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I'm sure you put a lot of work and thought into this with the 12 000+ words over five-odd chapters, but as a rule, I find fiction written by Westerners or in English is cringe as fuck; to the point that it's borderline unreadable. Good luck with your writing, though.

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 04 Aug 2022 04:34:22 No.69673808 Report

Quoted By: >>69673828

>AO3
Already trash
>12000 words
Done in 10 minutes, yawn
>Hasn't updated for almost a year
That's a no from me, fuck you, faggot

Anonymous

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Anonymous Thu 04 Aug 2022 04:36:54 No.69673828 Report

Quoted By: >>69673835 >>69673863

>>69673786
>>69673808
This is non negotiable. You have to read it

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 04 Aug 2022 04:38:17 No.69673835 Report

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>>69673828
No. Even if the original work wasn't trash, I'd be hard-pressed to give this more than a 2 second glance while I scrolled past. The one good thing I can say about it is that you didn't use 1000 tags like a retarded Tumblrina

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 04 Aug 2022 04:42:37 No.69673863 Report

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>>69673828
Just answer me this: Is your work in English? Are you a Westerner? If the answer to one or both of those questions is yes, then I'm afraid I'm physically incapable of reading it without dying from cringe.

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 04 Aug 2022 04:53:20 No.69673920 Report

Quoted By: >>69674035

>>69673593
So she's a slime that causes mind break? I read the first page and it seems pretty lame. What little dialogue there was made me cringe.

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Anonymous Thu 04 Aug 2022 05:10:28 No.69674027 Report

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>>69673593
So far, pretty good read. not too bad dude. Some parts are wordy, but those are fine

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Anonymous Thu 04 Aug 2022 05:11:06 No.69674035 Report

Quoted By: >>69674061

>>69673920
Anon you are very uncultured. Read lovecraft and watch Monmusume

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 04 Aug 2022 05:13:56 No.69674061 Report

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>>69674035
I love both Lovecraft and Monmusu
This story is a poor attempt at imitating both while capturing neither

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