Howdy folks, Rangto here. Been busy doin' work on my end, so I didn't get much of a chance to post earlier. Real happy to see this here thread still chug along tho. Brings a tear to my eye, heh.
At any rate, my editing and writing is done for the day. Been a huge success tho, one I'll share with ya'll now!
First off, chapter two of 'A Better End.' Went back. Fix'd it up and added more stuff. It's now out of a WIP form and I consider it done, save any potential wrinkles that may need ironing. Here, have a link to the latest Bin.
Chapter 2 - Justice:
https://hardbin.com/ipfs/QmV8Ttw8M16ddPH9bJx5mhto1cHXM1JustXGrmXdcUXDC7/#6Fh8u2WpT7e9TTC8posZqDsntkjJEgZsFowqueMuisQHAfter a bit of reworking and some needed editing, I'm happy to reveal the next chapter in the story. This one was... difficult to write up. You'll see why when ya'll take a looksie.
Just a head's up tho, the original turned out far too big for most people, plus the second half still need a metric ton of ironing. So instead of making ya'll wait for that second half (which might need a whole day and a half to get done), I'll just post the first half to gauge reader reactions and adjust accordingly.
Hope ya'll like my less than stella dribbles, heh.
Chapter 3 - Judgement Part one:
https://hardbin.com/ipfs/QmZLF9FZieQeqVBYnzqVm1nkAJqhsDighe89fCBgCg5ADC/#6rqrRKkW2o3EiA4MHhwVbPbwdieZtLQyqfgQDQ3hCPngAs usual, I'll also post my Ao3 Link. The versions there have more editing and looks cleaner as a whole:
https://archiveofourown.org/works/32007964/chapters/79282138And that's it. Next part's coming soon. I promise. Will try my damnest to have it out by tomorrow, but don't be surprise if it slips into Sunday.
As usual, let me know what ya'll think. I'm always looking to improve myself!
