>>40304846I'm not an artfag so you should completely ignore everything I say but you could work on your making your shading blend better so it just isn't a bunch of random obvious lines
I feel like that kind of thing would look better if it was pencil on paper or something but at least in that picture it stands out
you could also try to make different materials look more distinct, like there's not a whole lot of difference between her skin, her hair, or the shirt besides the color and the pendant especially should be more reflective or something
again I'm not an artfag so I dunno how exactly you would do that and you should be ignoring me
also the knees look a little off, like they're too skinny or the legs don't go into them quite right and her hips don't seem to have much definition either
her shoulder also seems kind of big, just in general certain parts of the anatomy aren't quite there, the feet/toes too seem not quite right
it seems like you're struggling to make joints and where different parts of the body connect look right, though the overall shape seems alright
again I'm not an artfag and God knows I don't know how to make a body look proper and attractive so you should ignore me but that's just what I noticed looking at that picture critically
