>>19314942okay, this drawing is a bit easier to work with
the main thing if you wanna go for a militaristic design is that if you can imagine somebody wearing most of the design as a costume then you need to screw with the proportions more
in the RR-2's case, one thing that you could do pretty easily is to increase the width of the codpiece and separate the legs a bit more from eachother
this is actually something you could see on the Glasgow; the way the pelvis area on the Glasgow is drawn ensures anyone trying to wear it like a suit will have their pelvis absolutely destroyed
other than that, you might wanna align the backpack with the chest more instead of having it an angle. it kinda looks like its sagging really awkwardly so aligning it better might help make the torso look a bit more sturdy
generally you seem to use a lot of hard lines whenever boxes show up on the RR-2, asnd you might benefit from "softening" some of the lines by erasing part of them and letting the mind take over more for those shapes. hard lines give the impression that the armor is made up of thin panels so using less lines helps make the design feel weighty on top of making it inherently more interesting
