>>40437082>>40437099These aren't really my thing but I guess they are mostly competently done. Some constructive criticisms:
>make the layout uniform like the purple line on the bottom should be on top>calibrate your text to have less random line cutoffs ( ex "Arethese... ladies")
>Don't waste the space with the name of the speaker at the top of the cap people either know who the character is or just having the name adds no real context>If you insist on having it, maybe put the series name like "Fire Emblem" or "Fire Emblem White Takeover" or whatever the fuck you want to call your series>Simple is good but personally I would add something to the borders of the text bubbles to make them a little fancier. It doesn't have to be excessive but its nice to have some flourish especially on a royalty themed cap otherwise it just seems like you're making a hentai game/visual novel in which case you're better off with the tradition format like picrelThat's mostly it the caps are fine I just don't know anything about fire emblem so the caps being full of FE references makes it hard for me to enjoy it
