>>39472548>>39472578>>39474651Mighty thanks for all this here kindness. Really gives me the fuzzies 'n stuff seeing folk enjoy my drivels, heh.
>>39473370Ya know, I have some ideas on how to continue this here story, actually. I wan to do 'em, but I may need a bit of feedback on the plan.
So hears me out all of ya.
After this here first chapter, the relationship between Anon and Fang ain't fixed by a long shot, but at least Fang wind up being less hostile towards Anon. It ain't quite full acceptance yet tho, as she still feels hurt from the emotional scars n whatnot.
Anon then realizes that in order to fix his fuck-ups, he has to not just help heal Fang's wounds, but he has to mend the wounds of everyone that she once knew and cared for. That means that in the following chapters Anon's main missions become
1. Find Trish, Reed, Rosa, and Stella and have Fang reconcile with 'em. Maybe Naomi too, but she ain't a priority considering what she did.
2. Find a way for Fang to reconcile with her family. Easier said than done
3. With everyone now back in Fang's live, convince her that she has worth and that she is not alone in the world.
In the end, Fang gets better and starts to heal. Anon, having fixed his mistake, decides that Fang is better off without him around to remind her of painful memories. Now at peace with himself, he rides off into the sunset.
Yeah. If I was to write more parts to the story, that's what I'd make.
Got comments n feedback?
