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Chicken Territory sounds funny.
The kingdom description sounds pretty nice for what I imagined she had. Waffles are nice, but the eggs look like they would be part of green eggs and ham. +10 weather is strange, but I looked ahead and it seems that there will be more weather related things later on. Semher looks different, I like his V3 look better since the wheels fit travel better than the weird chicken looking thing.
The wording for her pros and cons is different. I like the previous wording better, but the main essence remains and it looks like it was mostly changed due to limited space.
I do not remember off the top of my head who has the Four Winds Kingdom, can anyone remind me?
Thunderstruck weathervane, I assume this is the main reason for weather showing up on the chart multiple times. Seems like a loose connection, but I think it turned out pretty well and adds to the overall lore.
Rooster has a good design, its good to distinguish them from the chickens. Lore seems like it would be nice to meet them in a dnd setting.
Complete Breakfast is probably delicious but I am not sure I would want to eat the eggs. The last line is funny.
I suppose not everyone in the kingdom can be consumed by wanderlust. The Hen Mother is nice to show what happens after they settle down. I want to see a Chicken Queen now. The chicken breasts are nice.
King's Crown has nice lore. I assume the lore might be tied to the Four Winds kingdom? Either way I would like to know more.
Weather Knight has really good art. Seems dubious, not sure I trust him for some reason. Hopefully he just wants to keep the princess safe.
The Fox is a nice bit of extra lore. Civilized monster type. I bet he would get along with the Human Queen.
Moss Folk seem like they need some more lore. I request a Moss Princess. What sort of odd tasks do they ask for? What mythical creature are they based on?
Good chart overall