Well, stuff like here for example,>"I kind of hoped to get a few of these bastards with my own hands, but I guess our friend there is taking care of that. Status report:” The brawny demon started talking briefly, unfazed by the crazed screams away, “One injured here, Berin. They jumped him while he was on patrol. He took a beating and a few shots, but he’ll be okay.”
It's unclear who's talking at first.
First thing to do is realy nail down on "said [character name]" and "She said ___" kind of stuff. Try really hard to make it clear who's talking. Even if it feels like you're constantly using the same basic dialog structure, clarity is more important than word variety.
The demon started talking briefly is NOT a smooth transition from the previous line of dialog. It seems like an entirely separate entity started talking.