>>6616412>Zero logical reason for a nuke warThis is fiction. This is a dark fic. Might as well as say anything outside of "normal" themes are shit.
This is an AU, and a crossover with Fallout. Try harder.
>Flips between killing people is bad and it's okay to kill people if they're badThis is one of the developments of her character, you idiot. It played well on her introduction to the world of killing; it hit her really hard at first. Then it turned into a fight for her life.
>Tries to be edgier than both of themOr... adding in its own originality? The way he tied in both of the stories was great. Would you like to fucking elaborate on a better made crossover fic between the two? It was done, and I think this is a great output. Not the best, because nothing can be the best. But it's good.
>Exposition is wordy, unnaturalI had no gripes with the prose. It was exciting, and the fact that it was all told in first person made it pretty immersive.
>Fails to be weaved into the narrativeNow you're just stating things that aren't true to make yourself sound smart.
Read more fucking literature, you cunt.
