You are Chitose Sonohara a 17 year yankii, badass, badboy, & high school student.
You’re currently attending the 1st semester of your 2nd year at Onimaru Highschool of the Onimaru Trinity Sister Schools located in the dead center of Eternal Diamond City (Located on eastern coast of Japan). While much of your time spent is just dicking around and going to school for shits and giggles, you are also currently working part-time at your mentor’s establishment near the coast within the shopping district.
While you might have led quite the rough & tumble lifestyle for the better portion of a decade, it has come to your realization that FUCKING SHIT UP might not lead to the most prosperous of futures…
So super-charged with newfound determination to change your life, you venture forth into the unknown! Perhaps today will be great progress into a brilliant future of wonders untold!
>Leavin’ the buildin’ both you and Fangy headed to the gates to get the fuck outta school. Everythin’ was nice, until THAT GUY showed his shit-eating-grin before ya. Giggles, the lil’ bastard, knew the right button the press to piss a guy off; so he did. The lil’ shit pissed you off so badly, ya done cracked a tree, knocked the lil’ fuck outta a tree, and slammed his grinnin’ face against the large, stone fence surrounding the school. He left a smear. Instead of some of the worser shit ya coulda done, ya done tied the fuck to the hour hand of the school’s clock-tower. Upon yer second attempt at leaving the school, you literally ran into Pres! Knockin’ her over as ya was ‘bout to leave; flat on her back she stared up atcha wit surprise. >Archive http://suptg.thisisnotatrueending.com/archive.html?tags=yankii%20reform%20quest >Quest Text Only (Updated to 15) http://pastebin.com/JFr0n1e0 >Additional Information Coming Soon™
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Noriko’s eyes focus on your hand as you offer it to help her from her prone position, but she does not take it immediately. She stares fixated upon it like you’re offering her some divine gift, and she looks away as her blush deepens. In the span of a mere few moments she began to dart her gaze between your outstretched hand and the nearby ground; unsure of how to react.>[1/2]
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She pauses with a concerned and confused look on her face, and you know why. She must have come out to meet with her little brother sometime after you had knocked him out and carried him around back. She -could- have been waiting out here for a while now, but it is rather uncertain.>”Yeah, we saw him. He looked ticked and wandered off laughing.” [Lie] >”We kinda saw him. He was bein’ a jerk; but after a bit had to leave.” [Half-lie] >”Yeah, no. He’s not going to be coming. He’s a lil’ tied up right now.” [Half-truth] >”Yeah… Best not to wait. I had’ta teach Giggles a lesson in manners.” Point to tower [Truth] >Other [Suggestion]? >[2/2]
Spectral
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>>43504108 >”Yeah… Best not to wait. I had’ta teach Giggles a lesson in manners.” Point to tower [Truth] No regrets Spectral
Sure is quite. Figured prez anon be on top of this thread.
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>>43504613 Indeed; I was actually half-expecting Prez-anon to be the first to jump on this.
I'll give it until the next half-hour mark (10min), then I'll get to Writing.
Anonymous
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>>43504108 >>”Yeah… Best not to wait. I had’ta teach Giggles a lesson in manners.” Point to tower [Truth] This works, also on my phone
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Spectral
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>>43504997 I'm surprised that's not an actual manga.
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Well… It’s best to be honest with it all and just tell Noriko what happened; perhaps it’ll lower some of her tension, and even give her a bit more of a reason to dislike you. Hell, once more; you’ve. Done. Worse. If what you did to Usui bothers her so much, perhaps it’ll get her to rethink her decision on pursuing you.>[1/2]
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“U-Usui?!” Her hands shoot up to cover her mouth as her jaw drops in shock at what she saw. It took her a few moments to focus and realize what she was looking at, but given time and a spot to concentrate in you’re -very- sure she just caught sight of her brother hanging where you left him. “Chitose-kun!”>Tell her he’s okay and safe then distract her. >Scold her; tell her this is tough love and he’ll never learn otherwise. >He’s a little shit, and he deserves MORE than what I did to him. >Other [Suggestion]? >[2/2]
Anonymous
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>>43505618 >>Other [Suggestion]? Show her our hand that got cut up with his teasing
"Anyone else coulda got hurt a lot worse."
Spectral
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>>43505618 >Scold her; tell her this is tough love and he’ll never learn otherwise. I'm going to wager she has never been real tough on him. If ever.
Anonymous
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>>43505618 >Scold her; tell her this is tough love and he’ll never learn otherwise. Anonymous
>>43505618 >>Scold her; tell her this is tough love and he’ll never learn otherwise. He's got deh survival instincts of a Lemmin, prez. He goes outta is way to pick fights. He said Tings I couldn't forgive and if it twerent for the fact he's your brother E'd be in the hospital. As it is he needs to learn some common sense else the next time his tongue writes a check is body can't cash, someone else might do much worse. He's fine right now, this is just gonna hopefully scare em into not being a shit, or picking his battles more smart like.
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>>43506157 Almost choked on m'coffee with this write-in.
That first sentence is golden, and due to how the slur is typed I read it in a THICK & goofy English accent. T'was amazing.
>Writing ensues again Anonymous
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>>43506843 Glad I could provide some entertainment LG.
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Apparently the scorn of this particular woman was quite light… It lacked the impact that he’d felt from others. Much lighter. Not like it’s -too- horribly shocking, as you’ve smacked her brother around before to little negative effect, but with what she’s noticed you’d think she’d be filled with some sort of scorn.>[1/?]
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“B-but! Usui is just a kid! He-he… he doesn’t know what he’s…. saying…” Noriko desperately tries to defend her little brother, but she cannot look you in the eye as she speaks. She dotes on him -far- too much, and as such has led her to be unable to really punish or scold him herself; not that she -should have- to, as that -should- be her parent’s duty… but that’s another situation entirely. “He’s still younger than us; you should go easy-well… easiER on him… maybe…”
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She reaches both of her hands up to cup yours gently within them. She delicately turns it to better examine the extent of your wounds. While not -horrible- it does sting, but due to the care she takes as she cups it gently between her fingers it is minimal. Her brows turn upwards in a guilty fashion, and there are a couple more tears.>[3/4]
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“I… I suppose that’s true, isn’t it? Chitose-kun has always been the kind and responsible type… even if he doesn’t act like it sometimes, huh?” She blushes slightly after Souichi finishes and looks down to the side. Her entire demeanor warms and her posture relaxes some. Her eyes return upwards and settle upon you with a warm smile to accompany them. “W-while I don’t fully agree with your methods, Chitose-kun… I’ll… I’ll give your method a chance, and see if Usui doesn’t improve… I… I trust you.”>Eh. Do whatever the fuck you want. Trust or no trust, Giggles a shit. >Thank ya. I promise you’ll see a difference come whenever the fuck he comes home. >Ya still shouldn’t. I -am- a delinquent. Use yer own judgement on shit. >Other [Suggestion]? >Optional: If’n yer headin’ out, wanna come with? We’s gettin' the fuck out 'n headin' downtown to chill before I has to work. >[4/4]
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>>43508520 >>Thank ya. I promise you’ll see a difference come whenever the fuck he comes home >>Optional: If’n yer headin’ out, wanna come with? We’s gettin' the fuck out 'n headin' downtown to chill before I has to work. Although she might not wanna be seen with the biggest delinquent on campus.
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>>43508520 >Ya still shouldn’t. I -am- a delinquent. Use yer own judgement on shit. Like I said this was the best idea i'z hadz,but I ain't xactly a shrink or a geniuz. I hopes it'll work, but nuting is certain.
>Optional: If’n yer headin’ out, wanna come with? We’s gettin' the fuck out 'n headin' downtown to chill before I has to work. Anonymous
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>>43508520 >Ya still shouldn’t. I -am- a delinquent. Use yer own judgement on shit. >Optional: If’n yer headin’ out, wanna come with? We’s gettin' the fuck out 'n headin' downtown to chill before I has to work. Spectral
>>43508520 >Ya still shouldn’t. I -am- a delinquent. Use yer own judgement on shit. I'll say no to invite. She probably should get her brother home.
Anonymous
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>>43508577 Let the little shit rot, this is screen time for a character we haven't seen much of.
Anonymous
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>>43508520 >Ya still shouldn’t. I -am- a delinquent. Use yer own judgement on shit. Anonymous
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>>43508577 That'd totally negate our lesson. If she wants to save him then fine, but invite her anyways.
Anonymous
>>43508520 >>Thank ya. I promise you’ll see a difference come whenever the fuck he comes home. >>Optional: If’n yer headin’ out, wanna come with? We’s gettin' the fuck out 'n headin' downtown to chill before I has to work. Shouldn't Prez anon be freaking out now?
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>>43508685 >Shouldn't Prez anon be freaking out now? Why would he? Things are going swimmingly for him right now. If anything him spazzing out would fuck it up.
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You sigh sharply and close your eyes a moment to recenter yourself. While it feels nice to be trusted, at this juncture in your life that -should- be on a fairly minimal or small basis considering what exactly you are. Putting your trust into a Yankii because he beat the shit out of your brother and then tied him to the hour-hand of a giant clock doesn’t sound like a strong basis of understanding nor trust… this girl…>[1/4]
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She reels back from the soft impact that doesn’t even so much as leave a mark like it pushed her. It’s kinda cute… but you remain strong as to not seem weak, either to her, nor your right-hand man.>[2/4]
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She pauses, and seems to take a few moments to process what you said before her face flushes and she looks away.>[3/4]
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Pushing those thoughts to the back of your mind, where they belong, you smile at Noriko and nod.>Beach; not to swim, but the walk along the shore ‘n shit. >Arcade; games are fun, so are some the people in ‘em. >Boardwalk; get some grub and chill there a while. >Other [Suggestion]? (Basically anything ya can think of, really.) >[4/4]
Anonymous
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>>43510371 >>Boardwalk; get some grub and chill there a while. My fucking heart, this girl is made of cute
Anonymous
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>>43510371 >Boardwalk; get some grub and chill there a while. Prez ya needsto be more assertive if you gonna win de election, you'se smart, nice and gud at solvin shit but if'n you let everyone push ya round you ain't gonna be doing nuttin
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>>43510371 >Arcade; games are fun, so are some the people in ‘em. Lord Grimsley !6F21THAFi.
I doth proclaim thee to gather thyn belongings henceforth, for I declare we art finished at this juncture in time and have not reason to remain!
Thanks guys, good thread; sorry for slowness. I know you’se only got a few updates today, but at least it’s better than nothing! Thanks for keeping with me, I’ll be now segueing into the Q&A section after announcing that I’ll see you next Monday for the next thread.
>Think of a smooth segue. >Is it a happy segue? Good. >Let’s put that happy, little segue right over here. >It’ll be our little secret segue. The time for Questions to be Answered is now! If ya got questions, shoot em off. I’ll get to them If I can tonight, if not I’ll answer them first thing next thread.
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Special QM question to the Questers:
Who is your least favorite character thus far?
-Why- are they your least favorite character?
Yalls talk about your favorite, I don't think I've heard the flipside as of yet.
Anonymous
>>43510569 >Who is your least favorite character thus far? Dad
-Why- are they your least favorite character?
He's a jerk who lashes out at his kids for the death of their mother and beats them.
So who is the most moe girl? How tall is Noriko? We going to hear about Usui first hand or can you give us a window to his freak out?
Spectral
>>43510569 >Who is your least favorite character thus far? Shiro
>-Why- are they your least favorite character? To strike one so innocent and your own kids, especially Mimi, at that. Horrible.
>Yalls talk about your favorite. My fav? I guess if I had to say who as of now is my fav, it would be Junko for the girls and Souichi as best bro.
Hard to believe so much has happened in all this threads for less than half a day in quest wise. What a day to start changing our way.
Lord Grimsley !6F21THAFi.
>>43510627 >So who is the most moe girl? If you want to be technical, all of them.
Each girl is special in her own unique, individual way; mostly because there's an actual person deep inside each nugget of cute.
A person forged from life's experiences and tribulations.
>How tall is Noriko? 5'10" or 177.8 cm
She's actually pretty tall for a Japanese girl.
For reference, Chitose is:
6'0" or 182.88 cm
>We going to hear about Usui first hand or can you give us a window to his freak out? Khu, ku, ku, ku~ >>43510764 >Shiro His name is Shuu; sounds like Shoe the Chinpokomon
>What a day to start changing our way. What a day indeed. Introductions are always long, but I feel it's best if the first day is filled with a lot of meaningful contact so we can gain some context to who everybody is as we continue forward.
I'm actually surprised a single day is taking so long, but then again I -do- only get in 4-6 updates and average. This is gonna be one slow burn.
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>>43510861 Yeah she's above average height period.
>tfw you're taller than both of them. So how excited is Noriko out of ten?
How badly did Souichi facepalm himself?
We anti-flag?
Anonymous
>>43510861 Why did you make prez adorable? Her innocence is just too pure for my cynical heart
Lord Grimsley !6F21THAFi.
>>43504026 >Yeah she's above average height period. >tfw you're taller than both of them. Indeed. Hiru is a couple cm taller then Chitose, and there's a couple characters taller still.
Shortest thus far is Delilah
Who anon guessed correctly for being /u/. Not that yankii love couldn't change it. I'm taking liberties with the characters to ensure story is interesting. >So how excited is Noriko out of ten? -Th-this is a-almost l-l-like a... D-d-d-date?!-
>How badly did Souichi facepalm himself? Moderately hard. Not-too- badly.
>We anti-flag? Wouldn't -you- like to know. I'll answer this further into the future once fate's flags are more sunk in. Good or bad, who knows?
>>43511070 >Why did you make prez adorable? She was originally more serious, but as I was working backstories in she turned into the lovable gal she is today.
In short:
I didn't make her that way, she was born that way.
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>>43511764 >Who anon guessed correctly for being /u/. Wasn't hard
Anonymous
>>43511764 >that pic L-lewd!
>tfw guessed right on /u/ too. So you expect us to do what we did so far?
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>>43511764 >Th-this is a-almost l-l-like a... D-d-d-date?!- My heart just exploded
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>>43511828 >So you expect us to do what we did so far? I've never really expected anything. Your guys' choices make this interesting for me as well; especially entertaining when I happen across a good Chitose-minded write-in.
You guys actually floored me at one point to how perfect shit came together to reenact "the lost pilot episode".
Also JP event GET was the trigger for getting a flashback early in Taro Rumble. Think of the GETs as optional flags; for better or worse. I wasn't expecting you guys to be filled with more Justice than Taro in only the second fight, but I think I threw in a decent reward for your efforts on top of a flag.
I'm flying by the seat of my pants, though with plot-points and details in mind, but you guys are the ones triggering flags left and right.
I'm constantly pleased and surprised with how things go.
Anonymous
>>43510569 >Who is your least favorite character thus far? Honestly,
Noriko. >-Why- are they your least favorite character? I find
stuttermoe really damn annoying and just see the other characters as a lot more interesting.
Lord Grimsley !6F21THAFi.
>>43515893 Interesting choice. I don't have quite the same dislike, but I do feel like stuttermoe -can- get old pretty quick. Thanks for your honesty, anon-kun. Anonymous
>>43518398 Bonus run today?
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>>43518709 Maybe. I'm on m'phone at the moment, but I've got some time to get at least one more update in.
>Writing >Tweeting the squad On the previous note, stuttering/shy is cute, but can get old quick without character development/something new. Prez current has some low Charisma, and as such lacks confidence and the ability to keep her shit together.
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>>43515893 I completely agree on the whole stuttermoe thing. I dislike too. Lord Grimsley !6F21THAFi.
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Pulling the still-lit cigarette from your lips, you exhale a large cloud of white smoke as your gaze drift upward in thought. The options are numerous, but you realize that having Noriko around limits your range of activities to things that don't involve destruction, defacing, violence, or other illegal recreations. All in all, it works out in your favor due to the resolution you had made last night to turn your life around.
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He continues to look down at his watch, having lost faith in the pink-haired girl's direction.
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**>Pay for everybody's order >Pay only your order >Tell Souichi to foot the bill >Other [Suggestion]? >[All/all]
Anonymous
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>>43519953 How much money we got boss?
If'n we gots a good deal
>Pay for everybody's order If'n we don'ts
>Pay only your order Also get sumthin good, weze had a day.
Anonymous
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>>43519953 > Other Pay for Noriko's and ours, make Soichi pay his own way
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>>43519953 >Pay only your order Anonymous
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>>43519953 Seeing how this is not some special occasion
>Pay only your order Anonymous
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>>43519953 >Pay only your order
