>>9348619 >>36577840 @3:00-4:05
Suddenly the impressions and acting in general for both Rainbow and Twily become pretty good, it's actually weird how it's inconsistent
>"That...was...awesome!"
GREAT DELIVERY, this is what Rainbow Dash should sound-like
>"Dangerous! How!? Will it turn you into a monster?"
Too high pitched, too little raspiness
>"Does it make you invisible?"
too little raspiness
>"Does it transform you into a ZOMBIE?"
Slight bit more raspiness, but really this is perfect, seriously near spot on delivery here
>"Is it a love potion?"
More raspiness, deeper pitch, I do like that you voice crack on this line.
>"Then why is it so dangerous?"
Much deeper, A lot more raspiness and gruffness on dangerous, seriously though deeper and more rough and you'll sound like her for sure.
>"But, you made it!"
She's whining and a perfect example of her whining is this gem
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=52YcluhTsq0 Notice she extends the last syllable on some of her words and doesn't bother pausing in-between each word, this sounds awkward because this doesn't sound like the way she'd complain with her saying her words quickly and having long pauses in between each word. Throughout the ORIGINAL Dərpy scene in the Last Roundup we see her extending the last syllable on a lot of words and not bothering with pauses.
>"But if you don't know what it is, then how do we know if it's dangerous"
WAY TOO high pitched and WAY TOO little raspiness, you should sound a lot more annoyed here
>"But...you...made...it"
Should sound a little more defeated or impressed, lower pitch
Part of this just seems like bad direction for Rainbow Dash, she shouldn't be speaking with these pauses, it's out of character
http://teachertube.com/viewVideo.php?video_id=261068 @16:36 she speaks slowly when she's sad, squeals a lot, and the pitch fluctuates wildly
