>>9942542Alrightsmartarse.jointphotographicexpertsgroup
What I hate:
- You've snubbed everything up into big bulky fat components to try and infer some look of durability. All you've really ended up with is a look of slowness, bulkiness and unwieldiness.
- The frontal fusalage on all of these is utterly fucked. They're meant to sweep gradually from one body to the other, not be tacked on as an after-thought to an engine. If its such an after-thought, why is it even in a canopy?
- The only other reason for a nose beyond your utterly retarded head-gimmick would be going down the route of using a radome inside it. Unfortunately your nose shape doesn't infer anything of the sort could possibly exist since the shape is too compacted and crushed.
- The shoulder-transition from front to main fusalage is totally fucked. What the hell is going on?
- Oh god what the shit are you doing with the goddamn wings? They're so thick and the panel joins are massive. And the wings are so fucking WIDE despite this implied delta curve bullshit going on. If you're going with wide wings, make up your fucking mind.
- You don't seem to know why you have Gerwalk on a lot of these designs, only that its there.
- The hands are so different in shape and proportion that they're unlikely to be able to lift or hold the same weapons across the board. Same goes with the feet.
- A lot of these forward facing weapons have huge smooth bore openings. The air draft back into the gun is seriously going to wreck these components in laser and optical systems and prevent pressure displacement weapons like shells and plasma from even escaping the barrels at these speeds (the solution in aircraft is to have a rotary weapon where the barrel only aligns when the bullet is about to exit the aircraft -- they always spin when active and are usually covered when not).