>40201826
They get along well enough, but as >>40202247 said they don't really have enough history to be besties. Cadence and Shining both feel a deep sense of gratitude so they've opened up to him more than they otherwise might, plus he's a useful tool for their personal ambitions. I expect he will become close friends eventually, but these things take time.
>>40202830
>>40203386
Actually, I had never considered a relationship between Lovelace and Cadence. But now that you mention it, it makes perfect sense for them to at the very least be friendly acquaintances. This is worth exploring.
>>40204250
Rarity found out about the shop since Anon forced her to go there. We've never been told how Anon knew about it. Currently there is no explanation, he just knew. It would be perfectly reasonable to say he heard about it from Cadence at some point.
>>40205388
We were given a bit of a backstory with Lovelace, so I don't think it would work for her to be the result of Cadence screwing up.
She used to be a fashion designer. When she saw the passion Rarity had for fashion, she realized that she didn't care about it as much as a true designer and decided to look for something different. Running a sex shop is a fairly recent development for her.
All that said, Cadence unapologetically pushes fetish lifestyles on others. Maybe Lovelace was influenced by her when picking a new career?
>>40206058
I figure she'd have a few others she can talk to. She still has to be fairly cautious though.
>>40206149
I might have to reconsider Lovelace's personality thanks to this discussion. She's currently meant to be quite naïve about what's happening. But Cadence having her claws in that mare makes too much sense. And if Rarity's shop is doing work on unwilling patrons, and Rarity starts helping...
Unf.

RapeApe

RapeApe Wed 16 Aug 2023 10:36:38 No.40228793 Report

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>>40228790
>>40221776
It was admittedly pretty long, but I didn't want to stop when I was actually being productive.
The real high IQ move is to keep writing and then just not post it. I didn't do that because... uh... I don't know why.

>The lash bit cruelly into Rarity’s hide.
>A blinding jolt of pain overwhelmed her senses, forcing reality to fall away.
>There was no prison.
>There was no whip.
>There was no self.
>There was only pain.
>Another blow landed, but she didn’t notice.
>The peaks and valleys of her torment had at last blurred into one miasma of misery.
>She had long since lost the capacity to track the lashes, and had completely abandoned any composure she once had.
>Unrestrained, guttural cries of agony filled the air.
>If she could still hear, she would know that all had fallen silent.
>All, except for the whip, herself, and the dripping coming from Cadence.
>The illusion of control had been shattered and cast to the four winds.
>Even her profound lust was long forgotten.
>Erased by an eager, relentless, brutal onslaught.
>The strikes were landing cleanly, with practiced precision.
>Each one extracting the maximum suffering it possibly could without breaking the skin.
>When Cadence had promised there would be no cuts, Rarity had been relieved.
>The thought of her magnificent ass being marred, or perhaps even scarred- well, she would be less attractive to her master!
>But she had passed the point of caring about her appearance.
>Past the point of caring about her master.
>Past the point of caring about anything!
>Another blow landed.
>For a time, she had reflexively recoiled from each touch.
>But now her body was too weary to even attempt to pull away from the pain.
>Rarity remained limp and impassive, having totally surrendered to the pain.
>Cadence could release her bindings, and Rarity would still make no attempt to flee.
>The pain had radiated outward from her butt, and seemingly engulfed every atom of her being.
>Eternity stretched onward.
>But something strange began to happen.
>Her torment began to feel distant, and her body felt disconnected from her mind.
>The pain was still there, but somehow it felt less real than a half forgotten dream.
>She began to feel…
>Peace.
>Her torment
>Her vision slowly began to return.
>The return of her hearing marked the bizarre absence of a cracking noise.
>The pain was receding.
>And as it faded, Rarity returned to reality.
>She rather wished she hadn’t, and her butt still burned with fiery agony.
>She slowly mustered the strength to look up.
>Moving her neck sent a jolt through her entire body, and she couldn’t help but choke out a sob.
>Cadence stood above a puddle of arousal.
>She was wearing shiny black thigh high boots and a corset
>She held in her mouth the instrument of Rarity’s torture, a flog made up of four metal chains.
>Rarity blinked the tears out of her eyes, and with clarified vision she could see a distinctive look of concern on Cadence’s face.

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RapeApe Wed 16 Aug 2023 10:37:38 No.40228796 Report

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>>40228793
>In addition to the telltale flush of arousal, of course.
“More.”
>Cadence spat the flog out.
>It clattered to the ground, the sound echoing in the tense silence.
>”Rarity-”
“More whipping!”
>”You’ve clearly-”
“You said I had to get through five hundred, and that I was to choose how many I received per day! I shall NOT be returning! We finish it TODAY, or we don’t finish it at all!”
>”You can’t take more today.”
“Then the punishment is concluded!”
>”Shiny wouldn’t allow for that, and he controls the militia.”
“Then finish it NOW!”
>Cadence sat down in her own puddle.
>”I’d love to keep going. This is getting me so horny, you have NO idea. I didn’t know it until you got your sentence, but I REALLY like disciplining bitches.”
>She reached her neck down and licked the floor, greedily lapping up her own vaginal secretions.
>Arousal and disgust were battling for primacy in Rarity’s heart.
>Arousal was winning.
>”I came like, three times from hitting you. I wasn’t even touching myself, it was just the thrill of putting a mare in her place! And I’m REALLY close to a fourth!”
>She stared off at the wall with a vacant blissful visage.
>”I’m wondering if there’s any way I can convince you to do the same to me someday. I think I’d like to try it.”
“You’re insane.”
>”Do you know how Twilight became an alicorn?”
>Of course Rarity did.
>She was there, after all.
>Twilight had created new magic.
>Not merely a new spell, but new magical energy.
>Something out of nothing.
>She had violated one of the fundamental laws of the arcane, and likely revolutionized spellcraft.
>”Of course you do. Do you know how it happened to me?”
“I can honestly say I do not care.”
>”Somepony named Prismia was using a magical artifact to amplify dark feelings in an evil plot. It turns out it amplified ALL feelings, not just dark ones. I took it from her to undo some of the damage she had caused, both to herself and others.”
See Twilight Sparkle and the Crystal Heart Spell for more details. Though there really isn’t much more to it than that.
>”Magic is strongly linked to feelings. It’s why changelings can eat love, and why camaraderie empowers spells. I didn’t know it at the time but since the necklace was using that magic to amplify feelings, it had started a feedback loop. I never took it off because I needed it all the time. Plus it looked cute. So the magic just kept building and building. Eventually it got too strong, and exploded. And… that was it.”

RapeApe

RapeApe Wed 16 Aug 2023 10:39:28 No.40228798 Report

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>>40228796
“And how is this relevant?”
>”You know how I said I never took it off? I had my first orgasm while wearing that necklace. And second. Third, fourth I think? It was all in the same session, so it gets a little blurry… Even before that I was way more interested in colts than most fillies. I spent a lot of time reading about anatomy, imagining what it would feel like, you know, usual stuff. But I started REALLY young. I never touched myself though. I wanted to save my first climax for my wedding night.”
>She lets out a dejected sigh.
>”Maybe the necklace amplified my lust too much, or maybe I just didn’t have enough willpower. At least I managed to stay a virgin.”
“Do you mean to tell me that a magical burst of love and lust fuelled your transformation?”
>”No, Rarity. I think I AM that burst. Celestia has a profound connection to the sun, Luna is deeply tied to the moon, Twilight is practically MADE of magic. And me? I’m full of love, in all its forms.”
>The discussion had distracted Rarity from her pain.
>She tried to stand up, having totally forgotten how grievous her beating was.
>Electric suffering shot up her spine, dropping her back to the ground.
>”I had the doctor check me several times to see if my lust was caused by something non-magical, and he couldn’t find anything. What’s left except the obvious? I can’t ever know for sure, but I think I’m hornier than anypony else has ever been.”
>That much was in evidence!
>”So if somepony like ME is saying it’s time to lay off the kinky stuff, you had better believe there’s a good reason for it.”
>Oh.
>Oh dear.
>”It would bring me INDESCRIBABLE pleasure to keep going. But I don’t want to hurt you.”
“WELL IT’S A TAD TOO LATE TO AVOID THAT, ISN’T IT?”
>”You know what I meant. As much as I liked this, I don’t think I’ll do it anymore. I’m scared of what will happen if I lose control.”
“So you mean I won’t have to endure any more of this?”
>”We’ll have to find somepony else-”
“No you bucking don’t! It’s already too much that I’m being treated this way by ROYALTY, I shan’t tolerate such indignation at the hooves of a commoner! Besides, can you IMAGINE the scandal if they were to talk? No, we’ll simply have to find some way for you to contain your depravity! Or better yet, call off this outrageous injustice!”
>"Okay."
"Beg your pardon?"
>”I'll have your flogging canceled, or at least lessened.”
“And I am simply to trust you? No, this is a position of convenience. You'll simply tell me your husband wouldn't allow it, then redouble! Oh, I can see your master plan! You intend to drag this out as long as possible! You just want me to suck on them because it gets you off!”

RapeApe

RapeApe Wed 16 Aug 2023 10:41:31 No.40228803 Report

Quoted By: >>40229970 >>40230057 >>40231250 >>40231393 >>40234446 >>40239981

>>40228798
>”No, it gets THEM off. I'm serious, I'll have your punishment lessened, even though it’s going to cost me! I just… Twilight would never forgive me if I seriously hurt you. And the doctor would be heartbroken. Even if they somehow never found out, I don't think I'd be able to live with myself.”
>She sniffled and averted her gaze.
>Was she seriously starting to cry?
>”I had to fight pretty hard to get you this sentence, you know. It was supposed to be much worse, but I insisted. I made a lot of ponies angry.”
“Such as?”
>”Shiney. He's never been mad at me before, I don't think. At first it was a little exciting because I thought he might hit me. But… I love him so much.”
>She turned her face back to Rarity with a pained, tearful smile.
>”But when I told him the pony who had nearly killed his sister wasn’t going to prison… He wouldn't even look at me!”
>A pang of pity managed to cut into Rarity’s fury.
>”He's calmed down. A lot. I think he and I are okay, but I've never seen him so angry. He blamed you. Now that Twilight is safe he's calmed down a lot. But when we weren't sure she was going to make it? And we couldn't find the monster who had done it. Well, we were sure who had sabotaged the hospital, and we knew where to find you.”
>Ah.
>Guilt.
>Such a vile sensation.
>”I'm hesitant to ask, but what did he think should be done?”
>”I don’t know. He had yet to decide. All I know is he wanted it to be much worse.”
>She owed this perverse wretch.
>If what she said was indeed true.
>It wasn't without verisimilitude.
>”The doctor put himself at risk to protect you, too. He wound up spending a night in prison for it.”
>Rarity hadn't heard that.
>Both those claims should be fairly easy to verify…
“I shall be checking your story. If what you say is true, then you have my gratitude. If you are lying to me, I shall have you undone.”
>Cadence didn’t react to Rarity’s threat.
>She just focused on regaining her composure.
“Do not presume that I am incapable of ruining you!”
>“How exactly would you do that?”
“Pray you do not find out.”
>She had nothing, of course.
>Rarity struggled to her hooves, having trouble finding a way to support her weight without causing blinding pain.
>Cadence offered a hoof for Rarity to pull herself up, only for it to be swatted away.
>She had quite thoroughly lost control of the situation.
>It was going to take some rather extreme measures to get it back.
>But she knew exactly what to do.

If it seems like Rarity's relationship with Cadence changed quite suddenly, keep in mind that she had just taken a major beating. She had a good reason to be irritable.

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Anonymous Wed 16 Aug 2023 18:03:51 No.40229970 Report

Quoted By: >>40232141

>>40228803
Bump

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Anonymous Wed 16 Aug 2023 18:31:13 No.40230057 Report

Quoted By: >>40240648

>>40228803
good Update, although I have to admit I'm a bit out of the loop at the moment.
rarity asking for more whippings is fucking HOT
bit for the sake of health, I agree the punishment should be lessened abit to prevent any injuries. what could be done to spice things up is candy not having the time and still have a "commoner" spank raras rump. if she fears that word about her could spread, why not anonymize her? immobilize her in a wall with only her rump sticking out perhaps?

At Wed 16 Aug 2023 20:56:16 No.40230502 Report

Quoted By: >>40240648

Damn it, what way too see her accept her masochist side.

I mean it was hot, specially with how Cadenza was at her limit.

But I think that Rarity is overachieving on this, specially when the Doctors see the bad state of her rear.

And good lore on trying to explain why Cadenza act on such way.

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Anonymous Wed 16 Aug 2023 22:17:53 No.40230757 Report

Quoted By: >>40240648 >>40240727

>>40228796
>I didn’t know it until you got your sentence, but I REALLY like disciplining bitches.
More reasons for her to be involved in future training sessions ?

>It’s already too much that I’m being treated this way by ROYALTY, I shan’t tolerate such indignation at the hooves of a commoner!
She still doesnt understand whhat status a slave is supposed to have.
Maybe she should have a commoner spank her hide. She had her identity hidden before with anon's help so that wouldnt be an issue.

>Was she seriously starting to cry?
>”I had to fight pretty hard to get you this sentence, you know. It was supposed to be much worse, but I insisted. I made a lot of ponies angry.”
>”Shiney. He's never been mad at me before, I don't think. At first it was a little exciting because I thought he might hit me. But… I love him so much.”
>She turned her face back to Rarity with a pained, tearful smile.
>”But when I told him the pony who had nearly killed his sister wasn’t going to prison… He wouldn't even look at me!”

She really knows how to act.
Man anon has no idea how much Cadence is helping him in this. If she's liking this as much as it seems, I could see her asking for more participation in the training sessions as a payback for all this help.

>She had quite thoroughly lost control of the situation.
>It was going to take some rather extreme measures to get it back.
>But she knew exactly what to do.
I got lost here. Is this referring to Cadence or Rarity ?

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Anonymous Thu 17 Aug 2023 01:10:01 No.40231250 Report

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>>40228803
Wonderful work so far

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Anonymous Thu 17 Aug 2023 02:01:53 No.40231393 Report

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>>40228803
Nice, we need more. I am excited to see where the story goes.

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Anonymous Thu 17 Aug 2023 06:14:51 No.40232141 Report

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>>40229970

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Anonymous Thu 17 Aug 2023 08:51:31 No.40232472 Report

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>>40212225
You made a Trixie wearing a Luna suit and a Twilight wearing Celestia suit.

What about completing the set and having Chrysalis( stuck in her pony disguise ) forcibly becoming Cadence's rubber slave ?

She would definitely be struggling against her suit like Trixie did so maybe pic related could give a good pose, or one of the links below could help.

https://derpibooru.org/images/1761382
https://derpibooru.org/images/2502864
https://derpibooru.org/images/1754096

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Anonymous Thu 17 Aug 2023 17:58:29 No.40233723 Report

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>>40232472
>that facial expression
"i cant believe you locked my coltfriend into chastity, princess?!"

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Anonymous Thu 17 Aug 2023 22:29:26 No.40234446 Report

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܂>>40228803
>There was only pain.
Cadence really gives Rarity a whipping she can barely tolerate. Would be interesting is in the meantime she would orgasm her mind getting mixed and associate pain with pleasure.
>dripping coming from Cadence
I wonder how sexually frustrated Cadence is.
>with practiced precision
I wonder how often it is that this kind of punishment is served. Or is this something only for Rarity.
>she would be less attractive to her master
Or Anon having to treat the wounds. Also she finally placing Anon first, and not her own needs to be beautiful.
>The pain was receding.
I hope its not because Cadence managing to hit a nerve which broke the connection from her hide to her brain.
>She was wearing..
Unf.
>sat down in her own puddle
Now I would like to see Shining Armor walking in, sniffing the air and getting a hard on immediately. But Cadence being aroused, leaking like a faucet is probably a "just another day" kind of thing to him.
>I came like, three times from hitting you.
Dman, she is even more into this than I thought, yet she is able to stop herself.
>You’re insane.
Says the one wanting more.
>I wanted to save my first
Cadence's fetish must be orgasm denial.
>in all its forms
And why do punishment fit this?
>I don’t think I’ll do it anymore.
So, who is the lucky one to finish the job?
>No, it gets THEM off.
But she just said she came 3 times already.
>pity managed to cut into Rarity’s fury
At the end Cadence will manage to gaslight Rarity.
>She just focused on regaining her composure.
She is a damn good manipulator.

Thanks for the update!

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Anonymous Fri 18 Aug 2023 03:09:03 No.40235162 Report

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>>40234446
>Cadence's fetish must be orgasm denial.
which is something chining should give to her!
I once came across a fic of either anon, or sunset shimmer getting into the minds of ponies, and when either of them got into pinkies head, that both were totally overwhelmed by her out of this world-lust.
with pinkie, it can just be explained as a pinkie thing, but why not make old cadence just be used to it by now? always wet, always eager and yet, restrained and composed

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Anonymous Fri 18 Aug 2023 08:58:01 No.40235710 Report

Quoted By: >>40240648

>>40228798
You ever thought of including a changeling to be Cadence's plaything in this ?
With her being this embodiment of lust and love you described, she could have quite the power over some captive ling she kept in a private dungeon without shining or anon knowing about.

https://twibooru.org/2844760

I mean it doesnt have to be something of a big focus, but Cadence could want to have a slave of her own while helping anon with Rarity.

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Anonymous Fri 18 Aug 2023 13:23:01 No.40236087 Report

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And here we have book pony in her natural state, bound, gagged, and annoyed.

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Anonymous Fri 18 Aug 2023 14:08:42 No.40236175 Report

Quoted By: >>40236638

>>40236087
>not mention of aroused, frustrated or in pain
one job, and her master couldn't even give her that

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Anonymous Fri 18 Aug 2023 15:51:00 No.40236384 Report

Quoted By: >>40237157

idea i got from this comic https://twibooru.org/3034741
>what if you totally numbed a ponies gentials
>however, there is a catch!
>said pony is still able to pleasure itself if the pleasure is derived not from conventional touching of the genitals, but drawing or writing, or having others draw or write about sexual pleasure
>the pony would be forced to read books or comics to feel any gratification from then on
>perhaps as a way to force it to become a smut author or erotica artist?

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Anonymous Fri 18 Aug 2023 17:37:39 No.40236638 Report

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>>40236175
I mean, why do you think she's annoyed?

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Anonymous Fri 18 Aug 2023 21:07:09 No.40237157 Report

Quoted By: >>40238747

>>40236384
Wouldn't that still be a form of orgasm control, like chastity?

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Anonymous Sat 19 Aug 2023 06:38:30 No.40238431 Report

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>>40218163
Oh no worries, just asked out of curiosity.
Also speaking of it, do you have any ideas floating in your head that you could use some suggestions on?

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 19 Aug 2023 09:58:15 No.40238734 Report

Quoted By: >>40240648

>>40177586
>>40228790
In my experience (cats and dogs), midazolam does practically nothing when administered on its own. It can be used with a strong opioid for a decent sedation but one should use alfa2-agonists (xylazine/detomidine/romifidine with horses, preferably xyla here) when possible.

Ketamine is great and rarely complicated, cocktail of drugs lowers the of each individual drug.

What unholy concoctions is Anon using as inhalants if it contraindicates mida? With iso/sevoflurane mida lowers the required dose reducing toxicity. Propofol could be used if there are no inhalants (usually not used with horses due to cost).

Also, where are my preoperative NSAIDs and antibiotics?

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Anonymous Sat 19 Aug 2023 10:19:01 No.40238747 Report

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>>40237157
kind of, but not really?
i mean, the subject would still be able to get off to whatever they want, they just have to do it on paper

it was just an idea though inspired by that comic...

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Anonymous Sat 19 Aug 2023 16:24:39 No.40239542 Report

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https://ponerpics.org/images/6767971
princest slavery as entertainment for their now freed little ponies

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Anonymous Sat 19 Aug 2023 18:36:34 No.40239981 Report

Quoted By: >>40240002 >>40240227 >>40240648

>The Carat and Stick
I had read the whole thing from ponepaste. It was fun and all, until the end of 2nd part with the whole whipping thing. Holy shit Cadance and Shining were insane before, but now...

>>40228803
Now I see that it's not the end and I'm on the one hand curious what is happening now, and on the other hand terrified. Do I just browse archive for RapeApe user or it is somewhere another paste site?

here quick fanart.

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Anonymous Sat 19 Aug 2023 18:37:15 No.40239983 Report

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to p1

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Anonymous Sat 19 Aug 2023 18:42:05 No.40240002 Report

Quoted By: >>40240120

>>40239981
>here quick fanart.
wait, did you draw that raricow? thats good!
the udders are a bit far in front though
>Now I see that it's not the end and I'm on the one hand curious what is happening now, and on the other hand terrified
dont be, the fun is only starting! rarity may finally find and understand her place in all of this, cadence may reveal more of her own degenerate past and we have more ponies come into all of this to join the fun.
as for more on this story, obviously there isnt more than we already have and its been a while since i browsed the old archives but there are plenty of greens left in the OP itself if that is what you meant

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Anonymous Sat 19 Aug 2023 19:09:13 No.40240120 Report

Quoted By: >>40240141

>>40240002
Thx man. And those are not udders,its pillow. I don't know if I remember correctly, but she had black spot painted as a 'disguise' and left bound in the basement. She probably should had spread bar if I now thinking about it.

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Anonymous Sat 19 Aug 2023 19:14:20 No.40240141 Report

Quoted By: >>40240495 >>40240561

>>40240120
oooh you actually used the scene from the story. nice one
yeah i would love to see raricow make a comeback again, perhaps for a trip to a farm somewhere within the crystal empire
>its a pillow
i see it now that you mention it but you'll have to agree the colour makes it very udder-ish

do you have any more poners for us?

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Anonymous Sat 19 Aug 2023 19:36:33 No.40240227 Report

Quoted By: >>40240495 >>40240561

>>40239981
>Do I just browse archive for RapeApe user
Yes, thats his actual username on ponepaste. His old tripcode got cracked not long ago so he started used his username to post.

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Anonymous Sat 19 Aug 2023 20:39:09 No.40240495 Report

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>>40240141
I didn't draw anything now but I might do something later. I'm still fresh on this, and I'm still kinda take back with all the 500 fucking whips.
As for pillow.. Maybe it look like you said.
>>40240227
Good to know. So I should use trip code for older posts and then rape ape?

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Anonymous Sat 19 Aug 2023 21:02:06 No.40240561 Report

Quoted By: >>40240660 >>40240729

>>40240141
I didn't draw anything now but I might do something later. I'm still fresh on this, and I'm still kinda take back with all the 500 fucking whips. I also though that rarara was an Anon property and she was only Anon to fuck so the glory hole was not what I expected.
As for pillow.. Maybe it look like you said.
>>40240227
Good to know. So I should use trip code for older posts and then rape ape?

RapeApe

RapeApe Sat 19 Aug 2023 21:30:23 No.40240648 Report

Quoted By: >>40240920 >>40241059 >>40241155 >>40241724

>>40230057
I do think a bit of public humiliation would do Rarity good. She needs to develop a new self image, and to do that her old one needs to be replaced. I don't think she'll ever stop being proud; if we get rid of that entirely she just won't be Rarity anymore. But I'm sure she can learn to take pride in other things.
>>40230502
Rarity isn't great at moderation.
>>40230757
Cadence is a married mare, so there's a limit to how directly involved she can be. I don't know exactly where to draw the line, but we have to have some degree of separation between her activities and Anon's.
I don't mind having her >rape some mares from time to time, quite the contrary. But I don't think it would be right for them to coordinate their plans.
>Why do punishments fit this?
It doesn't, she's just really horny.
>>40235710
We're definitely not done with the changelings, so that could happen down the line. Cadence doesn't have one right now though. Chrysalis managed a jailbreak if memory serves, so it wouldn't make sense for one to remain.
At least none that they've identified
>>40238734
The simple answer is that you know more about surgical sedation than I do. My training isn't in medicine. I studied something else. My knowledge of medicine comes from caffeine fueled late night research, much like a real medical student. The difference is that I don't have an instructor to check my work, so it's easy to get things wrong.
I try to be right about this stuff because it helps with immersion, but I'm going to make mistakes and you're well positioned to notice them. If you want to point out other screwups, I'd be happy to see what I got wrong. I might even bend my rules about rewrites and touch up the medical stuff.

Anon is using an inhalant cocktail that contains benzodiazepines to prevent perioperative awareness and to dull postoperative suffering. Since the patient was already dosed with midazolam, introducing a regular dose immediately after would be quite dangerous. Since he's not an anesthesiologist he relies heavily on these premixes to do the work for him, and can't safely adjust concentrations. He used injected drugs to avoid the problem altogether and in doing so, introduce a whole mess of other risks
As for the NSAIDs and antibiotics, that's just an embarrassing oversight.
>>40239981
Hot damn, thank you! This is great!
A bunch of stuff has happened between whipping sessions, and it's not the focus of the story at the moment. But we have a few people here who have a sadistic streak, so I'm trying to keep that part of BDSM involved. It's likely that a bunch of stuff is missing from the paste since I'm really lazy about updating it. Oops. The current focus in terms of smut is trying to get Rarity to enslave other mares and we just took a quick break to tan her hide.
This story is driven pretty heavily by reader input, so if you have any requests or suggestions please feel free to speak up.

RapeApe

RapeApe Sat 19 Aug 2023 21:33:10 No.40240660 Report

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>>40240561
The glory hole was initially requested by readers. It wasn't what I had planned, but again, I try to accommodate for reader requests. There are doubtlessly drawbacks to this. My reasoning is that the story is meant to put you in the dominant position, and it would do a very poor job of that if you never had any say in what happened.

RapeApe

RapeApe Sat 19 Aug 2023 21:50:11 No.40240727 Report

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>>40230757
Oh, I forgot to answer your question.
Rarity is the one who feels like she's lost control, and is planning something extreme to take it back.

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Anonymous Sat 19 Aug 2023 21:50:59 No.40240729 Report

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>>40240561
>So I should use trip code for older posts and then rape ape?
If you want to look in desuarchive then yeah, but in ponepaste its all under rapeape.

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Anonymous Sat 19 Aug 2023 22:44:16 No.40240920 Report

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>>40240648
Glad you like it. Here you go another one with her first choker.
>sadistic
Hope it's not 'too' extreme. Because I really like how you write Rarity. All her infighting are interesting, and a lot of smuts would just broken her already, and move on.
I didn't read the spoiler, but I assume it has something with Coco, since I saw a lot of her name showing up when I was browsing archive.
>>40240660
Well, I got the reasoning, and we are on 4chan, so I could expect something like that. When I will be up to date with the story I could give any input. Still, it was really weird contrast between this scene and the one in prison with Cadance talking about love. But that was probably by design.

I'm a little drunk so you will excuse me for a while.

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Anonymous Sat 19 Aug 2023 23:25:02 No.40241059 Report

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>>40240648
No problem, medical accuracy is hard, that is why there are schools for that.
Additionally, a lot of veterinary medicine is a somewhat not-exact science due to vastly differing body sizes of patients and occasionally breed- or situation dependent metabolic differences; Sedatives often require a much higher dose with anxious patients (for example most cats need 2-5 times the dose for a dog of similar size), I reckon our reluctant patient here requires a high dosage. Similarly other medicines are often measured and adjusted on the fly. Not to mention adjusting machines designed for human use for animals, a lot of blood tests show incorrect ranges for animals and I remember one time of horror on my part during anestesia monitoring for a horse whose pulse suddenly spiked during surgical incision, luckily because EKG randomly began counting each heartbeat twice (large heart size gives more independent signals).

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Anonymous Sat 19 Aug 2023 23:48:51 No.40241155 Report

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>>40240648
>If you want to point out other screwups, I'd be happy to see what I got wrong.

I´ll see if I find something interesting in earlier parts, 100% accurate depictions could get boring though.
Nitpicky things and other tidbits I´ve noticed;
Alert and resisting patients without an IV-catheter get intramuscular sedation and the speed of those is heavily exaggerated in movies and other media, even etorphine aka the stuff for darting elephants takes a couple of minutes to work.
Etomidate is not registered as a legal drug for veterinary use where I live, most likely due to cost of registering a patent for a drug no one would use due to comparably high market cost, increased side effects and very rare indications.
A lot of equine vets use alfa2-agonists with either butorphanol, L-methadone or acepromazin for sedation. Acepromazin should not be used for stallions whose dick has use still since its side effects include possibly permanent paralysis or necrosis of penis (yes, drop in blood pressure and muscle relaxation has interesting effects).
Intubation of horses irl requires washing of mouth, since hay and grass are messy to eat and anything extra in the mouth can go in the lungs and cause pneumonia. Although a lot of practicioners don´t intubate horses in field conditions anyway since inhalation machines weigh and take up space. They are also highly sensitive to external damage and can be hazardous then, oxygen tanks are also very dangerous to transport.
Preoperative fasting, sedatives cause nausea and vomiting with lowered consciousness is not good. Horses usually can´t vomit but even a small risk is a risk.
Horses usually need ketamine (+ possible benzodiazepams) injection after successful sedation to fall down, preferably in a padded and narrow space. Equestrians are however small enough to not fall down dangerously, which probably makes their anesthesia protocol more similar to large dogs and thus need heat pads on the surgical table.
Inhalants are the easy way to maintain anesthesia, the other way is to use injectables (usually a mix of already used sedatives, smaller body size makes propofol a good choice too, technically this counts as colic so lidocaine infusion could be added too), preferably by an assistant because measuring injectable anesthetics on a Ringer bag is excruatingly annoying.
I would just use 4 clamps for intestinal resection, outer ones to hold the intestine and inner ones to hold gangrenous tissue in between, sucking the pus out is unnecessary hassle here.

RapeApe

RapeApe Sun 20 Aug 2023 00:04:29 No.40241189 Report

Quoted By: >>40242145 >>40242749 >>40243005 >>40243745

>>40240920
That choker really is fetching. Terrible shame she insists on taking it off. We'll have to fix that.
I think the previous update is the most extreme we've ever gotten in terms of sadism. It's not a coincidence that Anon was uninvolved with it either. Ideally Anon wouldn't have any personality at all so that the reader could project onto him, but that's just not possible when there's any real complexity to the story so I had to pick one.
I figure that since Anon is a healer he's always on some level worried about the wellbeing of others. I don't think he'd be capable of doing something like that himself. We actually saw something of that a while ago; I'm not entirely sure if you've read this part but at one point he's furious with Rarity and says something along the lines of "go away before I hurt you" because he was angry enough to do something serious, but such things aren't really in his nature.
I'm glad you like how I handle Rarity. I often worry that I'm not going fast enough since this green is already longer than most and she's still not really broken, but if it reads nicely then it's the right way to handle it.
>>40241059
Yeesh. You doubtlessly thought it was coming out of sedation. I've been reading about anesthesia awareness. It sounds terrifying, even if you can't really feel anything.
>>40241155
Some of these things are specific to horses, and I figure these ponies would be different. Like, I doubt that their mouths are constantly full of hay. A few other things like preoperative fasting have been skipped because it would be bad for the narrative. Some of this stuff is definitely news to me though. I thought the onset of etorphine of all things would be much faster, and in all my reading I never heard a hint that etomidate wasn't approved for veterinary use. Leaving the pus in place is unexpected. I would have guessed it would need to be removed for visibility, but it shouldn't be too surprising that I'm wrong wrong.
With that out of the way, I'm actually doing better than expected if you're having to get into details like that. It's good for the ego. Thanks!
And sorry about all the future mistakes, because there will definitely be more. Hopefully it's not too immersion breaking.

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Anonymous Sun 20 Aug 2023 03:49:15 No.40241724 Report

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>>40240648
>so that could happen down the line.
Just to throw a suggestion out there, would you see any plausible way of making a changeling be stuck in a chosen form ? That is with the medical science approach you are going with.

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Anonymous Sun 20 Aug 2023 05:03:43 No.40241892 Report

Quoted By: >>40242504 >>40242990

>>40211580
>Apple Bloom slowly walked home with a sullen look painted on her face. The day was just the worst as she and her friends got into a fight. Apple Bloom simply meant to tell Sweetie and Scoots how she was simply feeling left out by the other two when Scootaloo had to open her dumb fat mouth.>

>A.B. Was not jealous! She could get a colt or filly friend anytime she wanted! Where did that dumb chicken get off saying that? And then Button and Pip had to butt in when they weren't involved in the discussion... Though they were the topic.>

>Forget it! Apple Bloom refused to let those nags ruin her fun, she was going to have a great time and they could just suck an egg! She let out a huff and trotted into the clubhouse to retrieve her costume for tonight.>

>She had to hide it here. The house and barn were out of the question due to her family. She couldn't stop imagining Granny having a heart attack, Big Mac and Sugar Belle would try to breach 'The Talk' again while Applejack would tan her hide for having something so 'perverse'.>

>Apple Bloom headed to the podium and gave the stage a few knocks in the back. As her hoof pulled back from the last knock the panel opened up, revealing the suit, the purple fedora flopping to the ground.>

>Apple Bloom pulled her now from her mane and tossed it into a corner, her lips feeling dry as she quivered. This was it... She was gonna put the outfit on. She moved aside the cape to pull open the zipper, the fragrance of rubber hitting her nose as she felt wet already.>

>"Okay, this shouldn't be so hard. Just step in, tuck in m'ay tail an'..." She jumped, blushing at a stiff toy rubbing against her puckered hole. "Aw, come 'on Bloom, just take a deep breath an'." She let out a loud shutter, her knees buckling as she slid the you in her behind.>

>The rubber suit seemed to get warmer before it happened! The second toy seemed to come to life and roughly slid into her crotch as the zipper moved on it's own, sealing Bloom in.>

>"AH! Wuh- Wuh da HAY!" The mare grew terrified as she found the suit kept her still, the youngest apple struggling to lift her hooves from the ground. "L-let may go, ya dumb-" Her eyes widened as her hooves left the ground... Making their way to the hood. The back of the mask split open to reveal the ball no longer there, in it's place a perfect cock sitting waiting.>

>"H-Hold on th-Gmmph!!" The glossy shell latched itself to her head, pulling her mane until nothing was left to identify the rubber mare in the treehouse. Apple Bloom moaned as the girth of her stuffing filled her mouth.>

>She let out a choked cry as the three toys began violating her, her eyes rolling in the back of her head, her rump slamming to the ground. She could feel the toys sink deeper as her throat began to ache in a similar way, the lenses of the hood fogging up as a shadow opened the clubhouse door while Apple Bloom passed out.>

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Anonymous Sun 20 Aug 2023 06:53:58 No.40242145 Report

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>>40241189
Nah man, shes proud mare, you do good with her taking time.
I haven't been checking SiM after two greens I was really fan of died. My mistake. There are still good stories here.

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Anonymous Sun 20 Aug 2023 10:56:28 No.40242504 Report

Quoted By: >>40244338

>>40241892
>as a shadow opened the clubhouse door while Apple Bloom passed out
Rarity ?

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Anonymous Sun 20 Aug 2023 13:43:29 No.40242749 Report

Quoted By: >>40243005

>>40241189
>Some of these things are specific to horses, and I figure these ponies would be different
For sure, convergent evolution or something. Figuring out which medicines work best in a new species is trial and error with microdosing and eventually macrodosing, especially for the morally dubious.
>I thought the onset of etorphine of all things would be much faster
Less to do with substance, more about injection route. Intravenous medication takes seconds at most but capillary circulation from intramuscular injection to the veins is not that fast.
>I never heard a hint that etomidate wasn't approved for veterinary use
It is rarely used on humans too due to conflicting views of safety (adrenal suppression mostly), off label use and special permits do exist for cats and dogs.
>Leaving the pus in place is unexpected. I would have guessed it would need to be removed for visibility
Pus from hernial sac (skin) is removed by surrounding the site with tissues, incising with scalpel and saline flushing. The sac itself is removed too since it only gathers more fluids (ellipsical incision). Usually most mass inside hernial sacs is intestinal fat which can be removed (and should if there is necrosis) of course ligating any major blood vessel. Strangulated intestines collect pus usually during streptococcal infection and then it is so diffused that any on-site operation has little effect. Better visibility is most easily achieved by simple enlarging the incision, 4-8 inches in total should be enough but extra inches only increase sutures by 2-3 for each 3 layers and thus time by 1-5 minutes depending on experience (funnily enough, vets are on average much better suturers than doctors due to all the routine castrations and spays). Larger wound also grants access to check for peritonitis and better manipulation of intestines since pulling them out of hernial ring can cause harm further inside and you need to confirm at least 1 mesenterical artery going to resection site. If there were no gangrene and pus, the recommended way of getting visibility would be to push the hernial contents back in and to continue operation there, this is done to check viability of intestine (a couple minutes of silent observation, also after anastamosis of intestine).
>it shouldn't be too surprising that I'm wrong
I have no first hand experience either, every complicated hernia so far has been too far gone that owners didn´t want to risk wasting 5-10k on an operation with <50% odds of success and so they were euthanized.
Additionally, I couldn´t find recommended treatment for a situation like this, most of my rambling is educated guesses from close-enough guides and case reports. If you wish to touch up later, NSAID of choice in equines is flunixin or meloxicam, antibiotics are harder (either trimethoprim-sulphonamide, penicillin+gentamicin+metronidazole or amikacin+third wave cephalosporin like ceftiofur), risk of endotoxemia is also high so polymyxin B should be added.

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Anonymous Sun 20 Aug 2023 15:56:45 No.40242990 Report

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>>40241892
>the lenses of the hood fogging up
i fucking love slow changes to a slaves body, sense or appearence, even if its just a passive thing like simple lenses fogging up
>slowly expanding gags and plugs
>lenses slowly fogging up or blacking out
>earbuds blocking out more and more sound
>a body suit that either grows in thickness or across the body to cover more surface area

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Anonymous Sun 20 Aug 2023 16:08:34 No.40243005 Report

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>>40241189
>>40242749
Anon is also wrecking his skin by unnecessary sanitization, doing that before patient is even inside the clinic and even before working the IV. When he is alone, he should work the medications and equipment first so they need no touching until the wound is closed, then shave and sanitize the surgical region of patient and only then sanitize himself.
>>40184879
It is "nidus", though no one I know even uses the term, most use "circular elevated inflammatory lesion" since this works for owners too. Good flare though.
Infection=pathogens present, inflammation=tissue shows inflammatory signs (reddening, swelling, fever, pain). Probably the most common misconception in media, since they usually go hand in hand but both can exist without the other (for example HIV doesn´t cause inflammation and autoimmune diseases happen without pathogens).
Hypokalemia (even as low as 2,7 mmol/l) is common in horse surgery due to stress response and IV-fluids affecting renal flow. Only slightly lowered (standard 3,7-4,0 mmol/l) potassium in stressed Apple Cobbler can be due to side effects of etomidate counteracting the stress response, which is somewhat good but this could also mask endotoxemia
>tenth of a percent?
She is awake and could walk to the clinic, with the right medicines and 1-2 weeks in ICU I would give about 20% based on description. For the patient I would lie, inflating the chance of survival to get placebo boost but warn about leaving with exaggerated horror scenarios. This might not work really, vets can´t use placebo effect since their patients often regard vets like a jew thinks of Mengele and in that case no amount of baby speak helps.

Future and experimental materials I have no clue on, for monetary reasons veterinary medicine doesn´t have a lot of advanced treatment options like organ transplants or neurosurgery, we have pentobarbital and bolt guns.

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Anonymous Sun 20 Aug 2023 18:54:57 No.40243532 Report

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>>40217627

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Anonymous Sun 20 Aug 2023 20:20:40 No.40243745 Report

Quoted By: >>40244496

>>40241189
On part 1:
Croup doesn´t exist in earth foals. Treatment for viral respiratory infections is mostly the same between species though including epinephrine for severe swelling.
Primary purpose of checking the mouth of animals is to check dental condition, ponies probably could tell about their toothaches themselves though.
Blood samples; pressure cuff does the job nut stasis bands are meant for that. You can take a blood sample on a regular syringe but it needs to be then injected into collection tubes because blood coagulates quite rapidly negating accuracy. You could use vacuum tubes and a spesific needle for rapid collection. Fur is often shaved from the test spot to prevent dirt related complications, probably not necessary here. From horses, the sample is taken from the jugular vein rather than limbs (large vein at hand height and no chance of leg injury).
Hypertension, especially stress related, is rare in horses and treated with sedatives rather than ACE-inhibitors and only for examination or transport, in this case ACE-inhibitors are the right choice in my opinion. Pressure cuff is placed on tail with animals including horses, mostly because it usually holds in place better and there´s less musculature to muddy up the result.
Anon really needs a nurse, even only a decent nurse takes away some of the workload and often lowers the time needed per patient, for surgery a good nurse can cut the time in half or even third.
Horses or most animals for that matter don´t have an appendix. Most similar operation in effect for anatomically correct equine would be fixing intestinal displacement (LDD or RDD) or impaction (pelvic flexure commonly) by laparotomy. Random fact, horses don´t have a gall bladder either, this is part of the reason that horses kinda need to eat often.
Most common place on animals where tattoos show is inside of the ear and performed for identification purposes (registry number or such), horses lips are also sometimes tattood, theoretically udder, anus and vulva also are low enough on fur. Branding (hot commonly, freeze brand works for non-white fur), microchip (left side of the neck near nuchal ligament) or an ear tag is also a possibility.
Take a wild guess if someone has tested what happens when injecting a mare with testosterone? Yes, and apparently it works, though not that fast.
Most of my patients can´t read and neither can the owners apparently, at least reading comprehension is somewhat low ofen and so I make written instructions that are understandable by preschoolers.
Antiemetics are commonly given during sedation in small animals, maropitant or metoclopramide commonly. Horses rarely can vomit, but equestrian maybe can, I would recomment metoclopramide.
This is kind of a pet peeve but a lot of medical professionals share this with me; omorashi is not a good fetish to engage in, especially alone, due to risk of bladder rupture and/or urine backflow causing kidney damage, urinary catheter fixes the issue.

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Anonymous Sun 20 Aug 2023 23:02:07 No.40244338 Report

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Spoilers
>>40242990
I'm glad you enjoy it.

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Anonymous Sun 20 Aug 2023 23:53:15 No.40244496 Report

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>>40243745
Part 1, Fluttershy case:
In aortic rupture she´d be dead before reaching the clinic.
Diagnosing thorax injuries usually starts with auscultation (hemothorax and anemia would cause tachycardia, tachypnea and quiet the heart and lung sounds), followed by X-rays (grey veil inside thorax, shade determines the depth of liquid). Ultrasound doesn´t travel through air so healthy lungs block the view, here Anon would see fluid though and ultrasound is warranted. Skeletal conditon still needs X-rays and after drainage it also shows if a lung has collapsed.
IV-fluids are routinely started with all emergencies, experienced nurse would merely ask for drainage speed (which is counted from formula 70 ml+30 ml/kg divided for 24 hours and then multiplied 1-3 times adjusting for dehydration).
Blood transfusions with horses is very difficult due to 7 or 8 blood types and >30 factors for each, additionally red cells don´t last long. Frozen plasma lasts for a year in adequate freezer, but if you absolutely need red blood cells the best way outside family members is to get a lineup of possible donors and mixing their blood samples with some of the patients blood to check for least clotting. Sometimes even a blind transfusion can be done, males and maiden mares are best, unless they have received a blood transfusion earlier in their life.
Morphine is off label but works well enough.
Correct placement for drainage pipe (urinary catheters are easier to find) is located with ultrasound (camera would work too but they are expensive and rarely used in veterinary medicine, it does give a good view of the health of lungs though) and needle placed near the cranial side (skull´s side in english) because there is a big vein on the caudal side (tail´s side).
Hemothorax empties best with gravity, so Fluttershy should turn while getting drained.
A small amount of blood remaining shouldn´t have adverse effects and a functional coagulation system quickly stops bleeding.
Veterinary medicine doesn´t use anesthesia masks, too much variance in patients snout profile and fur increases leakage (leaks are dangerous because this can encase a closed space in anesthetic and possibly drugging the surgeon and other staff.
Weird kinky nerve stuff is outside my expertise, but the logic in operation seemed sound.
He should have placed an IV-catheter on both Rarity and Cadence, this makes rapid pain management possible and acts as safeguard from any major complication like cardiac arrest where you don´t want to have to catheterize in a hurry.
Norovirus only affects humans irl, rotaviruses however do the same thing but stronger, foals would need special attention. Waterborne gastric diseases on earth´s horses are typically caused by bacteria or worms.
Horses can get syphilis but only from humans.
Prolactin injection does induce short term lactation, in veterinary use lactation is induced for orphan´s surrogate nursing by oxytocin (and hearsay stimulation of cervix).

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>needle placed near the cranial side
of rib.

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Anonymous Mon 21 Aug 2023 08:07:54 No.40245720 Report

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>>40245713
tell me about fluttershy could be forced to become a good dom, we only ever see her as a pushover sub

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Anonymous Mon 21 Aug 2023 17:52:20 No.40246890 Report

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>>40246466
Those are some fucked up hooves.
What if its a fashion trend to constraint a filly's hooves to grow this way? Like they did in the 1800's with waists and feet.

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Anonymous Mon 21 Aug 2023 18:33:01 No.40247049 Report

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>>40246890
actually, thats a great spin to this!
small dainty hooves are seen as desirable and some families will stop at nothing to be on top of the aesthetic pyramid of ponysociety.
>another trend could be long, thin long horns created through what would essentially be molds for the horn to grow into, new fake spiraling grooves included
>or how about different ear shapes?

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Anonymous Mon 21 Aug 2023 20:42:27 No.40247514 Report

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>>40247131
fancy hooves

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Anonymous Mon 21 Aug 2023 20:55:57 No.40247563 Report

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>>40245720
>become a good dom
You mean good at her role, or good natured ?

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Anonymous Mon 21 Aug 2023 22:52:52 No.40247944 Report

Quoted By: >>40249417 >>40250823

>>40244496
Part 1 halfway;
Rectal creams aren´t designed or used for veterinary use, probably does the job though.
Dental anatomy of horses works differently than in humans or show accurate ponies. They do have the same dental problems as humans would, but in addition natural erosion and continously extending teeth can cause dental spikes that need to be filed down.
Being a general practitioner is difficult but not overly so, estimately 90% of cases can be treated with a combination of choices from rest, better life habits, NSAIDs, corticosteroids and/or antibiotics (systemic corticosteroids should not be used with NSAIDs), occasionally response to treatment is not good enough and additional tests+ more aggressive treatment is in order. Most of the remaining 10% include endocrine diseases that are somewhat easy to diagnose but their medication usually requires fine tuning. Hardest part is the remaining 0,1 % or the proverbial "zebras", very rare diseases and their treatment might vanish from memory if they are not encountered in patients, individual practitioner might be able refresh their memory but usually these are sent to a specialist since knowing everything is simply not possible.
There are thousands of drug products but this is mostly due to pharmaceutical competition. You can´t patent a drug, only the synthesis method, and thus different companies try to figure out how to make the same drug with different steps. Human general practice apparently uses on average 130 drugs though this includes omega3-capsules too. I use 105 drugs in general pracice for cats and dogs, excluding those that are the same but meant for only other species, this excludes some of common human medicines (notably female contraceptives, they do exist but are not routinely used).
Equines do have STDs, in addition to human-spread syphilis there is wart causing herpes, viral arthritis (EVA-virus) and contagious metritis (Taylorella equigenitalis).
Caslick or vulvoplasty is a procedure where vulva lips are stitched shut, this is done prevent air from getting into the vagina during pregnancy and causing vaginitis/metritis but it would work as a contraceptive too.
During eye exam one hand keeps the eyelids open to prevent blinking and so you can check the whole visible cornea. Additionally, eye´s neurological examination should include pupil dilation in bright light, menace reflex (bringing two fingers rapidly towards the eye to check blinking response) and palpebral reflex.
Topical cocaine is not used by vets, without that topical lidocaine doesn´t need be locked up. Topical lidocaine usually includes high amount of ethanol and swabbing is used more to get rid of small hairs after shaving. Thieves in the clinic is an occasional risk, one colleague had their drug storage broken into but exciting stuff was in a safe, they did get their steal apomorphine though (funny thing is, it doesn´t work as morphine that well, it is used as an emetic for dogs in poisoning cases).

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Anonymous Tue 22 Aug 2023 03:35:22 No.40248671 Report

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>>40245720
A lot of stories like to overuse the "mommy dom" trope for her.

I like to think she could have some repressed , accumulated anger or contempt towards bad behaving ponies, which could have evolved into a form of sadism reserved for her slave.
Basically save her mean side for her slave, the good side for her friends.

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Anonymous Tue 22 Aug 2023 07:10:14 No.40249135 Report

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>>40248671
I like the ones that have her a sadistic domme honestly.

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Anonymous Tue 22 Aug 2023 07:30:43 No.40249160 Report

Quoted By: >>40252256

>>40249135
Which stories do you know that tried this ?

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RapeApe Tue 22 Aug 2023 10:59:35 No.40249417 Report

Quoted By: >>40249420 >>40249775 >>40251140

>>40247944
Thanks so much for all your input! I'll try to be mindful of this stuff going forward, but please temper your expectations. To be blunt I'm going to fall short. I can't devote enough time to this project for it to be properly medically accurate; you of all people would know how much time and effort that would take. But this stuff should help me present it with verisimilitude.
Some of this stuff will be completely ignored since I figure these ponies would be meaningfully different from actual equines. As an example, at some point I stated that they have extremely high blood sugar, and I did so while fully aware that such a number would kill a real horse. Another example is STIs. I did surface level research on horse STIs before deciding it would be bad for the story so I just wrote them out of existence.
Hopefully the inevitable shortcomings don't ruin it for you.
Lidocaine not needing to be locked up is a definite surprise though. And I can't help but get a kick out of that prospective thief puking their guts out thinking they had morphine.
>Vulvoplasty
Good timing! I needed something insane to back down from.

>You’re not allowed to drink.
>Or rather, you only allow yourself to drink when you’re not on call.
>But with only one surgeon in the empire, you’re ALWAYS on call.
>It’s doubtful that anything will happen tonight, but you can never be sure.
>But you could really use some beer, liquor, wine- anything really.
>You can still hear that pony screaming.
>And when you close your eyes, you see the abject terror in her eyes as you slid the needle into her neck.
>That was psychological torture.
>You keep telling yourself you had no choice.
>Shining Armor had ordered you to do it, and he had an army.
>Or militia, whatever.
>It is comforting…
>You really wanted to help her, but there were so many consequences and implications that demanded you let her die.
>And yet, inaction is no less a choice than action.
>Killing her is unconscionable.
>Saving her is unforgivable.
>No matter what you chose, it was a disaster.
>You can’t help but wonder if Shining’s command was for your benefit, so that you would have an excuse.
>He took the impossible choice out of your hands, and forced you to do what you wanted.
>And even though the sounds of her misery still echoed in your skull, they invoke a sense of sympathy rather than guilt.
>Losing control of that situation was the best thing that could have happened to you.
>Maybe Rarity gets something similar out of you?
>Freedom from responsibility.
>It’s not without appeal.
>Though you certainly don’t intend to let yourself be locked in a basement any time soon.
>You enter your home and head straight to bed, not even bothering to shower.
>No sign of Rarity.
>You’re too tired to care.
>Sleep takes you, and you’re plagued by troubling dreams.
>When you begin to wake, your weary mind and body bitterly resist the morning.

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RapeApe Tue 22 Aug 2023 11:00:35 No.40249420 Report

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>>40249417
>Your brain insists that there is no need to wake up, and you manage to pass out again.
>But only for a moment.
>Your memories somehow manage to sneak their way into your semi-conscious mind, and a jolt of panic fills you.
>Apple Cobbler.
>You need to check in on her.
“What time is it?”
>Apparently you were louder than you’d thought, because Rarity’s voice rings in from the kitchen.
>”It is one in the afternoon, my dear master!”
“Fuuuuuck.”
>You’re so late for work.
“I have to get going.”
>”I do believe today is meant to be your day off.”
“I don’t get days off until we’re caught up.”
>”Oh, but you do! Sassaflash doesn’t have any appointments booked for you today.”
“What about the apple one?”
>”I spoke with the militia keeping her detained, and it appears as though she is well. Albeit quite fearful.”
“I’d better check on her anyway.”
>You crawl out of bed and stumble into the kitchen.
>Rarity sat at the table, looking different than usual.
>Her lashes seem a bit longer, her face a tiny bit more colorful, her complexion just a bit clearer.
>She’s wearing her choker, as she should.
“You look really good.”
>”Thank you, master.”
“No, that’s not enough. You normally look really good. This is even better.”
>”I performed my full beauty routine.”
“You hadn’t been doing that?”
>That seemed unlike her.
>”When you were keeping me in your basement, I didn’t have the means to do so. I grew rather accustomed to being au naturel, I suppose.”
“Well, I certainly appreciate it.”
>”Then I shall endeavor to maintain it!”
>You start making your way for the door.
>”I do wish you would stay a tad longer. You need your rest!”
“I can’t. I have to check on the patient.”
>”Would I be able to do that in your stead?”
“No. I’m going to have to inspect the wound to make sure it’s healing properly. We shouldn’t need to keep her for long, but there’s still some risk.”
>”I see… would you perhaps have time to talk first? Or must you be there immediately?”
>You should, yes.
>She’s not going anywhere.
>You make your way to the table and sit opposite Rarity.
>There is a small plate of scones on the table and a cup of black coffee.
>Despite the ample lighting, she has a candle lit at the center of the table.
>Perhaps a scented one?
>You don’t smell anything…
>You can’t help but notice you didn’t eat last night.
>”I purchased those for you. Please avail yourself.”
>You eagerly bite into one.
>It’s sweet.
>VERY sweet.
>Cloyingly so.
>You take a sip of the tepid coffee, and are pleased to discover that they actually go quite well together.
>Rarity watches you with a gentle smile as you eat.
>When the first scone is gone, you restrain yourself long enough to speak.
“So what did you want to talk about?”
>”I heard some rather distressing news recently. Is it true you spent a night in prison for interfering with my punishment?”

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RapeApe Tue 22 Aug 2023 11:01:36 No.40249425 Report

Quoted By: >>40249426 >>40249436 >>40250382

>>40249420
“You didn’t know? I assumed you’d heard.”
>”I see…”
>Huh.
“In retrospect, it’s odd that Candy did that.”
>Her locking a MALE up sorta went against her whole philosophy.
>”Cadence is responsible for that? That IS bizarre, given she too was presumably protecting me.”
“She was?”
>”Apparently they had quite the spat because of it.”
“I should have known. Shining wanted to throw the book at you, and I was honestly a bit surprised when I convinced him to back down. If she was pushing for it too, I understand why he caved. I’m surprised she’d stand up to him like that, though.”
>You’re definitely missing something here.
>But as tempting as it is to start snooping…
>Is it really your business?
“They have troubles, but I honestly have a hard time imagining them actually fighting.”
>”I spoke with the prince about it.”
“Oh?”
>”He was clearly upset by my presence.”
>Yeah…
>It might take him a while to get over it.
>Assuming, of course, he ever does.
>”I was unable to glean much information from him, aside from the fact that he wished for me to depart. I don’t even know what he wished for my punishment to be.”
“I don’t think he knew either. He’s not a very patient pony though, so he might have chosen pretty impulsively.”
>”It seems as though Cadence was telling me the truth, or at least something quite close to it. By being made yours, I was allowed to retain my freedom.”
>She stands and walks to the counter.
>She seems to give her butt an intentional shake as soon as it’s facing you, as though enticing you to-
>It’s beat red and bruised.
>Not to mention swollen.
“Whoa. What happened to your ass?”
>”Last night was my weekly beating.”
>Already?
“That must hurt. I’ve got some lidocaine salve-”
>”No, that shan’t be necessary. I shall endure the pain. I am stronger than it.”
>Huh?
>She returns with a piece of paper held in her mouth.
>Rarity drops it on the table.
>”This would be the contract I signed to become your slave, master.”
“Okay? It’s not time to renegotiate it yet. But if you have any concerns we can- whoa!”
>She picked it up again and set it to the candle’s flame.
>Rarity quickly drops it on the table, singing the wood.
>You watch as the agreement you had with her goes up in smoke.
>Terror fills your heart.
>You do NOT want to lose her!
>You have to think of something, ANYTHING to placate her!
>”I declare this agreement to be null and void!”
“If I’ve upset you, I can change! I promise! Whatever you want, I’ll do it!”
>”I’m certain you would. And that is precisely the problem.”
>You’re tearing up.
>She’s actually leaving you.
>It’s over.
>”We shall be signing a new contract posthaste!”
>A new contract?
>She’s giving you a second chance?
>Play it cool!
“Okay, right away! Thank you!”
>Fuck.
>Rarity pushes another piece of paper toward you.

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RapeApe Tue 22 Aug 2023 11:02:37 No.40249426 Report

Quoted By: >>40249429 >>40250382

>>40249425
>You don’t know where it came from, and honestly you don’t care.
>Your heart is hammering away as you pick it up, fearful of what it might say.
>The long, elegant script is practically a work of art.
>But the meaning of those words leaves you dumbfounded.

I, Rarity, pledge myself to be my master’s slave for as long as he sees fit.
I shall endeavor to obey his commands to the best of my abilities, and shall dedicate myself to pursuing his happiness.
In exchange, my master pledges not to compromise my health without my consent.
All else is permitted.

>She had already signed it.
>”I apologize for the messy writing. I tend to use magic rather than my mouth. Our previous agreement was far too tame, wouldn’t you agree?”
“Are you… are you certain?”
>”Since you have not yet signed it, I do not currently consider myself to be your slave. I shall be speaking candidly. You’re far too soft, doctor.”
“Eh?”
>”You keep asking for my permission, when you’re supposed to be the one in charge. What’s worse, you’re becoming lax in your rules. How many times have you permitted me to go out without my choker?”
“The rules say you don’t have to wear it.”
>”Which illustrates the problem perfectly! You want me to wear it, right?”
“Well, yeah-”
>”Then why am I permitted not to?”
“Because… because I don’t want to embarrass you.”
>You really ARE getting soft.
>”Master- no, DOCTOR, I cannot be your possession if you aren’t possessive.”
“Are you certain you know what you’re asking for?”
>”I want you to own me. To control me. To do with me as you will. I want you to decide my destiny, to dictate my public image, to be the master of every facet of my being. I want you to turn me into an instrument of your pleasure, with no regard for my own desires.”
“What’s gotten into you?”
>Her eyes are tearing up.
>And not with joy.
>”I see you don’t know me as well as I had hoped.”
>You thought you knew her pretty well.
>”Nothing has gotten into me, doctor. I’ve always been this way. I merely didn’t wish to admit it.”
“I thought you wanted to be fancy. To be high society. A bon vivant.”
>”That is the correct term. Perhaps our language lessons are paying off. That IS what I want. But… I want both. And if I cannot have both, if I must choose one, then I choose you.”
>You stand up from the table and walk around to her, pulling her against your chest in a hug.
“It’s okay. You don’t have to choose. You can have both.”
>”I had hoped you would say that.”
>Rarity returns the hug.
>She sounds much happier than you’d expected.
>That spiel had led you to believe she would be quite somber, or even defeated.
>Rather, she sounds optimistic.
“But I still don’t understand. Why the sudden change of heart?”
>”Because, ma- doctor. I realized something recently. I want to be yours.”

RapeApe

RapeApe Tue 22 Aug 2023 11:03:38 No.40249429 Report

Quoted By: >>40249431

>>40249426
>You feel like you’ve already gone over this.
>”But!”
>Oh.
>There IS more.
>”I also want to be Rarity. Rarity is not compromise, nor is she mediocrity. Rarity is excellence, and perfection. Rarity is the highest quality, highest standards, and highest aspirations. Rarity is passion, not apathy. Improvement, not stagnation. And bold, not cowardly. If I’m to do anything, I’m going to do it right!”
“And you believe that this new contract is the right way?”
>”No.”
>You’re starting to think she’s toying with you.
>”I believe I am still restricting you too much. But I couldn’t bring myself to sign it without that clause. Perhaps some day I shall be ready to take that plunge, but I am not Rarity enough to be so bold just yet.”
>This is surreal.
>”Please, doctor. I am certain. I would like for you to make me yours, if you would have me.”
“You know you might not be able to back out of this, right?”
>”I’m rather hoping I cannot.”
>She pulls away from you.
>There’s a pen on the table…
>She motions toward it.
“Not yet.”
>Concern flashes on her face.
“Before I do, I want you to tell me why.”
>”I just did, doctor.”
“No, you told me why you needed a new contract. But why be my slave at all?”
>She bites on her lip and averts her gaze, clearly troubled by your question.
>”I would rather not say.”
“If you’re unwilling to give me basic information, how can you possibly be ready to take this plunge?”
>”I- ah. I suppose you’re right. I… I rather enjoy it. It feels good. And… and it’s liberating.”
“Liberating? Elaborate.”
>”I have an image to maintain. But I wish to do things that conflict with it. Being ordered to… do things… takes the responsibility out of my hooves. And… I still can’t help but feel what we’re doing is wrong.”
>She sniffles a bit.
>”Being depraved isn’t ladylike. My perversity runs deep… It’s not what I was raised by my parents to do, and I know that my friends would be appalled if they knew. But when I don’t have a choice, I’m free. I can enjoy myself without all these conflicting emotions, without a care of what I ought to do or what others might think.”
>Huh.
>You were right.
>Mostly.
>”I’ve put a lot of thought into it. I’m yours, now and forever.”
“And if I make you do things you don’t like?”
>”I shall attempt to learn to enjoy it. After all, many of the things you’ve had me do were horribly unpleasant at first. But I’ve come around on many of them.”
“And if I decide I want to make you suffer? What if I do things to you that are so terrible they cannot possibly be enjoyed?”
>”Come now. We both know that’s not in your character.”
“What if you’re wrong?”

RapeApe

RapeApe Tue 22 Aug 2023 11:05:00 No.40249431 Report

Quoted By: >>40249433 >>40250326 >>40250382 >>40250631

>>40249429
>”I’m not.”
>You pick up the pen.
>She smiles at you warmly.
>And you write your name down.
>”Thank you, master, for giving me so many chances. I know I’ve given you a great deal of trouble. I was scared and confused. But now I’m ready. I’ll try my best to be an exemplary slave. Please make sure to let me know when i fall short, so that I might address my shortcomings.”
>You walk back to your chair and sit down to resume your breakfast.
>You still don’t fully believe it.
>Maybe it’s time for a test?
>Yes, you’ll see just how dedicated she is.
>But before taking a bite, you put on a stern face and look her dead in the eye.
“I’m going to shave you totally bald.”
>She’s not recoiling in terror yet.
“In public for everyone to see.”
>Nothing.
“And then you’re going to rape your sister.”
>She closes her eyes and takes a long, deep breath.
>You knew you'd find her limit.
>”Very well. Shall we summon her here, or am I to go to her? Perhaps we could have her abducted as I was?”
“Wait, seriously?”
>”Which hole shall I touch? Perhaps it would be best to be thorough and try all of them. Will I be provided with toys for this task, or am I to use my mouth and hooves?”
“Calm down. I’m not doing that.”
>Unless…
>Well, not yet at least.
"It was a test. Tell me how you felt.”
>”Fearful. But… excited. I think I might have enjoyed that.”
>She stares off into space dreamily.
“More detail.”
>”There’s monstrous desires within me, restrained by my conscience and insecurities. When they come to the fore I’ve always felt a profound sense of shame and guilt. Since I met you, I’ve discovered that these desires are both far stronger and far more varied than I’d realized. But the shame is gone. What you proposed is not something I would have thought of. I’ve never been attracted to mares, much less fillies. The perversity of that prospect though is quite intriguing.”
>Wow.
>You actually have her.
>It’s not a trick.
>If she’s going to be that obedient, you’d better be careful.
>Giving her bad rules could cause trouble.
“If you’re in distress, you’re to tell me. You’re to keep yourself healthy and safe. If you have urgent information, providing it supersedes orders for silence. You are free to make requests and suggestions. Do you understand?”
>”Yes, master. If requests are to be made… please be harsh in your punishments and strict in enforcing rules.”
>This is so surreal.
>”If you are too lax, then others might think I’m unable to meet your standards. I aim to prove I’m the best slave in the land. That I can meet the most exacting standards.”
“When you are in need of correction, I’ll try to be strict.”
>”Thank you. But… I am in need of correction right now.”
>She’s cowering.
“Correct that posture. Look me in the eye.”
>It takes her a few seconds, but she does it.
>You can see fear on her face.

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RapeApe Tue 22 Aug 2023 11:07:40 No.40249433 Report

Quoted By: >>40249939 >>40250178 >>40250382 >>40253348 >>40265188

>>40249431
>”I masturbated the other day, despite your orders not to. And then I hid the fact until now.”
>Hm.
>”And… and I did it again today.”
>She JUST asked you to be harsh.
“Normally I’d spank you, but your butt is already messed up. What if… what if I tried the ginger again? Is that too much?”
>”Master, I fear it is far too little. We shall do as you wish, but I did violate a direct order and I feel as though I deserve lasting repercussions for that transgression.”
“Alright. What do you suggest?”
>”I think you should sew my vagina shut.”
>Wow.
>That WAS pretty harsh.
>”I am not a beast who is without temperance! If these urges are to be so strong that I cannot help myself, then I shall find OTHER ways to seize control of my base impulses!”
“Request denied. However…”
>She’s practically begging you to dominate her body.
>Permanently.
>You may be going soft, but you still have desires.
>And that scare you just had when she burned your contract?
>Anything you can do to cement ownership is good.
“I could temporarily numb it. You’d still be able to get at it, and so would I. But you wouldn’t feel anything. Your ass should still work though, so you’ll still have an outlet.”
>She bashfully averts her gaze.
>But you can’t help but notice she’s blushing.
“I haven’t decided yet. But it could fix the problem.”
>”Not that long ago, I was profoundly ashamed whenever I touched myself. I thought it was dirty. I was meant to be pure and chaste. Ladylike. But now… The thought that I might be able to finish is such a manner is exciting. And knowing that it would please my beloved… it’s not shameful. It’s my duty to enjoy my body.”
>She still has a lot of misconceptions.
>But honestly, that might be working in your favor.
“You’re coming to the clinic with me.”
>”I thought you hadn’t decided yet.”
“This is for your butt.”
>”Is it really so bad that it needs your attention?”
“No. Not really. Just at a glance it looks like Candy knew when to stop. I’ll want to take a closer look just to be safe, but it looks like it’s just really swollen. But there’s no reason why we can’t dull the pain and help it heal faster.”
>”That shan’t be necessary. I am stronger than this.”
“I wasn’t asking.”

A bit light on the editing this time. Hopefully I didn't leave any major fuckups in there.
Should we numb her? This is a reversible process, and in fiction carries negligible risk.

RapeApe

RapeApe Tue 22 Aug 2023 11:09:42 No.40249436 Report

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>>40249425
I was JUST warned about Lidocaine. Oops.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 22 Aug 2023 14:40:49 No.40249775 Report

Quoted By: >>40252516

>>40249417
Thanks for the green

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Anonymous Tue 22 Aug 2023 16:03:23 No.40249911 Report

Quoted By: >>40252516

>>40249436
What's wrong with Lidocaine?

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 22 Aug 2023 16:20:35 No.40249939 Report

Quoted By: >>40250330 >>40252516

>>40249433
Hmm maybe but she doesn't gain pleasure so it might be harder to tame her, but also I think it would be great to punish her.

At Tue 22 Aug 2023 18:06:42 No.40250162 Report

Quoted By: >>40250330 >>40250936 >>40252516

Numb her it is a little too much, maybe a. Punishment for a day or two.

I mean it is great for Rarity to finally admit that she love this and wants a more harsher treatment.

Besides I'm curious to know if the behaviour of Rarity finally catch the attention of Coco.

Now, this new behaviour of Rarity it's gonna affect the rest of the elements, specially Applejack.

I can wait to see a scene in where she is seeing her friends being dominated and shamed on public a contrast to how her prideful friend was.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 22 Aug 2023 18:12:16 No.40250178 Report

Quoted By: >>40250330 >>40250361 >>40252516

>>40249433
What about going in the other direction?
Numbing her is... fine, but it isn't exactly a punishment, especially if she has another outlet.
What if we make her incredibly oversensitive, to the point where touching would be overstimulating, almost painful?
I think that might send a better message, plus, we might be able to have some more fun with that implant she has.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 22 Aug 2023 18:57:53 No.40250326 Report

Quoted By: >>40250631 >>40252516

>>40249431
>Well, not yet at least.
He actually wants to involve Sweetie Belle into this ?

>I think you should sew my vagina shut.
Shes going into a near full submissive contract just for this one thing ?

>I am not a beast who is without temperance! If these urges are to be so strong that I cannot help myself, then I shall find OTHER ways to seize control of my base impulses!
So thats how she wants to regain control of her situation ?
Quite an intense solution !
But I think I could see this working in her favor when she has to train Coco into the role. Sometimes pleasure can be distracting to a dom.

>>40249436
Just make it be a momentary lapse of a sleep deprived doctor anon.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 22 Aug 2023 18:59:56 No.40250330 Report

Quoted By: >>40252516

>>40249939
>>40250162
>>40250178
Guys even if anon gives her a couple of days, Rarity is the one who will eventually insist on extending it. Shes trying to not be controlled by her impulses and wants to go through extreme measures for that.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 22 Aug 2023 19:09:57 No.40250361 Report

Quoted By: >>40252516

>>40250178
>we might be able to have some more fun with that implant she has.
What do you think of the implant idea of Coco's orgasms sending a signal to edge Rarity ?

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 22 Aug 2023 19:15:11 No.40250382 Report

Quoted By: >>40252516

>>40249425
>>”We shall be signing a new contract posthaste!”
I see she still knows what she wanted to turn this relationship into, during her orgasmic high
>>40249426
>You’re far too soft, doctor
good girls demand harsher treatments!
>”I want you to own me. To control me. To do with me as you will. I want you to decide my destiny, to dictate my public image, to be the master of every facet of my being. I want you to turn me into an instrument of your pleasure, with no regard for my own desires.”
hnnnngggg
>>40249431
>>”There’s monstrous desires within me, restrained by my conscience and insecurities. When they come to the fore I’ve always felt a profound sense of shame and guilt. Since I met you, I’ve discovered that these desires are both far stronger and far more varied than I’d realized. But the shame is gone. What you proposed is not something I would have thought of. I’ve never been attracted to mares, much less fillies. The perversity of that prospect though is quite intriguing.”
she really has become the perfect sub, hasn't she?
>>40249433
and this part almost seems like she is the one that needs to be restrained from now on. if you want to go for grotesque, you could always have her labia pierced and then seen shut or use padlocks on them but that does seem a bit too heavy and permanent for now.
numbing her favourite pleasure spots seems like a good temporary solution though

wild update but I really like this new degenerate rara, that is in conflict with her old public image. if I could wish for something, it would be somehow marking her as a slave either through a piercing, tattoo or wearable vit of clothing and tasking her to hide it, unless she wants her image to be ruined.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 22 Aug 2023 20:24:50 No.40250631 Report

Quoted By: >>40252516

>>40249431
>>40250326
Wait, maybe making Rarity eventually beg to revert the numbness would be the real fun in this.
I could see anon coming up with that Coco implant idea for this purpose.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 22 Aug 2023 21:20:44 No.40250823 Report

Quoted By: >>40251140 >>40252516

>>40247944
Part 1 from contraceptives;
Implant applicator meant for humans might not work as intended on other species with differing skin thickness and toughness. I have no experience on the procedure with horses, in small animals implant (microchip most commonly) applicator is just a big needle with a squeeze mechanism to push the implant through. After preparing the area (between scapula and spine in small animals), skin is pulled up to form triangular pyramid shape, needle is pushed through the skin to the center of skin pyramid and squeeze mechanism is used by pushing the moving part with thumb. After that, the needle is pulled out and the puncture wound is checked for bleeding and to confirm the implant is in deep enough to not fall out.
Equine uterine anatomy is different to humans, so is IUD for mares.
Foal bacterial respiratory illness; methods mentioned are acceptable, Bordetella pertussis is a human bacteria (B. bronchiseptica is the non-human version), erythromycin works (doxycyclin would be better, but it stains growing teeth), dosage is a bit sketchy unless Tiny Quartz is 120-200 grams (oral erythromycin I found was 40 mg/ml and correct dose for that is 15-25 drops/kg or a teaspoonful/5 kg per day, preferably divided into 2-4 doses across the day, dosing of antibiotics also tends to increase within career length to 2-3 times the recommended dose), ibuprofin does work in horses but there´s a lot of side effects, especially in foals, and should be used alongside sucralfate and proton pump inhibitor like omeprazole to prevent gastric ulceration (meloxicam imo is better, but requires the same period of dosing and precautions). A low fever is good for the body, since the immune system works better at a higher temperature and most bacteria don´t handle increased temperature, purpose of NSAIDs should not be used to lower fever but only to lower pain to managable levels since pain increases cortisol production and cortisol inhibits the immune system and healing of tissue.
Pathologists are even worse at interaction, though if you can handle extremely morbid humor they´re fun to be around.
First thing with seizures is diazepam enema, this stops most epileptic causes.
Urinary catherization uses lidocaine infused lube.
Before imaging I would run blood tests to check glucose, electrolytes (Na, K, Ca and Mg notably), inflammatory markers (SAA, different leucosytes and red cell values), liver and kidney values. This narrows a lot of differential diagnoses and when done through IC-catheter also grants much faster usage of medicines.
Defibrillator fixes arhytmias, not flatlining, he should immediately start cpr (or direct AJ to) and go straight for adrenalin (IV or more dramatically intracardially).
Checking the mouth of delirious patient is a good way to lose fingers, just vagina is enough.
IV-fluids with urinary catheter speeds up toxin removal.
Surgeons tend to wear scrubs, labcoats have long sleeves that are awkward in clinical work.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 22 Aug 2023 21:54:51 No.40250936 Report

Quoted By: >>40252516

>>40250162
Maybe twilight can watch as anon dominates rarity, when she thinks she is spying on the them and starts to enjoy it.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 22 Aug 2023 23:07:52 No.40251140 Report

Quoted By: >>40252516 >>40254519

>>40250823
Do look at the surgery patient when wearing a surgical mask, also sneeze in their direction if you have to sneeze. Mask directs the droplets to the sides, slightly back, but if you turn your head droplets get directed to the patient.
A stabbed lung most likely needs stitching up too.
Otherwise Twilight surgery part is quite good.
I would put myself in IV-drip if I had to donate blood during operation. Also liquid honey or pure sugar is much better at raising your blood glucose quickly.

Checking part 1 is now finished.

>>40249417
>how much time and effort that would take
I know, it´s time consuming even for someone with a degree. Do note that this checking looks at ponepaste version and thus some things might already be pointed out (looking up every interaction in archive is way too much work).
And caslick isn´t that harsh, clitoral area needs to remain open to allow urination (a catheter solves the issue for chastity purposes) and it is quite easy to reverse, irl it´s cut open 1-2 weeks before estimated birthing.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 23 Aug 2023 02:23:38 No.40251690 Report

Quoted By: >>40252516

>>40249436
Your a med student right? Just wondering Because you seem like you know a lot, and I think you said you were.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 23 Aug 2023 06:02:00 No.40252256 Report

Quoted By: >>40252288

>>40249160
I unfortunately can't find it on FiM anymore. But it dealt with her her breaking in Applejack

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 23 Aug 2023 06:11:06 No.40252288 Report

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>>40252256
Did it have flutterbat in it ? Im seeing a lot of those.

RapeApe

RapeApe Wed 23 Aug 2023 08:43:44 No.40252516 Report

Quoted By: >>40252930 >>40253348 >>40253984

>>40249911
The guy who actually studied medicine says that topical cocaine wouldn't be used in this situation.
>>40249939
It might indeed deprive us of the proverbial carrot. We need a pretty hard punishment though, she literally asked for it. Preferably the punishment wouldn't just be pain since she's already getting that, and this story isn't meant to be focused on sadism. I'm open to alternate suggestions, and I'll be making the next update about something else so we have time to talk about it.
>>40249775
And thanks for reading. It's still wild to me how long people have stuck around.
>>40250162
What should we do as punishment?>>40250178
Could be fun.
>>40250326
Anon doesn't have any plans for Sweetie Belle. I'm hesitant to go in that direction since it might turn people away.
And Rarity's sudden change is meant to be a continuation of previous updates. She kept telling herself she wasn't a victim, and then totally lost control when Cadence was working her over. She's doing this to convince herself she's doing okay.
Hopefully that's a bit more obvious to those who read it later, without a big gap.
>>40250330
More or less. She's totally lost control of her life and is doing weird things to try and take it back.
>>40250361
I really like that idea and intend to make use of it.
>>40250382
I'd like to mark her too. It will be a somewhat delicate balance though, given we won't exactly have public approval.
>>40250631
More importantly, she'd have to earn it!
>>40250823
Looks like I blew it on that one. Ah well. I wonder why I decided on that dose? It's been long enough that I can't remember.
Scrubs is a great point and I'll make sure to change that.
>>40250936
We do need to get back to work on Twilight, don't we?
>>40251140
That mask thing makes sense.
>Quite good
Glad to hear it. That took a lot of reading, so I'm happy that it paid off.
>>40251690
I have no training in medicine and said as much shortly after starting. See this post.
>>36192175
My knowledge comes from independent study using free resources. There are massive gaps caused by a lack of practical experience, an absence of knowledge testing, and difficulty in finding resources.
The fact that you would mistake me for a med student is a massive compliment. Thank you.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 23 Aug 2023 13:27:16 No.40252930 Report

Quoted By: >>40264482

>>40252516
>What should we do as punishment?
rara seems to like to go for extremes for certain things right now, so it would be advisable to avoid her suggestions and go for something she didn't mention yet, or to go too far for her liking.
she suggested sewing her pussy shut, and although I'm all for chastity, she hasn't earned something this permanent yet, let alone something she apparently wants to have done to her. instead, the above mentioned overstimulation, or rerouting of pleasure points elsewhere could be chosen for her.
I also had the idea of instead rewiring her brain to get off to certain fabrics. she is a fashionista, so why not make her become wet when wearing a silk bra, or operagloves and stockings?

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 23 Aug 2023 16:33:51 No.40253348 Report

Quoted By: >>40253353 >>40264482

>>40249433
>>40252516
When I was writing it, you answered some of my concerns already, but I chose to post it as I was feeling when I finished reading it. Sorry for wall of text.

Choker is back!
>Rarity's new identity
I like the idea of Rarity become the trainer to others and a poster child. But how will it work? Are you going with the hierarchy that rarara suggested, and next mares became slaves under her? Or she became someone like housekeeper while others became regular, lower servants? Or now when she is "like that", are you going to just make her an example, of how a slave should look like? But that would happen either way, and for the whole Equestria, so I don't see why it should be like that.

>Rarity broken
Before the last update, I was going to suggest giving Rarity her magic back. As she could maybe secretly stimulate Coco with her magic. She was pretty accurate with the magic in the show, to use and manipulate objects. She knows where to touch to get an arousal, and could be a development in Coco story without using implants or drugs. Could be fun being all natural slut. Small doses of drugs in coffee, like with Rarity's case could work, but maybe better if Anon keep info about drugs to himself, since could lead to Rarity second guessing. Of course, she could say "it's fine you did it for my own good", but that would be boring.
Still think it's fun idea to give her magic back as it opens new possibilities.

I don't know if I like broken Rarity and I hope it’s not her final form. I understand it's tiresome to have her still rebellious after all this time. But I enjoyed her internal struggle the most, honestly. And her understanding of this "romance". Now she is a little too much. Unless it's some kind of way, again, of her trying to be in control. If so, I hope anon can show her that she can be a good slave without stuff like sewing her pussy up. The notion of any damage make me cringe, because she is a property, and I don't like my stuff having been flawed. And she herself said she wants to be perfect. Like you were dropping your phone on purpose to have cracks on the screen.

Overall, that mare needs to chill. I'm afraid she would hold her hoof in fire, if she sees it as a fit self-punishment, and might even do it from her own will. She could be even worse than Cadence now. Candy would not want to use other penises no matter what, but Rarity revel in it. I know it's about fooling yourself, but God damn. Probably it would look different in the light of never green releases, but hard to tell now. Speaking of Pinkass, she was reluctant to use Rarity's mouth before, as it would be an infidelity, but now she wasn't second guessing while fucking her in the Ass. I get that Shining said it's OK for her to play with mares, but still kinda surprised that she didn't stop for a second to think.

But as always, it was a treat to look through Cadence eyes, and on top of that getting her side of the story.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 23 Aug 2023 16:35:54 No.40253353 Report

Quoted By: >>40253363 >>40253513

>>40253348
>Punishment
Numbing her pussy could bring another issue of her not knowing where are limits to her pussy now. And if toy or Anon would penetrate her in that state, she could not even know something is not right. Leading to potential damage.

You could also numb her legs making her a flesh light as was written in early chapters. Filled with vibrators she couldn't escape. Maybe left her for some time, if you wish to focus on other characters and give yourself time to think what you want to do with her next. You cold even put her into a sport bag and hang in the closed. But then again. She is crazy now, so could probably extend it or make it more hardcore.

Punishment could be also giving her a sack on the head, so no one could see her face, and make her flash strangers anonymously. It might ease her to the whole showing in public part, but I'm afraid it could lead to rape, and Anon is in no condition to stop it.

Or attend some important banquet with her and order her to suck under a table while she fears that some pony would realize. Maybe even throw Sassy Saddle there or the rest of M6 to bump up tension. Fluttershy would probably notice, but not tell anything. She is a little perverted too since she- if I remember correctly - masturbate when Rarity told her, what was she doing with the doctor. Or rather, what he was doing with her.

If I think about it, Fluttershy could also be asked how to train some slave in the future, to pet play 24/7.
Overstimulate could be bad too because we could destroy her libido.

I doubt that something like “I will give you a really bad punishment in the future, but you don’t know when, so be ready for it always” would work on her either.

>Marking her
In case you intend to get back to the idea of tattoo (or worse), since she is already back to her makeup, she instead could paint seal of slavery and belonging. A little routine to do it herself, every morning, could be kinky for her. Tattoos are permanent and are for slaves that are prone to running away. She will not, so there is no point of doing it. Also, she already has her "collar" as a symbol. Unless it's more about you just wanting to do something like that on the mare. But I would prefer if that was used on slave that would otherwise don't want to be slave. So let say there was a law that would make slaves to be returned to the owner, and when a guard sees a mare asking for help he would check if she has a tattoo. Say Coco is introduced to her life as slave but for some reason run away seeking help. That could be a good chance for Cadence to propose it as a law, to tattoo a slave that tried to run away in the past.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 23 Aug 2023 16:39:32 No.40253363 Report

Quoted By: >>40258922

>>40253353
>Glory Hole
I'm glad that whipping and glory hole go away (at least for now). Her using only mouth and complaining about dick not being master's, was the only part about it that make it bearable for me. Cool wine analogy, can't deny it. But I do hope anon will not be renting her to be used by others. I get that she is a possession now, but Anon worked long and hard on her, and you don't give keys to your nice car, that you like and are passionate about, to strangers. It also stinks NTR.

>Foals
Flurry heart is an interesting idea, especially since she is hinted to be trained for a long time, and she is a blank canvas. She could act any way it's convenient/fun because she wasn't shown in the show. She could be even older than she should, since she is an alicorn. And another insight to the Cadence wicked mind.
Sweetie Belle seem forced. Could be fun to maybe train her to become more dominant, to dom Her older sister, but I'm not a fan of her showing in this green.

Then again, you said you don't want to go "this route", but I'm not sure if you want to include Sweetie, but you're thinking people might not like foals, or overall you aren't a fan of including foals.

If you want to include foals there are, aside from Flurry, a 2 good choices I don't know if you consider (maybe I didn't saw it):

One is Cozy Glow-she is already stripped of her rights as a pony, and nobody should have anything against using her. Maybe even congratulate Anon for putting her to use. This also could tie to the Changelings and Chrysalis, since she somehow escaped her stone prison. Replacing it with prison of lust could be even considered a reforming a villain. Celestia or Luna shouldn't have issues, since they didn't have when she was a stone. Heck, even Shining could be the one who brings her, and maybe even enjoy watching her being molested by Anon, redirect his anger. Also, Cadence probably would love to see him getting some insight on how dominating a mare could be fun.

A second that could be interesting is Applebloom. You already introduce Apple character to the plot as a patient, and Applejack hate Anon. She could even be sent, or go herself, to check on her family member because Applejack would wreck the place when she finds out that Apple was forced into the clinic. This also could be a nice develop to involve AJ in the story. Even as hide and seek with her looming in the background.

That are my thoughts for now, at least those I can remember. In retrospect, I probably should keep notes. Overall good stuff to read as always.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 23 Aug 2023 17:14:16 No.40253513 Report

Quoted By: >>40264482

>>40253353
On the other hand tattoo would be probably invisible under coat so it actually might be a better idea if you really want it. I could be wrong here on this one.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 23 Aug 2023 19:51:12 No.40253984 Report

Quoted By: >>40256442 >>40264482

>>40252516
>Anon doesn't have any plans for Sweetie Belle. I'm hesitant to go in that direction since it might turn people away.

I have nothing against foalcon. My only complaint would be in terms of reason for her to be brought into this story, which at least by this point I wouldnt see any valid ones for Sweetie to show up.
Flurry at least has more of a reason, with her being the daughter of a sex crazed mother who's probably trying to get her daughter to find a stallion that can show her the joys of submission.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 23 Aug 2023 23:00:19 No.40254519 Report

Quoted By: >>40256851 >>40264491

>>40251140
Part 2:
I´m not native or study in english so I don´t look too much into spesific words used.
Placing a wound drain helps to mitigate pus formation. Systemic and topical antibiotics are already used, but I would use antimicrobial salve (honey based usually) rather than topical antibiotic (same effect but lower chance of antibiotic resistance).
With large wounds and loss of skin area "walking sutures" are used, skin is separated from underlying muscle by blunt dissection and additional sutures are placed under dissected skin to spread out tension placed on individual suture. To my knowledge it´s not used in humans due to tighter skin.
When Shining Armor got there, Anon should have jumped at the chance for additional blood transfusion to lessen the impact of incorrect transfusion and get Twilight´s anemia in check.
Amoxicillin should be combined with clavulanic acid, this makes a better broad spectrum treatment. There´s little data on proper equine use (amoxicillin is poorly absorbed orally in horses and not officially approved) and we use different IV-antibiotics.
Routine general examination varies slightly by practitioner and species, vets tend to move from head to tail checking stuff when the part comes up. Things Anon didn´t check but should imo; stethoscope moves a lot across the chest and back to check the whole lungs and all 4 heart valves, auscultation of colon (4 parts) is very important with equines although he probably doesn´t know what to listen for, palpation of lymph nodes, checking distal pulse.
Changeling check is quite ingenious though I wonder when the changelings will begin binging sugar to fool the test and then flock the clinic since they can´t handle it.
Doctors and vets, especially men, are borderline alcoholics (stressful job and university party culture), it´s somewhat odd that Anon doesn´t go for anything while out.
Kidney values are routinely checked with blood tests for non spesific damage, ultrasound is used to check spesific partial damage. Urinalysis can show most of what blood test does but as well, although there are some kidney diseases that do not show in blood tests (diabetes insipidus first comes to mind).
I wouldn´t bother culturing a patient suffering from dirty wounds before at least a few days on low grade broad spectrum antibiotics. Dirty wounds usually carry a mixed infection so that the first culture will harbor multiple types of bacteria colonies, that need to be then cultured separately, and different bacteria often require spesific culture mediums to aid in recognition, not including the extra hassle of culturing anaerobic bacteria.
Losing patients (or euthanizing for vets and Swiss doctors or such) fucks up the head, medical professionals have the highest suicide rates among professions, also contributing to high rates of substance abuse.
Medical needles dull out quickly, vaccinating piglets causes most approved uses for a single needle and even then it´s only 10-20.

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>>40255268

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Anonymous Thu 24 Aug 2023 12:20:40 No.40256288 Report

Quoted By: >>40257349

Bump

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Anonymous Thu 24 Aug 2023 13:54:31 No.40256442 Report

Quoted By: >>40256492

more of a general question:
when it comes to a subs or masters limits, should they be respected or can they be crossed? if so when?
the same questions about hard limits as well, both in regards to fiction and generally IRL.

>>40255268
>>40255881
>music horses decide to surprise each other with a "I'm your latex slave for a weekend"
>after a few seconds of silence, they both come to the same conclusion that they need a master

>>40253984
not that anon but did we ever get a timeframe for when the green was happening in regards to the show? what if sweetie belle were a young adult at this point?

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 24 Aug 2023 14:24:33 No.40256492 Report

Quoted By: >>40256501

>>40256442
"not very far after" the show, if I recall correctly.

>what if sweetie belle were a young adult at this point?
nta either, but If you want Sweetie, don't be a coward. I'm still not sold on her involvement in the story.

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 24 Aug 2023 14:28:48 No.40256501 Report

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>>40256492
i wouldnt mind some good fillytaming, i just brought uop the possiblity of her being older for the sake of being included in the story

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Anonymous Thu 24 Aug 2023 17:24:15 No.40256851 Report

Quoted By: >>40261468

>>40254519
Huh, I actually didn´t know about the name change for C.difficile, it makes sense that Anon knows since the story happens in near future.
I stand by not collecting a bacterial sample immediately, even if this might have saved Twilight, since non-tetanus clostridial wound infections are super rare and tetanus is treated differently.
I´ve never had to deal with heavily immunocompromised patients so I didn´t figure this out earlier, but amo-clav commonly causes antibiotic diarrhea (C.difficile usually but C.perfringens is common too) so fidaxomicin could be started immediately alongside more broader antibiotics Metronidazole is a more common choice, but it is teratogenic (also not commonly with horses since they are then no longer fit for human consumption).
It is a war crime to not treat injured and captured enemies.

Part 2 finished, some things I´d like touch up on;
Antiemetics should be routinely used with any sedation, I rewatched some episodes which showed that equestrian ponies can vomit. They might have some other intestinal differences too compared to regular horses due to a differing diet, they still eat hay though so hind gut fermentation remains an important part of their digestive system.
Human doctors don´t tend routinely palpate patient´s genitalia, but as a vet these are standard procedure. Mammary palpation to check for tumors and the rare inflammation, testicle and prostate palpation for pain or asymmetry (inflammation, tumors, BPH) and rectally palpating ovaries and uterus for large female animals. Vaginal palpation is rarely indicated, has a decent chance of causing infection and a lot of owners look at you weird for even suggesting it. Anon could include some of these, since ponies are probably bad at palpating themselves due to being fingerless.

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Anonymous Thu 24 Aug 2023 20:29:49 No.40257349 Report

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>>40256288

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Anonymous Thu 24 Aug 2023 22:23:02 No.40257637 Report

Quoted By: >>40258361

https://derpibooru.org/images/3152243

>Rainbow Dash does some stupid stuff and ends up in prison.
>Scootaloo sneaks in and accidentally sees her role model being used and abused by other female roommates and guards in prison.
>Along with worry, some othere strange thoughts grow in her head, often imagining herself in Rainbow's place.

Without Rainbow there to help keep her away from untrustworthy ponies, which mare could the impressionable filly eventually approach or be approached by in the future to talk about these strange feelings ?

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Anonymous Fri 25 Aug 2023 01:19:48 No.40258165 Report

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>>40257349

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Anonymous Fri 25 Aug 2023 02:38:37 No.40258361 Report

Quoted By: >>40258383

>>40257637
eh, conventional prison always had something totally unappealing to me, at least in the setup of your sample pic. it's dirty, the jumpsuits have nothing erotic to them, and mere prisoner abuse isn't enough to propel it beyond that.
there needs to be "a different kind of prison" mindset to really change it up to be more then just that imo

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Anonymous Fri 25 Aug 2023 02:47:10 No.40258383 Report

Quoted By: >>40258445

>>40258361
It could be something else that puts Rainbow as a toy for others, and away from but still visible to Scoots to make an impression on her.

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Anonymous Fri 25 Aug 2023 03:07:13 No.40258445 Report

Quoted By: >>40258770

>>40258383
what if Ponyville tried a different kind of system and rainbow dash, after being wrongfully made accountable for derpy's mishaps, were convicted to experience it?
as for the new system, Ponyville doesn't have too many inhabitants so affording a prison is out of the question and sending them away didn't seem to be in the villages spirit... and so punishments are on average shorter, but also more public. public flogging at the stockade, bondage suits for them not tied down in place, sleeping accomodations perhaps in a small room In the basement of the town hall?
that would give scoots plenty of opportunity to see her fallen idol and to wish to take her place instead

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Anonymous Fri 25 Aug 2023 05:21:07 No.40258770 Report

Quoted By: >>40258952 >>40259076 >>40259620

>>40258445
I see what you mean, a more visible type of punishment instead of an isolated cell.

>give scoots plenty of opportunity to see her fallen idol and to wish to take her place instead
How about this bit of change?
Its not that Scoots wishes to take her place, its only that she stops seeing Rainbow as a strong, dominant figure ( which in her submissive inexperienced mind she just thinks of those traits as being cooler) and stops seeing her as a role model, while looking for, or being eyed by a future one.
Im not saying she abandons Rainbow or doesnt treat her as a friend anymore, but she just starts seeing her in a different light.

As for Rainbow's punishment, it should be something degrading and of a longer duration, that will keep her away from Scootaloo long enough for some other mare to claim the filly as her "mentor", and possibly rub it off on Rainbow's face.

What about her damaging Applejack's farm, and being sentenced to be her slave for a few years to pay it off ?

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Anonymous Fri 25 Aug 2023 06:47:34 No.40258922 Report

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>>40253363
I like the idea of golly showing up

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Anonymous Fri 25 Aug 2023 06:59:46 No.40258952 Report

Quoted By: >>40259076

>>40258770
if you don't want scoots to see RD, having dashie work on the same farm one of scoots friends lives at probably doesn't work...
but since scootaloo can't fly, why not have RD banished to cloudsdale, or at least to some job in the sky. what about pulling carriages, but not the fancy princess kind?

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Anonymous Fri 25 Aug 2023 08:10:51 No.40259076 Report

Quoted By: >>40259620

>>40258952
>if you don't want scoots to see RD
The whole point is having Rainbow's descent being shown to her

Oh wait
>>40258770
> that will keep her away from Scootaloo long enough
Forget I wrote that part. What I really meant was her being unable to be near Scootaloo as a role model during this. Specially if she's gagged, or unable to teach flying because of the forced wing binders, or in any other humiliating condition Applejack forced onto her.

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Anonymous Fri 25 Aug 2023 13:08:51 No.40259620 Report

Quoted By: >>40261042

>>40258770
>>40259076
Like originally Rainbow was going to jail but Applejack convinced whoever it would be better for Rainbow to fix the farm instead... No pony really knows why Dash was put into a gimp suit except for Rainbow and Applejack, that being that Applejack had also convinced the judge to force RD to live as an Earth Pony without complaint.

She could even be given more time from reports given by the Apple family (cause it turns out AJ isn't the only one on the farm to give 'stress relief' to the pegasus)

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Anonymous Fri 25 Aug 2023 18:35:01 No.40260512 Report

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whip

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Anonymous Fri 25 Aug 2023 21:22:17 No.40261042 Report

Quoted By: >>40261617

>>40259620
Applejack wanted a chance to put Rainbow down in her place, and other mane 6 dont mind it much cause Rainbow had it coming after crashing everythting constantly.

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Anonymous Fri 25 Aug 2023 22:43:03 No.40261285 Report

Quoted By: >>40262519 >>40262794 >>40281290

Mind control general didnt care much for this idea. Maybe they dont care much about depravity and heavier stuff.

What about you guys ?
https://desuarchive.org/mlp/thread/40251581/#40252158

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Anonymous Fri 25 Aug 2023 23:42:08 No.40261468 Report

Quoted By: >>40264491

>>40256851
>>38898589
Do the X-ray aprons incorporate thyroid shields?
>>38898593
Pudendal nerve is almost entirety of what works for pleasure purposes. Inferior hemorrhoidal nerves could be used to stimulate the anus. Most radical method would be to straight up place an implant to sacral plexus but any stimulation causes sensation across majority of the legs too. A sophisticated implant could be hidden in/under clitoral fossa. Nipples work too (different branch of pudendal nerve).
>>39032763
In long term wound treatment it is often better to not bandage the wound since this increases festering. Better way is to clean the wound 2-3 times a day with antimicrobial solution (I use diluted iodine based one) and then spread a liberal layer of antimicrobial salve (petroleum jelly works though I prefer honey based).
Shouting at patient is not a good way to check readiness for surgery, palpebral reflex and rotated eyes are. This is also time for moisturizing eye gel to prevent drying during surgery.
Every trash in a hospital is potential biohazard and no one bothers using separate bins for bloody tissues and lunch wrappers, waste termination varies by area (on.site incinerator or special garbage collection). Needles, scalpel blades and microscope slides are placed in their own sturdy container to prevent accidental cuts.
In debridement borders of healthy and non-viable tissue are easy to identify after a few days, in immediate treatment trickiest part is to note circulation to remaining tissue (healthy looking tissue might not be healthy later when an artery to said area is cut during procedure). Debridement also causes additional loss of skin area and tension of sutures must also be kept in mind. Maggot therapy is a possibility.
>>39032774
Mares have comparatively large milk channels and injection could be used without a needle (in mastitis antibiotics go in that route irl).
>>39041027
Aww, Twily is a placebo addict. Vets don´t have to deal with drug abusing patients (rehabilitation from certain psychoactive drugs is done by long term diminishing dose) but occasionally owners have a drug problem and they take their pet`s drugs (good luck in trying to get high from tramadol dosed for cats though).
I get the joke and I haven´t mentioned this previously, but Anon knows unusually much obscure medical facts for a surgeon. An insider meme is that surgeon can do everything but don´t know shit, internal medicine knows everything but can´t do shit and pathologists know and can do everything but only too late. It kinda makes sense though since Anon has had to adapt for work in Equestria.
>>39360585
Nothing in the body, optic nerve included, is suited for a long life though some parts age faster. I´d be more worried about basically every other age related eye problem.
>>39706976
Cleanup before ointments, also it would be preferred to shave the area at the clinic (otherwise any creams will have negligible effect).

*Insert funny quip about being done* No.

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Anonymous Sat 26 Aug 2023 00:47:22 No.40261617 Report

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>>40261042
Yep

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Anonymous Sat 26 Aug 2023 02:14:37 No.40261868 Report

Quoted By: >>40261907 >>40263976

>Rainbow Dash closed her math book with a yawn. Thanks to Twilight and Sunset's help, she was pulling up her grade from a D to sometimes a C student to a C sometimes B student... Even if algebra was more egghead junk. Rainbow popped open a soda to try and wake herself when an alarm on her phone went off.>

>With a mischievous smile, the chromatic-haired girl jumped to her feet and got to work stripping out of her pajamas. She made little work getting out of her pj pants, flicking them away with her foot before tossing her shirt atop it. Now just in her boxers, she ran to her closet and searched for about a few seconds before she pulled out the three items she was looking for a pair of black sweatpants, a black sweatshirt, and a black ski cap.>

>"Alright Dash," She said to her reflection, tucking her hair into the black cap. "Time to go." She pulled her sneakers on before climbing out the window.>

>The girl lived up to her name, dashing through the city as she checked her phone for the time.>

>9:43pm>

>She needed to hurry if she was gonna make it on time, the blue-skinned girl keeping her eyes out for the cops since [i:lit]technically[/i:lit] she was breaking curfew on a Saturday. Though in truth, that was honestly the least she'd get in trouble for tonight. A thought that made her feel a little bad.>

>"Okay Dash, this is the last time." She thought as she entered the neighborhood she traveled to many times before. "After tonight, you'll stop this and pretend it never happened." She then stopped, taking deep breaths as she looked at the midnight blue two-story house.>

>The houses around the almost camouflaged building were dark, with the only light coming from the first floor of her target. This makes it easier for her to sneak over the fence! She took careful steps over to the side of the large lawn, watching out for anyone who could see her before grabbing the wooden planks of the wall.>

>She scaled it with ease, not as much as she would have with a running start but the name of the game was stealth. As she straddled the fence, already halfway over she mused to herself about how she must look like a burglar sneaking into the backyard. She swung her other leg over to land on the ground and that, was when it happened.>

>While she sat on the top of the fence her sweatpants were caught between two boards. Her gentle slide down was stopped, a loud ripping noise filling the silence.>

>"Oh shit! Shit! Shit!" Rainbow Dash grimaced as she grabbed at the now-torn crotch, tugging at it to free herself from the caught fabric.>

>She landed on the ground and cringed, feeling the cool September of the air somewhere she really shouldn't. Biting her lips, she moved her hand down to find she was now basically flashing. She heard a noise behind her, getting under the window seal as the light came on.>

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Anonymous Sat 26 Aug 2023 02:25:24 No.40261907 Report

Quoted By: >>40262022 >>40263976

>>40261868
>"Oh shit! Shit! Shit!" Rainbow Dash grimaced as she grabbed at the now-torn crotch, tugging at it to free herself from the caught fabric.>

>She landed on the ground and cringed, feeling the cool September of the air somewhere she really shouldn't. Biting her lips, she moved her hand down to find she was now basically flashing. She heard a noise behind her, getting under the window seal as the light came on for just a second.>

>Rainbow counted to ten before holding her breath and peeking through the window. She found Vice-Principle Luna in the laundry room, the voluptuous older woman had her back to the window dressed in a small pink shirt and a pair of ratty black panties. She was putting clothes in the washer, giving the girl enough time to move.>

>Rainbow Dash rushed around the house to not be seen, rolling past the backdoor as she crawled toward the two bushes by a window. The shrubbery was perfect, hiding her from either of the older woman's neighbors while giving her a perfect view into the living room.>

>Luna walked into the large den, turning on the large t.v. before picking up a scotch cup and taking a drink of whatever was in it. She sat down in a large chair and cast a video on the smart monitor.>

>"Just in time," Rainbow muttered as her hand hovered over her uncovered slit.>

>Three weeks ago, Rainbow Dash was partying with some of her other friends when the cops came to shut it down. Rainbow was one of many kids who scattered to run away from the police, the rainbow-haired girl jumping backyards till she hid between two bushes. She looked into the window of the house she was hiding to find one of her school's administrators masturbating to a bondage porno. To her surprise a week later, she found the woman once again touching herself in another bondage movie.>

>Rainbow did her best after the first time just trying to ignore what she saw, pretending that she never watched one of her teachers touching herself to porn. So when Thursday came and the girl found herself engaging in self-bondage, imagining herself a slave to the Vice-Principle she knew she had a problem.>

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Anonymous Sat 26 Aug 2023 02:50:41 No.40262022 Report

Quoted By: >>40262915 >>40263380 >>40263976 >>40290863

>>40261907
>Rainbow Dash wanted to be her Vice-Principle's sex slave.>

>The athlete did her best after the first time just trying to ignore what she saw, pretending she never watched one of her teachers touching herself to porn. So when Thursday came and the girl found herself engaging in a little self-bondage, she couldn't help imagining herself a slave to the blue-haired woman. Rainbow was simping hard and she loved it.>

>Dash peeked inside to see the video while her fingers slowly traced her slit up and down. The screen showed a woman with her head completely encased in tape bound to a wooden horse with weights pulling her down on dildo. She let out a howl as she squirted thanks to the dildo.>

>Rainbow shut her eyes as her fingers entered her lower lips, the athlete kept her mouth shut to keep in her moan while her imagination took over. She could feel teeth biting her neck as one hand twisted her nipple, the weight forcing the dildo deeper into her snatch. The rubber hood over her head stifled her moan as her captor laughed.>

>"You're such a dirty girl, aren't you, my little Rainbow.">

>The woman purred before giving Dash another bite on her shoulder. The horny teen let out another moan as she felt a third hand roughly grab her face as a sweet smell filled her lun->

>Wait, third-hand? Rainbow Dash's arm grew heavy as she struggled to reach for her face, a fourth hand easily grabbing her wrist.>

>"Shhhh... Just go to sleep~" A familiar voice whispered behind her as Dash continued to fight in vain before the darkness overcame her. Her pussy dripped as dreamed of the reflection of Luna drugging her.>

(all I got for now)

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Anonymous Sat 26 Aug 2023 05:45:58 No.40262519 Report

Quoted By: >>40262794 >>40262876

>>40261285
i like it. i like all subliminal stuff anyway, so slowly changing octavia, perhaps even with no other imput happening apart from that, would be pretty hot.
i also have an idea as to how it could happen:
>vinyl blasts music next door and tavi only hears the fain bass through the walls
>but its said low wubwubs that carry the message for her

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Anonymous Sat 26 Aug 2023 08:17:10 No.40262794 Report

Quoted By: >>40262876 >>40262900

>>40262519
>>40261285
I think it's cuz the thread is not all that active maybe try reposting it there.

I think they would really like it

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Anonymous Sat 26 Aug 2023 09:00:50 No.40262876 Report

Quoted By: >>40262900

>>40262519
Yeah sound hypno is what wouold match this really well.
It even had 3 fics where Vinyl used that on Tavi.

Im a fan of subliminals as well, but even more so when its the conflicting kind where the mind never agrees with the subconcious, so the pleasure always has to be something foreign and shamefull in the victim's head.
I mean, picture her getting so desperate to get off during her nights with the gentlecolts with vanilla tastes that she usually dates, that she shamefully begs them to be rougher with her, spank, or beyond that.

>perhaps even with no other imput happening apart from that, would be pretty hot.
Maybe not another hypno method, but suggestions that Vinyl could leave around the house to plant some kinky ideas for Tavi's mind to learn about and later obsess over it.

>>40262794
I did repost it, but maybe they glanced over it. I'll try putting a tavi pic.

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Anonymous Sat 26 Aug 2023 09:11:10 No.40262900 Report

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>>40262794
>>40262876
Also it might be just me, but anons from the other fetish threads never seem to want to delve deep into kinky stuff.

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Anonymous Sat 26 Aug 2023 09:29:12 No.40262915 Report

Quoted By: >>40263175

>>40262022
Nice start.
Is Luna going to have an interrogation session with Rainbow ?
You know, to learn herself what made Dash want to grovel at her feet so much.

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Anonymous Sat 26 Aug 2023 12:37:44 No.40263175 Report

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>>40262915
Yep, and Rainbow's in for another surprise

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Anonymous Sat 26 Aug 2023 15:05:55 No.40263380 Report

Quoted By: >>40265130

>>40262022
you dont get to see these two paired with each other too often, or at all. we also havent had a "good amateur dom showing a voluntary fresh sub how things go" in ages here either.
anyway, my body is ready for more

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Anonymous Sat 26 Aug 2023 18:14:30 No.40263976 Report

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>>40261868
>>40261907
>>40262022

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RapeApe Sat 26 Aug 2023 20:49:47 No.40264482 Report

Quoted By: >>40264852 >>40264864 >>40267869 >>40267881 >>40268905

>>40252930
Rewiring a brain is easy. Doing it with any degree of control is a lot harder. Our best bet for something like that is probably just conditioning.
>>40253348
Rarity isn't fully broken. We still saw a lot of resistance and misconceptions in not too long ago, mostly about her attachment to her public image. She's overcompensating right now, and will drift back toward disobedience if we aren't firm with her. As you suggested, she's trying to convince herself she's in control.
I tend to agree about damage. I'll entertain reversable procedures, but anything permanent has to be handled with extreme care.
You raise a good point about potential harm in numbing.
Cadence wasn't initially hesitant to use mares. Rather, she was initially very eager, then Anon pointed out that it might be considered cheating. She was horrified to realize that she'd betrayed her husband's trust. She later got permission to rape Rarity, and while I was never really satisfied with that we all wanted sapphic scenes so it got in.
The gloryhole is gone for the time being. I don't currently plan on bringing it back, but this green is directed very heavily by reader requests. If people are asking for something you don't want, PLEASE speak up. I have no way of knowing what people want if you don't.
Flurry would be difficult to handle given her father would snap Anon's neck if he touched her, but that doesn't mean others couldn't lewd her and she really should appear at some point in some form. Golly would be relatively easy, since nopony would even notice if she were missing.
>>40253513
I'm hesitant to make permanent modifications, but not firmly opposed to a tattoo. It's something we'd have to be careful about though.
>>40253984
I agree. Sweetie would be a weird pick.

RapeApe

RapeApe Sat 26 Aug 2023 20:52:03 No.40264491 Report

Quoted By: >>40265227 >>40271987

>>40254519
I'd never heard of walking sutures. It makes some sense if they're not used on humans. Since it's much easier for me to find information about human procedures, I tend to model things after them more than I should.
You're absolutely right that Anon should have been eager to get blood from Shining. That's a stupid oversight on my part.
>Clavulanic acid
This is new to me, so please correct me if I'm wrong. It does nothing on its own, but by binding with beta-lactamase it suppresses the countermeasures used by antibiotic resistant bacteria, correct? I've said that antibiotic resistance is almost unheard of in Equestria. Would it make sense to use it regardless to suppress the development of resistant bacteria by making the mutation less favorable? Or would that mechanism of resistance develop at more or less the same rate regardless?
It's funny you should mention alcoholism and other forms of substance abuse, since that was mentioned in the previous update. Anon has suffered from vice and feels the call right now, but he's managing to stay in control. He doesn't allow himself to become intoxicated when he's on call, which is always.
That part about palpation is going to be useful, I just don't know how yet.>>40261468
They should include a thyroid shield, yes. I doubt I mentioned that specifically, but it would be weird if they didn't.
I think maggot therapy would be impractical in his situation, since he would have a hard time explaining it to people and would have difficulty securing maggots for the job.
Trash management is a mistake on my part that I'll have to keep in mind.
>Anon knows unusually much
Huh. "He knows too much medicine" is most certainly not a criticism I was expecting. I think I'll leave that as is since he's supposed to be suspiciously good at his job.

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Anonymous Sat 26 Aug 2023 20:53:05 No.40264496 Report

Quoted By: >>40265944 >>40266567

I love hoods that turn the hair into a ponytail.
Strangely enough I dont see more of this kind in mlp latex art.

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Anonymous Sat 26 Aug 2023 22:42:46 No.40264852 Report

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>>40264482
I think golly could be good maybe we could see her evil side where she tries to make anon the ruler of the world instead of herself maybe she worsl with cadence a lot and Candyass introduces her to flurry.

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Anonymous Sat 26 Aug 2023 22:46:07 No.40264864 Report

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>>40264482
Come to think of it, was Spike ever brought up in the story ?

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Anonymous Sun 27 Aug 2023 00:25:44 No.40265130 Report

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>>40263380
Woo, I'm glad.

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Anonymous Sun 27 Aug 2023 00:50:27 No.40265188 Report

Quoted By: >>40267869 >>40267881

܂>>40249433
>you’re ALWAYS on call
Why don't ponies try to learn from Anon?
>No matter what you chose, it was a disaster.
Trolley problem.
>and forced you to do what you wanted
Did he really wanted that?
>Freedom from responsibility
I don't think Rarity gets that. She is still responsible for her behavior!
>my dear master
She gets better and better at accepting her position.
>I’d better check on her anyway
It can wait a bit.
>She’s wearing her choker
That's a first.
>being au naturel
Which is still fetching.
>Would I be able to do that in your stead?
Maybe it would be better if Rarity were the one checking on her, to not freak her out more than necessary.
>they actually go quite well together
Anon is not the type of person who invests any effort to things such as this simple dish. He seems to be rather drink drip coffee because thats easier to make. But maybe Rarity can have this as a daily task.
>hard time imagining them actually fighting
Oh, but Shining "fights" her daily!
>or at least something quite close to it
If only she knew..
>What happened to your ass?
Did he forget that Rarity receives quite a few lashes weekly?
>I shall endure the pain.
Anon could have ordered her... She just spoke back.
>set it to the candle’s flame
If these contracts are so easily nullified, then what's the point of them?
>And that is precisely the problem.
Well, Anon needs to change. He is learning how to be a master.
>Thank you!
Fuck indeed.
>You’re far too soft, doctor.
But she is the one who always disobeys, or doubts if this is right for her or not.
>keep asking for my permission
Well, both parties wanted to take things slow.
>I want you to own me
Seems like yesterdays beating finally flipped the switch in her mind.
>I merely didn’t wish to admit it.
Yes, the man always has to be a mind reader. And its always his fault.
>Rarity is not compromise
Yet, she wants her control to be taken from her. That's a pretty big compromise.
>make me yours
Anon should really do that more often...
>takes the responsibility out of my hooves
Except it does not. She just exchanges the responsibilities to a different set.
>But I’ve come around on many of them.
Yet she failed to wear a simple, inconspicuous collar in public.
>Very well
She knew Anon is testing the waters. Anon was too abrupt with these statements.
>You actually have her.
Time will tell.
>and I did it again today
Did she do it in the house? While Anon was sleeping nearby?
>sew my vagina shut
That would be quite limiting.
>Permanently.
Anon needs to choose something which he won't regret later, but teaches Rarity a lesson.
>But you wouldn’t feel anything.
Its dangerous. She would just go at it harder, or if she gets injured she would not feel it either.
>I wasn’t asking
That's the spirit.

>Should we numb her?
No, for the reason mentioned earlier.
Instead, I suggest to tattoo a collar around her neck. For a while she would be fighting herself to go outside. At least internally.

Thanks for the update!

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Anonymous Sun 27 Aug 2023 01:04:27 No.40265227 Report

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>>40264491
>Would it make sense to use it regardless to suppress the development of resistant bacteria by making the mutation less favorable? Or would that mechanism of resistance develop at more or less the same rate regardless?
I´m used to augmentin (amoxicillin-clavulac acid) since the prevalence of betalactamase is so high irl. In a world with no antibiotic resistance it would kinda make sense to not use augmentin compared to regular amoxicillin to reduce (negligible) additional side effects. Anon would know about responsible antibiotic usage and thus should not undertreat significant infections, preferably no bacteria remains when antibiotic treatment is discontinued.
Unfortunately, patients might not take all their meds after the symptoms go away and some chance happening might lead to regular staphylococci coming into contact with antibiotics and gaining resistance (for example, your skin has S.aureus naturally and handling of the pill might cause them to come in meaningful contact) so it is inevitable that Equestria will some day see the rise of antibiotic resistant bacteria (Anon and other humans will most likely already carry some).
Amoxillin would most likely cause the evolution of betalactamase and augmentin could prevent this, but it is also possible that the mutation already exists.
>that was mentioned in the previous update
I need a cane and thick glasses.
>but it would be weird if they didn't
Often used separately. Collar type thyroid shield is also a fun hat since it looks like an open cap.
>would have difficulty securing maggots for the job
Didn´t think of that, makes sense with the scarcity of portal opening. He could always waste unreasonable amounts of money by trying to breed them himself for the extraordinarily rare occurrence when they are actually needed.
>I'll have to keep in mind
Some hospitals do separate larger parts of removed tissue (though only example I could tell by example is our veterinary teaching hospital that has a large biowaste incinerator for it due to pathological facilities residing next door). Surgical instruments are handled by the clinic themselves, dunno about terminal management of sharp waste.

At Sun 27 Aug 2023 03:21:19 No.40265573 Report

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OK, she isn't completely broke.

But she began to embrace this. Lifestyle, for the wrong reasons but it's a start.

Add Flurry or not, I think that first the case of the patient must be first complete.

Then focus more on Rarity and the Doctors new approach to show her what kind of lifestyle she has decided to follow is with a more strict master.

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Anonymous Sun 27 Aug 2023 06:01:34 No.40265888 Report

Quoted By: >>40265944

>>40245260
New nun, this time with an odd OC.
I dont know, but feels like Cadence should have a different type of virtue required from her servants.

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Anonymous Sun 27 Aug 2023 06:30:21 No.40265944 Report

Quoted By: >>40266220 >>40267489

>>40265888
ignoring that the luna was the first nun, but what if the different princesses and their respective nununiforms all had different specializations?
luna-nun:
>pure chastity, no pleasure, no edging, no release. the pussy will forever remain untouched
cadence:
>overstimulation and forced orgasm
celestia:
>edging without release
twilight:
>no idea

all i know is that i need more desperate latexnuns!

>>40264496
little ponytail holes just make it seem a bit more classy. posture is important and to ponies, raised tails are part of that whole appearencepackage

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Anonymous Sun 27 Aug 2023 09:21:51 No.40266220 Report

Quoted By: >>40266844

>>40265944
What about some masochist specializations for a more "penance oriented" behaviour ?

Although the Cadence example matches well with her. The princess of Love being a prisoner of her own pleasure.
It could even be connected somehow to the amount of love present in her ponies, so if theres a low amount the vibrations go to full strength.
Make it some sort of penance for her being too selfish about her own pleasure and disregarding the feelings of others.

Luna's case is great, although some occasional edging to test her commitment wouldnt hurt.

Celestia's case could use something more to it. She gets the edging being a constant test of her composure as a ruler, but there should be something reserved for the failures. A "sword of Damocles" kind of situation.
Make her a prisoner of the apparent strength she always has to show.

No idea about Twilight though.

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Anonymous Sun 27 Aug 2023 12:13:04 No.40266567 Report

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>>40264496
It's alright

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Anonymous Sun 27 Aug 2023 15:00:38 No.40266844 Report

Quoted By: >>40268409 >>40269151

>>40266220
>cadence
i dont think being an unpopular princess should be rewarded, cause that what it sounds like. instead, why not have her cage increase in strength, the more popular she becomes? she cant just go ahead and fail because she is a princess, but doing her job too well, will require alot of getting used to
>luna
i like the "test the commitment idea" but it shouldnt be done through direct stimulation. heat inducing drugs, perhaps even watching her little ponies have sex would be more suitable if the goal is for her to never be touched again
i also want to bring in "love nectar harvesting" here but i dont know how. perhaps a little bag collectuing fluids directly from her belt?
>celestia
interactive edging? something like her belt going up and down in intensity depending on how many ponies see her at a given time? the goal should simply be not to just have her belt buzz away at the same speed for ages, but to change its pattern and make it unpredicatble. a but like remotecontrolled sextoys can be
>twiggie
yeah same, although... see below

but what about the princesses followers? should they wear the same models as their idols?what if twilights belt changes on how many friends she has? it would fit her title. as to the changed, it would like them to be unpredictable. a new friend shouldnt just mean less teasing for her. instead, it could be random changes, ranging from shocks appearing and changing in intensity, all the way ta a dildo or buttplug changing in size and movement

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Anonymous Sun 27 Aug 2023 19:20:10 No.40267489 Report

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>>40265944
>little ponytail holes just make it seem a bit more classy. posture is important and to ponies, raised tails are part of that whole appearencepackage
It seems obvious now that you mentioned it. Restrictive but in a classy, clean way always seems to match well.

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Anonymous Sun 27 Aug 2023 21:29:26 No.40267869 Report

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>>40264482
Thanks for clearing stuff with Rarara mental state and Cadence situation.
>PLEASE speak up
OK then, I don't want to tattoo her. It's permanent with is bad already, and I really don't find it attractive.

I still don't know what could be done to her as punishment in this state. It really need to be planned to not come out really bad.
I had idea of Anon saying something like "As your punishment I will not get punished"; when she ask why, then he respond "You would need to figure it yourself". It could bother her as she would try to figure it out. Leading her to some realizations that would then be used to fix her mental state (aka not how she is now). You could even play it for comedic purpose as he has no idea what is he talking about, but said it with such confidence that she is overthinking it, looking for deeper meaning.
You could also cut short her hair or tail. Not bald. With the short tail she couldn't hide her arousal in public that well. And it's reversible because of Zecora.

>>40265188
I don't see why tattoo around her neck would be any good. Firstly there would need to be a scene, how she explain it to every pony she meet. With will get old after some time, and if they don't talk about it, then what is the point of it?
She already wear her choker, she realized that it's symbol that Anon is proud of her, and he want to show her. It also was stated earlier, that it look enough like something that is worn by regular folks, and you don't need to go through talk every time she met someone, like with the tattoo. Also she is a fashion pony, soon she will probably wear prototypes of her own choker/collars. Later could be introduced genital fashion (something like dborg/2959101).

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Anonymous Sun 27 Aug 2023 21:33:51 No.40267881 Report

Quoted By: >>40269426 >>40272696 >>40274147 >>40304765

>>40264482
Thanks for clearing stuff with Rarara mental state and Cadence situation.
>PLEASE speak up
OK then, I don't want to tattoo her. It's permanent with is bad already, and I really don't find it attractive.

I still don't know what could be done to her as punishment in this state. It really need to be planned to not come out really bad.
I had idea of Anon saying something like "As your punishment, you will not get punished"; when she ask why, then he respond "You would need to figure it yourself". It could bother her as she would try to figure it out. Leading her to some realizations that would then be used to fix her mental state (aka not how she is now). You could even play it for comedic purpose as he has no idea what is he talking about, but said it with such confidence that she is overthinking it, looking for deeper meaning.
You could also cut short her hair or tail. Not bald. With the short tail she couldn't hide her arousal in public that well. And it's reversible because of Zecora.

>>40265188
I don't see why tattoo around her neck would be any good. Firstly there would need to be a scene, how she explain it to every pony she meet. With will get old after some time, and if they don't talk about it, then what is the point of it?
She already wear her choker, she realized that it's symbol that Anon is proud of her, and he want to show her. It also was stated earlier, that it look enough like something that is worn by regular folks, and you don't need to go through talk every time she met someone, like with the tattoo. Also she is a fashion pony, soon she will probably wear prototypes of her own choker/collars. Later could be introduced genital fashion (something like dborg/2959101).

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Anonymous Sun 27 Aug 2023 23:54:34 No.40268409 Report

Quoted By: >>40268905

>>40266844
>i dont think being an unpopular princess should be rewarded
No didnt mean the near constant overstimulation would be enjoyable, specially not after experiencing a month of it.
Thats why it would be either live with that kind of torture, or feel relief but no pleasure herself while she nurtures the love of others.

>i also want to bring in "love nectar harvesting" here
I like when thats done in a medical play.

>interactive edging? something like her belt going up and down in intensity depending on how many ponies see her at a given time
That fit for a ruler like her, but she needs some consequence as well for losing composure, like what I did in Cadence's example.

>twi example
Not really feeling it with that one.

But I was thinking of how a nun order would work for the other princesses besides the chaste celestial one.
I keep picturing Luna's as something focused on a masochistic type of order, to fit with the ideals of an old fashioned princess who doesnt want her followers to feel something sinful as pleasure without some form of penance.

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Anonymous Mon 28 Aug 2023 03:18:49 No.40268905 Report

Quoted By: >>40269134 >>40269426 >>40269510 >>40304765

>>40264482
rewiring her brain was more of a figure of speech than anything else. but my general idea still stands that making her physically and mentally get off to some fabrics would suit her as a slave and fashionhoers.

as to wanting us to guide the story, part of the problem with committees is that they hardly if ever decide on what's best, so you making the odd hard decision wouldn't be wrong.
but if we have to punish rarity and want to regain control, we need to do something she actually sees as punishment, and not get off to it. since I was too focused on posting about the nun thing, why not something like that? you would know if she hates being edged nonstop once she actually begs for it to stop. and it doesn't have to be just that, as long as the result is her knowing she did something wrong and that the punishment for it isn't worth it.

>>40268409
what if they were not just different competing nun-convents, but more like different religious confessions that saw each other as sinners, apostate and the likes? real hatred between the groups that sometimes leads to kidnappings and alterations being done to each others wardrobe and belts?

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Anonymous Mon 28 Aug 2023 04:57:38 No.40269134 Report

Quoted By: >>40269417

>>40268905
>what if they were not just different competing nun-convents, but more like different religious confessions that saw each other as sinners, apostate and the likes?
I wasnt thinking that far ahead in there being conflicts between each other.

But I did have some cooked up idea of their origins.
Imagine if alicorns had the power to extend a pony's life into immortality. But it was a forbidden status for a normal pony to have, which meant that any ponies accepting to go through that woul have their identities hidden and erased, and become bounded to an order under the authority of the princess.

Could be a worshipping nun one, or more of a servant kind, but in the end they would still be slaves to their respective princesses in all but name.

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Anonymous Mon 28 Aug 2023 05:04:49 No.40269151 Report

Quoted By: >>40269417 >>40270565 >>40278143

>>40266844
luna should be self harm and masochism. like luna was in the show

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Anonymous Mon 28 Aug 2023 07:05:59 No.40269417 Report

Quoted By: >>40269476 >>40273534 >>40278143

>>40269134
sounds like one of those "deals with the devil" stories. eternal life and all it costs is lifelong dedication and obedience to one of the princesses... but no word about what that would look like. a gullible young mare could probably be made to sign such a contract with her soul, not knowing what this would mean for her, only to wake up in one of those nunoutfits. should the outfits or bodysuits below be somehow permanently glued to the "volunteer", or what should be done to prevent contract breeches?

>>40269151
if the belt and clothes are all we have to work with, why not give the belt small pointy nubs that dig I to the flesh, but don't penetrate it? painful interaction with the genitals overall could be a Lunathing in this case

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Anonymous Mon 28 Aug 2023 07:14:49 No.40269426 Report

Quoted By: >>40269510 >>40269918

>>40267881
I agree. No permanent marks. We could put a temporary tattoo of some sort on her and say it's permanent to see how she reacts, could be fun. But I don't want to damage the goods.
>>40268905
We could put Rarity in a more conventional form of chastity and leave her implant running on low all the time. Edging for a few days and not being able to rest would be pretty harsh. Tell her it's to learn self control or something.

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Anonymous Mon 28 Aug 2023 07:56:36 No.40269476 Report

Quoted By: >>40269918

>>40269417
>why not give the belt small pointy nubs that dig I to the flesh, but don't penetrate it?
Come on, do that with socks or locked hoof shoes as well.

Make her feel the pointy nubs on her frogs with every step, or reserve that for special occasions.

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Anonymous Mon 28 Aug 2023 08:18:32 No.40269510 Report

Quoted By: >>40269562 >>40269918 >>40304765

>>40268905
>>40269426
Personally Im seeing a good potential in using that Coco implant idea to tease Rarity relentlessly until she begs for anon to reverse the procedure.
I mean think about it. She wants to desperately convince herself that she's in control of her body and mind now that the pleasure is gone. And she would definitely jump at the oportunity to be Coco's trainer as another chance to prove to herself and anon as well that she is only a sub when she wants to be.

And I think anon could even sell the implant idea to Rarity by appealing to that obsession with self control she's got, tellinig her that a true dom shouldnt let some teasing break his composure.
Doing it this way would make a much better job at convincing Rarity of her lack of control since it was by her choice that she accepted this trial and failed.

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Anonymous Mon 28 Aug 2023 09:12:51 No.40269562 Report

Quoted By: >>40269918

>>40269510
So you want to convince Rarity into being a dom for Coco, so she would then teach Anon into her perfect master? Could be spicy.
Same could be applied to Rarity being send to Cadence as a helper/assistant and Candyass use her as an example sub for Flurry. Second "role model" for young princess.

I would heavy consider mentioning any implants or modifications to her. She could throw another tantrum, or second guessing everything once again.
It could also be used as a decoy(?). Say that she have implant, she will connect her abnormal arousal to said devices, and calm down, because it's not her. It's the device that is messing with her. Could even take it out, unknowingly to her, but still use controller as a placebo: show her it being used, but not actually use, so she could have an excuses to be perverted.

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Anonymous Mon 28 Aug 2023 12:34:04 No.40269918 Report

Quoted By: >>40270131 >>40304765

>>40269426
not sure how to put it into words but what if rarity were made super horny, only to feel nothing but a distant pressure inside of her that needs to be released. it would always be there, only increasing in its ability to distract her. all of this while being totally numbed down and put under lock and key in a belt.
in a way, we already had this but I just remembered what a local anesthesia feels/doesn't feel like and wondered if this should be done to her.

>>40269476
have her high step too so she can't just cowardly attempt to ignore or soften each punishing step she makes. don't allow her to stand still either, put a timer on her hoof boots that don't allow longer standing times than 2 seconds or actual spikes extend from the dull ones. said timer can be reset if the hoof is raised and lowered at the right speed to the right height!

>>40269510
I like this one, and it suits her current state of mind. right now she seems to think she can take it all as well as her master having done something wrong (a though that should be illegal for a slave to have imo)
but I also have to say that I look forward to a presentation scene in which rarity gets told and even shown what will be done to her in great detail.

>>40269562
a wonderful idea as well with the flurry thing. this could also teach rarity how lucky she really is!

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Anonymous Mon 28 Aug 2023 14:36:19 No.40270131 Report

Quoted By: >>40271205

>>40269918
>a though that should be illegal for a slave to have imo
I would say that her inner struggles are half of the appeal of the story. I don't care how slutty, broken or eager another slaves would be, but I want to still have Rarity with her doubts. It make her a little more believable as a real person/character.

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Anonymous Mon 28 Aug 2023 18:02:05 No.40270565 Report

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>>40269151
Lol

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Anonymous Mon 28 Aug 2023 22:16:04 No.40271205 Report

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>>40270131
I tend to agree. Her struggles will probably wind up taking a back seat when we have Coco to focus on, but I'd like for her to retain at least some of her original self. If she's not a little bit haughty, she's not Rarity.

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Anonymous Tue 29 Aug 2023 02:24:49 No.40271826 Report

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>>40255268
>>40255881
You don't really see the two of them subbing together

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Anonymous Tue 29 Aug 2023 03:34:17 No.40271987 Report

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>>40264491
>Suspiciously good at his job
What did he mean by this?

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Anonymous Tue 29 Aug 2023 06:26:22 No.40272340 Report

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Did anyone ever try writing a story with a yandere bonbon ?

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Anonymous Tue 29 Aug 2023 11:23:28 No.40272696 Report

Quoted By: >>40272737

>>40267881
>she explain it to every pony she meet, will get old after some time
Same as a regular choker.
And if they stop talking about it then what? So you are pointing out that they will talk about it which gets old, then saying that its also bad that they will stop talking about it. Which one is it then?
>She already wear her choker
No she does not. How many times did she wear it in public? Also with a tattoo her control over it is taken away. She can disobey Anon by taking it off, but she can't take off the tattoo. Yes, yes, she can mask it and whatever but that is easily noticeable as its hard to wash out the die or something similar.
>that it look enough like something that is worn by regular folks
But that's just the thing with a choker tattoo, its not something a regular folks have.

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Anonymous Tue 29 Aug 2023 11:47:19 No.40272737 Report

Quoted By: >>40272921

>>40272696
>are you saying its bad either way?
Yes
>How many times did she wear it in public?
That's of the main themes in the recent development? She is now ready and WANT to wear it in public.

I have no clue what you talking about in the last part. Did you missquote or what?

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Anonymous Tue 29 Aug 2023 14:09:01 No.40272921 Report

Quoted By: >>40272972

>>40272737
>That's of the main themes in the recent development?
IMHO its not. The theme is that she commits to wearing it. That does not mean she won't suddenly be embarrassed by it or something and wants to take it off at any cost. If she takes it off she will regret it even without a potential punishment, that's the development. She will regret it because she disobeyed her master.
She is ready to commit being a sub. To let someone control her. Then let's reaffirm by taking her control away with that tattoo.
>missquote
I did not, its in the post I replied to. Copy, ctrl+f, paste, enter.

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Anonymous Tue 29 Aug 2023 14:45:40 No.40272972 Report

Quoted By: >>40274147

>>40272921
>She is now ready and WANT to wear it in public.
>IMHO its not. The theme is that she commits to wearing it.
???
But I get you with her wanting to take it off. Legit concern. But then again, Anon said she can take her time when he bought that choker. And I like the idea that Rarity wearing it, it's her idea. She did it by her own will and she wasn't forced. Thats good development. Tattoo of the collar would basically nullify it.
Thats why as it was suggested earlier, maybe tattoo as you suggested would be better on Coco. That's a good compromise if you ask me.
>I did not
then please elaborate what did you mean

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Anonymous Tue 29 Aug 2023 19:17:22 No.40273534 Report

Quoted By: >>40273827 >>40278143

>>40269417
>should the outfits or bodysuits below be somehow permanently glued to the "volunteer"
You mean the black undersuits ?

I do like the idea of the base suits being a thing for all the "volunteers", and any additional being up to each princess's choice of wearing for their servants.

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Anonymous Tue 29 Aug 2023 21:08:02 No.40273827 Report

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>>40273534
going down a Magic-Logic route, I could see the suits being necessary to stop the undesired aging process of the "volunteers". they probably hoped for a simple spell, or ascension to alicorns... but now they are stuck like this, a contract that cannot be broken, a suit that cannot be removed, chastity belt that opened and all of this hidden under whatever clothes the princesses are fit that day.

makes me wonder what else could be part of this ensemble. enchanted goggles that blur out unimportant parts of the castle, or forbidden sections? breath control? perhaps controlled brightness levels or even eyelids that slowly close when they are supposed to sleep? earbuds telling them that all of this is right? perhaps not full hypno but certainly slow mental reconditioning

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Anonymous Tue 29 Aug 2023 21:30:47 No.40273900 Report

Quoted By: >>40274613 >>40275473

>>40199491
how would be your code collars system and their classifications depending on the slave?

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Anonymous Tue 29 Aug 2023 23:01:33 No.40274147 Report

Quoted By: >>40275367

>>40272972
>Anon said she can take her time
Yes, Anon said that when she was not fully submitted to him. Back then it was her choice. Now let's make sure that its not her choice anymore.
>then please elaborate what did you mean
You wrote "that it look enough like something that is worn by regular folks" in >>40267881 . What don't you understand in "regular ponies don't have a choker tattoo"?

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Anonymous Wed 30 Aug 2023 02:08:55 No.40274613 Report

Quoted By: >>40275052 >>40275395 >>40276490

>>40273900
Not the anon you asked but...

Different colored collars stand for different kinks:

Green is Bondage
Blue is Breathplay
Red is Blood/Play
Orange is Droning
White is Pet Play
Black is Latex
Yellow is Watersports
Bronze is Kidnapping
Lime is Gag Play
Gold is Servant/Maid play
Pink is Sissy/Tomboy Play
Navy is Object Play
Purple is Costume Play
Bronze is Pain Play
Teal is Tickle Play
Silver is Mummification
And Brown is Food Play
With collars normally having more then one color.

Each collar normally as one, if not a few of the trinkets:

Sun: Dominant
Moon: Submissive
Heart: Switch

Glimmer: Straight
Wand: Gay
Star: Bi

And that's what I got, sorry if I missed something.

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Anonymous Wed 30 Aug 2023 04:29:54 No.40275052 Report

Quoted By: >>40275395 >>40275419

>>40274613
Ok, thanks but I ask more to how make a submissive levels and categories for the slaves for example the anon said that Fall Of Equestria did a bad job about the classification of the collars. so I want to know how he will made he's own system or what type system it's good to clasifie the slaves ponies

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Anonymous Wed 30 Aug 2023 07:20:38 No.40275367 Report

Quoted By: >>40276235

>>40274147
Then what's the point of the choker that was just reintroduced, if you basically want's to replace it with tattoo?
>Now let's make sure that its not her choice anymore.
That's exactly why I like that she want to wear it: because she had a choice and chose to wear it. Not because she was forced. And that's why I mention Coco would be good if you really want to make someone to be forced, since Anon hasn't done anything to her. yet.
But then again, if your concern is that she would take it down, than you could just introduce stronger choker/collar that she wouldn't take? Unless you just want a tattoo.
>What don't you understand
The whole point of that statement. At least back then. Because I said why wearing something like that would be bad. But as we talk, I'm starting to understand what's your whole take on it.

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Anonymous Wed 30 Aug 2023 07:38:04 No.40275395 Report

Quoted By: >>40275419

>>40274613
>>40275052
nta, but what if you used colors to just categories levels of experience/perversion (and if you would include humans, level of capacity). Instead of locking to one kink why wont the be categorized by how many kinks are they used for.

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Anonymous Wed 30 Aug 2023 08:03:21 No.40275419 Report

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>>40275052
>>40275395
Thank ya both for the feed back

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Anonymous Wed 30 Aug 2023 08:53:03 No.40275473 Report

Quoted By: >>40276117 >>40276635

>>40273900
That's not an easy question to answer because I'm missing context.
We're talking about using collars as a form of communication, so the starting point is to ask what must be communicated? This depends very heavily on the setting. If it's something like Clocktower Society, we can assume that the collar itself signals a submissive. In such a setting, we might be marking why they're there. The collar would indicate what they were looking to do so that the dom wouldn't have to break character to find out and the fantasy could proceed uninhibited. If we get closer to Fall of Equestria, the first and most important piece of information is how trustworthy the wearer is. There are several types of rebellion, ranging from simple hesitance to over violence. You'll want some kind of signifier for violent wearers, something for resistant, something for hesitant etc. going all the way to trustworthy for those with whom you could safely entrust things like weapons. That marker would be highly exclusive, and only be awarded to ponies who had proven themselves time and again.
If we want to get any specifics we kinda need to know what's happening so we can find out what information would be salient.

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Anonymous Wed 30 Aug 2023 15:16:54 No.40276117 Report

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>>40275473
True

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Anonymous Wed 30 Aug 2023 16:39:28 No.40276235 Report

Quoted By: >>40304765

>>40275367
She was not comfortable wearing the choker. Now she is, what's the point of that?
Just to quote the green: "Improvement, not stagnation.". So Anon has to push her further.
>stronger choker/collar that she wouldn't take
That works too.
>you just want a tattoo
No, I want to remove her choice to wear it or not. It does not matter if she wants to wear it or not.
>Coco
Not in the picture yet.

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Anonymous Wed 30 Aug 2023 18:35:55 No.40276490 Report

Quoted By: >>40277659

>>40274613
What about mind control.

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Anonymous Wed 30 Aug 2023 18:42:55 No.40276508 Report

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saw this in the moondancer threadwhich reminded me of the idea of a slave having to write about its own sexual interactions

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Anonymous Wed 30 Aug 2023 19:31:52 No.40276635 Report

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>>40275473
Ok thank you for the answer

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Anonymous Thu 31 Aug 2023 01:39:53 No.40277562 Report

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When is dailevy ever going to finish that game ?

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Anonymous Thu 31 Aug 2023 02:31:31 No.40277659 Report

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>>40276490
Fuck, I knew I forgot some

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Anonymous Thu 31 Aug 2023 05:49:48 No.40278143 Report

Quoted By: >>40278912

>>40269151
Im kinda liking the masochist Luna idea. Not in the dramatic kind of self hatred, but more of a disciplined mare who really believes she deserves to feel some sort of pain every day, no matter how many times her sister tries to convince her. Sometimes with whipping sessions, other times using gadgets like the ones mentioned here
>>40269417

>>40273534
>Trixie, jealous of Twilight's ascension under Celestia's care, accepts Luna's proposition to become her servant bound immortal student.
>She doesnt know that, unlike Celestia's gentle and forgiving ways, Luna has a different set of values that she likes imbuing her servants with.

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Anonymous Thu 31 Aug 2023 12:10:28 No.40278745 Report

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I'm a little busy but maybe tomorrow or at weekend I will draw pest pony in bondage

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Anonymous Thu 31 Aug 2023 14:14:14 No.40278912 Report

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>>40278143
to take religious inspiration, just make Luna more like the old testament, while Celestia is more like the new...

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Anonymous Thu 31 Aug 2023 15:31:28 No.40279048 Report

Quoted By: >>40279668

https://ponerpics.org/images/6774946
cocos first assignment?

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Anonymous Thu 31 Aug 2023 20:11:58 No.40279668 Report

Quoted By: >>40281213

>>40279048
dont mind if she does that

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Anonymous Fri 01 Sep 2023 00:50:48 No.40280335 Report

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>>40243532

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Anonymous Fri 01 Sep 2023 05:15:42 No.40280979 Report

Quoted By: >>40281047 >>40281768

why the sudden drop in activity? summer holidays over for everyone?

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Anonymous Fri 01 Sep 2023 05:45:59 No.40281047 Report

Quoted By: >>40281195 >>40281213

>>40280979
Not many people wanting to engage in one topic. I try dropping some ideas here and there, but it only gets one or two answers.

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Anonymous Fri 01 Sep 2023 07:02:19 No.40281195 Report

Quoted By: >>40281290

>>40281047
alot of people just lurk. It wasn't that noticeable when mlp was super popular
what was your ideas?

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Anonymous Fri 01 Sep 2023 07:11:31 No.40281213 Report

Quoted By: >>40281290

>>40281047
tbqh, I also tune out when it comes to all the medical stuff. other things I have no opinion on I guess I also don't really comment on so Im not helping either.

>>40279668
her first assignment could be lipstick testing but with a spin. rara is only allowed to kiss her master and her bits are not allowed to be touched. that leaves only one place!

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Anonymous Fri 01 Sep 2023 07:50:01 No.40281290 Report

Quoted By: >>40282055

>>40281195
Oh I gave a ton of them, but the best ones I could think of were these.

>Straight mares having to live as caretakers/concubines of other prettier or luckier mares, to have any chances of being introduced to a stallion in an Equestia that has a huge lack of males compared to females.
>>40176709
>>40177356

>hypno idea with octavia
>>40261285

>Scootaloo being groomed by Lightning Dust after she leaves Rainbow
>>40204776

>>40281213
>tune out
Yeah I would do the same thing if all I saw was walls of text. It wouldnt hurt for me to put some images.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 01 Sep 2023 12:46:51 No.40281768 Report

Quoted By: >>40282055

>>40280979
Some peeps might be struggling with creativity atm

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Anonymous Fri 01 Sep 2023 15:40:25 No.40282055 Report

Quoted By: >>40282603 >>40283150

>>40281290
>pic
perfect example of why i would never be able to force a sub towards a fetish it isnt into.

>>Straight mares having to live as caretakers/concubines of other prettier or luckier mares, to have any chances of being introduced to a stallion in an Equestia that has a huge lack of males compared to females.
forced lesbo/straight interaction is pretty underrated as it is anyway

>>40281768
sad!

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 01 Sep 2023 20:07:57 No.40282603 Report

Quoted By:

>>40282055
>forced lesbo/straight interaction is pretty underrated as it is anyway
It really is, but in this case I dont lnow how lesbians would fit into this. They dont have that population problem.

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Anonymous Sat 02 Sep 2023 00:55:05 No.40283150 Report

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>>40282055
It is, but it's still true sometimes.

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Anonymous Sat 02 Sep 2023 07:28:04 No.40283776 Report

Quoted By: >>40283796 >>40284101

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Anonymous Sat 02 Sep 2023 07:43:55 No.40283796 Report

Quoted By: >>40284769

>>40283776
fuck, why is she so damn hot? I want to shove her face first into a pillow, hold her down there and fuck her fat ponut until she passes out and later have her come to me and thank me for using her as she should be

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 02 Sep 2023 12:33:09 No.40284101 Report

Quoted By:

>>40283776
Who doesn't love the sub pony

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 02 Sep 2023 19:06:39 No.40284769 Report

Quoted By:

>>40283796
because Rarity is the best pony overall.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 02 Sep 2023 23:01:53 No.40285279 Report

Quoted By: >>40285282 >>40285729 >>40287204

Okay here's something new we could talk about.
Whats a good altetrnative way to write a submissive gay story that doesnt involve feminization ?

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 02 Sep 2023 23:02:57 No.40285282 Report

Quoted By:

>>40285279
*alternative

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Anonymous Sun 03 Sep 2023 02:28:54 No.40285729 Report

Quoted By: >>40286038

>>40285279
I mean if you make them either a Wonderbolt or Guard there is the subordinate and commander scenario as well as doing a classic switcharoo on their roles a d you can still do humiliation without feminization

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 03 Sep 2023 06:00:53 No.40286038 Report

Quoted By: >>40286475

>>40285729
Thats an alternative, but I was looking for something more out of the usual than just a roleplay between subordinate and commander.
What if things could be a bit more rough and forcefull when you dont have feminization involved ?
https://twibooru.org/987970
https://twibooru.org/1662331

Having said that, have you ever felt that compared to lesbian bdsm, in gay bdsm the power play part seems to matter a lot more than the pleasure part ?
Not that there isnt a power play between two women as well, and , but still in their case or at least from the stories I pick to read, the climax in the end always seem to have a much bigger importance, to the point its even used as a dominance tool like in the case with chastity play.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 03 Sep 2023 12:06:20 No.40286475 Report

Quoted By: >>40287591

>>40286038
I mean yeah power play is a big thing in gay bdsm but that's because of how guys brains are wired. I mean you also have pet play, rubber encasement, mummy play, and ball busting too if Ya want the more pain play aspect.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 03 Sep 2023 18:51:41 No.40287204 Report

Quoted By: >>40287591 >>40287691

>>40285279
regular gay BDSM is kind of hard to do "right" if it isnt appealing to too many readers. i found myself only enjoying this setting in a feminization setting to brign in whatever feminine things i can.
that said, how about some horseplay setting? whenever stallions got mantioned in the past, it was either to be a cute maid, or to be send off to some labourcamp. so why not explore said harsh labour and conditions and make them intersting? im always done for dressup games with whatever sub we end up with ITT

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Anonymous Sun 03 Sep 2023 21:46:32 No.40287591 Report

Quoted By:

>>40286475
>>40287204
Maybe the harshness of domination is something thats missing a lot from the gay bdsm I find on derpibooru.
Everything related to it always seems to have a consensual and "wholesomeness" look to it, no matter how kinky its trying to be.
I mean look at Jeday's stuff for example, he draws latex and bondage stuff in almost every pic, obviously trying to draw in the kinky crowd, but it never seems to try going into the "m" and "s" part of bdsm.
Everypony in there always seems to have a happy horny attitude about it, or at the most extreme cases, just a tiny bit of horny reluctance. Its like hes only trying to draw a fetish showcase instead of the act itself.

I know hes probably trying not to lose viewers like many other artists, but damn, would it hurt him to put out one pic of a stallion dom forcibly pushing his sub's head onto the floor with one hoof while the other is holding a paddle to spank his flank red, all that while hes fucking him raw ?

But even outside of him, finding harsh stuff like pain play or rape play for stallion only stuff pics seems like a rarity compared to finding it for mare/stallion interactions, or even compared to lesbian pics.

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Anonymous Sun 03 Sep 2023 22:26:38 No.40287691 Report

Quoted By: >>40289062 >>40291070

>>40287204
>stallions got mantioned in the past
You mean condemned ?

>horseplay setting?
>labourcamp
That scenario needs an involved handler to really explore the domination aspect, or else its just the gear doing all the work.
Any character you had in mind ?

I had Gallus in mind, but I had a different scenario in my head that involved him slowly forming a bdsm relationship with an older stallion that took an interest in taming the bird, and turning him into his bitch.
It just seems to match better with him than with a same aged and less experienced stallion like Sandbar, and it also helps grow a pony kink into his mind when theres a stronger creature of another species that keeps putting him in his place.

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Anonymous Mon 04 Sep 2023 04:14:53 No.40288313 Report

Quoted By: >>40289062 >>40290431 >>40290538

Saving this here for the next time edit anon shows up.

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Anonymous Mon 04 Sep 2023 08:34:29 No.40288716 Report

Quoted By: >>40289663

Cool idea for a magic limiting horn ring.

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 04 Sep 2023 13:32:12 No.40289062 Report

Quoted By: >>40289571 >>40290590

>>40288313
that sweetie belle does indeed look most "latexdronable"
>>40287691
>Any character you had in mind ?
obligatory rumble and thunderlane, those gay ass reformed Bugs, the KIRIN.
there are alot to chose from, but apart from the first two, I don't know about other pairings that have potential

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 04 Sep 2023 18:26:00 No.40289571 Report

Quoted By: >>40289579

>>40289062
>that sweetie belle does indeed look most "latexdronable"
Theres a better previous moment with her pushing that chair as well, which I want to screenshot.
I had the idea of it being some sort of latex sisters gathering with Rarity also dressed in it but with a different, less drone looking outfit.

But first I need to know where people find these high definition episodes.

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 04 Sep 2023 18:28:54 No.40289579 Report

Quoted By: >>40290538

>>40289571
I wouldn't drone rarity up at all for this. just "latexfy" her dress, perhaps give her some gloves and stockings and she should be ready to commandeer her currently being trained, sister.

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 04 Sep 2023 18:52:19 No.40289663 Report

Quoted By:

>>40288716
agree

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Anonymous Tue 05 Sep 2023 00:42:05 No.40290431 Report

Quoted By: >>40290538

>>40288313
A rubber Sweetie Belle, ah

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 05 Sep 2023 00:57:25 No.40290455 Report

Quoted By: >>40290674

https://derpibooru.org/images/3192420
Tavi worships her master's cock.

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Anonymous Tue 05 Sep 2023 01:56:49 No.40290538 Report

Quoted By: >>40290539 >>40290651 >>40290674

>>40288313
>>40289579
>>40290431

Got some more angles. What do you think of these ?

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Anonymous Tue 05 Sep 2023 01:57:55 No.40290539 Report

Quoted By: >>40290541 >>40290674

>>40290538

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Anonymous Tue 05 Sep 2023 01:59:40 No.40290541 Report

Quoted By: >>40290674

>>40290539
Last one.
This one looks kinda derpy, but it shows swibble's enthusiasm in serving her sister.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 05 Sep 2023 02:29:11 No.40290590 Report

Quoted By: >>40290674

>>40289062
>I don't know about other pairings that have potential
Dont have any show characters in mind for this, but do you think pairing Spike with some older and scummier stallion who treats him like a toy would be something fresh to explore ?

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Anonymous Tue 05 Sep 2023 02:59:42 No.40290651 Report

Quoted By: >>40290666

>>40290538
They look good... But I ain't the anon

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Anonymous Tue 05 Sep 2023 03:05:53 No.40290666 Report

Quoted By:

>>40290651
Im asking to all anons though.

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Anonymous Tue 05 Sep 2023 03:08:52 No.40290674 Report

Quoted By: >>40291070

>>40290590
anon... I don't know how to tell you this but... I fucking hate spike. both as a character and the way he looks. the only way he could be redeemed is if he were put into an inflatable pony gimp suit and forced to move and behave like a quadruplet like all the ponies around him.

>>40290538
>>40290539
>>40290541
anon of these work as a sweetie gimp/rubber belle starting point tbqh.

>>40290455
not sure if "ponies behaving like cats and dogs" suits the general bdsm theme tbqh. it's almost like a downgrade from pony like behavior.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 05 Sep 2023 05:12:31 No.40290863 Report

Quoted By: >>40291073 >>40293051 >>40294722

>>40262022
>Rainbow Dash groaned as she began to wake up from her weird dream. It wasn't the first time she had a dream of Ms. Luna catching her after spying on the older woman and it might not be the last... Even if she ends those little excursions. That's when she noticed something off.>

>Her hands were bound behind her back with rope, two no-nos to her rules for self-bondage. She felt tape covering her lips, a shiver running down her spine as her tongue caressed something silky and foul-tasting trapped in her mouth. She doesn't own anything made of silk. Lastly, she could feel six stim pads on her body, two on each breast and two around her pussy.>

>The girl found herself fully awake as electricity assaulted her muscles. The world went white as she struggled against her bindings on the chair. The power began to wane, allowing Rainbow Dash to regain some of her senses just before it ramped up again!>

>Tears flowed down her cheeks, the silk cloth muffling her screams. To her relief, the power once again died down, the athlete panting for air, hanging forward in her chair. To her humiliation, she could see her push still dripping from the shock.>

"Well well, I didn't expect you to be so easy."

>She breathed in her own musk before looking up to find her captor soaking in the sight of the rainbow-haired girl's humiliation. She walked out of the door frame, a controller in her raised hand as she swayed her hips.>

"Then again, I didn't expect you to be a peeping tom yet I have a month of security footage to prove otherwise."

>"Hmmt?!" No, she couldn't have heard right. She knew since the beginning!? N-mm, mm-" Two fingers put a stop to her attempt at lying, Rainbow suddenly finding it hard to breathe! The girl tried to shake the hand off, only eliciting a laugh.>

"Ah, ah, ah. If I wanted you to speak, I wouldn't have gagged you, you little slut."

>She paused for a moment.>

Do my panties taste good? They aren't the same ones from earlier but you at least you get a taste of my pussy, right?"

>With no other way to answer, Rainbow Dash nods her head, yes, Luna's arm waving up and down with the bound girl's head. Rainbow was once again allowed to breathe as Luna cupped her student's face and growled.>

"I'm going to remove your gag, and I want to convince me why I shouldn't simply sell you off to some brothel on the other side of the world."

>Pain flared from her burning lips as she let out a cry, as well as the panties that dropped into her mess. Dash looked at the woman before her and struggled to speak.>

>"I-I," her chest heaved quickly as she tried to force the words from her mouth. "P-p-please..." The expectant look on Luna's face finally gave her the push over the edge. "Please keep me. Mistress.">

>Luna looked at Rainbow Dash stunned. She simply stood there, examining Rainbow Dash before letting out a surprised laugh. Dash looked away in embarrassment while Luna doubled over.>

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Anonymous Tue 05 Sep 2023 08:30:57 No.40291070 Report

Quoted By: >>40293051

>>40290674
>that redeeming
Just to throw some depraved idea here that came up, what about a crueler fate with a locked dog suit, a forced legal and social status equivalent to that of a non-talking animal, and some eventual socially coerced bestiality ?

But ignoring him then, what about the other character I had in mind ?
>>40287691

Surely there has to be at least one of two anons here that enjoy talking about Gallus getting stuffed by a huge horse dick.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 05 Sep 2023 08:34:24 No.40291073 Report

Quoted By: >>40291516

>>40290863
Nice addition with the shock play.
Hope the interrogation can drag on for a bit longer.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 05 Sep 2023 14:29:18 No.40291516 Report

Quoted By:

>>40291073
Thanks and It will be a bit longer

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Anonymous Tue 05 Sep 2023 19:33:47 No.40292065 Report

Quoted By: >>40292977

>>40280335

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Anonymous Wed 06 Sep 2023 02:16:18 No.40292977 Report

Quoted By: >>40295473

>>40292065

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Anonymous Wed 06 Sep 2023 03:05:06 No.40293051 Report

Quoted By: >>40293302 >>40295904 >>40296575

>>40291070
Gallus could definitely work.
as for the setting, anything with overly secure gear tickles my pickle. lots of belts and locks overlapping with each other is always welcome like pic related: https://ponerpics.org/images/6720004?q=latex%2C+chastity
Although, I still have to say the bondage setup itself still looks more aesthetic on a pony than it would do on Gallus and his greedy kin

other than that, how about predicament bondage or forced public interaction/humiliation like https://ponerpics.org/tags/comic-colon-play+the+record ?

>>40290863
not so sure about the e-stim since I simply don't know what it would feel like but please continue none the less. I like me some good Luna Dom, especially if the result could be a tomboytamed dashie serving as Luna's armcandy

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Anonymous Wed 06 Sep 2023 05:29:40 No.40293302 Report

Quoted By:

>>40293051
Yes, Dashie does get tamed... But she won't be the only arm candy (Though I do keep flip-flopping between the other ones)

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Anonymous Wed 06 Sep 2023 05:58:18 No.40293355 Report

Quoted By: >>40293549

What ever happened to the green where anon stole magic.

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Anonymous Wed 06 Sep 2023 08:29:13 No.40293549 Report

Quoted By: >>40294147

>>40293355
You mean this one ?
https://ponepaste.org/7692

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Anonymous Wed 06 Sep 2023 15:08:21 No.40294147 Report

Quoted By: >>40294201

>>40293549
Yeah probably, why sis it stop updating.

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Anonymous Wed 06 Sep 2023 15:30:44 No.40294201 Report

Quoted By: >>40294722 >>40296493

>>40294147
I wanted to take a break from it and felt that was a good spot to leave it for now cause who doesn't love cliff hangers?

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Anonymous Wed 06 Sep 2023 19:06:49 No.40294722 Report

Quoted By: >>40294885

>>40294201
Is there anything you're thinking of working on in the meantime ?
Maybe a short side story set that kinky universe ?
Or that Trixie/Luna idea ?

Wait, are you the one whos writing this green ?
>>40290863

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Anonymous Wed 06 Sep 2023 20:21:42 No.40294885 Report

Quoted By:

>>40294722
Yep :3

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Anonymous Wed 06 Sep 2023 23:53:03 No.40295473 Report

Quoted By: >>40297005

>>40292977

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Anonymous Thu 07 Sep 2023 02:40:51 No.40295904 Report

Quoted By: >>40296236

>>40293051
>the bondage setup itself still looks more aesthetic on a pony than it would do on Gallus and his greedy kin
Thats true, but in terms of bird related aesthetics, I cant think of much besides a falconry hood like the one used in pic related or in these
https://derpibooru.org/images/2631907
https://derpibooru.org/images/1880778
https://derpibooru.org/images/1618428
It might not add much, but it could be something embarassing to wear with the right cultural setting. Hiding all that imposing majestic plumage, giving the griffon only a pathetic little tuft or feather on top to wear.

And maybe declawing could be another point of focus ? Or instead of that, force some gloves that block those ? Its not just for safety of the handler, but to make Gallus feel disempowered in front of the other griffons. Make the lion feel like a cat.

But for the rest of the suit , what would you think of a mix between that pic, these horseplay ones
https://twibooru.org/2887744
https://twibooru.org/2595647
https://twibooru.org/2818390 ( something to leave his identity easily exposed )
And the non horseplay one by Dombrus, because those metal restraints and the beak gags are really good looking.
https://twibooru.org/1637912

>how about predicament bondage or forced public interaction/humiliation
Definitely.
Sold into slavery by his kin and forced to serve a lower pony.
Being tied up and treated like a sub bitch in a pony only club.
Or maybe even sent to a farm and being the breeding bitch of the other pony slaves.

I even had this idea of griffons culturally having a notion of superiority over other landed creatures. And as a consequence of that, being grounded and forced to serve one of them would be viewed as the lowest of the low.

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Anonymous Thu 07 Sep 2023 05:37:05 No.40296236 Report

Quoted By: >>40297888

>>40295904
>And maybe declawing could be another point of focus ? Or instead of that, force some gloves that block those ? Its not just for safety of the handler, but to make Gallus feel disempowered in front of the other griffons. Make the lion feel like a cat.
claws can be dangerous, so defusing those weapons is a no-brainer. turning those claws into harmless paws, perhaps with some airpockets reduce dexterity seems like a good way to go.

>But for the rest of the suit , what would you think of a mix between that pic, these horseplay ones
anything that turns the wearer into something more dronelike gets my approval. I also like those inflatable "crotch crusher" panties that can be inflated. a perfect metal/plastic chastity alternative and blending in with the rest of the outfit, if that is what you want of course .

>social/racial play
perhaps not outright naziplay, but humiliation and playing out one races social norms and hierarchy against him in a clever way seems fair to me.

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 07 Sep 2023 07:40:28 No.40296493 Report

Quoted By: >>40296601

>>40294201
Hey, out of curiosity, and to verify my headcanon as well.
When you wrote that part where Gilda came to Pinkie pleading to have a release, did she have any of of these gadgets inside her suit ?
https://twibooru.org/1637912

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Anonymous Thu 07 Sep 2023 08:42:16 No.40296575 Report

Quoted By: >>40296601 >>40296603

>>40293051
>https://ponerpics.org/tags/comic-colon-play+the+record

Did this comic lose the appeal to you guys after the first part ?
In the beginning , the male Vinyl had some apprehension about being used like a fucktoy by his boss and coworkers, which to me it made the experience be much hotter.
But then the club scene came after, and the main character was already so much into his new role that he became another generic slut.
It really killed the humiliation aspect in that setting.

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 07 Sep 2023 08:59:44 No.40296601 Report

Quoted By: >>40297409

>>40296493
Yes indeed~

>>40296575
Honestly I liked the idea but I wish it wasn't the gender-bend of Vinyl and Octy

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Anonymous Thu 07 Sep 2023 09:00:00 No.40296603 Report

Quoted By: >>40299683

>>40296575
pretty much, yeah. the "waking up in a unknown and involuntary situation" was pretty good, as was the forced public humiliation and interaction

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Anonymous Thu 07 Sep 2023 13:04:45 No.40297005 Report

Quoted By: >>40300290

>>40295473

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Anonymous Thu 07 Sep 2023 16:34:28 No.40297409 Report

Quoted By: >>40298442

>>40296601
>Yes indeed~
Sweet. Also for some reason the tickle torture thing seems to match somewhat with the harlequinn outfit now that I think about it.
Okay one last question then, did she have any extra unique gadgets picked out by Pinkie, or even better, a mind control quirk imposed on her, similar to how Twilight had the "reading block" thing imposed by anon ?

>I wish it wasn't the gender-bend of Vinyl and Octy
Using their gender bender versions really felt like it came out of nowhere, and it didnt add anything special in terms of personality, background or anything to any of the characters.

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 07 Sep 2023 20:30:48 No.40297888 Report

Quoted By: >>40298858

>>40296236
>inflatable "crotch crusher" panties that can be inflated. a perfect metal/plastic chastity alternative and blending in with the rest of the outfit, if that is what you want of course .
I was thinking at first of just leaving his balls exposed to hit with a crop or use shock pads, but now that I gave it some thought, your idea sounds so much more appealing for control.
Its a constant pressure thats always there, reminding him that it could be worsened if his master wanted to.
It keeps his balls hidden, while his master's and everyone else's balls are exposed, waving in front of his face the comfort that hes not allowed to have anymore. Also makes him look like a gelded creature.

And as an added bonus , it might even make him prefer being fucked by long dicks because the stallions dont hilt as much, so less of the stallion's balls slamming onto his overly sensitive sack. Damn, you can almost see the symbolism behind this.

>not outright naziplay
Not like that at all, I was thinking more like in the universe of Quill's story,, with gryphons that commited crimes or taboos being sentenced to be slaves. Sometimes sold to a pony, other times enslaved along with the pony they had relations with to be "stable" mates.

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Anonymous Fri 08 Sep 2023 00:18:37 No.40298442 Report

Quoted By: >>40298502

>>40297409
Honestly Gilda and Pinkie are one of the few couples that are still slightly fluid.

>it didn't add anything special in terms of personality, background, or anything to any of the characters>

Honestly if you didn't have the two share Vinyl and Octavia's designs, they could have been other random ponies. But at the end of the day that was what he wanted I shouldn't complain since I didn't make it or commission it, so that's why I'm doing my own thing... PS just in case you guys are ever waiting for it I will never do Futa cause I just hate the idea.

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Anonymous Fri 08 Sep 2023 00:43:08 No.40298502 Report

Quoted By: >>40298512

>>40298442
>one of the few couples that are still slightly fluid.
You mean fluid as in a lot of different types of kink can work with those two ?

Also this might interest you, if you dont mind a gender-bend version of those two.
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/38511/pin-the-tail-on-the-griffin

>I will never do Futa cause I just hate the idea.
Personally I never cared for that.

If there's an extreme fetish I was curious about you working with in the future is bestiality.
But I can definitely live without it if its not something ever planned to be introduced, theres already a lot of nice kinks Im enjoying in the universe you are making.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 08 Sep 2023 00:49:36 No.40298512 Report

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>>40298502
That and where to really take them next.

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Anonymous Fri 08 Sep 2023 03:53:41 No.40298858 Report

Quoted By: >>40299016

>>40297888
there are a few things I would keep as exposed as possible though, his dock, ponut and his taint. perhaps all of them part of the slaves body, he never though about being pleasurezones, yet this is what they become, while his cock and balls stay under the unrelenting pressure of his panties. touching those panties won't do much either as what it is inside wont be reached.
keep the stallion horny enough and you might find him humping pillows or even other slave mares to little effect

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 08 Sep 2023 05:35:55 No.40299016 Report

Quoted By: >>40300910

>>40298858
>while his cock and balls stay under the unrelenting pressure of his panties. touching those panties won't do much either as what it is inside wont be reached.
Dont wanna go with the over sensitivity approach ? He could wear a chastity cage underneath the thing to prevent him from getting off that way if its an issue.

That would not only force him to try getting off anally, but would also try ( hopelessly ) to do it without bumping into his painful area. Or try to accept what he can get and learn to get off with the pain since his master would just slam into him during their breeding sessions without caring about avoiding such areas.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 08 Sep 2023 13:37:52 No.40299683 Report

Quoted By:

>>40296603
Yeah but then they kinda got boring halfway through the office stuff.

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Anonymous Fri 08 Sep 2023 18:05:29 No.40300290 Report

Quoted By:

>>40297005

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Anonymous Fri 08 Sep 2023 22:27:03 No.40300849 Report

Quoted By:

Any news from Keeper's story ?

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Anonymous Fri 08 Sep 2023 22:50:53 No.40300910 Report

Quoted By: >>40301488

>>40299016
well, you could always seal some toys underneath that tight airpocket, leaving them impossible to be manipulated or touched. perhaps have them controlled through whatever the slave makes eye contact with. not sure if positive or negative reinforcement should be used though

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Anonymous Sat 09 Sep 2023 02:42:22 No.40301488 Report

Quoted By: >>40301726

>>40300910
>perhaps have them controlled through whatever the slave makes eye contact with
His master's or other male creature's genitals ? No one usually wears coverings in this universe, so seeing a bunch of balls on display wouldnt be something he could avoid.

>not sure if positive or negative reinforcement should be used though
What if the constant pressure on his genitals was temporarily loosened whenever someone fucked him ?
You could combine that with a positive reminder, like vibrations on his cage, or a negative one, like small momentary squeeze on his balls, whenever he looks at someone's exposed junk ?

By the way, I know Im sounding obsessed with the balls here, but they really look like they should be the central focus in this. Specially if the virility of the other free creatures is going to play some part here.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 09 Sep 2023 04:36:23 No.40301726 Report

Quoted By: >>40302156

>>40301488
you wanted some straight stallion forced into gay thoughts and interactions, right? what not have is interactive underwear painfully squeeze his balls whenever he looks at mares, and have him be rewarded whenever he looks at male genitals? if we use that comic as an example, what if the longer he looked at mare junk, the tighter is testiclepack gets, all the way up until there is only blinding, immobilizing pain (a process that could take a few hours to reach that state)
the only way to enlarge that pack again would be gay interactions, with different degrees of speed of it being able to release that pain. essentially it would be way easier for him to crush his balls, just looking at a mares behind, while he needs to spend a whole day looking at at a stallions rear... to speed things up, he would need to get closer, perhaps take a sniff or nuzzle some male bits

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 09 Sep 2023 09:26:20 No.40302156 Report

Quoted By: >>40302437

>>40301726
>you wanted some straight stallion forced into gay thoughts and interactions, right ?
I was actually thinking of Gallus being put through this and having to walk funny for a few weeks before finally giving in to his pony masters.
He could be straight, or gay but still proud enough to not want to kiss the hooves of the stallion that bought him, that is before squawking and falling down on the floor with his hands on his crotch. I dont know why but crotch abuse fits him really well.

>what not have is interactive underwear painfully squeeze his balls whenever he looks at mares, and have him be rewarded whenever he looks at male genitals?
I dont know about the reward part. The thing should still be uncomfortably tight most of the time.

>to speed things up, he would need to get closer, perhaps take a sniff or nuzzle some male bits
Sounds like something that would be done at the beginning before his master escalated things.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 09 Sep 2023 12:45:47 No.40302437 Report

Quoted By: >>40302627 >>40303125

>>40302156
>I dont know about the reward part. The thing should still be uncomfortably tight most of the time
not that I don't mind males being treated as they should be, considering they are inferior to mares in every way, but why?

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 09 Sep 2023 15:00:18 No.40302627 Report

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>>40302437
Cause a good stallion is an edged stallion?

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 09 Sep 2023 18:42:58 No.40303056 Report

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>https://derpibooru.org/images/3197387
I know the art ain't great but I just love this idea.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sat 09 Sep 2023 18:51:46 No.40303089 Report

Quoted By: >>40303102 >>40303105 >>40304765

Another tribute to the rapeape green. I draw something for best pony day. She walked on unaware Coco that was sniffing Rarity's towel/blanket. That is my headcanon on how Rarity would know that Coco have some perverted side in her
I really should draw more because I got super rusty and I need to relearn some stuff again...

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 09 Sep 2023 18:58:09 No.40303102 Report

Quoted By: >>40303264

>>40303089
I like it and you should Anon

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 09 Sep 2023 18:58:32 No.40303105 Report

Quoted By: >>40303264

>>40303089
>rara is even wearing her choker
good attention to detail!
and a solid idea to get things going with coco over all as well.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 09 Sep 2023 19:07:54 No.40303125 Report

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>>40302437
>but why
Because its really hot to picture a sort of pain slave situation in this.
We do the same thing with mares sometimes when we think up pain implements for them to forcibly wear everyday, even during sexual activities. This is the male version of it.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 09 Sep 2023 20:18:35 No.40303264 Report

Quoted By: >>40303284

>>40303102
>>40303105
Glad you like it. And yes I'm fan of choker

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 09 Sep 2023 20:25:36 No.40303284 Report

Quoted By: >>40303298

>>40303264
Who isn't?

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 09 Sep 2023 20:29:20 No.40303298 Report

Quoted By: >>40303796

>>40303284
Right. Silly me.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 10 Sep 2023 00:50:47 No.40303796 Report

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>>40303298
Your good Anon

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Anonymous Sun 10 Sep 2023 05:14:14 No.40304252 Report

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Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 10 Sep 2023 10:08:01 No.40304668 Report

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https://ponerpics.org/images/6780353
remember to train your slaves ponut! she will thank for it eventually (porpably)

RapeApe

RapeApe Sun 10 Sep 2023 11:32:27 No.40304765 Report

Quoted By: >>40305359 >>40305367

Alright, I have something to post, but it'll probably wait until next thread.
Not sure if you'll like it since it's a pretty radical change of pace, but it's needed to progress the story. If you don't like it, don't worry too much. I don't plan on this kind of update becoming the norm.
>>40269510
I really like the idea and I'll try to fit it in, but we need access to Coco before we can do something like that.
>>40269918
I don't think we're going to numb her. It wasn't a very popular idea, and someone rightly pointed out that it could cause her to hurt herself. She's definitely going into some form of chastity though.
>>40267881
I don't intend to tattoo her. We might change her appearance for humiliation purposes, but I'm very hesitant to apply any permanent marks. ALL alterations, visible or otherwise, should be reversable whenever Anon wishes.
>>40276235
I'm not a big fan of permanent marks, so we're probably not doing a tattoo. There's also the issue of Applejack. Whatever we do to Rarity, we have to be able to hide it or explain it. It seems like you want to take choice away from her, which is understandable. I think I have a solution. A good punishment that will progress the story, satisfy most of the requests, and take control away from her.
>>40268905
I've made executive decisions before and I'm sure I'll do it again. The narrative would fall apart if I didn't, after all.
Prolonged edging is a good idea, by the way. She's much more compliant when she's aroused.
>>40303089
I like it. I must admit I've been spinning my wheels a bit on how to lewd the Coco. Not being able to just >rape is a big handicap, as it turns out. But this could work.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 10 Sep 2023 16:19:17 No.40305359 Report

Quoted By: >>40305367

>>40304765
>She's definitely going into some form of chastity though.
Then she'll need to hide it somehow.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 10 Sep 2023 16:23:58 No.40305367 Report

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>>40304765
>She's definitely going into some form of chastity though.
good!

>>40305359
>Then she'll need to hide it somehow.
there are many ways this can be done, some easy to hide, the others not so much. but in raritys current state, she could propably be told to wear it openly, and she would actually obey... although i doub she would be happy once she reaches a moment of clarity again

>>40304765
>She's much more compliant when she's aroused.
its worse than that, it almost seems like a lustdriven frenzy at this point!

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 10 Sep 2023 16:33:41 No.40305380 Report

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>https://derpibooru.org/images/3198031
Ah, ideas.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 10 Sep 2023 21:33:19 No.40306001 Report

Quoted By: >>40306003

need a new thread soon

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Anonymous Sun 10 Sep 2023 21:34:19 No.40306003 Report

Quoted By: >>40306047

>>40306001
Should Coco have the next OP image ?

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Anonymous Sun 10 Sep 2023 21:55:39 No.40306047 Report

Quoted By: >>40306660 >>40306683 >>40307036 >>40307566

>>40306003
flurry and cadance

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 11 Sep 2023 02:06:14 No.40306660 Report

Quoted By: >>40306683

>>40306047
I second that.

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 11 Sep 2023 02:15:50 No.40306683 Report

Quoted By: >>40307566

>>40306047
>>40306660
Do we have any non explicit lewd images of them ?

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 11 Sep 2023 03:46:25 No.40307036 Report

Quoted By: >>40307508

>>40306047
Hopefully flurry is introduced in the story next thread.

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 11 Sep 2023 06:44:07 No.40307508 Report

Quoted By: >>40307559

>>40307036
I wonder who she'd be paired with.

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 11 Sep 2023 07:14:58 No.40307559 Report

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>>40307508
cozy is an obvious pairing but if she comes a bit after her mother, and if we combine it with a more spoiled upbringing, she could just claim the caketwins as her own?

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Anonymous Mon 11 Sep 2023 07:22:18 No.40307566 Report

Quoted By: >>40307569

>>40306683
this and this one >>40306047 is what come to my mind

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Anonymous Mon 11 Sep 2023 07:25:29 No.40307569 Report

Quoted By: >>40307636

>>40307566
solo flurry is easier to find

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 11 Sep 2023 08:39:43 No.40307636 Report

Quoted By: >>40307786

>>40307569
How does one break that kind of mare? By being tender?

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 11 Sep 2023 10:42:42 No.40307786 Report

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>>40307636
she likes it rough? them be rough. never stop either, even when she is in her downtime. tighten her collar, pull hard on the leash. never be soft or gentle with the whip, only used the biggest toys on the highest settings. keep escalating until she begs for you to stop

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 11 Sep 2023 14:28:39 No.40308173 Report

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last post for slaves in eternal chastity with nonstop edging until the day their owner disposes of them

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